1-Writing scientific papers
Scientific Paper Writing
Technical Writing - Graduate English of Mechanical EngineeringScientific Paper WritingWei-Ze Wang, Ph. D School of Mechanical & Power Engineering East China University of Science and Technology1Dr. Wei-Ze Wang (王卫泽) Division of process equipment science and engineering (过程设备科学与工程研 究室)wangwz@Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved2Journal• National scientific journal • International scientific journal • (general or important) • SCI / EI / ISTPSCI: Scientific Citation Index EI: Engineering Index ISTP: Index of Scientific & Technical ProceedingsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved3Outline1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Brief introduction of scientific paper Paper writing Paper submitting Common mistakes appeared in paper Brief introduction of “final examination”May 27, 2008Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved41:Title2:Author’ s name3: Abstract2:Author’s affiliation3: KeywordsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved54:Main Text: IntroductionWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved64:Main Text: Experimental (Procedure)Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved74:Main Text: ResultsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved84:Main Text: DiscussionWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved94:Main Text: ConclusionsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved105: Acknowledgement6: ReferenceWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved11Main Structures of the Scientific Article 1. Title 2. Authors’ name (including the author’s affiliation) 3. Abstract (including 3~8 keywords) 4. Main text 5. Acknowledgement 6. References 7. AppendixWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved12Main Structures of the Scientific Article Main text generally including 4 sections: • Introduction (background) • Experimental procedure (or theoretical analysis depending on the content of the article) • Results and discussion • ConclusionsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved13Outline1. Brief introduction of Scientific paper Paper writing Paper submitting Common mistakes appeared in paper Brief introduction of “final examination”Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved142. 3. 4.5.Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@2. Paper writing-title• Short sentence, phrase, generally less than 20 words • The research object (or problem) should be included in the title • Reflect the main outcome and the approach used in your research workWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved152. Paper writing-title1. Title: meaningful and brief Ex. Fatigue of metal foams • Is better than • The mechanical response of cymat and alporas metallic foams to uniaxial cyclic loadingWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved16Ex. TitleWe analyzed the failure reason of the final stage blade in steam turbine 10 wordsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved17Ex. TitleJournal of the American Ceramic Society, 2003, 86(8): 1437-39.Measurement of Fracture Toughness of Plasma Sprayed Al2O3 Coatings Using a Tapered Double Cantilever Beam Method16 wordsWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved182. Paper writing-Author’s nameContribution: the name of the authors, with all initials, the institute or organization, with full address Ex. “A.M. Harte and C.Chen, The Cambridge Centre for Micromechanics, Cambridge University Engineering Department, Cmbridge CB2 1PZ, UK”Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved192. Paper writing-Author’s name• Basic styles: Weize Wang, • Wei-Ze Wang, (hyphen used) • W.-Z Wang • Reverse the order: Wang Wei-Ze. • Add comma: Wei-Ze, WangWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved20Ex. Name formatFull name styleWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved21Ex. Name formatAbbreviated name styleWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved222. Paper writing-Author’s affiliation• Full address generally needed especially for the corresponding author, including the postalcode, E-mail address, telephone number etc.Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved23Ex. Affiliation formatFull address for each authorWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved242. Paper writing-Abstract• A short summary of a longer article• Written after the paper is completed, although it is intended to be read first • Appears on a separate page just after the title page and therefore just before the essay itselfWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved25Importance of Abstract• • • •Decide whether to read an entire article Remember key findings on a topic Understanding a text Index articlesWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved26Key Information in Abstract1. Purpose of the research 2. Method 3. Results 4. ConclusionsRestrictions: ONE page, 200 words MAX (depend on)Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@27Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reservedEx. AbstractPurposeAbstract: The fracture toughness of plasma-sprayed Al2O3 coatings in terms of critical strain energy release rate GIc was measured using a Tapered Double Cantilever Beam (TDCB) approach. The fracture method surfaces were examined using scanning electron microscope (SEM). The measurement yielded the mean GIc values from 13 to 27 J/m2 for the sprayed Al2O3 coatings at different spray distances. These values agree well with those obtained by the conventional double Results cantilever beam approach. The dependence of the observed GIc on spray distance is consistent with that for lamellar bonding ratio. These results suggest that the TDCB test is a reliable approach to measure GIc of thermal spray coatings without the crack length measurement.ConclusionsCited from J Am Ceram Soc [J], 2003, 86(8): 1437-39.Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved282. Paper writing-Main TextIntroduction: • What is the problem and why is it interesting? • Who are the main contributor? • What did they do? • What novel thing will you reveal?Cited from How to write a paper, Ashby M. Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved29Ex. IntroductionWith the development of plasma spraying technology last several decades, thermally sprayed ceramic coatings have been successfully used in various industrial fields because of their excellent wear-resistance, thermal-resistance and corrosion resistance etc. However, a thermal spray coating may experience delaminating or spalling in service under a certain mechanical loading owing to its lamellar structural features. Many experiments confirm that the failure of the coating occurs easily from the interfaces between lamellae in the coating, for example under localized load such as in abrasive wear[1] or erosion[2] and fracture mechanics test[3-5]. To reveal the failure modes and characterize the fracture behavior of sprayed coating, it has been suggested that the fracture mechanics test is a useful approach3. The fracture toughness of the coating can be used to evaluate the 30 Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved resistance of coating to the failure in the form of delaminating. wangwz@The DCB (double cantilever beam) approach is a popular method to measure the fracture toughness of thermal spray coating[3, 611]. But it is difficult to obtain identical fracture toughness value for similar coatings with the DCB specimens because the compliance varies nonlinearly with crack length[6-9, 12]. As for the measurement of critical strain energy release rate, Mostovoy et al. proposed a modified contoured DCB (CDCB) specimen[12]. The proper design of specimen makes the fracture toughness be measured only using the critical fracture load disregarding crack length during test. It would provide a useful approach for the determination of fracture toughness by the application of such CDCB specimen to thermal spray coatings. However, there is no evidence up to now showing that such approach has been applied to thermal sprayed coatings. In this work, the measurement of the fracture toughness of plasma sprayed Al2O3 coatings was carried out using the tapered DCB (TDCB) specimen to examine its 31 Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved suitability for thermal spray coatings. wangwz@Ex. IntroductionCited from Theor. Appl. Frac. Mechanics By Shan-Tung Tu (涂善东)Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved322. Paper writing-Main Text2. Experimental procedure or theoretical analysis • Usually a list of all materials or equipments you used for the experiment • The theoretical model used in your analysis• a full descriptive narrative part • list all steps in the correct orderWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved332. Paper writing-Main Text• • • • • • Experimental paper: equipment, materials, method Modeling paper: assumptions, mathematical tools, method Computational paper: inputs, computational tools, method Explain what is especially different about your method Give sufficient detail that the reader can reproduce what you did Don’t mix method with results or discussionCopyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved34Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@2.1 Materials and coating deposition Al2O3 powder used was nominally commercially pure alumina, which had a particle size from 20 to 40μm. Mild steel was used as the substrate. Al2O3 coatings were deposited on the sand-blasted surface to a thickness from 500μm to 700μm using a commercial plasma spray system (GP-80, JIUJIANG, 80kW class). Argon was used as primary gas and hydrogen was used as auxiliary gas. The pressures of both argon and hydrogen were operated at 0.7 MPa and 0.4 MPa during spraying, respectively. The flow of the primary gas was fixed at 47 l/min. Nitrogen was used as carrier gas. The coatings were deposited at arc power of 39 kW and under four different spray distances: 70 mm, 90 mm, 110 mm and 130 mm. For each coating, at least six specimens were used for the fracture toughness measurements.Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved352.2 Fracture toughness test A coated arm was bonded to another coupling uncoated arm but with surface blasted using commercial adhesive (E-7). A pre-crack of 10 to 12 mm long to the loading point was prepared through limiting the bonding of the coating to the coupling uncoated arm by the adhesive. The test was performed using Instron 1195 type tensile tester at a crosshead speed of 5x10-5 m/min following the ASTM-E-399 standard. The loading and displacement of the specimen were recorded simultaneously. To ensure the accuracy of the test, only the specimens which fractured in the coating (as based on the examination of fractured surfaces) were regarded as effective results, which were used to calculate the fracture toughness of the coating. The fractured surface was also examined using SEM to examine the fracture behavior.Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved362. Paper writing-Main Text3. Results and discussionResults: • Present the output of the experiments, model or computation • Don’t mix results with discussionWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved372. Paper writing-Main TextDiscussion: • Extract principles, relationships, generalizations. • Present analysis, model or theory. • Show relationship between the results and analysis, model or theory.Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved38Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved39Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved40Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved41Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved42Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved432. Paper writing-Main TextFigures Flow charts show methods, procedures. Graphs plot data Schematics show how equipment works, or illustrate a mechanism or model Drawings and photographs illustrate equipment, microstructures etcWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved44Significant Differences ?27 27 26.5 26.5 26 26 25.5 20 25 25 24.5 24.5 0 24 5 10 15 25.5 25 30 25.6 25.8 26 25.7AAAB B45B0FiguresClear Same fonts size and styleWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved46TableType of attack Echo addition Noise Addition Band equalization Classical 0.0% 1.2% 2.31% Pop 0.1% 1.42% 2.5% Jazz 0.27% 1.6% 2.73%三线表 / 共用单位 / 有效数字Type of attackClassical (%) Pop (%) Jazz (%)Echo addition Noise addition Band equalizationWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@0 1.20 2.310.10 1.42 2.500.27 1.60 2.7347Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved2. Paper writing-Main Text• • • • • • Conclusions Must have: Summarize the study work State outcome (or conclusions) of the research May have: Make suggestions of further workWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved482. Paper writing-Main TextConclusions • Draw together the most important results and their consequences. • List any reservations or limitations. • Don’t duplicate the Abstract as the Conclusions or vice versa. • Abstract is an overview of the entire paper • Conclusion is a summing up of the advances in knowledgeWei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved49Ex. Conclusion4. ConclusionsThe effect of spray distance on the fracture toughness, elastic modulus parallel to the lamellar plane and Poisson’ ratio were investigated. The fracture toughness was measured using a Tapered Double Cantilever Beam (TDCB) approach. The elastic parameters, including elastic modulus and Poisson’s ratio, were obtained through direct tensile tests of bar specimens. It was found that when spray distance ranged from 160 mm to 190 mm, the fracture toughness of plasma sprayed Ni-45Cr coatings changes little although the coating deposited at spray distance of 130mm presented a little lower fracture toughness. Moreover, the fracture toughness showed a significant drop as the coating was deposited at spray distance of 210 mm. It was suggested that the fracture toughness is related with the lamellar bonding ratio based on examination of fractured surface morphology of the coatings deposited at different spray distances. On the other hand, the spray distance has no evident influence on the elastic modulus and Poisson’s ratio of plasma sprayed Ni-45Cr coatings. Cited from Materials Transaction 47(7), 2006,1643-1648By Wei-Ze Wang (王卫泽)Wei-Ze Wang, Ph.D. wangwz@Copyright © 2008 CheMech. All Rights reserved50。
如何写一篇科学文献(英文)
Whom Writing For?
• To please yourself? • Referees - to persuade the toughest one • Journal - Choose before writing - General vs. subespecialty journal
Introduction
2-3 paragraphs, <450 words • First paragraph - Introduce broad area • Second paragraph
- Explicit rationale
• Last paragraph - Hypothesis
Discussion Section
HOW TO WRITE A SCIENTIFIC PAPER
What is a Scientific Paper ?
A scientific paper is a written and published report describing original research results
Writing a Research Paper
Discussion Section
• Middle paragraphs - Base each on a major result • Always focus on your results • Never discuss prior work without reference to your work • Refer Tables and Figures
Of Writing
• At assigned time: write (not read)
• Don’t wait for the muses • A craft, not an art: practice • Ideas come while writing • Read good writers, especially non-medical
科技写作 Scientific Writng
y The Scope of Scientific Writing:
◦ Scientific papers ◦ Review papers ◦ Grant proposals ◦ Oral presentations ◦ Poster presentations
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Approaching a Writing Project
y Doing the Writing
◦ Block out times to write Indicate on your calendar or in your personal organizer the times you have reserved for given writing projects
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Approaching a Writing Project
y Follow the Instructions to Authors
◦ If instructions are lቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱng, underline or highlight the key points to remember
feedback, revise your writing some more
x Expert in your research specialty – technical problems
x Someone in your general field – note items that may unclear to readers
How to Write Scientific Paper
How Do I Write A Scientific Paper?A scientific paper is a written report describing original research results whose format has been defined by centuries of developing tradition, editorial practice, scientific ethics and the interplay with printing and publishing services. The result of this process is that virtually every scientific paper has a title, abstract, introduction, materials and methods, results and discussion.科技论文是描述原创研究结果的书面报告,它的格式由数世纪的发展传统,编辑实践,科学道德所确定,并且受印刷和出版服务的影响。
这个过程的结果是,几乎每一篇科学论文都有一个标题,摘要,前言,材料和方法,结果和讨论。
It should, however, be noted that most publications have rules about a paper's format: some divide papers into these or some of these sections, others do not, and the order may be different in different publications. So be prepared to revise your paper in to a publication's format when you are ready to submit.然而,应该注意的是,大多数出版物对文章的格式有规则:一些出版物会把文章分成一些章节,另外一些出版物则不会,并且不同的出版物规则是不同的。
A GUIDE TO WRITING SCIENTIFIC PAPERS
A GUIDE TO WRITING SCIENTIFIC PAPERSScientific experiments are demanding, exciting endeavors, but, to have an impact, results must be communicated to others. A research paper is a method of communication, an attempt to tell others about some specific data that you have gathered and what you think those data mean in the context of your research. The "rules" of writing a scientific paper are rigid and are different from those that apply when you write an English theme or a library research paper. For clear communication, the paper obviously requires proper usage of the English language and this will be considered in evaluating your reports. Scientific papers must be written clearly and concisely so that readers with backgrounds similar to yours can understand easily what you have done and how you have done it should they want to repeat or extend your work. When writing papers for the biology department, you can assume that your audience will be readers like yourselves with similar knowledge.Although scientific journals differ somewhat in their specific requirements, a general format that would be acceptable for most biological journals is:TitleAbstractIntroductionMaterials and MethodsResultsDiscussionConclusionsAcknowledgmentsLiterature CitedThe section headings (Abstract, Introduction, etc.) should be centered and the body of each section should follow immediately below the heading. Do not begin each section on a new page. If one section ends part of the way down the page, the next section heading follows immediately on the same page.One important general rule to keep in mind is that a scientific paper is a report about something that has been done in the past. Most of the paper should be written in the PAST TENSE (was, were). The present tense (is, are) is used when stating generalizations or conclusions. The present tense is mostoften used in the Introduction, Discussion and Conclusion sections of papers. The paper should read as a narrative in which the author describes what was done and what results were obtained from that work.TITLEEvery scientific paper must have a self-explanatory title. By reading the title, the work being reported should be clear to the reader without having to read the paper itself. The title, "A Biology Lab Report", tells the reader nothing. An example of a good, self-explanatory title would be: "The Effects of Light and Temperature on the Growth of Populations of the Bacterium, Escherichia coli ". This title reports exactly what the researcher has done by stating three things:1. The environmental factors that were manipulated (light,temperature).2. The parameter that was measured (growth).3. The specific organism that was studied (the bacterium,Escherichia coli).If the title had been only "Effects of Light and Temperature on Escherichia coli ", the reader would have to guess which parameters were measured. (That is, were the effects on reproduction, survival, dry weight or something else?) If the title had been "Effect of Environmental Factors on Growth of Escherichia coli ", the reader would not know which environmental factors were manipulated. If the title had been "Effects of Light and Temperature on the Growth of an Organism", then the reader would not know which organism was studied. In any of the above cases, the reader would be forced to read more of the paper to understand what the researcher had done.Exceptions do occur: If several factors were manipulated, all of them do not have to be listed. Instead, "Effects of Several Environmental Factors on Growth of Populations of Escherichia coli " (if more than two or three factors were manipulated) would be appropriate. The same applies if more than two or three organisms were studied. For example, "Effects of Light and Temperature on the Growth of Four Species of Bacteria" would be correct. The researcher would then include the names of the bacteria in the Materials and Methods section of the paper.ABSTRACTThe abstract section in a scientific paper is a concise digest of the content of the paper. An abstract is more than a summary. A summary is a brief restatement of preceding text that is intended to orient a reader who has studied the preceding text. An abstract is intended to be self-explanatory without reference to the paper, but is not a substitute for the paper.The abstract should present, in about 250 words, the purpose of the paper, general materials and methods (including, if any, the scientific and common names of organisms), summarized results, and the major conclusions. Do not include any information that is not contained in the body of the paper. Exclude detailed descriptions of organisms, materials and methods. Tables or figures, references to tables or figures, or references to literature cited usually are not included in this section. The abstract is usually written last. An easy way to write the abstract is to extract the most important points from each section of the paper and then use those points to