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托福写作固定的开头结尾

托福写作固定的开头结尾

托福写作固定的开头结尾大家要量力而行,一定要量力而行。

450个单词,咱算一笔帐,假如这450个字呢,我能把开头结尾固定下来,大家一定要注意啊,你在准备的时候,要按照这个思路去准备。

假如说我把开头固定下来多少个字呢,写个比较牛逼的开头,所有的文章都是这个开头,大约多少个字,咱们写70个字?咱们就70个字的开头,你要注意听懂我说的话,我这70个字,所有的题目都不变,这是托福独立写作,这不是SAT。

注意这70个字,所有的文章就用这70个字作开头,完全可以。

为什么我有自信这么说呢,就是因为我教的学生,他用这个方法得到29分,29分是吧,而且上几节课之后,也有14直接到20多的特别正常,它不会影响你的分数,你们听懂了吗。

就是开头和结尾一样,他并不是那么的重要,但前提是你要写的差不多才行。

这种开头你不用我给你模板,你自己回去总结非常简单,就是一个固定的开头,70个字你把语言写的稍微好一点,很土的开头结尾不影响对吧,那当然不一定啊。

很好的不一定给你加分,但很土的一定影响你的得分。

我掉线了吗?现在能看到了吗?不好意思,刚才可能我是的网速有点问题,稍微掉了一小下。

OK,你看。

你开头70,结尾70,然后呢,你还有40个是主题句,这个主题句一会儿我教你们,怎么把它根据题目变出来。

这样的话,看不到?应该能看到啊?OK,我不能用桌面,那行,我还是上传PPT吧,好吧。

没有关系,稍等稍等。

大家稍等一下。

我把PPT传上来。

可能是网速不太给力。

到现在为止我们这篇文章有多少字了,开头70,结尾70,140,加上主题句40,180,这180个字,其实你可以把它想像成所有的文章都是一样的。

现在只能十个人看到,那么变态?大家看到这了吧,这回看到了吧。

其实YY有很多东西需要提高。

又看不到了,这回能看到了吗?没问题,没问题。

咱们赶紧说啊。

你要一定要注意,180个字,这180个字,你是固定的,亲们。

假如说你把180个字背熟的话,你需要多长时间能凑180个字,我做一个实验,我现在初一的学生,他在读不懂题的情况,你注意他读不懂题的情况下,初一的小学生,他能敲出6分钟能敲220个字。

5句话hold住托福独立写作“开头段”

5句话hold住托福独立写作“开头段”

5句话hold住托福独立写作“开头段”“开头段”、“论证段”和“结尾段”是托福独立写作的“三部曲”,彼此各司其职,进而构成一个Unity(整体)。

其中,“开头段”最主要的功能有两个:一是引出话题;二是表达观点。

然而,在表达观点的时候,大家倾向于有以下两种选择:一是开门见山(在“开头段”直接给出个人观点:要么agree或者disagree;要么prefer A或者prefer B);二是娓娓道来(即在“论证段”或“结尾段”进行观点的阐述或总结)。

