直击中考写作

中考英语写作真题解析

书面表达目的在于考查学生应用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力，善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力。

一、中考中常见的题型及解题方法与技巧

1. 看图作文

(1) 仔细审题，弄清题目要求，明确作文的中心思想，判断文章的类型。

(2) 仔细观察画面，确定要素。比如，故事发生在何时、何地，画中的人物为何人，他们做了什么事，结果如何等。

(3) 根据提示句或短文第一句来确定时态。

(4) 写作前，先在草纸上列一个提纲，逐图描述，图文意思要一致，语言文字要连贯，语法要正确无误。

(5) 要详略得当得体。

(6) 把已写好的文章通读一遍，并结合图画进行必要的检查、修改，力求全文内容表达准确、完整，并最大限度减少错误。

2. 提示作文

(1) 认真审题，看清题目中的要求。

(2) 根据提示内容，列出要点及每个要点应列的词语。

(3) 紧扣提纲，动笔写作。

(4) 检查句子的语法结构，注意英汉表达的差异，检查字母大小写是否规范，字数是否合乎要求。

二、真题解析

1. 观察下图。根据图示和参考词语，适当拓展想象空间，以Why are trees important? 为标题，用英语写一篇不少于80个词的短语。

注意：

(1) 短文应切中题意，条理清楚，词句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

(2) 短文第一句话已给出。参考词语：take in

carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳；oxygen氧气；

insect昆虫；stop water and soil from going

away防止水土流失；desert沙漠。

[解析]

1. 认真审题：本题已给出题目，我们可以根据题目，用提示词和图示为线索展开书写。

2. 确定要素：

①树能吸收二氧化碳，释放氧气。

②树能给鸟类提供家园。

③树能为某些小动物提供食物。

④树能阻止水土流失。

⑤树能防止土壤沙漠化。

⑥植树造林，美化家园。

One possible version:

Why are trees important?

Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That’s important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, they can stop land from being desert. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful.

Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them.

2. 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David 的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。(信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。)

提示词语：Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important…, listen, talk, read, write

Dear David,

I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming [解析]首先确定体裁为书信第一人称。内容

要点如下：①学中文的体会和方法；②建议；③祝愿

One possible version:

Dear David,

I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It’s difficult for you because it’s quite different from Eng lish. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It’s also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I’m sure you’ll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

三、巩固练习

1.根据图画内容和所给词语完成一篇短文。

要求：

(1) 词数80个左右。

(2) 用图中所示内容表达完整，用上所给词语，条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。

(3) 短文第一句已给出，不计入总词数。

所给词语：walk, rice field, see, frog (青蛙), catch, old man, say, friend, pest(害虫), turn red, put, smile, good boy

Xiao Ming was on his way home one afternoon. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

One possible version:

Xiao Ming was on his way home one afternoon. When he was walking past a rice field, he saw a frog. He wanted to play with it. So he went over quietly and caught it. Just at the time, an