construct a brief description of your study.INTRODUCTIONThe Introduction is the statement of the problem that you investigated. It should give readers enough information to appreciate your specific objectives within a larger theoretical framework. After placing your work in a broader context, you should state the specific question(s) to be answered. This section may also include background information about the problem such as a summary of any research that has been done on the problem in the past and how the present experiment will help to clarify or expand the knowledge in this general area. All background information gathered from other sources must, of course, be appropriately cited. (Proper citation of references will be described later.)A helpful strategy in this section is to go from the general, theoretical framework to your specific question. However, do not make the Introduction too broad. Remember that you are writing for classmates who have knowledge similar to yours. Present only the most relevant ideas and get quickly to the point of the paper. For examples, see the Appendix.MATERIALS AND METHODSThis section explains how and, where relevant, when the experiment was done. The researcher describes the experimental design, the apparatus, methods of gathering data and type of control. If any work was done in a natural habitat, the worker describes the study area, states its location and explains when the work was done. If specimens were collected for study, where and when that material was collected are stated. The general rule to remember is that the Materials and Methods section should be detailed and clear enough so that any reader knowledgeable in basic scientific techniques could duplicate the study if she/he wished to do so. For examples, see the Appendix.DO NOT write this section as though it were directions in a laboratory exercise book. Instead of writing:First pour agar into six petri plates. Then inoculatethe plates with the bacteria. Then put the platesinto the incubator . . .Simply describe how the experiment was done:Six petri plates were prepared with agar andinoculated with the bacteria. The plates wereincubated for ten hours.Also, DO NOT LIST the equipment used in the experiment. The materials that were used in the research are simply mentioned in the narrative as the experimental procedure is described in detail. If well-known methods were used without changes, simply name the methods (e.g., standard microscopic techniques; standard spectrophotometric techniques). If modified standard techniques were used, describe the changes.RESULTSHere the researcher presents summarized data for inspection using narrative text and, where appropriate, tables and figures to display summarized data. Only the results are presented. No interpretation of the data or conclusions about what the data might mean are given in this section. Data assembled in tables and/or figures should supplement the text and present the data in an easily understandable form. Do not present raw data! If tables and/or figures are used, they must be accompanied by narrative text. Do not repeat extensively in the text the data you have presented in tables and figures. But, do not restrict yourself to passing comments either. (For example, only stating that "Results are shown in Table 1." is not appropriate.) The text describes the data presented in the tables and figuresand calls attention to the important data that the researcher will discuss in the Discussion section and will use to support Conclusions. (Rules to follow when constructing and presenting figures and tables are presented in a later section of this guide.)DISCUSSIONHere, the researcher interprets the data in terms of any patterns that were observed, any relationships among experimental variables that are important and any correlations between variables that are discernible. The author should include any explanations of how the results differed from those hypothesized, or how the results were either different from or similar to those of any related experiments performed by other researchers. Remember that experiments do not always need to show major differences or trends to be important. "Negative" results also need to be explained and may represent something important--perhaps a new or changed focus for your research.A useful strategy in discussing your experiment is to relate your specific results back to the broad theoretical context presented in the Introduction. Since your Introduction went from the general to a specific question, going from the specific back to the general will help to tie your ideas and arguments together.CONCLUSIONSThis section simply states what the researcher thinks the data mean, and, as such, should relate directly back to the problem/question stated in the introduction. This section should not offer any reasons for those particular conclusions--these should have been presented in the Discussion section. By looking at only the Introduction and Conclusions sections, a reader should have a good idea of what the researcher has investigated and discovered even though the specific details of how the work was done would not be known.ACKNOWLEDGEMENTSIn this section you should give credit to people who have helped you with the research or with writing the paper. If your work has been supported by a grant, you would also give credit for that in this section.LITERATURE CITEDThis section lists, in alphabetical order by author, all published information that was referred to anywhere in the text of the paper. It provides the readers with the information needed should they want to refer to the original literature on the general problem. Note that the Literature Cited section includes only those references that were actually mentioned (cited) in the paper. Any other information that the researcher may have read about the problem but did not mention in the paper is not included in this section. This is why the section is called "Literature Cited" instead of "References" or "Bibliography".The system of citing reference material in scientific journals varies with the particular journal. The method that you will follow is the "author-date" system. Listed below are several examples of how citations should be presented in the text of your paper. The name(s) of the author(s) and year of publication are included in the body of the text. Sentence structure determines the placement of the parentheses.One author: 'Scott's (1990) model fails to ...' or 'Thestream model (Scott 1990) is ...'Two authors: 'Libby and Libby (1991) show...' or'Previous moose migration studies (Libby and Libby1991)...'Three or more authors: 'Roche et al. (1991) reportedthat ...' or 'During April, moose sightings increased overthose in a previous study (Roche et al. 1991) .....'Entries in the Literature Cited section are listed alphabetically by author(s) and chronologically for papers by the same author(s). The following citations illustrate the details of punctuation and order of information for a journal article, book, Internet source, and your laboratory packet.Schneider, M.J., Troxler, R.F. and Voth, P.D. 1967.Occurrence of indoleacetic acid in the bryophytes. Bot.Gaz. 28(3): 174-179.Stebbins, G.L. 1977. Processes of Organic Evolution.Prentice-Hall, New Jersey. 269 pp.MSW Scientific Names: Microtus ochrogaster. Online.Smithsonian Institution. Available:/cgi-bin/wdb/msw/names/query/22128. updated August 8, 1996 [accessed 8/10/98]Colby Biology Department. 1998. Salt Tolerance inPhaseolus vulgaris. In: Introduction to Biology:Organismal Biology. Waterville, ME: Colby CustomPublishingGenerally, most references will be to the primary literature (i.e., journal articles) and, to a lesser extent, books. Popular literature and the Internet should be used sparingly and with caution. Other sources such as book chapters and pamphlets typically have their own specific citation formats. If necessary, be sure to find out what these formats are and use them appropriately.For a much more detailed discussion about writing scientific papers,consult: CBE Style Manual Committee. 1983. CBE Style Manual: AGuide for Authors, Editors and Publishers in the Biological Sciences.5th Edition, revised and expanded. Council of Biology Editors, Inc.,Bethesda, Maryland.This guide is based on a paper by Gubanich, A.A. 1977. Writing the scientific paper in the investigative lab. Amer. Biol. Teacher, 39(1): 27-34.APPENDIXExamples from the scientific literature that illustrate material in varioussections of a scientific paper.ABSTRACTS:A. Excerpted from: Hasegawa, K., Sakoda, M. and J. Bruinsma.1989. Revision of the theory of phototropism in plants: a newinterpretation of a classical experiment. Planta 178:540-544.Went's classical experiment on the diffusion of auxin activityfrom unilaterally illuminated oat coleoptile tips (Went 1928),was repeated as precisely as possible. In agreement with Went'sdata with the Avena curvature assay, the agar blocks from theilluminated side of oat (Avena sativa L. cv. Victory) coleoptiletips had, on the average, 38% of the auxin activity of those fromthe shaded side. However, determination of the absoluteamounts of indole-3-acetic acid (IAA) in the agar blocks, using aphysicochemical assay following purification, showed that theIAA was evenly distributed in the blocks from the illuminatedand shaded sides. In the blocks from the shaded anddark-control halves the amounts of IAA were 2.5 times higherthan the auxin activity measured by the Avena curvature test,and in those from the illuminated half even 7 times higher.Chromatography of the diffusates prior to the Avena curvaturetest demonstrated that the amounts of two growth inhibitors,especially of the more polar one, were significantly higher in theagar blocks from the illuminated side than in those from theshaded side and the dark control. These results show that thebasic experiment from which the Cholodny-Went theory wasderived does not justify this theory. The data rather indicate thatphototropism is caused by the light-induced, local accumulationof growth inhibitors against a background of even auxindistribution, the diffusion of auxin being unaffected.B. Excerpted from: Farmer, E.E. and Ryan,C.A. 1990. Interplantcommunication: airborne methyl jasmonate induces synthesis ofproteinase inhibitors in plant leaves. Proc. Natl. Acad. Sci. 87:7713-7716.Inducible defensive responses in plants are known to beactivated locally and systematically by signaling molecules thatare produced at sites of pathogen or insect attacks, but only onechemical signal, ethylene, is known to travel through theatmosphere to activate plant defensive genes. Methyl jasmonate,a common plant secondary compound, when applied to surfacesof tomato plants, induces the synthesis of defensive proteinaseinhibitor proteins in the treated plants and in nearby plants aswell. The presence of methyl jasmonate in the atmosphere ofchambers containing plants from three species of two families,Solanaceae and Fabaceae, results in the accumulation ofproteinase inhibitors in leaves of all three species. Whensagebrush, Artemesia tridentata, a plant shown to possessmethyl jasmonate in leaf surface structures, is incubated inchambers with tomato plants, proteinase inhibitor accumulationis induced in the tomato leaves, demonstrating that interplantcommunication can occur from leaves of one species of plant toleaves of another species to activate the expression of defensivegenes.INTRODUCTIONS:A. Excerpted from: Shukla, A. and Sawhney, V.K. 1992. Cytokinins in a genic male sterile line of Brassica napus. Physiol. Plant. 85:23-29.The failure or inability of an individual to produce functional gametes under a given set of environmental conditions is known as sterility. Male sterility in plants is generally associated with the lack of production of viable pollen; however its expression can vary (Frankel and Galun 1977, Kaul 1988). In any event, male sterility is of fundamental importance in the production of hybrid seeds and in breeding programs.Plant growth substances, both exogenously applied and endogenous, have often been implicated in the regulation of male sterility in several plant species (Frankel and Galun 1977, Kaul 1988). Cytokinins, gibberellins, auxins and abscisic acid, as well as polyamines, are all known to affect pollen and stamen development in a number of species (e.g., Sawhney 1974, Ahokas 1982, Saini and Aspinall 1982, Rastogi and Sawhney 1990, Nakajima et al. 1991, Singh et al. 1992).[Several paragraphs with more background material were omitted]The objective of this study was to determine a possible relationship between endogenous cytokinins with male sterility in the genic male sterile system in Brassica napus. Thus, an analysis of a number of cytokinins in various organs of the wild type and genic male sterile plants was conducted.B. Excerpted from: Reader, R.J. and Beisner, B.E. 1991. Species-dependent effects of seed predation and ground coveron seedling emergence of old-field forbs. Am. Midl. Nat. 126: 279-286.A major goal of plant ecology is to explain spatial variation in a species frequency of occurrence. Spatial variation in seed predation may contributeto spatial variation in plant frequency by reducing seed supply sufficiently to limit seedling emergence more at one location than another (Louda 1982, Anderson 1989). Spatial variation in seed predation is well documented (e.g., Janzen 1971, 1975,; Bertness et al. 1987; Smith 1987), but few investigators tested whether differential seed predation resulted in differential seedling emergence (e.g., Louda 1982, 1983). Since factors such as dense ground cover may suppress seedling emergence regardless of the amount of seed predation (Harper 1977), additional studies are needed to clarify the effect of seed predation on seedling emergence. Therefore, we examined the effects of both seed predation and ground cover (i.e., plant biomass and litter) on seedling emergence of some old-field forbs.MATERIALS AND METHODS:A. Extracted from: Sakoda, M., Hasegawa, K. and Ishizuka, K.1992. Mode of action of natural growth inhibitors in radishhypocotyl elongation -- influence of raphanusanins onauxin-mediated microtubule orientation. Physiol. Plant.84:509-513.Seeds of Raphanus sativus L. var. hortensis f. shogoin were sown andgerminated in petri dishes on 4 layers of paper-towel (Kimberly-Clark Corp.)moistened with distilled water. After 3 days in darkness at 25oC, 4-mmhypocotyl segments were excised below the hook of the 3 cm long etiolatedseedlings. After subapical segments were held for 1 h in darkness at 25oC indistilled water, they were transferred to 1 mM IAA solution or mixed mediacontaining 1 mM IAA and raphanusanin B ( 1 or 3 mM). In other experiments,segments were preincubated for 1 h in small petri dishes containing 1 mMIAA solution, and then raphanusanin B was added to the medium (finalconcentrations 1 or 3 mM). Segment lengths were measured using amicroscope with microgauge. All manipulations were carried out under dimgreen light (3mW m-2).[The authors then explained visualization of microtubules byimmunofluorescence]B. Excerpted from: Kanbe, T., Kobayashi, I and Tanaka, K. !992.Dynamics of cytoplasmic organelles in the cell cycle of the fissionyeast Schizosaccharomyces pombe: Three-dimensionalreconstruction from serial sections. J. Cell Sci.,94: 647-656.Schizosaccharomyces pombe h90, the homothallic, readily sporing haploidstrain, was used. The strain was maintained on malt extract-yeast extract (MY)agar as described by Tanaka and Kanbe (1986). Cells were cultured on a MYslant at 30oC for 48 h, transferred to MY broth and cultures at 30oCovernight. Cells at the exponential phase were spread on a MY plate andfurther incubated at 30oC for 4 to 6 h before harvesting for microscopy.Cells were fixed with a solution of 3% paraformaldehyde in a50mM-phosphate buffer containing 1mM-MgCl2 (pH 6.8) at roomtemperature for 2 h. After washing with the buffer, cells were treated withNovozyme 234 (Novo Industri A/S, Bagsvaerd, Denmark) for 60 min at 30oCwith reciprocal shaking to remove the cell wall. For the staining of F-actin,cells were washed and suspended in Rh-ph solution (Molecular Probes, Inc.,Eugene, OR, USA) diluted 20 times in 50 mM-phosphate-buffered salinecontaining 1mM-MgCl2 (PBS, pH 7.3) at room temperature for 2 h. Nucleiwere stained by 4,6-diamidino-2-phenylindole (DAPI) in NS buffer describedby Suzuki et al. (1982). Preparations were examined with an OlympusBHS-RFK epifluorescence microscope using a U-G dichroic mirror withexcitation filter BP490 for Rh-ph staining and UG1 for DAPI, and werephotographed on Kodak Tmax400 film.[This section continued to describe preparation for electron microscopy andthe three-dimensional reconstruction of serial sections.] RESULTS:A. Excerpted from: Takahashi, H., Scott, T.K. and Suge, H. 1992.Stimulation of root elongation and curvature by calcium. PlantPhysiol. 98:246-252.As shown in Table 1, the growth of roots treated with 10 mM Ca2+ wasapproximately 30% greater than the controls for a 3.5 h period followingCa2+ application to Alaska pea roots and approximately 80% greater thancontrol for 12 h following the treatment in ageotropum pea. However, thegrowth of Alaska pea roots did not differ from that of control roots whenmeasured 12 h after Ca2+ treatment. Roots of Silver Queen corn also showedan increase of approximately 70% in growth 3 h following application of 20mM Ca2+ (Table 1). Such symmetrical treatment of root caps with Ca2+ didnot cause curvature of the roots.[The results section continued for several more paragraphs.]B. Excerpted from: Sato, S. and Dickinson, H.G. 1991. The RNAcontent of the nucleolus and nucleolus-like inclusions in theanther of Lilium estimated by an improved RNase-gold labellingmethod. Jour. Cell Sci. 94:675-683.Gold particles were predominant over the nuclear nucleolus-like bodies(NLBs) (Fig. 9). Although the distribution histogram of gold particles over thenuclear NLBs showed that labelling varied from 40 to 130 particles mm-2,most of that fell in the range of 80 - 90 particles mm-2 (Fig. 4). Thequantitative estimation of labelling, which represented the average number ofgold particles per mm2, indicated the labelling over the nuclear NLBs to betwice as strong as that over the loosened chromatin, and four times as strongas that over the condensed chromatin (Table 2).[The results section continued for several more paragraphs.] DISCUSSION:A. Excerpted from: Takahashi, H., Scott, T.K. and Suge, H. 1992.Stimulation of root elongation and curvature by calcium. PlantPhysiol. 98:246-252.The effect of Ca2+ on root elongation has been reported to be bothstimulatory and inhibitory (Burstrom 1969, Evans et al. 1990, Hasenstein and Evans 1986). In those initial studies , however, the whole root was treatedwith Ca2+. Because the site of action for Ca2+ in gravitropism is consideredto be the root cap rather than the zone of elongation, we focused on the role of the Ca2+/cap interaction in root growth as well as in gravitropic responses.We found that Ca2+ at 10 or 20 mM applied to the cap end of pea and cornroots mediated elongation growth of roots for at least 3 to 4 h followingtreatment. Unilateral application of 1 to 20 mM Ca2+ to the root cap alwaysinduced unequivocal curvature of roots away from the Ca2+ source in Alaskapea and to a greater extent in the roots of the agravitropic mutant,ageotropum (Figs. 1 and 2). Roots of Merit and Silver Queen corn also always curved away from Ca2+ applied to the cap, although a somewhat higherconcentration was required for the response than in the pea roots. [Severalsentences were omitted here.] These results show a strong correlationbetween an increase of Ca2+ levels in the root cap and stimulation of rootelongation. The results are in contrast to the previously proposed model thatan increased level of Ca2+ in the root cap mediated inhibition of root growth(Hasenstein et al. 1988).[The discussion continued for several more paragraphs.] CONCLUSIONS:A. Excerpted from: Noguchi, H. and Hasegawa, K. 1987.Phototropism in hypocotyls of radish. III. Influence of unilateralor bilateral illumination of various light intensities onphototropism and distribution of cis- and trans-raphanusaninsand raphanusamide. Plant Physiol. 83: 672-675.The present study demonstrates that phototropism in radish hypocotyls iscaused by a gradient of growth inhibition which depends on the light intensity through the amounts of growth inhibitor, and thus strongly supports theBlaauw (Blaauw 1915) hypothesis, explaining phototropism as an effect oflocal growth inhibition by light.B. Excerpted from: Nick, P., Bergfeld, R., Schäfer, E. andSchopfer, P. 1990. Unilateral reorientation of microtubules atthe outer epidermal wall during photo- and gravitropiccurvature of maize coleoptiles and sunflower hypocotyls. Planta181: 162-168.The striking agreement between changes in microtubule orientation observed at the outer epidermal wall during tropic bending and during induction or straight growth by external auxin strongly indicates that auxin is, in fact, functionally involved in mediating asymmetric growth leading to organ curvature.There is no evidence that short-term growth of epidermal cells is controlled through the orientation of microfibrils. Also the data do not prove a causal relationship between auxin action on microtubule orientation and tropic curvature. However, our results do show that microtubule reorientation is a specific auxin-mediated response which can be used as a diagnostic test for an asymmetric distribution of the hormone, correlated with asymmetric growth.。
(1)Scientific paper writing
- Note making and summary writing from Literature - Methodology - Results or findings - Discussion - Conclusion - Acknowledgements - Appendix (es) 6. Application of Computer in Research
• Protect intellectual property • Researchers- accountable to the public. • Research misconduct, conflicts of interest • Build public support • Moral and social values
• Research Methods: Scientific method vs Arbitrary Method, Logical Scientific Methods: Deductive, Inductive, Deductive-Inductive, pattern of Deductive Inductive logical process, Different types of inductive logical methods.
