8. 高考英语作文之美化句子训练.我的作文讲义

高考英语作文之美化句子训练------之改写例文
运用高级词汇或表达形式改写下列句子：
1.Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.
Suddenly a good idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
All at once, a good idea struck me that someone had broken into my house.
2.He spends all his spare time in reading.
He devotes all his spare time to reading.
Reading takes up all his spare time.
3.They wanted to hide themselves behind the trees.
They sought / attempted / intended to hid themselves behind the trees.
4.I’m an ordinary student.
I’m an average student.
5.The film we saw last night was very interesting.
The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.
The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
6.On his way to school, he found an old lady sitting by the road, looking worried.
On his way to school, he found an old lady seated by the road, looking worried.
7.He should have driven more slowly.
He is supposed to have driven more slowly.
8.Thank you very much for your help.
Thank you very much for helping me.
I am very grateful / thankful to you for your help/ for helping me.
9.As soon as he arrived, he began his research..
Hardly had he arrived when he got down to (doing) his research.
No sooner had he arrived than he set about doing his research.
On his arrival, he set about doing his research.
The moment he arrived, he set about doing his research.
10.He arrived late because of the storm.
He arrived late as a result of / owing to / thanks to / as a consequence of / on account of the storm.
As a result of / owing to / thanks to / as a consequence of / on account of the storm, he arrived late.
As a result of / owing to / thanks to / as a consequence of / on account of the fact that there was a storm, he arrived late.
The reason why he was late was that there was a storm.
It was because of the storm that he was late.
The storm accounted for his being late.
11.After walking ten miles, we all felt tired.
After covering ten miles, we all felt tired.
We all felt tired as a result of walking ten miles.
We covered ten miles before we felt tired.
Having walked ten miles, we all felt tired.
12.Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.
Undoubtedly, plenty of memory work is helpful to English study.
Undoubtedly, plenty of memory work is of great help to English study.
Undoubtedly, plenty of memory work benefits English study.
There is no doubt that plenty of memory work contributes to English study.
13.The summer vacation is coming. Do you have any plan?
The summer vacation is approaching. Do you have any plan?
Do you have any plan for the approaching / coming summer vacation?
Do you have anything in mind for the approaching summer vacation?
The summer vacation is around the corner / on its way. Do you have anything in mind?
14.Li Ming studies in a school nearby.
Li Ming studies in a school around the corner.
15.The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels.
The family were wild with joy when they discovered the lost jewels.
The family were wild with joy to discover the lost jewels.
On discovering the lost jewels, the whole family jumped with joy.
The moment / immediately they discovered the lost jewels, the whole family jumped with joy.
16.Jack is very clever. He often thinks of new ideas.
Jack is so clever that he often comes up with / brings forth new ideas.
More often than not, Jack is so clever as to come up with / bring forth new ideas.
So clever is Jack that he often comes up with / brings forth new ideas.
Being clever, Jack often comes up with / brings forth new ideas.
17.Some students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
In some students opinion, they are supposed to save / set aside / spare some of their pocket money for books.
In the opinion of some students, they are supposed to save / set aside / spare some of their pocket money for books.
18.The products are very good and are sold everywhere in China.
The products are of high quality and sold everywhere in China.
The products are sold everywhere in China as a result of their high quality.
It is because of their high quality that the products are sold all over China.
The reason why the products are sold everywhere in China is that they are of high quality.
19.The professor you talked about is very famous.
The professor you referred to is very famous / well-known.
The professor you mentioned is very famous / well-known.
20.I had to go home.
It is time I went home / should go home.
ually, the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.
Usually / More often than not, the meaning of many words can be easily brought to light.
22.I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it.
I wrote down his telephone number in case I should forget it.
I wrote down his telephone number before I forgot it.
I wrote down his telephone number so that I would no t forget it.
In order to avoid forgetting them , I wrote down his telephone number.
23.I want to see you very much.
I am eager / anxious / longing to see you .
I am dying / thirsty for seeing you.
I can’t wait to see you. I expect to see you.
I look forward to seeing you.
24.He is interested in collecting stamps.
He is crazy / mad about collecting stamps.
Collecting stamps is his hobby.
He is addicted to collecting stamps.
25.I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.
I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.
Knowing you are coming in September, I’m more than glad./ I am very excited.
If I can do something for you, I will be happy to help.
