英语四级作文讲解(高分必备)

高分必备句式
•1对立观点型
•(1)...has become a hot topic among people recently.
Opinions vary from person to person.Some people are inclined to think that...On the contrary,there are still
many people who won't agree,and they claim...•Those who criticize...argue that...However,people who advocate...on the other hand,maintain that...
•As far as I am concerned,my favor goes to the first/second view.Admittedly,...but it doesn't follow
that...Only if...can we...,just as the saying goes...
・诚然；应当承认；不可否认；公认地£
高分必备句式•(2)When being asked about...different people will offer different answers.It is held by some people that...However,it is also believed by other people that...
•Those who hold the first opinion think that...In contrast,those who hold the second view think that...
•In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we...we should take into consideration all~ aspects of the problems and then make the right decision.之
高分必备句式•(3)As we all know,the general public has been debating whether...is a blessing or a curse. Scientists have made advances in...where... Some people support,saying...Other people oppose...,saying...
•Those in favor of this research believe that...Those opposed to this research argue that...
•Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges. In the first place,...In the second place...On跃when...can we...a
高分必备句式•(4)Nowadays more and more people voice growing concern over....Some people argue that...in that...,while others firmly hold that....•As far as I am concerned,this question should be probed in depth.On the one hand,the first group is not totally correct because not all....On the other hand,the second opinion seems not so satisfactory because we also witness successful examples....
•From that has been discussed above,we can-see clearly that the key lies in whether...,
Otherwise,...no matter whether....
•adv.坚固地；稳固地；坚定地；坚决地
观点对立的应用•Directions:For this part,you are allowed30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should College Students Have a Credit Card?You should write at least150words but no more than 200words.
•1有的人认为大学生应该使用信用卡
•2有的人则认为大学生使用信用卡会带来负面影响•3我的看法
Should College Students Have a Credit Card?•As regards the college students should own credit cards,there has become a hot topic among people recently.Opinions vary from person to person.Some people are inclined to think that owning a credit card can help those students who are in emergency,and also it is a good way for college students to learn how to spend their money and how to be self-restraint.
Should College Students Have a Credit Card?•On the contrary,there are still many people who are against the use of it.First and foremost, college students may sauander their money when having a credit card,with which they may buy something unnecessary such as luxurious clothes or expensive mobile phones.What's more,they will increase the burden of their family.According to a recent survey conducted by Industrial and Commercial Bank of China,a high proportion of45%of college students admit that they have credit-card debt.Parents have to affwet the debt if their children can not pay for it by[ themsselves.f-
.v・挥霍,浪费；驱散，使散开；浪荡，漂泊
Should College Students Have a Credit Card?•As far as I am concerned,the point is not whether we should have a credit card or not,but that as college students,we should maintain our traditional virtue of frugality.And we should spend our money in a wise way.
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高分必备句式・2.说明利弊型
•(1)Nowadays,...is playing a more and more significant role in people's daily life.However,people's opinions are still divided on this point.
•Those who are in favor of...claim that it has a lot of advantages.For one thing...For another...Those who are opposed to...hold that disadvantages are many.On the one hand,...On the other hand...
•By and large,the advantages derived from...far outweigh the disadvantages...entail.
•总的来说，大体而言；大体上；大致如此
•vt・使蒙受，使产生；必须，使承担
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高分必备句式•(2)Few things can be compared with...in terms
of...On the one hand,...On the other hand...•However,just like anything else,there are also disadvantages for...For one thing...For another...
•All in all,we could safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons.The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of...：along with....A brighter future is awaiting us
we make good use of...
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高分必备句式.(3)There is a good side and a bad side to everything,and...are no exception.Generally speaking,the positive aspects could be listed as follows.For one thing,...For another...•However,as every coin has two sidesjhe negative aspects are also obvious.On the one hand,...On the other hand...
•Up until now,we could see it clearly that....The key lies in the user so long as we could make-proper use of it.It can be most helpful to us inr^ many respects.
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高分必备句式•(4)The discussion about...has never stopped in the past few years.Lefs have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.
•The biggest advantage of...What's st but by no means the least.However,the negative effects are also obvious.To begin with,…In the second place,…Finally…•Technically speaking,we could draw the conclusion that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.We have every reason to believe that...will embrace its bright future during the-next decade.W
利弊观点的应用•Directions:For this part,you are allowed30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Online Shopping.You should write at least150words but no more than200 words.
•1现在网络购物盛行
•2有人对网络购物表示支持，也有人反对
The Popularity of Online Shopping •With the rapid advancement of
technology,online shopping is becoming more and more popular,and is playing a more and more significant role in people5s daily life,on this phenomenon,people's opinions are still divided on this point.