• Sampling methods – Data Processing and Analysis strategies, Graphical representation – Descriptive Analysis, Inferential Analysis, Correlation analysis, Least square method, Data Analysis using statistical package, Hypothesis testing , Generalization and Interpretation, Modeling.
Writing a scientific paper
Conclusions
• This is NOT the same as a summary. The Abstract is usually a summary. A reader who has the paper will certainly have the Abstract. • Personal preference is to have the Conclusions as a list. • If it is a summary -give it that heading and make it more than the Abstract. • NEVER make conclusions that cannot be justified or are not mentioned in the main text.
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– – – – – First get them organised. What to include? Any photographs? How will I present them - figures and/or tables? Do I need to combine results with discussion? Can some Results be presented as Supplementary Material? [website allows this]
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scientific paper 的含义特点-概述说明以及解释
scientific paper 的含义特点-概述说明以及解释1.引言1.1 概述概述在科学研究领域,科学论文是学术交流的基础和重要手段之一。
科学论文是科学家们将自己的研究成果进行记录、总结和传播的方式,旨在向同行学者、研究机构和学术界提供全面而详实的研究结果。
通过科学论文的发表,研究者们可以分享他们的研究思路、实验方法、数据结果和结论,从而推动科学知识的进一步发展和学科的进步。
科学论文具有多种形式和格式,包括原始研究论文、综述论文、评论论文、案例报告等。
不同类型的科学论文有着不同的写作要求和结构,但它们都需要遵循科学研究的基本规范和准则。
科学论文具有一些共同的特点。
首先,科学论文应该是基于科学方法和实证研究得出的结论,而不是主观意见或个人观点的陈述。
其次,科学论文应该有明确的目的和研究问题,并通过严谨的实验设计和可靠的数据来解决这些问题。
此外,科学论文还应该具备可重复性,即其他研究者能够根据提供的方法和数据重新进行实验,以验证研究结果的可靠性和可信度。
科学论文的发表对科研人员来说具有重要意义。
首先,科学论文的发表能够扩大研究人员的影响力和声誉,提高个人的学术地位和职业发展。
其次,科学论文的发表可以促进学术交流和合作,有助于不同领域的研究者相互学习和借鉴。
另外,科学论文的发表还可以为学术界提供一个评价研究质量的标准,推动科学研究朝着更高的水平发展。
综上所述,科学论文作为科学研究和学术交流的重要手段,具有明确的定义和特点。
它们通过记录和传播研究成果,推动科学知识的发展和学科的进步。
科学论文的发表对于研究人员的个人发展和学术界的进步都起到了重要的推动作用。
1.2文章结构文章结构部分的内容可以如下编写:1.2 文章结构在科学论文撰写过程中,良好的文章结构是确保逻辑清晰性和读者易于阅读的重要因素。
一个典型的科学论文通常由以下部分组成:1.2.1 标题科学论文的标题应该简明扼要地概括研究的主题和目的。
一个好的标题可以吸引读者的注意力,并在最初阅读材料之前提供信息。
Scientific Writing 科技论文写作 清华大学
Scientific Writing and Presentation in EnglishA. GodfreyTsinghua University, Spring Semester2008General introduction to the course:•course objectives:–to structure your article to follow a clear argument–to understand the scientific publication process–to learn how to proof-read an article–to avoid some of the most common errors in style andgrammar•practice is the only way to improve–each paper you write can be better than the previousoneScientific Writing: Lecture 1#3Course evaluation •exercises in class (a few –as time permits)–not individually evaluated•exercises outside class –not evaluated (discuss next class –review material)•evaluated written assignment–writing a short paper–proof-reading a piece of text•“Common Mistakes” –clearly marked (**)–will be marked more criticallyThis is a course in English..–discussing issues of the use of the English language in English•If you do not understand something please say so (in English…)!Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#5The course will cover several study areas •(1) English grammar –must be correct –can be very useful to help make your paper stronger •(2) Issues specific to Scientific writing –convention –style / formatting / organization of ideas•(3) Discussion of example writing–published articles –draft versions of your papers?•I will try and mix these up in each class –nobody wants to sit through 90 minutes of grammar…•and I don’t want to teach 90 minutes of grammarOutline of course content•organizing the information (before you write…)•choosing the level of detail •choosing and maintaining your main idea •common mistakes•Tsinghua Journal proof-reading•Editor for Materials Science and Technology•previous students!•use of abbreviations•making proper reference to other published research •choosing the correct style–scientific papers require the use of formal languageScientific Writing: Lecture 1#7Outline of course content (continued)•proof-reading–how to do it–when to do it•dealing with the journal Editor and referees –“Don’t Panic!!”•legal and ethical issues–copyright details•other kinds of scientific presentation–poster/conference oral presentation Outline of grammatical issues we will cover •parts of a sentence•verbs –tense (when the action took place)–voice (focus of the action)•use of definite/indefinite article (“the”/”a”)•paragraph construction and flow of text–conjunctions (linking words)•conditional properties (“if/when”)•I will keep things as simple as possible –I am a scientist –not a linguist….Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#9•Dates for the course–Mar 6th –Apr 24th (TUESDAY EVENINGS FOR 2 PERIODS, i.e. NOT on Fridays –though we may swap days for one week)–assignment (writing exercises and paper writing) to be given out Apr 17th ; to be handed in Apr 29th (?? –not yet finalized…)What is scientific writing?•Many kinds –we will consider only that which:•presents an idea/argument–includes “evidence” in support of your argument•results (new or old)•contains “technical information”–audience is limited –to a certain extent…>>archival scientific publications<< (journal articles)•Other kinds include:–manuals, technical documentation, popular scientific writing (e.g. newspaper/magazines), internal reportsScientific Writing: Lecture 1#11Why publish scientific papers?•your supervisor told you to•it is a course requirement•to improve your chances of getting a job/new position–these are all secondary reasons…•you have a good new idea/new insight/new data –the reason you should have in your mind when you prepare the paper Purpose of scientific publication•to spread information/new ideas•to allow other researchers to test (verify) your results–scientific “proof” relies on data fitting a theory•(the word proof originally had the meaning of “to test”)–contradictory data–errors in your assumptions–other unknown errors•e.g. “cold fusion”… -yet to be reproduced•“review” process only looks for obvious errorsScientific Writing: Lecture 1#13Characteristics of good scientific writing (1)“April is the cruellest month, breeding Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing Memory and desire, stirring Dull roots with spring rain. Winter kept us warm, covering Earth in forgetful snow, feeding A little life with dried tubers. …”T.S. Eliot “The Waste Land” (1st stanza)Beautiful writing; very concise,but what does it mean?-poetry achieves success by using ambiguity say as much as possible in the smallest number of words.Characteristics of good scientific writing (2)•brief and concise–only includes the information that is relevant to the main argument–easy to reproduce the experimental details•accurate–ambiguity is good for poetry –very bad for scientific papers•at best your argument will not be understood•at worst experimental data cannot reproduced•Three most important things for scientific writing:–Accuracy, Accuracy, Accuracy.There are several different types of archivalscientific publication•letters, rapid communications–short (few pages), rapid review, camera-ready copy •journal article–most common format–varies in length from 4 –30 (printed) pages–often more than one referee•review article–“long” –relative to normal length of articles in journal–by prior arrangement with a journal•“viewpoint set” (e.g. Scripta Materialia)–invited short papers on common themeScientific Writing: Lecture 1#15Examples in field of materials science •letters, rapid communications (RC)–Journal of Materials Letters–Applied Physics Letters–Journal of Microscopy (RC)–Materials and Metallurgical Transactions (RC)•journal articles–Acta materialia–Journal of Materials Processing Technology–Physica [A,B,C,D,E]–(most articles are of this type)•review articles–Progress in Materials Science–Materials Science and Engineering: R: Reports–Acta materialiaScientific Writing: Lecture 1#17Differences not only in length •content–letter may focus more on a new result–review article (by definition) contains more background information, less new experimental data•presentation–organization of the information–formatting of the finished paper For any type of article there should be a main idea •what is the single main idea you want to tell other scientists about?•for you should be able to express this idea in a single sentence•this idea will influence the layout, content, and language of your article•start with defining your idea–make sure you know exactly why you are writing this paperScientific Writing: Lecture 1#19Think of your main idea as a “tag-line”•“tell me in less than 20 words why the paper is interesting”•think of movie (film) advertising–plot (abstract –summary of what happens)–“tag-line” –why should I pay 10$ to go and see this film?example film tag-lines•The Day After Tomorrow –“Whoever said "Tomorrow is another day"... didn't check the weather. ”•Star Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones –“A Jedi Shall Not Know Anger. Nor Hatred. Nor Love.”•Together (和你在一起)–“Some lessons can only be learned by heart. ”•Brazil –“It’s only a state of mind”•Three days of the Condor –“His codename is Condor. In the next 24 hours everybody he trusts will try to kill him”Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#21example scientific paper tag-lines •tensile strength is controlled by second-phase precipitation•tensile strength is a trade-off between solute and second phase strengthening•annealing treatments can be used to obtain an optimum tensile strength–focus on the annealing treatment•the tag line does not provide enough information to explain your argument. It never appears in the article. It provides a hidden backbone to the article You will see this list many times during thiscourse…•define–the problem that you wish to address•choose–the data that you will include to support your idea •organize–the data and arguments to support your idea•write the paper•Three important steps before you start writing!Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#23The basic structure of an archival scientific publication•“A whole is that which has a beginning, middle, and ending”; Aristotle on a written document •this simple pattern is useful for scientific writing •each part has a specific purpose•beginning–why the work was carried out; how you carried out the work •middle–what was the result of your work•end –looks at the overall meaning of the work There is a standard pattern for many journalarticles that follows this format•Introduction •Methods (Experimental)•Results •Discussion •Conclusions –(Acknowledgements/References/Appendices)•Abstract (Summary)–is a completely separate piece of writing that describes the content of the articleBEGINNING MIDDLE ENDformat)Acta Materialia 51 (2003) 4423–4435Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#25 Example of recently published articles (simpleformat)Acta Materialia 51 (2003) 1827–1839Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#27format)Acta Materialia 51 (2003) 4603–4610Acta Materialia 51 (2003) 3037–3051An analysis of the sections for a simple (standard)layout of an article•Introduction •Methods (Experimental Methods)•Results •Discussion •Conclusions•NOTE: always check the required journal style •this layout is not definitive (other layouts are possible)–useful to start writing articles using this layout.Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#29Section: Introduction •One purpose -to prepare readers for the “middle” of the paper (the “Results” of your work)–provides the relevant background to understanding the research•includes results of other closely related research –provides a clear indication as to what problem are you addressing, or what idea you wish to present –provides an idea of what information (sometimes explicitly) will be presented in the article•The Introduction is the most important part of the paper–and the hardest to write well Section: Introduction (cont.)•what the section shouldn’t contain–your results–results are assumed to be other people’s work. If you include them here you risk confusing the reader •**a “weak outline” of the paper–“Section 3 will present the results. In section 4 we will discuss the results then finally we will present some concluding remarks in section 5”–3: Results–4: Discussion–5: Conclusions–redundant information (not concise) –avoid!!Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#31Section: Introduction (cont.)•sometimes an outline can be useful however –“First the methods used for the measurements are explained, and their suitability for use in determining the dislocation density justified. In section 3 a model is developed that relates dislocation density to creep-rate. The experimental results of dislocation density are then used to make predictions of creep-rates in the material. Finally in section 4 some of the limitations of the model are analyzed, and the required accuracy in experimental creep-rate measurements to test the model is discussed •if you use an outline, make sure it is useful!•in general only for longer papers, and those with non-standard layout Section: Experimental (Methods)•also prepares the reader for the middle of the paper•how did you carry out the experiments?•information is put here that would distract the reader in the “Results section”–details of routine processes, standard methods, equipment suppliers•for “technique papers”–standard procedures used –outline of the new techniques you have developed (the details are your results in this case)Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#33Section: Experimental (Methods) (cont.)•The information provided should be detailed –so that another research can repeat the work –times/temperatures/sequence of events–data pre-and post-processing•The information should be specific–what equipment you used–what programs you used•a reader can verify that the techniques/equipment are suitable for the data you are about to presentSection: Results•What you observed–reported in appropriate detail and accuracy to allow somebody to verify your work•Each result is introduced and explained individually–comparison of two results can go in the Discussion section•use of Figures and Tables–Figures show many values, or trends in data –Tables give individual valuesScientific Writing: Lecture 1#35•part of the “end” of your document•how do the results reflect the issues/ideas mentioned in the “Introduction”–the ideas in the two sections must match•what is the significance of the results?•information gained by comparing different results •may also contain any or all of (amongst others) –comparison with previously published research –possible sources of error in your results –implications (usefulness) in other research areas –outstanding questions requiring further researchSection: Discussion (cont.)•looking at all the results taken together•using individual results, or groups of results to develop a general understanding or to support a particular ideaScientific Writing: Lecture 1#37•the “end” of the article –only necessary though when the Discussion is long–check on the journal style…•re-state either the main results, or the main experiments–not strictly a conclusion so make sure this is only a small part of this section•summarize an argument leading to a particular conclusion–the argument should be relevant to the “Introduction”–the data should be presented in the “Results” section The “Abstract” is a separate piece of writing •provides a summary of:–what you did –how you did it –what the main results were –what the main conclusions were•in general does not contain –detailed reasons for carrying out the work•(one sentence at most)•unnecessary experimental information•included in abstracting services –“published” separately to your paperScientific Writing: Lecture 1#39Example layout of a recently submitted paper •(Abstract)•Introduction •Experimental •Results–Macroscopic texture evolution –TEM observations of microstructural evolution •Macroscopic and crystallographic orientation of the dislocation boundaries (GNBs)•Microstructural parameters –FEG-SEM/EBSP observations –Mechanical properties •Discussion –Microstructural evolution during rolling –Comparison between TEM and EBSP investigations –Microstructure-orientation correlation –Microstructure and mechanical properties •ConclusionsThe choice of headings requires some care •Single most important heading is the TITLE –this will be read by many more people than those who read the entire paper –search engines use Keywords/Abstract –humans use the title to decide whether to look at the abstract•should be:–complete, but not overlong –indicate whether your “idea” is a new result, a new technique, a new theory, etc.•identifies what research area is•distinguishes your work from other work in the research areaScientific Writing: Lecture 1#41Some example titles (good and bad)•“Studies on the Electro-deposition of Lead on Copper”–weak title: gives general research topic, but does not distinguish the work from other research in this area•“Effects of Rhodamine-B on the Electrodeposition of Lead on Copper ”–strong title: explains the unique aspect of the research (example titles)•“Effects of Rhodamine-B and Saccharin on the Electric Double Layer During Nickel Electrodeposition on Platinum Studied by AC-Cyclic Voltammetry”–weak title: too much information –what is the main point of the article?•“Use of AC-Cyclic Voltammetry for Study of Organic Agents in the Electrodeposition of Nickel on Platinum”–strong title –now we know the technique is the aspect the author wishes to emphasizeScientific Writing: Lecture 1#43More (real) example titles (good –I hope…)•“EBSP investigation of microstructure and texture evolution during equal channel angular pressing of aluminium”–technique used to study two material properties•“Annealing behavior of aluminium deformed by equal channel angular pressing”–behaviour of a material produced by a particular process•“Subdivision of original grains during cold-rolling of IF-steel.”–“original grains” is the important aspect•“Improved edge preservation near triple junctions during orientation averaging of EBSP data”–“Improved”….•“Microstructural evolution of IF-steel during cold rolling”–multi-technique study; no previous work on this combinationSection headings and sub-headings guide the reader to the information they are interested in.•for you (the author) the section headings provide a back-bone for your idea•for the reader (who may or not believe your idea) they provide quick access to information of interest to them•sections also provide “white space” –to allow you to change subject, or to reflect on the data•section headings should therefore be –informative (what information is contained, what is the main idea of the article)–relevant to the issues mentioned in the “Introduction”–of a consistent style (similar format, logical sequence)Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#45“The Sinking of the Titanic”•Given the same information, the section headings can help to focus the main idea in presenting that information•Movie-tag “The sinking of the ship that was meant to be unsinkable”(1)The R.M.S. Titanic sideswiped an iceberg at 11:40 p.m. on April 14, 1912. Estimated to be able to stay afloat for 2 days under the worst scenario, the ship sank in less than 3 hours [Gannon, 1995]. (BACKGROUND)(2) The iceberg created a 300-foot gash in the Titanic's hull above and below the waterline. (BACKGROUND)(3) Tests on Titanic's steel showed that the steel had high sulfur content, which increases the brittleness of steel by disrupting the grain structure [Hill, 1996]. This increase in brittleness contributed to the severity of the hull's damage. (MATERIAL ERROR)(4) Captain E. J. Smith had not slowed the ship's speed that night, although the ship's wireless operators had received several ice warnings. The ship was moving at more than 22 knots. (HUMAN ERROR)(5) The sea was a "flat calm," a rarity for these waters. Under suchconditions, there was no "tell-tale phosphorescent ripple"against the iceberg [Gardiner and Van der Vat, 1995]. Lookouts in the crow's-nest on the Titanic did not spot the massiveiceberg until only 5 minutes before the collision. That night, the lookouts had misplaced their binoculars. (HUMAN ERROR)(6) Even before the iceberg was spotted, Quartermaster Hitchensat the helm had begun to turn to port. When the alarm sounded, he turned full to port. His turning caused the Titanic tosideswipe the iceberg, rather than hit it head-on. Expertsbelieve that the ship would not have sunk so quickly had it hit the iceberg head-on [Gardiner and Van der Vat, 1995].(HUMAN ERROR)(7) The lower section of the Titanic was divided into sixteen majorwatertight compartments. After the collision, six watertightcompartments began filling with water. Soon, water spilled over the tops. Scientists have concluded that the watertightcompartments contributed to the disaster by keeping the flood waters in the bow of the ship [Gannon, 1995]. If there had been no compartments, the incoming water would have spread out, and the Titanic would have likely remained afloat for another six hours. (DESIGN ERROR)(8) Flares were fired and Titanic's wireless operators sent out anSOS, but the wireless operator of the nearest ship, theCalifornia, had gone to bed at 11:30. Controversy exists onwhether the California had seen the Titanic's signal flares. If so, why had its captain, Stanley Lord, not responded? (HUMAN ERROR)(9)Titanic's steel showed high levels of oxygen, which leads to anincreased ductile-to-brittle transition temperature. For Titanic's steel, that temperature was determined to be 25 to 35 degreesC [Hill, 1996]. The water temperature that night was belowfreezing. (MATERIAL ERROR)(10) The wrought iron rivets that fastened the hull plates to theTitanic's main structure also failed because of brittle fractureduring the collision with the iceberg. Low water temperatures contributed to this failure [Garzke and others, 1994].(MATERIAL ERROR)(11) As it filled with water, the bow submerged, raising the sternout of water. When the stern reached an angle of about 45degrees, the stresses in the ship's midsection (15 tons persquare inch) caused the steel to fail and the bow to rip loose and sink [Gannon, 1995]. Contributing to this failure in themidsection was the design of Titanic's huge spiral staircase.The staircase not only weakened the midsection's structure, but served as a means for water to pass up through the ship.