本文将从这2种方式出发,教你如何用5句话hold住托福独立写作“开头段”。

第一种:开门见山式【概括背景+ 引出话题+ 一类人观点+ 另一类人观点对比+ 个人观点】1、概括背景:以概括题目的方式给出文章的写作背景2、引出话题:以承上启下的方式引出题目关键词3、一类人观点:针对题目的两个面(比如说:立场A和立场B),先给出一类人的观点(比如说:立场A)4、另一类人观点对比:站在一类人的对立面给出相对立的观点(立场B)5、个人观点:在相对立的两个立场中选择一个作为自己的观点(立场A / 立场B)以下是从独立写作真题出发,向大家展示如打造开门见山式“开头段”:① (A/D) The main role of the university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.(概括背景)A defining character of people is the degree to which they believe that higher education plays a crucial role in a country’s development. (引出话题)One indisputable fact is that university education is closely associated with professors. (一类人观点)Some people, especially parents, believe that professors should focus on educating students. (另一类人观点对比)However, others, professors themselves in particular, argue that they ought to pay more attention to their researches. (个人观点)From my perspective, the major obligation of university professors is to teach.② (A/D) The advice from grandparents has no use for their grandchildren because the world changed a lot during the past 50 years.(概括背景)A defining character of people is the degree to which they are always willing to refer to others’ advice and fit in. (引出话题)One indisputable fact is that valuable advice is closely associated with experienced people like parents and grandparents. (一类人观点)Some people, especially the old, believe that it’s beneficial to turn to grandparents.(另一类人观点对比)However, others, the young in particular, argue that due to the great development of the world, their grandparents’ suggestions are not useful any more. (个人观点)From my perspective, asking for help from one’s grandparents can be a really wise choice.此处总结为开门见山式“开头段”模板:A defining character of people is the degree to which + 概括题目. One indisputable fact is that + 题目概括词+ is closely associated with 题目关键词. Some people, especially 具体的人, believe that + 一类人观点. However, others, 具体的人in particular, argue that + 另一方观点. From my perspective, + 个人观点.(NOTE:“the degree to which”在此处的功能相当于“that”,且其后所接句子的主语必须和前面的“people”一致)第二种:娓娓道来式【概括背景+ 引出话题+ 一类人观点+ 另一类人观点对比+ 争议句】1、概括背景:以概括题目的方式提出文章的写作背景2、引出话题:以承上启下的方式引出题目关键词3、一类人观点:针对题目的两个面(比如说:立场A和立场B),先给出一类人的观点(比如说:立场A)4、另一类人观点对比:站在一类人的对立面给出相对立的观点(立场B)5、争议句:给出一个争议的句子,不直接表明个人观点,将之留在“论证段”或“结尾段”进行阐述或总结以下同样从独立写作真题出发,打造娓娓道来式“开头段”:① (A/D) Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behaviors.(概括背景)A defining character of people is the degree to which they are always willing to pursue happiness. (引出话题)One indisputable fact is that one’s happiness is closely associated with daily entertainment, which can be easily offered by some technological products like movies and televisions.(一类人观点)Some people, especially the young, believe that movies and TV play a crucial role in helping them release stress.(另一类人观点对比)However, others, the parents in particular, argue that some films and TV programs have caused great negative effects on their children. (争议句)Therefore, when it comes to whether movies and televisions bring more positive or negative effects, people’s notions vary from one to another.② (A/D) The main purpose for people who have jobs is for money rather than social status.(概括背景)A defining character of people is the degree to which they are always willing to pursue a better life.(引出话题)One indisputable fact is that a quality live is closely associated with having a job.(一类人观点)Some people, especially the young, believe that their intention of working is to make enough money.(另一类人观点对比)However, others, old people in particular, argue that they work mainly for a high social position.(争议句)Therefore, when it comes to whether the major aim of working is for money or social position, people’s notions vary from one to a nother.此处总结为娓娓道来式“开头段”模板:A defining character of people is the degree to which + 概括题目. One indisputable fact is that + 题目概括词+ is closely associated with 题目关键词. Some people, especially 具体的人, believe that + 一类人观点. However, others, 具体的人in particular, argue that + 另一方观点. Therefore, when it comes to whether 转述题目, people’s notions vary from one to another.(NOTE:“the degree to which”在此处的功能相当于“that”,且其后所接句子的主语必须和前面的“people”一致)。