The Popularity of Online Shopping •Those who are in favor of online shopping claim that it has a lot of advantages.For one thing,you can quickly choose the goods through online shopping just by clicking on the mouse other than going
outside.Then you only need to wait for its arrival leisurely.For another,the thousands snd millions of commodities-online can satisfy your various needs.=
The Popularity of Online Shopping •Those who are opposed to online shopping hold that disadvantages are many.On the one hand,due to the virtuality of the Internet and the lack of sellers*credit,the quality of online goods is usually hard to be guaranteed.On the other hand,Internet transaction is not secure enough.For example,the password of some people's bank accounts may H leaked out when they shop onliiie.
The Popularity of Online Shopping From my viewpoint,shopping online has a great development space and its
problems can be solved gradually with
the development of our society and technology.
高分必备句式
•3.阐述主题型
•(1)The well-known proverb...has long been accepted by all of us.It tells us that....
•Lets take...as an example...Other examples can also be found to justify the proverb....is a case in point.
•Judging from the examples given above,we may safely come to the conclusion that....So: why not...
高分必备句式•(2)...is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with.This self-evident proverb means that...I fully agree with it and its implication.
•I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of...All reliable data piles up
to show the point that...
•From that has been discussed above,we should understand the meaning of...more clearly.For one thing,...For another...The best way is to；•adj.不证自明的；不言而喻的；显见一
高分必备句式•(3)When we talk of the famous proverb it means that...we should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.
•This proverb is especially true under several situations.For one thing,...for another... Nevertheless,there are also some exceptions,....
•In a word,we could draw the conclusion that in most cases but in certain circumstances,
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高分必备句式•(4)One of our ancient philosophers said)... Chinese people have always been holding their idea to be one of their stands of morality.•History is filled with examples of...in my mind, this proverb can be justified in three respects.•To start with,it takes time to accomplish a task.... Furthermore,.....In the third place,looking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that....食、-
主题阐述的应用•Directions:For this part,you are allowed30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Treasure What We Have by commenting on the
remark'We never know the worth of water till the well is dry".You can cite examples to illustrate your point.You should write at least150 words but no more than200words.
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Treasure What We Have •There is a well-known proverb that"We never know the worth of water till the well is dry".This self-evident proverb means that we often do not treasure what we have got until we kiss them goodbye.Some people spend their entire life running from regrets about what they have lost,but what they should learn to treasure is what they have already got.I fully agree with it and its implication.
Treasure What We Have I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of Helen Keller who was a famous writer.Blind and deaf as she was, Helen made so many miracles and won the admiration of the people around the world for her achievement.In her masterpiece Three Days to See,she expressed her admiration for her friends who had a pair of bright eyes,and hoped her friend would cherish what sfee had.She treasured those three days as-the most important days in life and did so many meaningful things.
Treasure What We Have
•From that has been discussed above,it is said that the biggest deep-rooted bad habits of human nature is that they don't know how to treasure what has been achieved.Actually,we do not need to get too much.lnstead,treasuring what we have owned is the wisest.了
高分必备句式
-4.问题解决型
•(1)With the development of national economy,a worrying social problem also arises....The phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences.First and foremost,....
What makes matters worse,....Finally,if this matter is not properly settled,it will pose a threat to....
•It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly.For one thing,the
government should....For another,...should seize every chance...Finally the mass media should also play
positive role in....
•No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development,it is important that we find a satisfactory"
solution to it in this social transformation era.
高分必备句式•(2)At present,many people take it for granted that...because....Consequently,it is not necessary for us to worry about....
•In fact,the situation has become so serious that every one should be aware of it and take immediate actions......Whafs more,with the development of science and technology,.... Thirdly....屯•We should take urgent measures....On the亍other hand,st but not least,.....
高分必备句式•(3)The recent years have witnessed an
unfavorable social phenomenon-....
•After contemulation and meditation,we can find three possible reasons to account for this trend. For one thing,....For another....
•The solutions to this problem seem more than clear on this occasion......Moreover,st but by no means least,....<
高分必备句式•(4)It is self-evident that the present fast developing society calls for..…If we ever want to...3we must
remember the following advice.
•In the first place,....In the second place,…Only when...can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation.