(DESIGN ERROR)(12) The Titanic carried lifeboats for 1,178 people, a number thatexceeded regulations of that time. However, the crew, which had never been drilled on the use of the lifeboats, wasinexperienced at filling and lowering them. The first lifeboats into the water were not even half full. In all, only 705 weresaved by the lifeboats. (HUMAN ERROR)Version 1: General scientific presentation (Tag-line: “A catastrophe caused by a combination oferrors”)(TITLE): “Causes for the Rapid Sinking of the Titanic”1. Introduction (historical context)2. Research Methods (data collected from a variety of sources)3. Results3.1Human Errors Contributing to Collision With Iceberg• 3.1.1 Mistakes by Captain• 3.1.2 The ineffective use of the lifeboats• 3.1.3 Shipping Line Mistakes– 3.2 Design Errors in the Watertight Compartments– 3.3 Rapid Filling of Water Through The Spiral Staircase– 3.4 Material Flaws Contributing to Rapid Sinking• 3.4.1 Hull Steel• 3.4.2 Use of Brittle Wrought Iron• 4. Discussion– 4.1 Effects of Combined Material/Design Errors– 4.2 Human Errors Directly Contributing to Loss of Life• 5. Conclusions and RecommendationsScientific Writing: Lecture 1#51some problems with these (previous) headings •the subsection headings are neither in the same style, nor are they consistent in the level of detail. Both these errors lead to a confusion of the “idea” of the paper (“Causes for the rapid sinking…”)•the title is about the rapid sinking, so why is “loss of life” in the discussion section?. Also the ineffective use of lifeboats is not related to the rapid sinking of the vessel (it should not be in this section).•errors contributing to the collision do not affect the rapid sinking of the Titanic –you don’t need to put all your data/results into a single paper Version 1: General scientific presentation(better layout)(TITLE): “Causes for the Rapid Sinking of the Titanic”1. Introduction (historical context)2. Research Methods (data collected from a variety of sources)3. Results 3.1Design Errors Contributing to Rapid Sinking3.1.1Design of Watertight Compartments3.1.2Design of Spiral Staircase 3.2Material Flaws Contributing to Rapid Sinking3.2.1Hull Steel3.2.2Hull Rivets4. Discussion 4.1 Effects of Combined Material/Design Errors5. Conclusions and Recommendations Appendix: Human Errors Directly Contributing to Loss of LifeScientific Writing: Lecture 1#53one last error to fix on the previous slide •how can you have only one sub-section?–“like cutting a cake into one piece” (Alley M.,“The Craft of Scientific Writing”, Springer-Verlag, New York, 1996)•choices are either–add another subsection–remove the sub-heading Version 1: General scientific presentation(better layout)(TITLE): “Causes for the Rapid Sinking of the Titanic”1. Introduction (historical context)2. Research Methods (data collected from a variety of sources)3. Results 3.1Design Errors Contributing to Rapid Sinking3.1.1Design of Watertight Compartments3.1.2Design of Spiral Staircase 3.2Material Flaws Contributing to Rapid Sinking3.2.1Hull Steel3.2.2Hull Rivets4. Discussion 4.1 Effects of Combined Material/Design Errors 4.2. Effects of Combined Design/Human Errors5. Conclusions and Recommendations Appendix: Human Errors Directly Contributing to Loss of LifeScientific Writing: Lecture 1#55We could also write a paper focussing on the metallurgical aspects of the failure•Tag-line “Inappropriate materials selection to major cause for the rapid sinking of the Titanic”•Section headings will now change to reflect the new focus of the paper: one possible metallurgy-focussed outline (TITLE): “Metallurgical Causes for the Rapid Sinking of the Titanic”1. Introduction (low temperature mechanical strength; available clean steel technology)2. Methods (literature study; materials testing)3. Results 3.1 Hull Steel3.1.1 Metal Composition3.1.2 Low Temperature Tensile Strength 3.2 Hull Rivets3.2.1 Metal Composition3.2.2 Low Temperature Tensile Strength4. Discussion4.1 Materials Selection Errors 4.2 Other Errors Contributing to the Rapid Sinking 4.2.1 Human Errors 4.2.2 Design Errors5. Conclusions and RecommendationsScientific Writing: Lecture 1#57another possible metallurgy-focussed outline (“Results” are presented differently)(TITLE): “Metallurgical Causes for the Rapid Sinking of the Titanic”1. Introduction (low temperature mechanical strength; available clean steel technology)2. Methods (literature study; materials testing) 3. Results 3.1 Metal Composition3.1.1 Hull Steel3.1.2 Hull Rivets 3.2 Low Temperature Tensile Strength3.2.1 Hull Steel3.2.1 Hull Rivets4. Discussion4.1 Materials Selection Errors 4.2 Other Errors Contributing to the Rapid Sinking 4.2.1 Human Errors 4.2.2 Design Errors5. Conclusions and Recommendations Example of recently published articles (simpleformat)Acta Materialia 51 (2003) 4423–4435Scientific Writing: Lecture 1#59Example of recently published articles (simple format)Acta Materialia 51 (2003) 1827–1839Section Headings (summary)•even using a “standard layout”, the sub-section headings still should be chosen carefully•choose the headings to reflect your “main idea” (your “tag-line”•maintain the same style so that readers can follow the structure of the paper•avoid isolated headings (the “one-cut cake”)•choose the headings before you write the text!–to avoid the isolated heading problem sometime requires a large change to the structure of the paperScientific Writing: Lecture 1#61I told you this list would appear many times during this course…•define –the problem that you wish to address•choose –the data that you will include to support your idea•organize–the data and arguments to support your idea •write the paper•Once you have a good set of headings, structure of the paper is taken care of –we will come back to this topic later when we discuss “Steps in writing a paper”.for next class…•(1) write an outline for a version to send to “International Journal of Ship Design and Maritime Engineering”–TITLE:“Ship Design Errors Leading Directly to the Rapid Sinking of the Titanic”•(2) look at the organization (headings) of some papers in your research area. Are they well organized??Scientific Writing and Presentation in English Lecture 2a: Verbs for Scientific Writing (I)A. GodfreyTsinghua University, Spring 2008•lights, music, ACTION。
如何撰写科普文章
Write after you complete the other sections 完成其他部分后再开始编写 Falls into place by lifting and paraphrasing a few sentences from each section 每部分摘取几句内容进行释义,确保文章有条不 紊 Usually different from conference abstract 通常不同于会议摘要
Order of Writing 文章内容编排
7. References 参考文献
Do along the way, but don’t spend too much time 边撰写正文边完成,但无需花费太多时间 Leave place holders and find reference later 留注补位数字供以后查找参考文献 Don’t let this be an excuse to put off writing 不要让参考文献成为推迟写作的借口
How to Write a Scientific Paper 如何撰写科普文章
• Ethical obligation to subjects 对于研究对象的道义责任
More reasons to publish… 更多发表原因…
• Ethical obligation to society 对于社会的道义责任
• Express in words the important findings of the Tables and Figure 用文字阐述表格和图解包含的重要研究发现
Subject description: recruitment, eligibility, univariate, main outcome 研究对象说明:招募、资格、单变量、主要研究结果 Bivariate: associations with main outcome 双变量:与主要研究结果的联系 Multivariate: strengthen hypothesis testing 多变量:强化假设检验 Sub-analyses, secondary aims 子目分析、次要目标
Writing_Scientific_Papers科技论文写作技巧
Writing Scientific PapersIn science, one of the most basic goals is the development and application of new knowledge. Writing reports and papers is the easiest and most effective way to share the information with the scientific community. However, scientific papers come under great scrutiny as they are reviewed, tested, and retested time and time again. These published papers act as persuasion vessels in an attempt to validate the researcher’s data and interpretations. If the paper withstands the critiquing, in time the results may become accepted as scientific fact.Learning to write a good scientific paper or lab report is a skill requiring much practice. One must understand the experiment, concepts and why it is being performed, be able to collect and record data, and interpret the results and develop logical conclusions based on the findings. Last but not least it is important to be able to write clearly and concisely to convey ideas and persuade an audience. All scientific papers follow the same general structure:1. Title2. Introductiona. Hypothesisb. Predicted Results3. Materials and Methods4. Observed Results5. Discussiona. Conclusionsb. Implications6. Literature CitedTitleKeep titles under 10 words long. The title should be to-the-point, but descriptive, letting the reader know exactly what the paper is about.IntroductionThe introduction sets the stage for the rest of the paper. This is where the hypothesis and purpose for the experiment is presented. It is important to include and cite any form of background information relevant to understanding the experiment. Researchers also often include their own predictions in this section. A strong introduction answers (but is not limited to) several important questions:1. Why was this study performed?- Usually this stems from a previous experiment or some observation of nature.2. What is the hypothesis?- A hypothesis is a general, testable statement about a phenomenon or behavior.- Ex. Question: Why are mature chiles red?Hypothesis: Mature chiles are red to attract birds.3. What information already exists on this topic?- Ex. The hypothesis was developed out of the knowledge that manyother plants produce bright red colored fruits with seeds that birds areattracted to and eat, thus allowing for dispersal of the seeds.4. What is the experimental design?- Ex. Birds were allowed to select between red and green mature chiles.5. What are the predicted results?- A prediction is what one expects to see when the experiment is performed if thehypothesis is correct.- Ex. It was predicted that the birds would select the red chiles over thegreen chiles.Materials and MethodsIn this section, all materials used and methods followed throughout the experiment are reported. This allows the reader to visualize the set up of the experiment and duplicate the experiment, should they wish. However, it is easy to overpower the reader with too much detail. Keep in mind what information is important to the results obtained and for reproducing the experiment. This includes details such as concentrations, temperatures, measurements, units, timing, calculations, etc. Irrelevant details like “A wax pencil was used to label the test tube,” can be left out!! When following a procedure from a lab manual or published paper, simply describe how you conducted your experiments (there should be enough detail such that the reader could easily duplicate your experiments – no lists!). However, it is still necessary to describe, in detail, any changes to the procedure or special equipment used.Materials and Methods usually answer the following questions:1. What materials were used?2. How were they used?3. When and where was the experiment performed and data collected?- Most important in field studiesResults“A picture is worth a thousand words.” The results section of a scientific paper is for reporting the data collected without discussing any conclusions. Data should be organized into tables, figures, graphs, photos, etc (Do not put the same info in both a table and a graph). Emphasize key points or unusual trends with an objectively written summary. In many cases, the actual figures and graphs are included at the end of the paper, after the Literature Cited section. Each figure or graph has its own separate page and is introduced in the results summary. All figures and graphs must be properly labeled. This includes titles, legends (if necessary), axis and column labels, units and numbered figure headings. Figure headings appear at the top of tables and the bottom of figures, graphs and photos.Ex.When referring to a graph or figure in the text, refer to the figure number.Ex. Figure 1 shows a normal distribution of the original population. However after selection occurred, the remaining population appeared to begin to separate into2 potentially different populations based on color.OrEx. The original population shows a normal distribution before selection occurred (Figure 1).Figures should be able to stand alone, allowing the reader to understand your results without having to dig through your paper.DiscussionDiscussion sections are two fold: 1) conclusions and 2) implications. The conclusion portion restates the primary goal of the research, the hypothesis and whether the data and results collected support or reject that hypothesis. This is the primary argument for a scientific paper to convince readers of the experiment’s validity. Remember scientists never claim that a hypothesis is true, correct or proven; it is only supported or rejected. Make sure to interpret the data collected and try and relate the findings to existing scientific knowledge. The second part of the discussion section helps to take the findings of the experiment to the next level. Speculation and suggestions for improvement or further studies are appropriate here. This is also the only spot in the paper where personal opinion is acceptable. A strong discussion answers (but is not limited to) several important questions:1. Did the experiment support or reject the hypothesis? Why? How?If rejected, was there some sort of error or bias that affected the outcome?2. What analyzed evidence produced that conclusion?3. What is the significance of those conclusions?How does this experiment apply to the “bigger picture?”4. What improvements could be made in the future?5. What other experiments could be developed from these results?6. What is your opinion about the outcome of the experiment and what are yourthoughts about the implications of the experiment?Literature CitedThis section is two fold: 1) reference cites within the paper and 2) a list at the end of the paper of all reference materials cited in the paper.Cites within the paperAny information that was gathered from a secondary source (a published article, a university lecture class, the internet, etc.), MUST be cited both in the paper and at the end. When a reference is cited in the paper it is appropriate to list the primary author’s last name and the publication year in parenthesis after the SUMMARIZED referenced information. Scientific writing does not favor quoted information. The researcher must BOTH restate the referenced material in their OWN words and cite the reference.Ex. The snow leopard is a difficult animal to study because of its camouflage coloring andloner mentality. In an attempt to track, photograph, and research these elusive phantoms of theanimal kingdom, a team of wildlife biologists traveled to the Himalayas in Tibet, one of the few remaining habitats of the snow leopard (Jackson and Hillard, 1986).**If the reference only has one author: (Wexler, 1994)**If the reference has two authors: (Jackson and Hillard, 1986)**If the reference has multiple authors: (Jongmans et al., 1997)Cites at the end of the paperIn the end list, all information is given about the referenced material so that a reader can refer back to the secondary sources if they are interested in learning more about that topic. Keep in mind that every journal requires a different format. A good format that includes all the necessary information is shown in the following examples:Articles:One Author (author format can be used for book, chapter or website as well)Wexler, M. 1994. The art of growing giants. National Wildlife. Vol 32, No. 6: 20-26.Two Authors (author format can be used for book, chapter or website as well)Jackson, R. and Hillard, D. 1986. Tracking the elusive snow leopard. National Geographic. Vol 169, No. 6: 793-809.Multiple Authors (author format can be used for book, chapter or website as well)Jongmans, A.G., van Breemen, N., Lundstrom, U., van Hees, P.A.W., Finlay, R.D., Srinivasan, M., Unestam, T., Giesler, R., Melkerud, P-A., and Olsson, M. 1997. Rock-eating fungi.Nature. Vol 389, No. 6652: 682.Books:Bird, W.Z. 1990. Ecological aspects of fox reproduction. Berlin: Guttenberg Press.Book Chapters:Campbell, N.A and Reece, J.B. 2002. The darwinian revolution. In Biology 6th Ed, ed. B. Wilbur, pp.432-444. San Francisco: Benjamin Cummings.Websites:Council-Garcia, C.L. 2003. Biology 122 Laboratory Syllabus, Room 109. Retrieved June 12, 2003 from </~ccouncil/>.**If you have found a reference on the web that is a journal article, newspaper article, book, etc., this CAN NOT be used as a website cite, because a published hardcopy exists. You must find all the information about the actual, hardcopy reference and then cite it as a book or journal article.** General Style Comments1. All scientific names (genus and species) must be italicized. (Underlining indicates italics in atyped paper.)2. When taking and recording measurements, make sure to use the metric system and do not forgetto include the units.3. Be sure to divide paragraphs correctly and to use beginning and ending sentences that relate tothe purpose of that paragraph. A paper should never be one long paragraph.4. Every sentence must have a subject and a verb. SO PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD,PROOFREAD!!5. Scientific writing is often written in third person; avoid using the pronouns, I and we.6. Avoid slang, the use of contractions, and quotations, but do try to incorporate vocabulary relevantto the subject.7. Be wary of switching verb tense in a paper from present to past. Try to keep the entire paper inthe past tense; after all you already conducted the experiment.8. Make sure to label the sections correctly (Introduction, Materials and Methods, Results,Discussion, Literature Cited)9. PROOFREAD your paper multiple times – it helps to have a friend proofread it as well.10. Remember, this is a FORMAL paper. DO NOT include comments like “I did not like…,I learned a lot…,” etc. They are inappropriate and irrelevant.。
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EditorialWriting a Scientific Paper:I.Titles and AbstractsI graduated from the University of Cambridge in 1960with a B.A.in physics.At that time a requirement of the examination process was a three hour exam in which one was required to write an English essay on a subject chosen from a long list of topics provided.It was also a requirement of admission to the university that one had passed an exam-ination in Greek or Latin.I studied Latin for eight years.After graduation I went to work at A.E.R.E.Harwell,a government laboratory where there were strict limits on what one could publish.Each paper had to be examined,and approved,by my group leader,my department head and a declassification office before it could be submitted to a scientific journal.With my educational background and these additional checks,the writing of scientific papers was always a matter for extreme care.This does not mean that I do not sometimes read my early papers with embar-rassment.There were certainly errors and I cannot claim perfection,but I despair at the quality of many manuscripts I receive nowadays.Good science deserves good presenta-tion,not the sloppy accounts I read too often.Setting aside the issue of language problems,particu-larly for our Asian contributors,I feel I should give some pointers and advice for writing scientific papers.I intend writing a few Editorials on this subject and hope my expe-rience will be useful to others?‘‘Let’s start at the very beginning –a very good place to start’’(Sound of Music):the title and the abstract.Although these items are the first in the paper,they have to be written last.It is impossible to abstract something that has not been written!More than half the papers I re-ceive are returned to the authors for amendments to these items.I have the impression that they are usually added as something necessary to complete the submission,and little or no thought is given to them.When I started my research career there were far fewer journals and they were all available only in printed form.We used to eagerly await the arrival of the latest edition of,for example,J.Nuclear Materials,and a weekly news-letter informed us of the latest periodicals available in the Harwell library.At that time one held in one’s hands the complete paper:title,abstract,text and references.The title and abstract might later appear in Chemical Abstracts,etc.but they were originally never seen in isolation.The situation today is quite different.The title of a paper accepted for CARBON will appear on the journal website two or three weeks after acceptance and,for a fee,the ori-ginal submission can be downloaded.A month later,after the manuscript has been typeset and proofed,one is able to download and read the abstract without charge before deciding whether to pay to download the complete manu-script.The publishers tell us that a vast majority of papers today are accessed via the journal website.The number of printed copies of the journal,which used to be around 1500,has now dropped to less that 500.I know that many readers have full access to the journal website through institutional subscriptions,but there are many people who pay to download a manuscript,and because of this it is essential that both the title and the abstract give an honest indication of what the paper contains.Let me give an example.I recently received a paper whose title indicated that it concerned the preparation of carbon nanoparticles as a filler for polymers.But this was not true!The authors had only examined one polymer.An honest title would have indicated that the paper was about the preparation of carbon nanoparticles as a filler for polyethylene,or whatever polymer had been examined.Always ask yourself whether the title of your manuscript,seen in isolation ,gives a full and honest indication of the experimental work reported in the paper.Another recent submission had a title that told me that a material was synthesised ‘‘in a gas pressure atmosphere’’.I had to read well into the experimental part of the paper be-fore I learned that the atmosphere was argon!There was no indication of this in either the title or the abstract.What the author should have said was ‘‘in high pressure argon’’.Another problem with titles is the way authors think the use of a colon is ‘‘cute’’.A paper entitled ‘‘The synthesis of carbon nanotubes using a xxxx catalyst:the effect of the catalyst preparation method’’can easily be made more straightforward by writing ‘‘The effect of the catalyst prep-aration method on the synthesis of carbon nanotubes using a xxxx catalyst’’.The colon is unnecessary [I call such titles0008-6223/$-see front matter Ó2007Published by Elsevier Ltd.doi:10.1016/j.carbon.2007.07.009/locate/carbonCarbon 45(2007)2143–2144‘‘colonic’’,a pun that will perhaps be understood only by native English speakers].I would willingly accept the title if it were‘‘The synthesis of carbon nanotubes using a xxxx catalyst:I.The effect of the catalyst preparation method’’. In other words the authors were writing a series of manu-scripts on the use of xxxx catalyst with part II being,per-haps,‘‘The synthesis of carbon nanotubes using a xxxx catalyst:II.The influence of reaction temperature’’.The colon should be reserved for a series of multi-part papers. This does not mean that I approve of this practice.Too many multi-part papers have been divided simply as a means to improve the paper count on the author’s CV, and not to improve understanding.The title of this Edito-rial is an illustration of the correct use of the colon.As already mentioned,while the title and the abstract comefirst,they should be written last.One cannot abstract a paper that has not yet been written!The abstract is most important because it is able to give a fuller account than the title of the manuscript’s content,and it is available from the website without paying a fee.It should be concise (one paragraph)and precise,indicating to the potential reader two things:(a)what was done,and(b)important re-sults obtained.That’s all!It is not the place for history,or discussion of results.Many abstracts received can easily have theirfirst few sentences removed because they give the history,something that should be reserved for the Introduction section of the manuscript.The same can often be said of thefinal sentence or two.A comment such as ‘‘The material may be useful in capacitors’’is pure specula-tion and does not belong in an abstract.Of course,if the authors have done experiments to show its usefulness in this application,it should be mentioned.Phrases such as ‘‘we think the effect is caused by...’’do not belong in an abstract.Many abstracts I receive start like this‘‘In this paper we report a new method for the production of carbon foams from...’’