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Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 怎样的观点“正确”？ 怎样写顺手？
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Problem + Reasons + Solution
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分数构成
Overall=40%×task1 + 60% × task2
That is to say… Task1: 8 Task2: 3 Overall=3.2+1.8=5
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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
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The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. .
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Nuclear 1% Hydro 16% Natural Gas 24% Coal 47% Oil 12%
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The line chart illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6 am to 10pm.
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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
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The table demonstrates the data regarding the subway system in six cities, including date opened, kilometers of route and passengers per year (in millions)
In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year: one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing.
Systems in Paris and Tokyo are opened in 1900 and 1927, respectively. 时间顺序
After that, systems in Washington DC and Kyoto are opened in 1976 and 1981 differently.
Teenagers like hamburger more than pizza.
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From the chart, in 1979, grams per person per week`s maximum was 225, beef. The minimum was 70 ,fish.
225 grams beef were eaten by a single people on a daily basis, which is the most popular choice. On the contrary, the minimum consumption was fish, at 70 grams.
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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 剑6 P52
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先相减/相除，后分组 哪些是增加，哪些是减少 幅度大的与幅度小的分组
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线图 派图
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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Test taker performance 20XX
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Hale Waihona Puke .1.3 中国大陆考区总体情况7
雅思写作授课大纲 《新东方雅思写作基础教材》 《剑桥系列》
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动脑+动笔 没有理解，练习亦是枯燥 没有练习，理解亦是空白 课堂互动+作业提交
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1.4.1 数据类图表题 1.4.1 非数据类图表题
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增加的 Car, Long distance bus, Train, Taxi 幅度大的 Car +1607 减少的 Walking, Bicycle, Local bus 幅度大的 Local bus -155
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The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000.
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1.1 课程目标 1.2 课程安排 1.3 授课理念 1.4 小作文基本情况 1.5 大作文基本情况 1.6 分数计算 1.7 答题纸 1.8 书写格式 1.9 雅思写作评分标准说明
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1.1.1 官方信息来源 1.1.2 全球三大考区总体情况 1.1.3 中国大陆考区总体情况
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12 words per line Task 1 13 lines page1-2 Task 2 20 lines page3-4 见好就收
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Task Response 是否涵盖要点；是否切题、合理 Coherence and Cohesion 句语句、段与段的衔接 Lexical Resources 用词的准确性和灵活性 Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法多样性和准确性
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39/48 81% Line 5 Pie 8 Bar 13 Table 12 Combination 1
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9/48 19% Map Diagram Flow
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1.5.1 议论类 1.5.2 说明类
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Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
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The graph above show information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
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As for the size of the railway system, London still ranks the first, meaning it has the longest subway system (384 kilometers) among the six cities, which is roughly twice as large as the system in Paris. （最长）
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In terms of date opened, London has the most time-honored (1863) subway system among the six cities while subway system in Los Angeles is the newest one opened in 2001. （最老，最新）
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The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and others.
Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000.
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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
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数据类图表为主导 派图：占有 线图：趋势，速度 柱图：比对 表格：数据分析
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Pizza is the most popular fast food among American teenagers.
Systems in Los Angeles’s and Kyoto’s carry fewer passengers per year (50 and 45, respectively).
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Thus, it can be clearly seen from the table that the subway systems in Tokyo and Paris serves for more passengers whereas the systems in Los Angeles and Kyoto carry fewer passengers mainly because of the short route.
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The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
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The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.
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The third part is passengers per year in millions.
More exactly, the top three are Tokyo (1927), Paris (1191) and London (775).
Underground railway system in Washington DC’s has 144 millions passengers per year.
By contrast, subway system in Kyoto is shorter (11 kilometers) than the others even thought it opened in relatively recent year. （最短）
The kilometers of route in Tokyo, Washington DC and Los Angeles are 155, 126 and 28 differently.
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Problem + Reasons + Solution
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分数构成
Overall=40%×task1 + 60% × task2
That is to say… Task1: 8 Task2: 3 Overall=3.2+1.8=5
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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
73
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The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. .
