【英语】初中英语英语书面表达汇编各地方试卷集合汇编及解析

【英语】初中英语英语书面表达汇编各地方试卷集合汇编及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
共享单车为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。

假设你是红星中学九年级学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国最新出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。

请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；2. 这种单车的优势；3. 你对这种单车的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：智能手机smartphone；扫码scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。

Dear Jim,
I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍关于共享单车的一些事情。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗
漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小
写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

2．（·扬州市翠岗中学中考模拟）扬州市“五个一百工程” 英语经典文学（English classics）
阅读正在全市各地各校全面而深入地推进，这提高了扬州学子的人文科学素养，并促进了
他们的终身发展。

某校正在开展中学生是否有必要阅读英文经典文学的大讨论，请根据以
下问题和要求用英语写一篇文章参与讨论。

1. Do you think reading English classics is necessary? Why? （Give 3 reasons）
2. How do you usually take part in the activity of reading English classics? （Give 3 examples, e.g.
take part in the Reading Club, take notes while reading…… ）
3. What’s your advice for the students who are weak in English? （Give 1-2 opinions）
要求 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括问题中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

With the development of the Five One-hundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a
discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. 【答案】With the development of the Five One-hundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has
had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics.
I think reading English classics is not only necessary but also important. First, we can learn a lot
about Western history and culture by reading. Second, by reading classics we can enlarge our
vocabulary and improve our writing. Finally, it can help us with our lifelong learning. So I often
spend my free time reading English classics.
I am in the Reading Club. And I often take notes while re ading. What’s more, I sometimes ask the
teacher for help if I have difficulty reading books.
If some students are weak in English, they can read the short and easy English stories at the very
beginning. Well begun is half done. Next, they should keep reading and never give up. Then their
English will be improved little by little.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求关于某校正在开展中学生是否有必要阅读英文经典文学的大讨论，请根据问
题和要求用英语写一篇文章参与讨论。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然
后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料
中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及
大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
我的英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做
法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。

而感叹句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·海南海口实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
安全对于每个人都很重要。

中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。

请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示：
1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红绿灯等；
2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；
3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳等。

提示词语：
study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,
Travel Safety is very important to everyone.
_______________________________________________________________
【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and veg etables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时，主语是第一人称。

写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。

同时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。

同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等，这为文章增色不少。

在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

5．（·北京中考模拟）中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。

近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。

某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。

提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提示问题：● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last wee k.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。

学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。

句型：被动句型。

6．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
61.针对运用微信投票越来越流行的现象，英语俱乐部就“是否愿意为别人投票选举”这一话题展开来讨论。

请你根据提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not）willing to vote for others” 为题写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，选择你认同的一种观点，并阐述自己的理由。

注意：1. 根据你认同的方式，将标题补充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相应内容，省略号内容必须补充完整
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，词数：80-100
3. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。

I _____ willing to vote for others
Would you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people have
different ideas. ________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【答案】I am willing to vote for others
Would you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.
Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.
In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇是一篇议论文，首先要要题目补充完整，说明自己的观点是赞成还是反对。

文章分为三步走：第一段摆出自己的观点；接下来第二段陈述自己的观点，即说明自己的理由；最后一段对自己的观点进行总结。

本篇文章观点明确，在陈述自己观点时，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很条理性和连贯性。

最后In a word, I think….对自己观点进行最后总结。

非常好的一篇文章。

7．（·陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟）当代雷锋郭明义，在《幸福就这么简单》一书中，用自己的点滴平凡小事诠释出幸福的真谛。

幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来。

那你的幸福观又是什么呢？请以 My Happiness 为题写一篇短文。

内容包括以下方面：
1. 你认为幸福是什么？
2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代时间、地点、过程与感受）。

3. 以自己的感悟揭示：应该如何创造幸福。

写作要求：
1. 短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2. 卷面干净整洁；
3. 词数 80 左右；
4. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

My Happiness
After rea ding Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for
me,____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
【解析】
【详解】
幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来，这篇作文要求写一写自己的幸福观，描述自己对于幸福的定义，描述一件到幸福的事，最后谈谈应该如何创造幸福，要注意叙述流畅，在描述过去的幸福往事的时候要注意正确使用时态，可以使用到的短语表达有：happiness is always around you 幸福总在你身边；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 数学考试成绩很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕见家长；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要帮助；Never give up永不放弃；made up my mind to下定决心去做…；in trouble有困难。

总体来说这篇文章分为三大段，条理清晰，叙述完整，完成了既定的写作任务。

8．（·河北育华中学中考模拟）每个人在成长过程中，都会遇到很所不同的困惑，但为实现梦想我们应该克服困难，解决问题。

现阶段，你有什么困惑吗？请以"My Troubles at Present"为主题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What are your troubles at present?
（2）What will you do to solve these troubles?
要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