.Immediately there are three mistakes:(a)‘‘In this paper...’’,and I thought is was a different paper you were discussing!(b)‘‘...we report...’’–surely it could not be an-other person reporting for you!(c)‘‘...a new method...’’, but scientific journals do not report old methods.The ab-stract should start:‘‘Carbon foams were produced from...’’.This is shorter and gets straight to the point.I have been told that some journals ban the use of‘‘new’’,‘‘novel’’etc.Everything we publish should be new.There is no need to say so.Another common start to an abstract is something like ‘‘The aim of this work was to...’’.Again,this is not neces-sary.Perhaps your aim was to achieve cold fusion!The reader wants to know simply what you did and what you found.Many abstracts contain words that can be deleted with no loss of information.‘‘Detailed’’and‘‘careful’’are com-mon examples.We expect scientists to do detailed and careful work:there should be no need to say so.‘‘A de-tailed examination of the Raman spectra shows that...’’can be changed to‘‘The Raman spectra show that...’’without any loss of information.I have just read an ab-stract that tells me that a certain composite material ‘‘was successfully fabricated’’.May I assume that if the fab-rication were unsuccessful,the process would not have been reported?The word‘‘successfully’’can be deleted. Words and phrases such as‘‘also’’,‘‘moreover’’,‘‘further-more’’and‘‘in addition’’can also usually be deleted with-out any loss or change of meaning.Another problem with many abstracts is their vague-ness.We may be told that‘‘...the activation energy was determined’’,but to be told that‘‘...the activation energy was determined to be270kcal/mol’’is far more informa-tive and precise.Very occasionally onefinds a statement such as‘‘...the activation energy was determined to be 270kcal/mol’’in the abstract,but there is no mention of the value in the text!The abstract should be a concise sum-mary of the text,and should not contain any information that is not in the text.Some abstracts,not many,cite references.This should not be necessary.The author must bear in mind that the reader of the abstract does not have access to the list of ref-erences unless the complete paper is downloaded.If it is necessary to cite a reference in an abstract,it must be given in full and not be cited as a number referring to the list of references.Finally,always remember that the abstract must be able to stand alone.The reader must be able to understand it without reference to the whole paper.For this reason I al-ways read the title and abstract of each submission and make comments on them before I look at the manuscript.I recently asked an author the question,‘‘What does this mean?’’about a statement in his abstract.He had used a word that does not exist in any dictionary that I have and I could not even guess what it meant with certainly. How would non-native English speakers understand it? The paper was resubmitted a few days later with no change to the sentence.Again I asked:‘‘What does this mean?’’The author replied,a little angry I think,that if I only read the full paper I would discover what it meant,to which I replied that the point of my comment was that it should not be necessary to read the whole paper to discover what was meant in the abstract.This vital point is not under-stood many authors.Titles and abstracts are much more important nowadays than they were10years ago.The Editor pleads with you to make sure they are accurate and can be understood in iso-lation.My maxim to keep them‘‘concise and precise’’ap-plies more today than ever before.Editor-in-ChiefPeter A.ThrowerAvailable online25July20072144Editorial/Carbon45(2007)2143–2144EditorialWriting a scientific paper:II.Introduction and referencesIn myfirst Editorial in this series,Titles and Abstracts[Carbon 2007;45(11):2143–4],I said:‘‘Although these items are thefirst in the paper,they have to be written last.It is impossible to abstract something that has not been written!(However)they are usually added as something necessary to complete the submission,and little or no thought is given to them.’’Now we come to the Introduction that is necessarily at the begin-ning of the main text but should,I believe,not be written be-fore the other sections.The reason why I am including the References here is because they are inextricably linked to the Introduction,as we shall see.I am aware that many people,including some of my valu-able and highly respected reviewers,will not agree with my thoughts on the Introduction to a paper,and I guess there are essentially two opinions that must be respected.One sees this section as giving a complete introduction to the subject and to the materials and techniques used in the manuscript, and the other as an introduction to the manuscript itself.The first can be very long while the second,much shorter.Ifind myself in the latter category.What introductory background does the reader need in order to understand the manuscript and place it in context?Papers on the current‘‘hot topic’’of carbon nanotubes (CNTs)are an excellent example.I randomly(honestly!)se-lected a paper from a past issue of CARBON from the shelf in my office.It concerned CNT growth using CVD,and thefirst paragraph reads as given below.Any comments I make are not aimed at the authors of this one paper.There are hun-dreds of papers for which the same comments apply.‘‘CNTs are a recently discovered form of carbon with a graphitic lattice and a long,tubular structure[1].CNTs have been the subject of much interest in recent years,due to their attractive mechanical properties( 1000GPa Young’s modulus)[2–4],tuneable electronic behavior(conducting or semi-conducting depending on tube chiral-ity)[5]and unique dimensions( 1–100nm diameter,up to several cm length)[6–8].As a result of these properties,nanotubes have po-tential applications in manyfields,including composite reinforce-ment[9,10],transistors and logic circuits[11,12]field emission sources[13],and hydrogen storage[14,15].CNTs can be grown bya variety of means,the most common of which are:arc discharge[16],laser ablation[17],and chemical vapor deposition(CVD) [18,19].’’Now you can perhaps see why I have linked References with the Introduction.We already have19references,more than50%of the total number in the manuscript.These occu-py almost a single printed column in the journal,and15of them have nothing to do with the thrust of the paper,viz. CNT growth.Is any prospective reader of this paper in CAR-BON going to be unaware of the‘‘discovery’’of CNTs by Iijima [read the Guest Editorial‘‘Who should be given the credit for the discovery of carbon nanotubes?’’Carbon2006;44(9):1621–3]or of their basic structure and properties?If we may as-sume these facts to be known by any person likely to read the ms,the Introduction could well begin:‘‘The three most com-mon methods for carbon nanotube(CNT)growth are:arc discharge [1],laser ablation[2],and chemical vapor deposition(CVD)[3,4].’’Recently I received a manuscript on the production of acti-vated carbon from various agricultural waste materials.The first part of the introduction was simply a catalogue of all (?)agricultural precursors that have been investigated for activated carbon production.Any potential reader of the pa-per would be aware of the vast number of organic precursors that have been examined for this purpose.There is no need to list them all each time a paper on the subject is written.The paper has been rejected for other reasons,but it serves as an illustration of the point being made here.With such an Intro-duction one could easily have50–100references before one gets started!Another manuscript reported the production of aflexible carbon‘‘nanobelt’’which is,I assume,the same as a nanorib-bon.In spite of the fact that the product is not a nanotube,the authors started their Introduction with the famous Iijima pa-per and proceeded to list all possible production methods and potential applications for carbon nanotubes before consider-ing other nanostructures that have been reported.Of course at this point the paper already had a long list of references, none of which was really relevant to the subject of the manuscript.The Introduction should consist of a few paragraphs(per-haps no more than two)that define the context for the cur-rent work reported.How does this paper relate to what has been done previously?In the process it should point readers to publications to which they may need to refer in order to understand the motives for the current research.That’s all!The depth of background history provided by some Intro-ductions makes me wonder(cynically)why they don’t start with the discovery of the electron,and then discuss chemical bonding,Bragg’s work on crystal structures,etc.We would allC A R B O N46(2008)183–184a v a i l ab l e a t w w w.sc i e n c ed i re c t.c omj o u r n a l h o m e p a g e:w w w.e l s e v i e r.c o m/l o c a te/c a r b o nfind such an approach absurd,but many Introductions are nearly as bad.T wo days after writing the previous paragraph I received a manuscript that was almost a perfect example.The paper be-gan by informing us in the Introduction that(I am not quoting exactly):‘‘Carbon is the most versatile element on the earth. T wo forms,diamond and graphite,were discovered in the 18th century.There then followed200years with no major ad-vances until the discovery of fullerenes in1985,for which No-bel prizes were awarded.Etc.’’Not only is this not a suitable introduction for a research paper,it is also wrong.Advances such as mesophase,carbonfibers andfilaments are over-looked.Or perhaps the authors did not consider them to be major?This Introduction might(if corrected)be appropriate for a popular science article in a newspaper but certainly not for CARBON.References are,by definition,items to which a reader may need to refer in order to understand what the authors are doing,and the context in which their research should be placed.Surely there is no need to list standard texts and ref-erence books in References,and if the authors feel they are really necessary there should be some indication of where in the book the referenced information can be found.Many times I ask authors if they expect their readers to read the complete book in order tofind the information needed?Letters-to-the-Editor are necessarily short and should con-tain no more than10–12references.I sometimes see refer-ences that give the publication details and then say‘‘and references therein’’.Such statements are unnecessary.Intelli-gent readers should(one hopes)know that further references can,if necessary,be found in the papers that are cited.For a Letter-to-the Editor cite no more than a dozen of the most important references.I have seen Letters submitted where the space occupied by references is more than that occupied by the main text,something we sometimes refer to as‘‘the tail wagging the dog’’!Perhaps I could ask those who read this editorial a rhe-torical question.When did you last fully read the Introduc-tion to a scientific paper in which you were interested?I suspect the answer would be‘‘months ago’’for most of you.In my experience peoplefirst read the Abstract,then the Conclusions,and if there is something of real interest they‘‘dig into’’the Results and Discussion sections.Many journals print what are considered the less important sec-tions of a paper,and the References,in a smaller font.Per-haps it is the Introduction that most often deserves this treatment?Peter A.ThrowerEditor-in-chief,CARBON0008-6223/$-see front matterÓ2008Published by Elsevier Ltd.doi:10.1016/j.carbon.2008.01.010Available online18January2008184C A R B O N46(2008)183–184EditorialWriting a scientific paper:III.ExperimentalI am writing this Editorial on a Sunday morning at an ambient temperature of around22°C while listening to the radio(Bang&Olufsen,Model Beolit1000)tuned to Classic FM at a frequency of101.5MHz.My computer(Apple Macin-tosh iMac with Intel2GHz Core Duo processor,OSX5.2)has had the‘‘mouse’’replaced by a trackball(Kensington Expert Mouse,Model K64325)and uses a word processing program (WordÒ2004from the Microsoft Office for Macintosh2004 suite).I am sure you are immediately interested!Curious per-haps as to why I am giving you these facts.If you were interested in radios you would perhaps know that Bang&Olufsen(B&O)is a very expensive and innovative brand of electronic equipment,based in Denmark,and that this model is a portable radio that is over40years old.It is not digital but it still produces clear reproduction of all ana-logue radio broadcasts on MW,LW and SW.Indeed I bought it a few years before moving to the USA in1969so that I could listen to the BBC wherever I was in the world.The radio still works perfectly and,believe it or not,it gives me the same programs as any other analogue radio purchased today, regardless of manufacturer,with perhaps even better clarity of reproduction.As a scientist you will know that the Apple Macintosh range of computers has been innovative in thefield of com-puter design and user interface.You will also know that the word processing program WordÒis the most used program of its type in the scientific community.The great majority of electronic submissions to CARBON are produced using this program.Why do I tell you this?Simply because it is part of the ac-cepted format for writing a scientific paper.But is it impor-tant?NO!The document is the same regardless of computer and operating system used.You cannot tell from reading this Edi-torial anything about the system I am using,and that is how it should be.The equipment manufacturer and model is irrelevant.I recently received a manuscript which spent two pages telling me about the makes and models of all equipments used.T wo different SEMs,two different TEMs,one of which was equipped with EDS and EELS instrumentation,a Raman spectrometer and a TPD apparatus,etc.The length was even longer because each instrument was given a separate sub-section,wasting a lot of space.Was all this information nec-essary?If the reader wishes to check the authors’results does he need to assemble the same suite of apparatus?Surely not! While I well recognise that different instruments can have different resolutions etc.,the make and model are usually irrelevant.If TEM A gives different pictures from TEM B, how do I know which to believe?And if this is the case,surely all results are suspect.In giving such information we are per-haps simply often showing off how rich our laboratories are, or are we simply providing free advertising for the instrument manufacturers?Some authors will have noticed that in the last year or so I have sometimes deleted such information from manuscripts when I consider it to be irrelevant,and I thought it appropri-ate that I explain why,and at the same time point out that we should keep our papers short and to the point(concise and precise).Give essential information,and don’t pad!You may have noticed that in the second paragraph I re-ferred to‘‘Bang and Olufsen(B&O)’’.Why did I include the information in parentheses?Was it necessary?Of course the answer is‘‘no’’.I never used it again in the Editorial(until now that is).The purpose of placing abbreviations in paren-theses is to define them for future use.If you are not going to use them,there is no need to define them!On the contrary, is there really any need nowadays to define TEM and SEM? How many of you did not know what I was talking about when I used these abbreviations earlier?Almost certainly, none of you.But still almost every author who uses results from these instruments insists on making the definitions, sometimes several times.The point I am trying to make is that we often include irrelevant information in our manuscripts and in so doing we lengthen them unnecessarily.Writing a scientific paper is a serious matter and needs to be approached carefully.Bear in mind that the care taken to write your paper may be seen as an indication of the care taken to do your experiments. Eliminate everything that is unnecessary,and at the same time make sure you include all that is necessary.This morning’s mail included a review of a manuscript in which the authors described a pyrolysis process for carbonfi-bers.The make and model of the furnace was given but there was no mention of the size.From the time in the furnace and the speed at which thefiber passed through it the reviewer was able to calculate the furnace length as2.5Km!Obviously some vital information was missing!What then is the purpose of the Experimental section?It is certainly important,and a member of our Editorial AdvisoryC A R B O N46(2008)1113–1114a v a i l ab l e a t w w w.sc i e n c ed i re c t.c o mj o u r n a l h o m e p a g e:w w w.e l s e v i e r.c o m/l o c a te/c a r b o nBoard wrote a recent letter to ask why the section was in smaller print because he thought it an important component of the manuscript and found it difficult to read.(Such is no longer the case with the new manuscript format.) The Experimental section has two purposes:a.To allow readers to repeat the experiments if they wish.This might involve(i)checking dubious results,and/or (ii)preparing identical materials for further investiga-tion,andb.To convince readers that the work has been done sys-tematically and thoroughly using appropriate equipment.Because of this the section should contain ALL informa-tion needed for another person to repeat the experiment.This means details of sample preparation,sources of materials, purity,particle size,times and temperatures and synthesis of intermediates.It should also include details of important experimental parameters used in analytical and measure-ment techniques,such as voltages,wavelengths and strain rates.In some respects the Experimental section is analogous to a recipe in a cookery book.It lists ingredients and procedures but does not specify the use of particular equipment.What then should we do with instrumental details?The answer surely lies in the technology that is now available to us.Looking back over the last25years as Editor-in-Chief of CARBON Journal one sees two major changes.One is the elec-tronic submission process and the other is the availability of Supplementary Material on the website.Thefirst of these be-gan as an option but is now a requirement.The second is an option that,in my opinion,should be made a requirement. One of its components should be a list of the equipment used. This would free space in the journal and would in no way de-value the manuscript.Afinal point concerns the way people describe instru-ments,especially electron microscopes,both scanning and transmission.Many of you will know that I started research on graphite nearly50years ago by studying neutron radiation damage in natural single crystals of Ticonderoga graphite using a transmission electron microscope.In those days the ‘‘workhorse’’of electron microscopes was the Siemens Elmi-skop I.The best resolution was around10A˚(1nm).To us it was a‘‘high resolution’’instrument,certainly much higher that some of the early instruments where5nm was as good as one could get.Nowadays I am often told that both a TEM and a HRTEM(high resolution)were used,(or an SEM and a FESEM)and this morning I came across a paper in press for another journal that promises‘‘super resolution’’.Is‘‘super’’better than‘‘high’’?The resolution is what is seen on the micrograph,and that depends on many factors,especially the magnification at which the micrograph was taken.A pic-ture taken at5000·on a HRTEM cannot show high resolution. Surely it is enough to say that‘‘the samples were examined by transmission and scanning electron microscopy’’and to give instrument details in the Supplementary Material?I have of-ten asked the question‘‘at what point does an instrument be-come high resolution?’’and have never received a clear answer.One person said that it was high resolution when it was capable of lattice resolution,but that only raises the question:‘‘which lattice?’’I wonder whether anybody makes a low resolution transmission electron microscope,and why is there no high resolution scanning electron microscope? Scientists can be very inconsistent!I am convinced that the Experimental section of almost all papers could be significantly shortened.It should concentrate on providing the information that the reader really needs to have in order to be satisfied on the above two points,and pro-vide a list of equipment used in the Supplementary Material section.Surely that is enough!Editor-in-ChiefPeter A.ThrowerE-mail address:p.thrower@0008-6223/$-see