怎么写好托福写作开头结尾

怎么写好托福写作开头结尾

怎么写好托福写作开头结尾怎么写好托福写作开头结尾,这是许多朋友都在问的问题,现在小编就给大家整理好一些写作实用技巧。

托福作文(TWE)写作技巧:开头结尾一、开头:When it comes to ..., some think ...There is a public debate today that ...A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.提出观点:Now there is a growing awareness that...It is time we explore the truth of ...Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.进一步提出观点:... but that is only part of the history.Another equally important aspect is ...A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式:Suppose that...Just imagine what would be like if...It is reasonable to expect...It is not surprising that...举普通例子:For example(instance),...... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)A good case in point is...A particular example for this is...引用:One of the greatest early writers said ..."Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ..."......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...)."......". How often we hear such words like there.讲故事(先说故事主体),this story is not rare...., such delimma we often meet in daily life...., the story still has a realistic significance.提出原因:There are many reasons for ...Why .... , for one thing,...The answer to this problem involves many factors.Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...The first reason can be obiviously seen.Most people would agree that...Some people may neglect that in fact ...Others suggest that...Part of the explanation is ...进行对比:The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...承上启下:To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...A study of ... will make this point clear让步:Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...I do not deny that A has its own merits.二、结尾:From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...In summary, it is wiser ...In short...托福写作模板:开头段和结尾段托福写作模板:开头段写作模板In this argument, the arguer concludes that ______. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that______. In addition, the arguer reasons that_____.This argument suffers from several critical fallacies.In this argument, the arguer recommends that_____.T o justify this claim, the arguer provides the evidence that ____. In addition, he cites the result of a recent study that _____. A careful examination of this argument would reveal how groundless the conclusion is.In this analysis, the arguer claims that ____. To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example that____. In addition, the arguer assumes that ____. This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.In this argument, the arguer advocates that ____. The recommendation is based on the observation that_____. Meanwhile, the arguer assumes that____. The argument is problematic for two reasons.The conclusion in this argument is that_____. In support of this prediction, the arguer claims that _____.Moreover, the arguer assumes that_____. This argument is fraught with vague, oversimplified and unwarranted assumptions.托福写作模板:结尾段写作模板In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide concrete evidence that_____. Otherwise, the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to _____.To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument, we need more information about that____.适用于托福写作开头和结尾的30句谚语1. A bad beginning makes a bad ending. 恶其始者必恶其终。

托福开头结尾写作句型

托福开头结尾写作句型

 开头结尾写作句型 i. 开头段写法: 3 种 1) 开头段背景引入部分 魔版句子: 1. 随 着 国 家 经 济 和 人 民 生 活 水 平 的 稳 步 增 长 和 提 高 , 人 们 更 加 意 识 到 的重要性。

With the steady growth in the country’s economy as well as the people’s living standard, people attach more importance to . 3.多亏了中国的改革开放政策,在过去的 30 年中,经济和社会的进步很大,人 民生活水平提高,但是同时产生了一些严重的社会问题,像 。

Thanks to China’s reform and opening-up policy, there has been earth-shaking economic and social progress in the past two decades and people’s living standard has improved, but at the same time it gives rise to a host of serious social problems like . 4.直到最近, 被认为是 。

但是,人们在用新的眼光看待它。

Until recently, was viewed as .But people are taking a fresh look at it. 5. 是不是更好是一个进退两难的问题。

The dilemma is whether it is better to . 通常会激起热烈的讨论。

6.关于 There will often spring up a heated discussion as to . 或 的自由。

虽然它们一般会和平共 7.在现代社会,人们有选择 处,但是它们应该得到细致的考察。

托福作文高分结尾都这样写

托福作文高分结尾都这样写

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托福作文开头结尾模板万能句型

托福作文开头结尾模板万能句型

托福作文开头结尾模板万能句型英文回答:开头模板。

It is often said that...In recent years, there has been a great deal of discussion about...The topic of... has been a subject of debate for many years.The issue of... is a complex one that has many different dimensions.It is important to consider all sides of the issue before forming an opinion.The question of... is one that has puzzledphilosophers and scholars for centuries.The debate over... has been going on for decades, and it shows no signs of abating.The controversy surrounding... has been fueled by a number of factors.The problem of... is one that affects many people, and it is one that needs to be addressed.The challenge of... is one that we must all face together.结尾模板。

In conclusion, it is clear that...In light of the evidence presented above, it is clear that...Based on the arguments presented in this essay, it isclear that...It is my belief that...I believe that...I am convinced that...I urge you to...I call on you to...I challenge you to...Let us all work together to... The future of... depends on us.中文回答:开头模板。