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1970
Nuclear 1% Hydro 16% Natural Gas 24% Coal 47% Oil 12%
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The line chart illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6 am to 10pm.
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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
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119
120
121
122
123
age
size
number
124
The table demonstrates the data regarding the subway system in six cities, including date opened, kilometers of route and passengers per year (in millions)
In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year: one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing.
Systems in Paris and Tokyo are opened in 1900 and 1927, respectively. 时间顺序
After that, systems in Washington DC and Kyoto are opened in 1976 and 1981 differently.
Teenagers like hamburger more than pizza.
53
From the chart, in 1979, grams per person per week`s maximum was 225, beef. The minimum was 70 ,fish.
225 grams beef were eaten by a single people on a daily basis, which is the most popular choice. On the contrary, the minimum consumption was fish, at 70 grams.
129
The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 剑6 P52
130
先相减/相除，后分组 哪些是增加，哪些是减少 幅度大的与幅度小的分组
105
106
线图 派图
107
108
The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Test taker performance 20XX
5
6
Hale Waihona Puke .1.3 中国大陆考区总体情况7
雅思写作授课大纲 《新东方雅思写作基础教材》 《剑桥系列》
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动脑+动笔 没有理解，练习亦是枯燥 没有练习，理解亦是空白 课堂互动+作业提交
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1.4.1 数据类图表题 1.4.1 非数据类图表题
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增加的 Car, Long distance bus, Train, Taxi 幅度大的 Car +1607 减少的 Walking, Bicycle, Local bus 幅度大的 Local bus -155
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The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000.
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1.1 课程目标 1.2 课程安排 1.3 授课理念 1.4 小作文基本情况 1.5 大作文基本情况 1.6 分数计算 1.7 答题纸 1.8 书写格式 1.9 雅思写作评分标准说明
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1.1.1 官方信息来源 1.1.2 全球三大考区总体情况 1.1.3 中国大陆考区总体情况
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/researchers/analysis_of_ test_data/test_taker_performance_20XX.aspx
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12 words per line Task 1 13 lines page1-2 Task 2 20 lines page3-4 见好就收
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Task Response 是否涵盖要点；是否切题、合理 Coherence and Cohesion 句语句、段与段的衔接 Lexical Resources 用词的准确性和灵活性 Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法多样性和准确性
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39/48 81% Line 5 Pie 8 Bar 13 Table 12 Combination 1
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9/48 19% Map Diagram Flow
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1.5.1 议论类 1.5.2 说明类
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Discuss both views and give your own opinion
115
The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
116
The graph above show information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
126
As for the size of the railway system, London still ranks the first, meaning it has the longest subway system (384 kilometers) among the six cities, which is roughly twice as large as the system in Paris. （最长）
125
In terms of date opened, London has the most time-honored (1863) subway system among the six cities while subway system in Los Angeles is the newest one opened in 2001. （最老，最新）
134
The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and others.
Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000.
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交点难掌控 图内对比看不出
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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
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数据类图表为主导 派图：占有 线图：趋势，速度 柱图：比对 表格：数据分析
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关注公共邮箱
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Pizza is the most popular fast food among American teenagers.
Systems in Los Angeles’s and Kyoto’s carry fewer passengers per year (50 and 45, respectively).
128
Thus, it can be clearly seen from the table that the subway systems in Tokyo and Paris serves for more passengers whereas the systems in Los Angeles and Kyoto carry fewer passengers mainly because of the short route.
101
The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
102
The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.
103
104
127
The third part is passengers per year in millions.
More exactly, the top three are Tokyo (1927), Paris (1191) and London (775).
Underground railway system in Washington DC’s has 144 millions passengers per year.
By contrast, subway system in Kyoto is shorter (11 kilometers) than the others even thought it opened in relatively recent year. （最短）
The kilometers of route in Tokyo, Washington DC and Los Angeles are 155, 126 and 28 differently.