front matterÓ2008Elsevier Ltd.All rights reserved.doi:10.1016/j.carbon.2008.04.001Available online6April20081114C A R B O N46(2008)1113–1114EditorialWriting a scientific paper:IV.Results and discussionI have waited several months before writing this episode of my‘‘Writing a Scientific Paper’’series of Editorials.The reason is simple:each paper requires a different approach and each paper can have its own problems.Rather than write exten-sively about the subject(one could write a book)I have decided to illustrate this article using some examples,some of which are personal.The Results and Discussion section of a scientific paper is the most important.Research is about results,and it is these that the reader has come to the paper to discover.It is on these results that opinions are formed and future research planned.I have previously indicated that the Introduction should be short,and much of the Experimental Details sec-tion relegated to‘‘Supplementary Material’’but the results, and the deductions the authors make from them,are paramount.Thefirst thing one must decide is whether results and dis-cussion should be separate or combined.There can be no fixed rule,however,my experience is that it is better to sepa-rate them if it is possible to do so.In some cases it is neces-sary to discuss one set of results in order to logically proceed to one’s next experiment or investigation,and in such a case the two are intertwined and separation is difficult. Here are some suggestions on how to write this part of your paper.Present data clearly.Thefirst thing one must do is to give a clear presentation of the results.If there are numerical data they should be presented in a sensible manner,either in table or graph form.There should be no need to do both,and one must always remember that it is now possible to present a graph,which is more immediately appreciated,in the paper and include the numerical data in a table in the Supplemen-tary Material section.The writer should always bear in mind that while numerical data should be absolute,the discussion may be subjective.Another reader may have a different inter-pretation of the results.Ensure results are sensible.One statement that I have had to make on several occasions is that if scientific data are acquired correctly the results should be sensible.I recently received a paper claiming an improved product yield of7474.3%more than previously reported results.My initial(cynical)reaction was that surely the calculator did not stop atfive significantfigures–most go to nine or more!I questioned thefigure,and the author returned the paper, correcting it to7474%.A little thought would have told the author that his claim was for a75·increase.If his yield were the maximum100%,it would mean that the best result earlier researchers had obtained was less than1.4%.Surely some-thing was wrong!Dependence on a calculator without thinking about the sense of the result was something I encountered often during my university career,and I am sur-prised to see how often it still occurs.Distinguish the absolute from the subjective.While numerical results should be absolute,there are other results that are subjective.This is particularly true of e.g.microscopic obser-vations.Many will know that I spent years examining neutron radiation damage in single crystal graphite using a transmis-sion electron microscope(TEM).Several times colleagues told me‘‘microscopists can prove anything’’.The reporting of such results relies on the integrity of the author.When I retired from active research I abandoned scores of unusual micro-graphs of things that had been observed only once,and for which there was no obvious explanation.They might have made interesting posters for an office wall but had no place in a scientific paper.I was once taken to task by a reviewer who wanted me to‘‘prove’’my observations and conclusions. My answer was that he had to trust me.I had more than a hundred supporting photographs,but could only include one or two in the paper.Another criticism I faced was the question of whether the material had been altered by the preparation processes.In order to examine any material by TEM it is necessary to have a thin sample and there is always the possibility that the act of preparing the sample can somehow change what it con-tains.Is the TEM sample representative of the bulk?In graph-ite it is possible to prepare such a sample by simple cleavage (recently re-discovered by the graphene community!),but does the cleavage change,in my case,the distribution of the radiation damage observed?There is some evidence to suggest that this may happen.Never extrapolate too far.Myfirst research project involved looking at samples that had been irradiated in a highfluence test reactor.The act of irradiation was difficult.Samples could be inserted and removed from the reactor only when it was ‘‘shut down’’and this was outside our control.The main pur-pose of our research program was to investigate physicalC A R B O N48(2010)2675–2676a v a i l ab l e a t w w w.sc i e n c ed i re c t.c o mjo urnal homepage:w w w.e l s e v i e r.c o m/l o c a te/c a r b o n。
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• All the writing that I do - papers, reports, proposals (and, of course, slides for seminars)- I do from outlines. I urge you to learn how to use them as well. 我写的所有文章,包括论文,报告, 建议(当然还有讨论会的胶片)都从 提纲开始。我也希望你们能学会使用 它。
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• Realize that your objective in research is to formulate and test hypotheses, to draw conclusions from these tests, and to teach these conclusions to others. Your objective is not to “collect data.” 要意识到研究的目的是为了形成并证 实假说,从一些测试中得出结论,并 把结论传授给别人。你oduction Why did I do the work? What were the central motivations and hypotheses? A)引言 为什么我要做这件工作,主要的目的和假设是什么? B) Results and Discussion What were the results? How were compounds made and characterized? What was measured? B)结果和讨论 结果是什么?化合物是怎样合成与表征的?测试方法是什 么? C) Conclusions What does it all mean? What hypotheses were proved or disproved? What did I learn? Why does it make a difference? C)结论 所有这一切意味着什么?证实或否定了什么假设?我学到 11 了什么?结果为什么与众不同?
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英⽂科技论⽂写作与学术报告(2019秋)作业答案英⽂科技论⽂写作与学术报告(2019秋)作业答案第⼀章1. Which one is NOT included in “logics in writing paper”?A Logical presentation in writing paperB Good language flowC Good structure and clarity in the paperD Good theoretical analysis2. Which is the CORRECT statement in the following?A If the reader want to know the result of the paper, they can read the introduction.B If the reader want to intuitively know the key ideas behind the paper, they should read the introduction.C It's optional that we summarize the contribution of the paper in the "abstract".D If the readers want to know all the glory details, they can read the introduction.3. Which of the following practice we should follow when writing scientific paper in English?A Modesty is a good characteristic in Chinese culture.B When writing scientific paper, we should point out the shortcomings of our research using a specific section.C We should confidently show the contributions of our research.D The English culture is so similar to Chinese that Chinese readers can just follow their culture when writing an English scientific paper.4. What does “delivery” means in the context of writing an Engligh scientific paper?A The meaning of “delivery” is similar to the concept of those delivery companies.B “Delivery” means the contributions of your research.C “Delivery” means how much do the writers know the background of the readers.D The “responsibility of delivery” is on the writer rather than on the reader.5. Which one is the CORRECT expression of “博⼠后流动站”?A Postdoctoral program.B Post-doctor mobile station.C Post-doctor flow station.D Postdoctoral moving station.6. Which of the following translation is authentic?A 注意安全---- take care.B 第⼀教学楼---- No.1 teaching building.C ⼩⼼落⽔---- fall into water carefully.D 投诉电话---- law suit phone number.7. What should we do in writing a scientific paper?A In order to emphasize our views, we should put our strong emotions into the text.B Slightly present our political comments is allowed.C We should follow the mainstream ideas of general public.D We should present facts, theories, proofs, experiments, testing results objectively.8. Which of the following is WRONG about the title of scientific paper?A It normally is not a sentence.B It is better to use the fewest possible words to adequately describes the contents of the paper.C The order of the words in the title is very important.D It is better to use a complete sentence.9. Which of the following is WRONG about the abstract of scientific paper?A It is the summary of the paper.B It is better to use abbreviation to make the abstract shorter.C It describes the key ideas of the paper.D It gives the results of the paper.10. Which is NOT advised in the introduction section?A Clearly explain the background of our research.B Clearly explain the problem we do.C Explain the academic and/or impact.D Using mathematical functions to explain our model.11. Which of the following is RIGHT regarding the literature review?A It is better to comment on the existing work positively.B It is better to comment on the existing work objectively.C It is better to comment on the existing work negatively.D It is better to criticize the results obtained by other researchers to highlight our contributions.12. Which of the following is RIGHT about the references of introduction of scientific paper?A It is better to cite as many foreign references as possible.B It is better to cite many your own previously published papers.C It is better to cite as many domestic references as possible.D Recent references should be cited13. What may the reviewer thinks if you cite too many your own publications?A You really contribute a lot to the community.B Other researchers are not interested in the subject.C You have a say in this research area.D They will think you have sufficient references.14. If the a reference has 5 authors, how many authors should you include in the reference list?A Only the first author.B Only the first and second author.C Only the first and corresponding author.D All five authors.15. What should you do in the “Problem description and formulation”?A If you clearly know the meaning of a variable, it’s ok that it is not defined.B You should present the problem you are trying to solve.C Usually you should describe your system configuration, environment and so on.D You should put the organization of your paper here.16. Which of the following statement is NOT correct?A If you have a theorem, you should put th e proof in the section of “methodology.”B In the section of “simulation/numerical result”, you should present the description of the practical or experiment system, description of the data and the associated system.C In the section of “simulation/numerical result”, you can use tables, figures and graph to better present your contribution.D In the conclusion remark or the conclusion, you can just repeat your conclusion remark as the abstract.17. What you can do if you want to show acknowledgment?A It’s not appropriate to put acknowledgment in the front page.B You can put a separate section of acknowledgment in your paper.C If you acknowledge Albert Einstein, you should thank him based on the fact.D The length of acknowledgment should be strictly constrained.18. Which is CORRECT when you list the references?A It’s ok if you put as many references as you can.B To enrich your paper, you should can list something that is not referred to in your paper.C Every reference you list must be referred in the main text.D It’s proper for you to list many home made references.19. What does “proof reading” mean?A 证明阅读.B 校对.C 证明读物.D 证明在读.20. What is TRUE if at the procedure to submit a paper?A Usually we submit the entire manuscript to a conference or journal.B All conferences require you to submit the abstract first, from which the organizer will determine whether you need to submit the whole text.C We should submit a hard copy to the publisher with your signature.D The reviewers’ comments are not v ery important when you modify your paper.21. If the publisher sends the proof to you, when should you give a reply?A In about 2 days.B In about 2 weeks.C In about 2 months.D In about 2 years.22. Which of the following may not be the reason to reject a scientific paper?A There are many grammatical mistakes in the paper.B There are many simple sentences in the paper.C There are many direct translations in the paper.D There are some spelling mistakes of authors' names in references.23. Which of the following is TRUE?A Font size should keep consistency only in each paragraph.B Font size should keep consistency only in each part of the paper.C Font size should keep consistency in the entire paper.D It doesn't matter how the font size used.24. Which of the following is TRUE about use of mathematical equations?A It is better to use as many equations as possible.B It is better to use as few equations as possible.C It is better not to use any equations at all.D It is better to have a balanced use of equations.25. Which statement is NOT true?A You should keep consistence in equations and reference format.B You should keep consistence in format of authors of all references.C The format between different paragraphs should be kept the same.D You should not use synonyms in order to keep consistence.26. What is NOT necessary when you want to better write your paper?A Use spelling check to make sure all the words are spelled correctly.B Use grammar check to find out inconsistency.C Carefully check the spellings of the names in references.D Use many hard and complicated sentences to polish your expressions.27. Which of the following author names may NOT be the right format of the reference?A X. Guan, S. Zhang, S. Li, W. WangB Guan, X., Zhang, S., Li, S., Wang, W.C Xiaohong Guan, San Zhang, Si Li, Wu WangD Guan Xiaohong, Zhang, S., S. Li, W. Wang28. Which is NOT the general style of the reviewers?A FrankB BrutalC SarcasticD Implicit29. If the reviewer gives a lot of critical comments and requests for modification, what are the correct attitudes we should have?A The reviewers are giving us hard time on my paper.B The reviewer is incompetent because he cannot understand what I write.C We should modify our paper according to the reviewers’ comments to get our paper published.D The reviewer is biased on me.30. Which one is NOT the good advices on responding to reviewers?A We need to examine carefully all the comments made by the reviewers and the Associate Editor.B We have to differentiate those comments that must be fully addressed from those that are desirable to be addressed.C We only need to address the comments that they are correct as we believe.D We need to respond to EACH and EVERY point raised by the reviewer and the referee.31. In order to help the reviewers save time, we shouldA List our original reviews and the response side by side.B Tell the reviewers that we have modified the paper carefully.C Send back a paper with enough modification to the reviewers.D Just select some critical comments to response.32. Which is the WRONG response to reviewers if we don’t agree with their comments?A We had better not to argue with the reviewer.B Show the reviewers that the main text is revised according to their comments.C If we must disagree with their comments, we should do it very professionally with no rancor or sarcasm.D Ignore those comments or explain what we originally meant.33. Which one is the good action in responding to reviewers?A We explain to the reviews what we have revised to addressed their comments.B If the criticism of the reviewers makes us uncomfortable, we should ignore and try to feel better.C If the reviewers think that the contributions are not enough, we should request the Associate Editor to have other reviewers review our paper.D If the reviewers think that the contributions are not enough, we should have patience, waiting they change mind.34. Which description of the review system is CORRECT?A The author knows the reviewer, but the reviewer doesn’t know the author.B The authors do not know the reviewer, but the reviewer knows the authors.C The reviewers know each other.D The author knows the reviewer, and the reviewer know the author, too.第⼆章1. What are the CORRECT statements in the following?A Making presentations in English is only important for scholars.B Making presentations in English is only important for businessmen.C Making presentations in English is only important for scholars and businessmen.D Making presentations in English is important for many careers.2. Which of the following is WRONG about making presentations in English?A It can make a good impression.B It can show how smart you are.C It is only necessary when you attend an academic conference.D It may be the turning point in many cases.3. Which is NOT the correct statement in the following?A You should overestimate the audience's capability to show smart they are.B You should assume responsibility of delivery.C You should make a lot of efforts to prepare your slide.D You should make a lot of efforts to practice your presentation.4. Which of the following is WRONG about using Powerpoint to make presentations?A It uses audio and visual channels of communications and more information transfer in the same amount of time.B You cannot make the last minute change under any condition.C Preparing the slides forces you to organize and rehearse you talk and help you uncover weak spots.D You can synchronize with sound recording and presenting without physical presence.5. Which statement is NOT the correct one in the following?A It is better to use multiple slides or the animation feature to control the display of information on your slide.B It is better not to make a slide crowded.C It is better not to copy texts form your thesis to the slide directly.D It is better to put many words in the slide to make your audience get the information clearly.6. Which statement about the font size in the slide is NOT mentioned in the video?A Usually the minimal font size for text is 18 points.B Occasionally in graphics 14 points can be used.C Very rarely the minimal font size for text can be 12 points.D Very rarely in detail graphs you can use 12 points.7. Which is the main function of a road map in your presentation?A To beatify your slides.B To increase the number of your slides.C To tell the audience where your talk is.D To concretely show conclusions of your research.8. Which is NOT the correct statements in the following?A It is OK to change notations half way through a talk by copying those in another talk to save efforts.B When using a graphic notation, make the graphics distinctive and use it repeatedly.C Use one consistent name or label to denote one thing throughout the talk.D Always define things, your problem statement, mathematical symbol, your goal, etc.9. Which of the following may NOT be a necessary part of presenting experimental results?A Conditionals defined.B Procedures detailed.C Diagram labeled.D Conclusions stated.10. For a 30 minutes talk, what is the appropriate number of slides?A No more than 15.B No less than 15.C No more than 10.D No less than 20.11. What is a good presentation?A Use many beautiful animations, but the content is not fulfilled.B The topic of your presentation is interesting in your aspect.C The subject of your presentation is welcomed by the audience.D The words in your slide are of large size to make the audience look clearly.12. Which is the appropriate time of preparing slides according to Prof. Ho of Harvard University?A About 5 minutes per slide with graphics.B About 15 minutes per slide with graphics.C At least 5 minutes to make one slide in presentation.D At least 15 minutes to make one slide in presentation.13. Which is NOT the correct statements in the following?A You can prepare some slides for some expected question.B You can take the questions in the rehearsal as pre-reviews.C You cannot say I don't know even if you don’t have an answer.D You can offer the approach to finding the answer if necessary.14. Which statement is NOT correct about preparing slides for expected questions?A It will impress the audience that how much efforts you made to make this presentation.B From this way you can improve your presentation in the rehearsal.C It may make the audiences difficult to raise new questions.D It can help you answer the questions better.15. What would most probably happen if you read the slides in your presentation?A It seems that you have prepared a lot.B It will make the audience easily to get bored.C It seems that you are not confident enough.D The time you spend in presentation is easily to over the limitation.16. When should you mention your main goal in making presentations?A Mention your main goal early to capture attention of the audience.B Mention your main goal at any time is Ok.C Mention your main goal late to keep audience in suspense.D Never mention your main goal at all.17. Which is NOT the correct statements in the following?A Watch where you stand when you speak.B Keep the laser pointer on all the time to attract the attention of audience.C Don't keep your hands in the pocket.D Record your talk and listen to and view it.18. Which of the following expression is proper for the speaker/audience?A What you are talking about is nothing, but general theory of relativity.B It is a stupid question, my first-year graduate student can answer that.C I have just talked about that, why did you ask such a question again.D It is really a good question, thanks for your asking.19. Which is the CORRECT statement in the following?A The speaker should answer the question before the audience finishes it to save time.B The speaker should not be polite, because it may make others feel that you are not knowledgeable.C The speaker should listen carefully before answering the question.D The speaker should say directly that your question is irrelevant.