托福独立写作高分从头开始开头段4种精彩写法实例介绍

托福独立写作高分从头开始开头段4种精彩写法实例介绍

托福独立写作高分从头开始开头段4种精彩写法实例介绍万事开头难,这点放到托福考试的写作中也是一样的。

拿到作文题目想好了提纲却不知道如何展开的情况在考生中是比较常见的。

很多同学也比较缺乏一些作文开头段写作经验的积累。

下面小编就来实例分析4种比较理想的托福独立写作开头段写法。

托福独立写作高分从头开始开头段4种精彩写法实例介绍托福独立写作开头段高分写法:开门见山题目:Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.模板:Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.点评:开门见山式的开头段写法其实是比较标准的一种写法,因为托福的独立写作从题目要求来说本质上就是一篇议论文,而且还是立论文,需要考生自己提出观点然后论述证明。

那么在开头段就直接鲜明地亮出观点无疑是很合理的写法,对考官来说也能第一时间就看到你的观点,可以说是对读者比较友好的一种写法。

比如上面的这个模板,就是第一句话直接写出了自己对题目的反对立场,并且最后给出了引出下面正式论述的引导句。

万能的英语作文开头和结尾

万能的英语作文开头和结尾

万能的英语作文开头和结尾开头:1. "In the ever-evolving tapestry of human experience, one universal language emerges as a bridge connecting diverse cultures: English."2. "As the world becomes increasingly interconnected, the importance of mastering English cannot be overstated."3. "In the realm of communication, English stands as a key that unlocks the doors to global understanding."4. "Language is the soul of humanity, and English, in particular, is a powerful instrument for expressing our thoughts and ideas."5. "From the bustling streets of New York to the serene landscapes of New Zealand, English serves as a common thread woven through the fabric of society."结尾:1. "In conclusion, the mastery of English not only opens doors but also windows to a world of opportunities and cultural exchanges."2. "As we draw to a close, it is clear that English is more than a language; it is a passport to a global community."3. "To sum up, the ability to communicate in English is a skill that transcends borders and enriches our lives in countless ways."4. "In wrapping up this discussion, we can see that English is not just a tool for communication but a gateway to a broader understanding of the world."5. "To conclude, the journey of learning English is not just about acquiring a language but about embracing a world of knowledge and possibilities."。

托福写作的段落:开头、中间与结尾

托福写作的段落:开头、中间与结尾

托福写作的段落:开头、中间与结尾托福写作的段落模板:开头、中间与结尾对于托福的写作,很多考生都是一头雾水,表示难以驾驭。

下面,店铺就为大家送上一些托福写作的段落模板吧。

托福写作的段落模板:开头段落The listening challenges the point made in the reading that (自己改写阅读第一段最后一句话). [这一句话就是第一个段落,虽然简单,但是包含了三个信息:听力阅读立场,本文讨论话题]托福写作的段落模板:中间段落First, the reading says [每段分论点+听力反驳时对应的细节]. However, the listening disagrees. S/he argues that [完整驳斥阅读的全部细节(越多越保险)].每个中间段落都写一个句型。

甚至单词你不换都可以(First换成second, finally)。

记住了,模版不是“主角”。

是衬托主角的配角。

模版都是一般现在时态,听力阅读内容根据原文时态say, disagree可换词,因为换词不影响文章阅读;the reading, the listening是考官找听力和阅读内容的信号词,不要去替换,在语言水平不高的情况下替换会使文章读起来很艰难(考官看不懂)。