My troubles at present
During the process of my growth, I have met different
troubles.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________
【答案】My troubles at present
During the process of my growth, I have met different troubles.I am a teenager and I have a problem just like any other teenager too. I think my problem is relating to "what would I do if I
grow up?". This is something I really have no answer for myself.I am worried about how I do at school. I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don't like.Is there anyone who can help me? I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。

根据提示的内容，请以"My Troubles at Present"为主题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

例文点评：短文先列出自己的烦恼是什么，之后再写如何解决这些烦恼。

词汇、句式要丰富多样，为文章增色添彩。

高分亮点：短语：relate to ；grow up；be worried about ；would like to do sth；find out ；ask for help等。

句式：I think my problem is relating to "what would I do if I grow up?". I think the most difficult question for me is to find out what I like and what I don't like. I think I probably would go to see my teacher and ask for help.用了宾语从句；I am also worried about what my family sees me and other teenagers if they would like to be my friends. 用了宾语从句和条件状语从句。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

9．（·北京中考模拟）“ 业精于勤而荒于嬉，行成于思而毁于随” 。

良好的学习习惯是成功的一半，只有拥有了良好的学习习惯，学习才能得到提高。

某英文网站正在开展以“如何养成良好的学习习惯”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你是怎么做的，以及为什么这样做。

提示词语： get ready for, take notes, on time
提示问题：●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?
●Why do you do so?
As a middle school
student,________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
【答案】
As a middle school student, it's important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：
First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.
Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇提纲式作文。

以“如何养成良好的学习习惯”为主题写一篇英文稿件,主要谈谈自己的好的学习习惯。

在写作时,要根据提出的几个问题为中心围绕展开，再进行适当的延伸。

2. 例文点评：文章采用三段式，以总分总的形式将文章主题描述的清晰明了。

文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的观点，语言层次感很强，表达准确。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。

句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引导的时间状语从句。

10．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。

你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名
4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。

短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。

另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。

但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。

短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。

短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。

全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。

第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。

句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

11．（·福建中考模拟）亲爱的初三同学，考试来临，毕业在即，你遇到了人生路上的转折点，你的生活、学习平添了一些烦恼和压力。

当前正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力非常重要。

请以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。

开头已给出，不计入总词数。

要求：内容完整；书写规范；语法准确；语句通顺连贯。

参考词：stress（压力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help
How to solve our stress
The entrance examination is coming. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these
days.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________
【答案】How to solve our stress?
The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?
First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。

And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。

要求以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。

本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。

根据所给的材料可知本文时态要用一般现在时来写，主语为第一人称，写作时要注意主谓一致的问题。

在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

参考词：stress （压力） , nervous，sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports， help
可以用到的短语有：
take part in 参加；
communicate with sb. 和某人交流；
try one's best to do sth. 尽全力做某事；
too much 太多。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，抓住重点，理顺要点。

草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，使表达内容条理清楚。

在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

12．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
为响应我市“创建国家卫生城市”的号召，6月3日，5000多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态随州——环白云湖健步走”活动。

请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文的意思连贯，语句通顺；2．词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名．
参考词汇：吐痰spit 垃圾箱dustbin 交通拥堵traffic jams 环境environment
As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to h elp build a green city._______
______________________________ ____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________
【答案】As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid
the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbi sh or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also
save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.
【解析】
本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述。

实际上就是要求书写一份倡议
书。

人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。

动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充两条个人的观点。

注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。

高分句型一：
We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通过骑自行车或步行，这样就可以避免交通阻塞，减少空气污染。

and是并列连词，连接的是两个相
同的谓语，by是介词，意思是"通过某组织方式"。

高分句型二：
In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活中，无论我走到哪里，我会捡垃圾，把垃圾放进垃圾箱里。

pick up是固定短语，意思是"
捡起"，put into是固定短语，意思是"放进"wherever引导的是让步状语从句，从句的意思是"无论我到哪里"。

13．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书籍是人类进步的阶梯，是屹立在知识海洋里的灯塔。

英国著名作家培根曾经说过：“阅读使人充实。

”可见阅读在每个人的成长过程中都起着至关重要的
作用。

请以“Reading Is Important for Us”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

要点如下：1. 读书的重要原因；2. 你在生活中是如何阅读的
注意：1. 词数在80~100词之间；2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

【答案】Reading Is Important for Us
There is a famous saying, “Reading makes full man.”
Reading is very important in our life. It can not only improve our happiness of life but also increase our knowledge. It is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language. When I was young, I was interested in reading. So I have been good at writing since my childhood. How to read books? We can do something that follows.
First, we should develop the habit of reading. Second, we must pay much attention to books we choose. Reading books do more good than harm to us. So let’s start reading more from now on!【解析】本文属于话题作文，要表达阅读的重要性。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容词最高级+名词复数, be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给。