第三章1. Which statement is WRONG about sharing credit in writing scientific paper?A If your wor k is built on somebody else’s work, you should state clearly.B There is a harsh punishment for plagiarism.C It is acceptable to write a couple of paragraphs rephrasing other people’s words and provide a simple numbered reference.D If you list the references at the end of the paper, you should cite all the references your listed in the text.2. What should you do if you want to cite a general theory of relativity of Albert Einstein?A Just copy the original words of the theory.B Put quotations on the original words of the theory.C Using your own words to express meaning of the theory without reference.D Simply providing a numbered reference after copying the original words.3. Which of the following is NOT appropriate when you acknowledge others in your paper?A You thank someone sincerely and properly in the acknowledge section of the paper.B A scientist is not related to your paper, but you put his name in your paper because he is very famous worldwide.C If the idea is from other people, you should acknowledge them.D Before you use somebody else’s document, you should ask for permission.4. Which of the following is unacceptable in terms of sharing credit?A If I want to reuse the graph and picture of my paper that has been previously published, I still ask for the permission and copyright from the publisher.B I have to make sure that it is really my work before I claim my contribution in the paper.C I am generous to collaborators in some cases that their contributions are not very clear cut.D I claim in my paper that the idea is just from myself and has nothing to do other discussants so that all the contributions are owing to me.5. What does “take credit” means in the video?A Take your credit card.B Claim your contributions.C Guarantee that your results are credible.D Be honest while discussing with others scholars.6. What do the IEEE journals rely on to determine the order of authorship?A Authors’ contributions.B The alphabet of authors’ names.C Seniority.D Radom.7. What should you do if you don’t know the reference format?A Simply follow the reference format in one of your referenced paper.B Just use your custom reference format.C Follow the instructions of the conference or the journal.D Try a variety of formats in your reference list.8. Which format for citing references is not right?A [10] studies the strategic implications of forward contracting in commodity markets that exhibit an oligopolistic structure.B The strategic implications of forward contracting in commodity markets that exhibit an oligopolistic structure have been studied [10].C Liski and Montero studied the strategic implications of forward contracting in commodity markets that exhibit an oligopolistic structure [10].D Reference [10] studies the dynamic vehicle routing problem.9. Which statement of the following is NOT right about the importance of attending academic conferences?A Academic conference is very important for professors, but it is unworthy for students.B Academic conference is a place where we can exchange ideas and acquire the most up-to-date information and ideas.C We are able to meet colleagues and join the research networks of the academic conference.D There is a career opportunity in attending the conference for students.10. What activities can you choose to participate in during an academic conference?A Plenary and keynote speech.B Panel discussion session.C Paper presentation session.D All the above.11. Which statement in an academic conference is NOT correct?A Panel discussion often discusses the important issues on a specific topic and invites the panelists to sit in front of the stage.B Plenary and keynote speech often discusses the future development and research directions.C Attendants are advised to the plenary and keynote speeches.D Paper presentation requires an author of the paper to present the paper as long as one likes.12. What’s the poster session?A The authors of the paper make a poster in the specified area.B A session with many posters which aim to promote the conference.C If the attendees are interested in your poster, they will buy the poster.D The authors show their contributions using a poster without oral presentation or discussion with others.13. What should you NOT do if you want to meet the session chair?A Submit my bio information before the session starts.B Meet the session chair at authors’ breakfast.C Chat with the session chair during others’ presentation.D Locate my session and be aware of the arrangement ahead of time.14. Which one is not necessary for the authors before making presentations?A Read the program carefully.B Locate your session.C Take part in other sessions.D Be aware of the time and the slot for your presentation.15. What should you NOT do in the session of an academic conference?A Prepare the slides strictly according to the time limit of the schedule.B Answer questions at the session.C Do not show up in the arranged session and others can communicate with me by E-mail.D Meet session chair before the session starts.16. What main benefits you will get if you volunteer to serve the academic community?A Earn money.B No benefits but simply for personal interest.C Build a good relation with the colleagues in your field.D Get offers from famous professors who attend the conference.17. Which one of the following is NOT the reason for a scholar to provide academic service?A Academic service is a way to integrate into the world of science and technology.B Academic service is a way to have an influence in international academic community.C Academic service is paid much.D Academic service proves that you play an important role in academic community.18. What is the benefit from serving as a reviewer for a journal or conference?A Keep one up in the field.B Maintain critical skill.C Enhance curriculum vitae for students.D All the above.19. Which one is NOT included in the reviewing tasks?A Provide rating scales on quality and publishability.B Provide rating scales on the originality or creativity.C Help the authors to modify the paper.D Give comments on the correctness of the method.20. Which statement about reviewer is NOT true?A The reviewer may encourage the author to improve the paper.B If you are a reviewer, you should keep confidentiality.C You are responsible to give comments to the author whether the paper is accepted or rejected.D You only need to be specific and constructive to the beginning authors.21. Which one is not essential to be a good reviewer?A You have to volunteer to be a reviewer first.B You should provide a good review.C You need to have the experience of reviewing papers from all regions.D You should have credibility on reviewing papers.22. What should you do if you want to become an associate editor?A Publish at least five papers in the journal to know the standard and practice.B Have a reputation to provide good reviews in a timely fashion.C Be a leading researcher in a variety of areas with a good list of publications.D Find a good advocate to speak for you, usually a primary editor is enough.23. Which statement about accepting or declining to handle papers is NOT true?A You cannot handle papers only in your narrow areas of expertise.B You cannot accept all the papers in all areas.C You need to handle papers in our primary and secondary areas of expertise.D Once you accept the paper to handle, the first task is to tell the author about this.24. Which statement about securing reviewers is NOT true?A Usually you should assign the review task to the reviewers four to six days ahead.B You should glance over the paper to roughly understand what the paper is about.C In choosing the reviewers, one of the important principle is that we should align the interest of the reviewers with ours.D If you actually need minimum 3 reviewers, you need to properly find five or even six candidate reviewers.25. In order to avoid conflict of interest and preserve confidentiality, what should you do?A Ask the advisor the review students’ paper because the advisor clearly know the paper.B If Reviewer A has total different view to Author B, you should not ask Reviewer A to review Author B’s paper to avoid conflict.C You should let the reviewers and author know each other for better communication.D Send emails to all the reviewers simultaneously for saving effort.26. When you handle the paper and find it interesting, which behavior is correct?A You can just directly use the information.B You should communicate with the author as an associate editor or editor.C You should communicate with the author as a researcher to request to share some information.D You should tell the author that you are handling his paper.27. What should you NOT do to prepare a recommendation or decision letter?A Combine reviewers' comments and your own reading of the paper to provide an appropriate, impartial, and constructive recommendation.B Provide a general comment, and also the specifics of the recommendation, the analysis of the reviews, and justification for your recommendation.C Tell which part to cut, how the paper should be reorganized, how the paper should be revised.D If you recommend to reject the paper, you can simply do it without explanation.28. What is NOT allowed in the recommendation of an associated editor?A Provide a general comment.B Provide the specifics of the recommendation.C Provide the analysis of the reviewer.D Provide the information of all reviewers.29. Which statement about handling the resubmitted paper is NOT true?A We only need to ask the reviewers with critical comments previously on the revised version for conditionally accepted papers.B For revise and resubmit papers, have a mix of new and old reviewers to do a thorough and complete reviews.C We need to ask all the reviewers to handle the conditionally accepted papers.D The reviewers should be provided with the document detailing how the previous comments were addressed.30. As an associate editor or editor, when you suffer some difficulties, what should you do?A Report the difficulties early.B It’s our duty to handle the papers, so we should solve the difficulties by ourselves.C If you are busy, delay the task of handling papers and do it when you are free.D Simply ask another editor to take place of you.31. Which one is true according to the communication protocol?A Once you receive a request on paper handling, you need to response as soon as possible.B In all journals, the associate editor can directly communicate with editor in chief.C If you are busy with your personal affairs, you can response after the deadline.D Never report progress if it is negative.32. What should you NOT do as the session chair?A You need to read the program carefully and locate your session to chair.B You have to identify your session authors, collect bios information and check the facility beforeyour session starts.C You should control the presentation time and follow the schedule.D When you find there are several authors no show, you should combine the session with somebody else, who is unsigned.33. Which of the statement is TRUE for a conference session chair?A If some attendees registered on site attending a session, invited them to make a presentation.B To stimulate Q AND A, you should appoint one of the audience to ask questions.C To stimulate Q AND A, you should ask a question yourself first.D You should report only the number of attendees to the program committee.第四章1. What are the considerations on choosing research topics?A Demand from social and economic developmentB Curiosity and personal interestsC Combing social requirements with personal interestsD All the above2. Which of the following is NOT the form of interdisciplinary research?A Researchers from different fields collaborate to work on particular problemsB One from field A works on the problem of field BC One from field B works on the problem of field BD Researchers from different fields propose a new field3. If you encounter a problem in a different field, which statement is NOT true?A You may often suffer the resistance.B An outstanding result may come out from you.C You may have different angle on the problem.D You just waste your time since it is not your field.4. Which of the following is NOT advised when you are choosing a research topic?A Comprehensive understanding of the state of art in well-established areas。
女孩应该学习科学英文作文
女孩应该学习科学英文作文English:Growing up as a girl, I firmly believe that learning science and mastering scientific English writing is essential. Science is not just about memorizing facts; it's a way of thinking, reasoning, and problem-solving that is crucial in our modern world.First and foremost, mastering scientific Englishwriting opens doors to a world of knowledge and opportunities. In today's interconnected world, English is the lingua franca of science and technology. Whether it's reading research papers, collaborating with international colleagues, or presenting findings at conferences, proficiency in scientific English is indispensable. For instance, when I was researching about climate change, most of the relevant papers and discussions were in English. Without a solid grasp of scientific English, I would have struggled to comprehend the nuances of the research andcontribute meaningfully to the discourse.Secondly, learning scientific English improves one's critical thinking and communication skills. Writing scientific papers requires clarity, precision, and logical coherence. Through crafting hypotheses, conducting experiments, and presenting results, one hones theirability to think analytically and communicate complex ideas effectively. Moreover, scientific English encourages conciseness and objectivity, fostering clear and concise expression of thoughts and findings. This not only enhances one's academic performance but also equips them with valuable skills applicable in various professional fields.Furthermore, being proficient in scientific English facilitates international collaboration and exchange of ideas. Science knows no borders, and breakthroughs often emerge from collaborative efforts across nations and cultures. By mastering scientific English, one can seamlessly collaborate with researchers from diverse backgrounds, contributing to a richer and more diverse scientific community. For instance, I once participated inan international research project where members hailed from different countries. Our ability to communicate effectively in English not only facilitated smooth collaboration but also enriched the project with diverse perspectives and insights.In conclusion, learning scientific English writing is indispensable for any aspiring scientist or researcher. It not only grants access to a wealth of knowledge but also enhances critical thinking, communication skills, and facilitates global collaboration. As a girl passionate about science, I recognize the importance of mastering scientific English, and I am committed to honing my skills to contribute meaningfully to the scientific community.中文:作为一个女孩,我坚信学习科学并掌握科学英文写作是至关重要的。
科学家必备作文英语
科学家必备作文英语Scientists' Essential Skills。
In today's rapidly advancing world, scientists play a crucial role in pushing the boundaries of knowledge and driving innovation. To succeed in their endeavors, scientists need to possess a range of essential skills that enable them to conduct research, analyze data, communicate their findings, and collaborate effectively. In this essay, we will explore some of the key skills that scientists must have to excel in their field.Firstly, scientists must have a strong foundation in scientific knowledge. They need to have a deep understanding of the theories, principles, and methodologies that underpin their area of expertise. This knowledge allows them to design experiments, collect data, and draw meaningful conclusions from their findings. Without a solid understanding of the fundamentals, scientists would struggle to make significant contributionsto their field.Secondly, scientists must be proficient in critical thinking and problem-solving. They encounter complex problems and challenges on a regular basis, and it is their ability to think analytically and creatively that allows them to overcome these obstacles. Scientists must be able to identify patterns, make connections, and generate innovative solutions. This skill is particularly important in research, where scientists often need to devise new experiments or approaches to answer their research questions.Another essential skill for scientists is effective communication. Scientists need to be able to convey their ideas, observations, and findings to both their peers and the wider public. This involves not only writing scientific papers and reports but also presenting their work at conferences and engaging in discussions with colleagues. Clear and concise communication is crucial to ensure that scientific knowledge is shared and understood by others, fostering collaboration and advancement in the field.In addition to communication, scientists must also possess strong interpersonal skills. Collaboration is a cornerstone of scientific research, and scientists often work in teams or research groups. They need to be able to work well with others, listen actively, and respect different perspectives. Effective collaboration allows scientists to leverage each other's strengths, share resources, and tackle complex problems collectively.Furthermore, scientists must be adaptable and open to learning. The field of science is constantly evolving, with new discoveries and technologies emerging all the time. Scientists need to stay updated with the latest developments in their field and be willing to learn and embrace new techniques and methodologies. This adaptability ensures that scientists remain at the forefront of their respective fields and continue to make meaningful contributions.Lastly, scientists must possess a strong sense of ethics and integrity. The pursuit of scientific knowledgemust be conducted with honesty and transparency. Scientists must adhere to ethical guidelines, ensure the welfare of research subjects, and accurately report their findings. Maintaining integrity in scientific research is essential to build trust in the scientific community and ensure the validity and reliability of scientific knowledge.In conclusion, scientists require a range of essential skills to excel in their field. From a strong foundation in scientific knowledge to critical thinking, effective communication, collaboration, adaptability, and ethical conduct, these skills are crucial for scientists to make significant contributions to their respective fields. By continuously honing these skills, scientists can push the boundaries of knowledge, drive innovation, and address the pressing challenges facing our world today.。
科研英语写作
科研英语写作Scientific writing is a crucial aspect of the research process, as it allows researchers to effectively communicate their findings, ideas, and methodologies to the broader scientific community. Effective scientific writing not only conveys the essential information but also engages the reader, making the work accessible and compelling. In this essay, we will explore the key elements of scientific writing in English and discuss strategies for improving one's writing skills.One of the primary objectives of scientific writing is to present research findings in a clear, concise, and organized manner. This requires a structured approach that follows a logical flow, beginning with an introduction that provides the necessary background and context, followed by a detailed description of the methodology, the presentation of results, and a thorough discussion of the implications and significance of the findings. The language used in scientific writing should be precise, objective, and free from ambiguity, ensuring that the message is conveyed accurately and without room for misinterpretation.Clarity is of utmost importance in scientific writing. Complex ideas and technical concepts must be explained in a way that is easily understood by the target audience, which may include researchers from various disciplines, policymakers, or the general public. This often requires the use of clear and concise language, the avoidance of jargon or specialized terminology, and the effective use of visual aids such as graphs, tables, and diagrams to supplement the written text.Another key aspect of scientific writing is the importance of objectivity. Researchers must strive to present their findings and interpretations in an impartial and unbiased manner, avoiding the intrusion of personal opinions or subjective judgments. This requires a careful selection of words and the avoidance of emotive language or value-laden terms. The use of the passive voice is often preferred in scientific writing, as it helps to maintain a sense of objectivity and distance from the research process.Effective scientific writing also requires a strong command of grammar, syntax, and punctuation. Proper sentence structure, the correct use of tenses, and the accurate application of punctuation rules are essential for ensuring that the written text is clear, coherent, and easily understood. Additionally, the consistent use of formatting, citation styles, and reference management tools can greatly improve the overall quality and professional appearance of a scientific paper.One of the challenges faced by many researchers, particularly those whose native language is not English, is the need to write in a language that may not be their primary means of communication. In such cases, it is crucial to seek out resources and support to improve one's English writing skills. This may involve attending writing workshops, working with a professional editor or proofreader, or engaging in regular practice through writing exercises and peer feedback.It is also important to recognize that scientific writing is not a static skill, but rather a continuous process of learning and improvement. Researchers should strive to stay up-to-date with the latest trends and best practices in scientific writing, and be willing to adapt their writing style and approach as the field evolves. This may involve reading and analyzing well-written scientific papers, seeking feedback from colleagues and mentors, and continuously refining one's own writing techniques.In conclusion, effective scientific writing in English is a fundamental skill for researchers across all disciplines. By mastering the art of clear, concise, and objective communication, researchers can effectively share their findings, contribute to the advancement of scientific knowledge, and engage with a global audience. Through ongoing practice, self-reflection, and the utilization of available resources,researchers can continually improve their writing skills and become more effective communicators in the scientific community.。
02科学英语论文写作导论(精美PPT)
Prototypical TR MS 理论研究型论文的典型结构
• Abstract
