如何写建议信写作学案- 高三英语一轮写作专题复习

如何写建议信
写作任务
假定你是李华，你的英国好友Eric近日给你发来邮件表示，由于沉迷于电脑游戏，他感到很苦恼，非常希望得到你的帮助。

请你给他回一封邮件并提出一些建议。

注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、审题定调
该写作任务要求给英国好友Eric回一封电子邮件，就他希望改掉自己沉迷于电脑游戏的坏习惯提出建议，属于建议信。

二、谋篇布局
由于本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出，我们只需要写出正文部分即可。

正文部分可分为三部分：
第一部分：引出话题，说明写信目的；
第二部分：提出合理的建议；
第三部分：希望对方采纳建议。

三、组织语言
第一部分：引出话题，说明写信目的。

普通★I’m sorry to hear that...
表达★I’m writing to give you some suggestions about...
高级★It’s a pity that...
表达★You have asked me for my advice and I will try to make some suggestions.
第二部分：提出合理的建议。

★Reduce the time you spend on...gradually.You’ll find it hard to be away
from...at
普通表达f irst,but as time goes on,you’ll find...are not so important to you and finally get out
of the habit.
★Meet people in person.Talk to your family and friends frequently and take part in
some activities,and you’ll find real life is just as interesting.
★If I were you,I would reduce the time spent on...gradually.Though finding it hard
高级表达t o be away from...at first,as time goes on,you’l l be accustomed to the
life without...
★Why not meet people in person instead of...?You’ll find real life is just as
interesting by talking to your family and friends frequently and taking part in some
activities.
第三部分：希望对方采纳建议。

普通表达I hope you will find my suggestions useful and carry on as normal.
高级表达Hope my suggestions will be practical enough to drag you away from...
范文展示
普通范文
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to playing computer games.I’m writing to give you
some suggestions about your problem.
Firstly,reduce the time you spend on computer games gradually.You’ll find it hard to be
away from the games at first,but as time goes on,you’ll find games are not so important to you
and finally get out of the habit.
Besides,meet people in person.Talk to your family and friends frequently and take part in
some activities,and you’ll find real life is just as interesting.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Li Hua
高级范文
Dear Eric,
It’s a pity that you are addicted to playing computer games.You have asked me for my
advice and I will try to make some suggestions.
To begin with,if I were you,I would reduce the time spent on computer games
gradually.
Though finding it hard to be away from the games at first,as time goes on,you’ll be accustomed
to the life without games.
Besides,why not meet people in person instead of staying in the virtual world?
You’ll find
real life is just as interesting by talking to your family and friends frequently and taking part in
some activities.
Hope my suggestions will be practical enough to drag you away from the world of computer
games.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展建议信的常用表达：
表明写作意图：
It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice on...
I am writing to express my views concerning...
I’m sorry(that)you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in...
Here are a few suggestions about...
Considering...,I would like to make some suggestions/advice.
提出建议并阐述理由：
I would like to suggest that...
It is necessary/important...
It seems to me that you could...
It would be better/a good idea if...
Firstly/First/First of all...Secondly/stly/Last but not least...结尾：
I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration.
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/advice...
I hope my suggestions will...
I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful/practical...。