托福写作的段落模板:开头段In this argument, the arguer concludes that ______. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that______. In addition, the arguer reasons that_____.This argument suffers from several critical fallacies.In this argument, the arguer recommends that_____.T o justify this claim, the arguer provides the evidence that ____. In addition, he cites the result of a recent study that _____. A careful examination of this argument would reveal how groundless the conclusion is.In this analysis, the arguer claims that ____. To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example that____. In addition, the arguer assumes that ____. This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.In this argument, the arguer advocates that ____. The recommendation is based on the observation that_____. Meanwhile, the arguer assumes that____. The argument is problematic for two reasons.The conclusion in this argument is that_____. In support of this prediction, the arguer claims that _____.Moreover, the arguer assumes that_____. This argument is fraught with vague, oversimplified and unwarranted assumptions.托福写作的段落模板:结尾段In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide concrete evidence that_____. Otherwise, the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to _____.To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument thearguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument, we need more information about that____.【托福写作的段落模板:开头、中间与结尾】。

如何才能写好托福作文的结尾段呢

如何才能写好托福作文的结尾段呢

如何才能写好托福作文的结尾段呢如何在托福写作总写好尾段?托福写作中,写不好结尾的情况不在少数,特别是独立写作中收不好结尾导致分数偏低的问题时有发生。

如何才能写好托福作文的结尾段呢?下面小编就为大家具体讲解。

在托福独立写作的结尾段做好首尾呼应重申观点,是因为独立写作从题材要求上来看本质还是议论文,而议论文对于文章结构和论点都有较高要求。

考生在开头段阐明的观点,通过几个中间段落的论述后在结尾段再次重申,这样的写法才是比较标准且容易获得高分的正确写法。

因此,托福独立写作的结尾段一定要做到重申观点。

托福独立写作结尾段写法实例分析话题1Grades encourage students to learn结尾段写法Concerning all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe that grades contribute much to stimulating a student’s passion for learning 如果大家的写作剩余时间实在很紧张,可以将文章开头的陈述观点的句子写到到段尾重申,作为呼应。

不要出现I think...这种句式。

话题2Choose a job: one with more vacation time , or one with high paying but less vacation time ?结尾段写法All in all, the reasons listed above come together to support my viewpoint. From a certain angle, it is rational to believe that a job with more vacation time is better than a job with high salary but long working hours.如果考生需要多写一些单词,可以写此句型,All in all总之,概括的说。

托福独立写作开头结尾段写法技巧分享

托福独立写作开头结尾段写法技巧分享

托福独立写作开头结尾段写法技巧分享托福独立写作的形式相对综合写作来说考生是比较熟悉的,类似中文中立论文的写法。

今天给大家带来了托福独立写作开头结尾段写法技巧分享,希望能够帮助到大家,一起来学习吧。

托福独立写作开头结尾段写法技巧分享托福独立写作开头段写法分享开头段主要用以下几种方法来组织,即背景法(Background),争议法(Controversy),提问法(Question),故事法(Story)和引言法(Quotation)。

以背景法为例。

背景法一般会提出一种普遍的或值得关注的现象作为背景或者是由远到近,由大到小地谈论紧扣论题的社会观点作为背景。

背景法开头段的结构通常如下:背景(1-3句)+论题+反方观点+(反方理由)+过度+(正方观点)+作者的观点+作者的理由。

以20XX年8月11日的独立写作试题为例:Technologymakes people‘s lives more complicated.题目涉及到了现今社会比较热门的话题---科技。

这样,我们就可以以这种社会比较关注的现象作为我们作文的开头背景。

因此这个题目的首段就可以这样开始:Technologyhas had tremendous impacts on every aspect of modern life. However, people arehaving conflicting opinions about whether it has made people’s lives morecomplicated or not. I believe technology has by and large made our lives moreconvenient。

