湖南省衡阳市2017-2019年三年中考英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

书面表达
2019
D)书面表达。

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根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。

假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。

要求：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。

2. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80.
参考词汇：cover v. 遮盖take the lift 乘坐电梯exit n. 出口towel n. 毛巾
shut off 切断
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2018
51. 书面表达。

假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。

请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。

今天是端午节，请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。

注意：1. 80~100词左右。

2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。

3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail.
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What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular.
The rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.
Overall,the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to，the Dragon Boat Festival，according to，the Chinese calender，dragon boat races，in the southern places，be made of，and so on，different kinds of，in the river，looking forward to等。

而The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes./ He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.等定语从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

2017
D)书面表达。

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中国日报（China Daily）教育版近期举办英语征文竞赛，其主题为构建和谐社区（Harmonious Community）。

假设你是Tony，住在湘江社区，请以How to Create a Harmonious Community为题，谈谈你的看法：
提示词：harmonious：和谐的
要求：1. 短文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、地址、学校等相关信息。

2. 文中应写出自己的补充的三个观点。

3. 书写工整、语句通顺连贯、词数不少于80。

注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community. _________________
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【分析】高分句型一：
First，it's important to create harmonious families．首先，创建和谐家庭是很重要的．考查固定句式it is +adj．to do．
高分句型二：
Second ，as the members in the community，we should be friendly to each other．第二，作为社区的成员，我们应该友好相处．考查短语be friendly to sb．和each other．
【解答】How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony．I live in Xiangjiang Community．
How time flies! I have been here for a few years．I think our community is a
beautiful one，but I hope it will be harmonious．What and how should we do to create it？Here are my ideas．（开篇点题）
First，it's important to create harmonious families（高分句型一）．Children in each family should respect their parents and follow their good advice．When they make decisions，they had better tell their parents their thoughts．When they have time，it is necessary for them to talk with the old in every family．（家人之间的和谐相处）
Second ，as the members in the community，we should be friendly to each other （高分句型二）．once someone is in trouble，others will try their best to help him or her．（邻里之间的和谐相处）
Third，we should get along well with the environment．Therefore，we should take care nd flowers，and don't throw away rubbish everywhere．Then our environment will become better and better．（人与环境的和谐共存）
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．。