• Introduction - Overall thesis statement, hypothesis that is to be proved in the article, the justification for the need to prove this, etc
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17➤ ➤ ➤ ➤ ➤ CHAPTER 2Scientific PapersT he chemistry community, like other scientific communi-ties, depends on the communication of scientific results. Scientists communicate in a variety of ways, but much of the communication is through publication in books and journals. In this chapter, the different types of book and journal presentations are described, along with the components of the standard format for reporting original research.Types of Books Books for the professional scientific community fall into one of three categories: proceedings volumes, monographs, and handbooks.Proceedings VolumesBooks based on meetings are called proceedings volumes. These are multiau-thored volumes. The chapters in proceedings volumes may be accounts of origi-nal research or literature reviews. Generally, the chapters are developed and expanded from presentations given at symposia, but additional chapters may be written especially for the book to make sure that the coverage of the topic is complete. Proceedings volumes should contain at least one chapter that reviews the subject and also provides an overview of the book to unify the chapters into a coherent treatment of the subject. In a longer book that is divided into sections, each section may need a short overview chapter.D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 00218 ➤ The ACS Style GuideMonographsMonographs are books that examine a single topic in detail. They are written by one author or collaboratively by more than one author. Each chapter treats one subdivision of the broader topic.HandbooksHandbooks are large, multiauthored volumes that discuss a field in depth. Gen-erally, the individual submissions are short, about three or four pages. Each sub-mission is written by one or two authors and provides a detailed discussion of a narrow topic within the scope of the book.Journal Presentations There are four general types of presentations published in journals: articles, notes, communications, and reviews. Articles Articles, also called full papers, are definitive accounts of significant, original studies. They present important new data or provide a fresh approach to an established subject. The organization and length of an article should be deter-mined by the amount of new information to be presented and by space restric-tions within the publication. Notes Notes are concise accounts of original research of a limited scope. They may also be preliminary reports of special significance. The material reported must be definitive and may not be published again later. Appropriate subjects for notesinclude improved procedures of wide applicability or interest, accounts of novel observations or of compounds of special interest, and development of new tech-niques. Notes are subject to the same editorial appraisal as full-length municationsCommunications, called “letters” or “correspondence” in some publications, are usually preliminary reports of special significance and urgency that are given expedited publication. They are accepted if the editor believes that their rapid publication will be a service to the scientific community. Communications are generally subject to strict length limitations; they must contain specific results to support their conclusions, but they may not contain nonessential experimental details.D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 002Chapter 2: Scientific Papers ➤ 19The same rigorous standards of acceptance that apply to full-length articles also apply to communications. Like all types of presentations in journals, com-munications are submitted to review. In many cases, authors are expected to publish complete details (not necessarily in the same journal) after their com-munications have been published. Acceptance of a communication, however, does not guarantee acceptance of the detailed manuscript.ReviewsReviews integrate, correlate, and evaluate results from published literature on a particular subject. They seldom report new experimental findings. Effective review articles have a well-defined theme, are usually critical, and may present novel theoretical interpretations. Ordinarily, reviews do not give experimental details, but in special cases (as when a technique is of central interest), experi-mental procedures may be included. An important function of reviews is to serve as a guide to the original literature; for this reason, accuracy and completeness of references cited are essential.Standard Format for Reporting Original Research The main text of scientific papers presenting original research is generally orga-nized into a standard format: abstract, introduction, experimental details or theoretical basis, results, discussion, and conclusions, although not necessarily in this order. This format has become standard because it is suitable for most reports of original research, it is basically logical, and it is easy to use. The reason it accommodates most reports of original research is that it parallels the scientific method of deductive reasoning: define the problem, create a hypothesis, devise an experiment to test the hypothesis, conduct the experiment, and draw conclu-sions. Furthermore, this format enables the reader to understand quickly what is being presented and to find specific information easily. This ability is crucial nowmore than ever because scientists, if not all professionals, must read much more material than in the past.✐Reminder: Journal articles and proceedings chapters are usually orga-nized with an abstract, introduction, experimental details or theoretical basis, results, discussion, and conclusions.Use the standard form for reports of original research whether the report is published in a journal or proceedings volume. Even if the information is more suited to one of the shorter types of presentations, the logic of the standard format applies, although some headings or sections may be omitted or other sections and subsections added. Manuscripts for monographs, handbooks,D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 00220 ➤ The ACS Style Guideliterature reviews, or theoretical papers generally do not follow the standard form. Consult author guidelines for information on how to organize these types of presentations or look at previously published work. Regardless of the type of presentation, be sure to present all parts of the paper as concisely as possible.An extremely important step is to check the specific requirements of the publication targeted and follow them. Some publishers provide templates that help authors produce manuscripts in the requested format. Templates are also useful in making sure that the manuscript is not too long. Most editors require revisions of manuscripts that are not in their requested format. Thus, not fol-lowing a publication’s requirements can delay publication and make more work for authors.Title The best time to determine the title is after the text is written, so that the title will reflect the paper’s content and emphasis accurately and clearly. The title must be brief and grammatically correct but accurate and complete enough to stand alone. A two- or three-word title may be too vague, but a 14- or 15-word title is unnecessarily long. If the title is too long, consider breaking it into title and subtitle.The title serves two main purposes: to attract the potential audience and to aid retrieval and indexing. Therefore, include several keywords. The title should provide the maximum information for a computerized title search.➤ Choose terms that are as specific as the text permits, e.g., “a vanadium–iron alloy” rather than “a magnetic alloy”. Avoid phrases such as “on the”, “a study of”, “research on”, “report on”, “regarding”, and “use of”. In most cases, omit “the” at the beginning of the title. Avoid nonquantitative, meaningless words such as “rapid” and “new”.➤ Spell out all terms in the title, and avoid jargon, symbols, formulas, and abbre-viations. Whenever possible, use words rather than expressions containing super-scripts, subscripts, or other special notations. Do not cite company names, spe-cific trademarks, or brand names of chemicals, drugs, materials, or instruments.➤ Series titles are of little value. Some publications do not permit them at all. If consecutive papers in a series are published simultaneously, a series title may be relevant, but in a long series, paper 42 probably bears so limited a relation-ship to paper 1 that they do not warrant a common title. In addition, an editor or reviewer seeing the same title repeatedly may reject it on the grounds that it is only one more publication on a general topic that has already been discussed at length.D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 002Chapter 2: Scientific Papers ➤ 21Byline and AffiliationInclude in the byline all those, and only those, who made substantial contri-butions to the work, even if the paper was actually written by only one person. Chapter 1 and Appendix 1-1 in this book are more explicit on this topic. ➤ Many ACS publications specifically request at least one full given name for each author, rather than only initials. Use your first name, initial, and surname (e.g., John R. Smith) or your first initial, second name, and surname (e.g., J. Rob-ert Smith). Whatever byline is used, be consistent. Papers by John R. Smith, Jr., J. Smith, J. R. Smith, Jack Smith, and J. R. Smith, Jr., will not be indexed in the same manner; the bibliographic citations may be listed in five different locations, and ascribing the work to a single author will therefore be difficult if not impossible.➤ Do not include professional, religious, or official titles or academic degrees.➤ The affiliation is the institution (or institutions) at which the work was conducted. If the author has moved to another institution since the work was done, many publications include a footnote giving the current address. Contact the editor about this.➤ If there is more than one author, use an asterisk or superscript (check the specific publication’s style) to indicate the author or authors to whom corre-spondence should be addressed. Clarify all corresponding authors’ addresses by accompanying footnotes if they are not apparent from the affiliation line. E-mail addresses may be included in corresponding author footnotes.Abstract Most publications require an informative abstract for every paper, even if they do not publish abstracts. For a research paper, briefly state the problem or the purpose of the research, indicate the theoretical or experimental plan used, sum-marize the principal findings, and point out major conclusions. Include chemical safety information when applicable. Do not supplement or evaluate the conclu-sions in the abstract. For a review paper, the abstract describes the topic, scope, sources reviewed, and conclusions. Write the abstract last to be sure that it accu-rately reflects the content of the paper.✐Reminder: The abstract allows the reader to determine the nature andscope of the paper and helps technical editors identify key features for indexing and retrieval.➤ Although an abstract is not a substitute for the article itself, it must be con-cise, self-contained, and complete enough to appear separately in abstract pub-lications. Often, authors’ abstracts are used with little change in abstract pub-D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 00222 ➤ The ACS Style Guidelications. The optimal length is one paragraph, but it could be as short as two sentences. The length of the abstract depends on the subject matter and the length of the paper. Between 80 and 200 words is usually adequate.➤ Do not cite references, tables, figures, or sections of the paper in the abstract. Do not include equations, schemes, or structures that require display on a line separate from the text.➤ Use abbreviations and acronyms only when it is necessary to prevent awk-ward construction or needless repetition. Define abbreviations at first use in the abstract (and again at first use in the text).Introduction A good introduction is a clear statement of the problem or project and the rea-sons for studying it. This information should be contained in the first few sen-tences. Give a concise and appropriate background discussion of the problem and the significance, scope, and limits of the work. Outline what has been done before by citing truly pertinent literature, but do not include a general survey of semirelevant literature. State how your work differs from or is related to work previously published. Demonstrate the continuity from the previous work to yours. The introduction can be one or two paragraphs long. Often, the head-ing “Introduction” is not used because it is superfluous; opening paragraphs are usually introductory.Experimental Details or Theoretical Basis In research reports, this section can also be called “Experimental Methods”, “Experimental Section”, or “Materials and Methods”. Be sure to check the specific publication for the correct title of this section. For experimental work, give suf-ficient detail about the materials and methods so that other experienced work-ers can repeat the work and obtain comparable results. When using a standard method, cite the appropriate literature and give only the details needed.➤ Identify the materials used and give information on the degree of and criteria for purity, but do not reference standard laboratory reagents. Give the chemical names of all compounds and the chemical formulas of compounds that are new or uncommon. Use meaningful nomenclature; that is, use standard systematic nomen-clature where specificity and complexity require, or use trivial nomenclature where it will adequately and unambiguously define a well-established compound.➤ Describe apparatus only if it is not standard or not commercially available. Giving a company name and model number in parentheses is nondistracting and adequate to identify standard equipment.D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 002Chapter 2: Scientific Papers ➤ 23➤ Avoid using trademarks and brand names of equipment and reagents. Use generic names; include the trademark in parentheses after the generic name only if the material or product used is somehow different from others. Remember that trademarks often are recognized and available as such only in the country of origin. In ACS publications, do not use trademark (™) and registered trademark (®) symbols.➤ Describe the procedures used, unless they are established and standard.➤ Note and emphasize any hazards, such as explosive or pyrophoric tendenciesand toxicity, in a separate paragraph introduced by the heading “Caution:”. Include precautionary handling procedures, special waste disposal procedures, and any other safety considerations in adequate detail so that workers repeating the experiments can take appropriate safety measures. Some ACS journals also indicate hazards as footnotes on their contents pages.In theoretical reports, this section is called, for example, “Theoretical Basis” or “Theoretical Calculations” instead of “Experimental Details” and includes suf-ficient mathematical detail to enable other researchers to reproduce derivations and verify numerical results. Include all background data, equations, and for-mulas necessary to the arguments, but lengthy derivations are best presented as supporting information.Results Summarize the data collected and their statistical treatment. Include only rel-evant data, but give sufficient detail to justify the conclusions. Use equations, figures, and tables only where necessary for clarity and brevity. Extensive but rel-evant data should be included in supporting information.Discussion The purpose of the discussion is to interpret and compare the results. Be objec-tive; point out the features and limitations of the work. Relate your results to cur-rent knowledge in the field and to the original purpose in undertaking the project: Was the problem resolved? What has been contributed? Briefly state the logical implications of the results. Suggest further study or applications if warranted.Present the results and discussion either as two separate sections or as one combined section if it is more logical to do so. Do not repeat information given elsewhere in the manuscript.ConclusionsThe purpose of the conclusions section is to put the interpretation into the con-text of the original problem. Do not repeat discussion points or include irrele-vant material. Conclusions should be based on the evidence presented.D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 00224 ➤ The ACS Style GuideSummaryA summary is unnecessary in most papers. In long papers, a summary of the main points can be helpful, but be sure to stick to the main points. If the sum-mary itself is too long, its purpose is defeated.AcknowledgmentsGenerally, the last paragraph of the paper is the place to acknowledge people, organizations, and financing. As simply as possible, thank those persons, other than coauthors, who added substantially to the work, provided advice or techni-cal assistance, or aided materially by providing equipment or supplies. Do not include their titles. If applicable, state grant numbers and sponsors here, as well as auspices under which the work was done, including permission to publish if appropriate.Follow the publication’s guidelines on what to include in the acknowledg-ments section. Some journals permit financial aid to be mentioned in acknowl-edgments, but not meeting references. Some journals put financial aid and meet-ing references together, but not in the acknowledgments section.References In many books and journals, references are placed at the end of the article or chapter; in others, they are treated as footnotes. In any case, place the list of refer-ences at the end of the manuscript.In ACS books and most journals, the style and content of references are stan-dard regardless of where they are located. Follow the reference style presented in Chapter 14.The accuracy of the references is the author’s responsibility. Errors in refer-ences are one of the most common errors found in scientific publications and are a source of frustration to readers. Increasingly, hypertext links are automati-cally generated in Web-based publications, but this cannot be done for referencescontaining errors. If citations are copied from another source, check the original reference for accuracy and appropriate content.✐Reminder: The accuracy of the references is the author’s responsibility.Special SectionsThis discussion on format applies to most manuscripts, but it is not a set of rigid rules and headings. If the paper is well organized, scientifically sound, and appropriate to the publication, adding other sections and subsections may be helpful to readers. For example, an appendix contains material thatD o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 002Chapter 2: Scientific Papers ➤ 25is not critical to understanding the text but provides important background information.Supporting InformationMaterial that may be essential to the specialized reader but not require elab-oration in the paper itself is published as supporting information, usually on the journal’s Web page. Examples of supporting information include large tables, extensive figures, lengthy experimental procedures, mathematical derivations, analytical and spectral characterization data, biological test data for a series, molecular modeling coordinates, modeling programs, crystallographic informa-tion files, instrument and circuit diagrams, and expanded discussions of periph-eral findings.More journals are encouraging this type of publishing to keep printed papers shorter. For ACS journals, supporting information is available immediately by linking to it from the citing paper on the Web. For example, for the article “Vana-dium-Based, Extended Catalytic Lifetime Catechol Dioxygenases: Evidence for a Common Catalyst” by Cindy-Xing Yin and Richard G. Finke in The Journal of the American Chemical Society 2005, 127, 9003–9013, the supporting infor-mation consists of two files, ja051594esi20050517_053152.pdf (453 K) and ja051594erom20050320_064528.cif (24 K).When including supporting information, place a statement to that effect at the end of the paper, using the format specified in the author instructions for the specific journal. For complete instructions on how to prepare this material for publication, check the author instructions for the publication.Web-Enhanced Objects Some publishers, including ACS, have started exploring various Web-based tech-nologies to enhance the way that information in a research article is conveyed. Selected papers in Web editions may contain Web-enhanced objects (WEOs)to supplement a reader’s understanding of the research being reported. These types of files include color figures (including three-dimensional, rotatable fig-ures), chemical structures, animations, spectra, video, and sound files. Links to WEOs will appear in the Web edition of the paper. These objects, although not essential to the understanding of the science, should help to augment a read-er’s understanding of the research being reported. The types of objects suitable for this form of publication should be viewable with commonly available plug-ins (e.g., Chime) or helper applications (e.g., WebLab Viewer, RasMol), which allow viewing and manipulating these objects within the HTML file itself or in a separate window. For example, a figure in the journal article “Orientation and Phase Transitions of Fat Crystals under Shear” by Gianfranco Mazzanti, Sarah E. Guthrie, Eric B. Sirota, Alejandro G. Marangoni, and Stefan H. J. Idziak, inD o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r g P u b l i c a t i o n D a t e : J u n e 1, 2006 | d o i : 10.1021/b k -2006-S T Y G .c h 00226 ➤ The ACS Style GuideCrystal Growth & Design 2003, 3, 721–725, is supplemented by a movie WEO (in .mov format) depicting the time sequence of synchrotron X-ray diffraction pat-terns for the crystallization of cocoa butter in chocolate (see /isubscribe/journals/cgdefu/asap/objects/cg034048a/Mazzantivideouip.mov).As with other types of special information, authors should check the author guidelines for the publication for instructions on how to prepare and submit WEOs.D o w n l o a d e d b y J I N A N U N I V o n A u g u s t 21, 2013 | h t t p ://p u b s .a c s .o r gPublicationDate:June1,26|doi :1.121/bk-26-S TYG.ch2。