第一句话就是一句紧贴社会的背景,这样写不但很容易打开考生自己的思路,抓住作文的焦点,还能引起考官的共鸣。

托福独立写作结尾段怎么写?介绍:*结尾段落虽然并不像开头和中间段落那样重要,然而没有结尾的*是不完整的,不符合基本写作要求。

托福写作开头论述和结尾应该怎么写

托福写作开头论述和结尾应该怎么写

托福写作开头论述和结尾应该怎么写托福独立写作想要拿到高分不仅要写出好的开头,还需要有充实的内容和美丽的结尾。

下面我就和大家共享托福独立写作技巧:开头,论述和结尾应当怎么写,盼望能够关心到大家,来观赏一下吧。

托福独立写作技巧:开头,论述和结尾应当怎么写一.托福独立写作技巧之文章开头托福独立写作的开头无外乎介绍背景,引出话题,表明观点和限定下文进展四个方面。

背景介绍肯定要把握住关键词,不能跑题。

许多学员死记硬背了一些开头句式,遇到什么题目都往里面套,结果当然很牵强。

许多独立写作的题目完全可以逆向思维,题目说什么往往现实生活缺什么,可以从相反的方向入手去写。

如:In order to improve teaching quality, colleges and universities should increase professors’ salary. Do you agree or disagree?这个题目完全可以围绕教学质量绽开,再谈到提升教学质量的方法,引入题目观点,后表明自己立场。

从反面入手可以谈教学质量下滑令人担忧,人们为提升教学质量在想各种方法,有人建议增加教授们的工资作为激励手段,考生此时应表明自己的立场及理由。

按这样的思路,第一段可以轻松达到50词以上。

正如官方指南所讲“不要仅仅为了增加文章字数而死记硬背一些冗长的首末段。

”Nowadays, the decline of teaching quality has worried the public a lot. Some people suggest that the government should increase salary for professors in college and universities as incentives to improve teaching quality. From my perspective, this is an effective way to make the teaching staff willing to devote to their teaching. I feel this way for two major reasons.这样的开头既能很好地交代背景、引出话题又利于下文的绽开。

英语考试作文-托福写作内容:托福写作如何写出高分结尾?

英语考试作文-托福写作内容:托福写作如何写出高分结尾?

英语考试作文托福写作内容:托福写作如何写出高分结尾?托福写作备考中,大家不仅要准备足够的写作素材,还要知道如何写作文的开头,论述和结尾。

下面,带大家来看看,如何才能写出高分结尾段。

一. 结尾段常见三种写法1.托福作文的最后总结教训或提出建议In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.2.提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果假设烤鸭们没有像编辑说的那样去做,在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果,帮助烤鸭们预见到令人忧虑的后果,进而令烤鸭们自然第接受小智的意见。

e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.3.提出问题留待读者思考In conclusion, it is inevitable for children to commit mistakes at a young age, parents should play their part to instill the importance of good behaviors in their children. Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as a meaningful learning experience. However, what would be like if parents permit their children to commit serious mistakes like theft and robbery?4.结尾段常用表达方式:Finally, thus, in a word, in brief;In conclusion, to conclude, in the end;In the final analysis, in a nutshell, on the whole;To summarize, to encapsulate, in sum, in summary二.结尾段要求1、再次陈述主题:用paraphrase方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素:a.问题中存在争议的地方;b.观点;c.理由。

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托福写作开头与结尾的妙笔
开头结构安排:
1、重申立场:
2、重申立场+总结理由
3、让步+重申立场
4、重申立场+引申扩展
引申扩展包括:
强调反对派立场会带来的后果
展望未来问题的前景
强调重要性
一、重申立场
“It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”
In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today’s professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices.
二、重申立场+总结理由
“Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.”
In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction.
三、让步+重申立场
“Job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service. Rewarding employees primarily for years of service discourages people from maintaining consistently high levels of productivity.”
In the final analysis, the statement correctly identifies job performance as the single best criterion for salary and job security. However, the statement goes too far, it ignores the fact that a cost-of-living salary increase for tenured employees not only enhances loyalty and, in the end, productivity, but also is required by fairness.
四、重申立场+引申扩展
How far should a supervisor go in criticizing the performance of a subordinate? Some highly successful managers have been known to rely on verbal abuse and intimidation. Do you think that this is an effective means of communicating expectations? If not, what alternative should a manager use in dealing with someone whose work is less than satisfactory?
In conclusion, supervisors should avoid using verbal abuse and threats. These methods degrade subordinates, and they are unlikely to produce the best results in the long run. It is more respectful, and probably more effective overall, to handle cases of substandard work performance with clear, honest and supportive feedback.。

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