•The problem is of great importance to anybody at any time and place.If a person refuses to learn cooperation and discipline,how can he enjoy the privilege of higher living quality?■一-n.特权；(因财富和社会地位而仅有部分人享有的)根益;
免责特权；特殊荣幸F三
・vt.给与...特权，特免整
I可题解决的应用•Directions:For this part,you are allowed30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Phenomenon of Empty Nest.You should write at least150words but no more than200words.•1当今的空巢老人逐渐增多
•2出现这种现象的原因
•3如何解决由此带来的问题
The Phenomenon of Empty Nest •The recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon that an increasing number
of old people live by themselves,with their children studying or working away from
home,which refers to the phenomenon of empty nest.According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,the past five years has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of Empty Nest from 7.5%to23.9%.当
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The Phenomenon of Empty Nest •After contemplation and meditation,we can find two possible reasons to account for this trend. For one thing,due to the fierce competition and globalization,many young people have to pursue their career in a remote place.For another,the improvement in economy and housing condition makes it possible for a family to have more than one apartment.Therefore,the young and the oJd live separately.
The Phenomenon of Empty Nest •The solutions to this problem seem more than clear on this occasion.First of all,the government and community should establish clubs to draw the attention of the
elderly,encouraging the old people themselves
to cultivate st but by no means least, the young should always bear in mind to extend their love and care to their parents.:
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•Directions:In this section,you are asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not?Your composition
should be based on the outline given below.Your composition should be at least150words but no more than200words.
Outline:
1.有人赞成个人买车。

2.也有人持相反观点。

3.你的看法。

Should People Own Cars or Not?•There is no denying the fact that it has been a hotly debated topic in China whether people should have their own cars.People's opinions differ sharply on this issue.Some hold the positive view.They say that the car provides the most convenient form of transportation.Besides, a car is a comfortable way to travel,especially in winter.Finally,a driver is usually safe in his car when he is out at night.—
Should People Own Cars or Not?•Others,however,hold the opposite view.They say that there are many disadvantages to own a car.For one thing,it can be very expensive to purchase and run a car.For another,owning a car can also cause worry and stress.It is exhausting to drive a car in heavy traffic.What is worse,cars are responsible for most of the smog in cities,which pollutes the environment seriously.
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Should People Own Cars or Not?
In spite of all the above mentioned,I still favor owning a car.The reason is that the car gives a person the freedom to schedule his own time. Though we are confronted with a problem of energy crisis,I am sure that the real solution will have to be a new kind of car,one that uses cheap,efficient fuel and does not contaminate the air.
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Directions:For this part,you are allowed30 minutes to write a short eaasy entitled it pays to be thrifty by commenting on the remark"The love of thrift is the root of all virtue'You can cite examples to illustrate your point.Your composition should be at least150words but no more than200words.
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It pays to be thrifty •Along with the advance of living standards,many people are no longer interested in the simple life style and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty.ln their eyes,thrift is already out of style.However,just as the saying goes,"The love
■•of thrift is the root of all virtue",thrift is a good virtue that will never be outmodad.
It pays to be thrifty For one thing,practicing thrift can help us form a habit of pinch pennies.With money in hand,we will not only think what we like and what we want,but also consider much about the price of the goods and whether we need it.For another,as we all know,our government is aiming to build an economized society.It is everybody's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As a member of society,we must keep thrift in our minds.In terms of our clothing,fo©< shelter and transport,much work can be done-to save valuable resources such as water and food.
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It pays to be thrifty •In a word,practicing thrift is very necessary and important.Not only it is our traditional virtue,but also it can help us save money and resources.
Many people pose tradition and modernization as diametrically opposite.For instance,as Beijing increasingly becomes a modern
international metropolis,its traditional legacies, architecture and social mores among many other things,are shrinking at an alarming speed.
However,more often than not,tradition and modernization are wholly compatible and may：even be mutually enriching.The modernization^
process only serves to highlight the-indispensable value of tradition.」
•Future-oriented as it is,modernization cannot be cut away from the past.Man is an emotional animal whose emotional attachment to the past defines the meaning of his existence in the present and the future.Although
many urban planners are involved in a reckless drive for developing high-rise buildings to make their cities look modern,true architects are committed to preserving
traditional architecture.This is because demolishing
traditional architecture would render modern people
rootless and disoriented.Without the past serving as a framework of reference,we would not know where we are heading for.
•Being traditional does not mean being old-fashioned or outmoded.Many traditional values are of permanent significance and should be observed in the modern and post-modern eras. Chinese traditional ethics like benevolence and moral integrity should go beyond time and space to serve as universal values.As we strive to modernize our world,we should update and enrich our traditions instead of discarding them altogether.Otherwise,we are being—irresponsible to ourselves or to our future；-generations.宕
Tradition and Modernization •It is true modernization is an irresistible global trend taking place with increasing momentum. However,the best pattern of modernization is the one taking full account of the historical past. Modernization should not be equated with breaking up with the past but rather an
extension and incorporation of the past. Accordingly,human civilization retains its continuity and human existence is made meaningful because of this continuity.
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The end,thank you!。