It there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
26.He speaks good English. He speaks English very well.
He speaks perfect /fluent English.
He speaks English perfectly./ fluently.
27.Can you help me to turn down the radio?
Would you please do me the favor to turn down the radio?
I would appreciate it if you could turn down the radio.
28.A few days ago my brother and I went to the cinema by bike.
The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.
29.During the mountain-climbing, please help each other and take care.
In the course of / During the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.
30.Most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.
The majority of / most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.
31.There are 50 students in our class.
Our class consists of 50 students.
Our class is made up of 50 students.
32.After five hours’ work, we were all tired.
After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out / tired.
33.I have to look after my sister.
Having worked five hours on end, we were all exhausted.
34.I’ll try to persuade him as long as you invite me to dinner.
I’ll try my best to persuade him on condition that you invite / treat me to dinner.
35.He was very satisfied with the arrangement.
He was more than satisfied with the arrangement.
36.Sometimes he will bring me flowers.
Many a time he will bring me flowers.
37.In fact, he does not often write me a letter.
As a matter of fact / in reality/ in practice, he seldom write me a letter/ drop me a line.
38.To our great surprise, his English becomes better.
Surprisingly , his English improves.
Much to our surprise, his English improves.
39.Thanks for your present. I like it very much.
I have never received a better present than yours.
40.Please come to visit us when you are free.
Drop in on us if it is convenient for you.
43. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.
Follow by many students , she walked out of the lab.
44. The bell is ringing now.
There goes the bell.
45. Everyone should do his or her best.
Everyone is supposed to devote themselves.
改变句式转译下列句子：
1.The bell is ringing now. (一般)
There goes the bell!
2.People suggest that the conference be put off.
It is suggested that the conference be put off.
3.He is so kind that he can help me /
He is so kind as to help me.
4.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.
Followed by many students , she walked out of the lab.
She walked out of the lab with many students following her.
5.Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.
Once seen, it can never be forgotten.
6.When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.
On arriving / his arrival, please give me an e-mail.
7.If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow.
Weather permitting, I will come tomorrow.
8.It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up.
The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody.
What disappointed everybody was that he didn’t turn up.
The reason why everybody was disappointed was that he didn’t turn up .
9.I happened to have met him. / It happened that I had met him.
10.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
11.The girl is spoken highly of . Her composition was well written.
The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.
The girl is spoken highly of because her composition was well written. 12.I won’t believer what he says.
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. / I will believe nothing he says.
13.If you come back before six o’clock, you can go out.
You can go out on condition that you come back before six o’clock.
You can go out provided / providing that you return before six o’clock.
14.if she doesn’t agree, what shall we do?
Supposing that she doesn’t agree, what shall we do?
15.I’m ill. I can’t go to school tomorrow.
I’m ill so I can’t go to school tomorrow.
I’m ill. That’s the reason why I can’t go to school tomorrow.
What I want to tell you is that I’m ill and I can’t go to school tomorrow.
The reason for my absence from school tomorrow is that I’m ill.
16.He speaks English so fast, and I am surprised.
So fast does he speak English that I am surprised.
He speaks English so fast, which is a surprise to me.
How fast he speaks English, which is a surprise to me.
What a fast English speaker he is! It does surprise me.
It is surprising to me that he (should) speak such fast English.
17.He had to obey the order.
He could do nothing but obey the order.
He had no choice but to obey the order.
There was nothing left for him to do but obey the order.
All he had to do was obey the order.
18.Chaplin is know as one of the funniest actors.
Chaplin is considered to be one of the funniest actors.
Chaplin is regarded as one of the funniest actors.
Chaplin is known as one of the funniest actors.
Chaplin is looked on as one of the funniest actors.
19.I am interested in classical music.
I am into classical music.
20.His coming late made me very angry.
That he came late made me very angry.
He came late, which made me very angry.
I was very angry at his coming late.
21.A terrible earthquake happened in Japan a few days ago.
A terrible earthquake hit Tangshan several years ago.
A terrible earthquake took place in Tangshan several years ago.
A terrible earthquake struck Tangshan several years ago.
22.He went to Shanghai to find a good job.
He set off for Shanghai in the hope of finding a good job there.
He started off for Shanghai in the hope that he could find a good job there.
He started out for Shanghai hoping to find a good job there.
He started for Shanghai hoping that he could find a good job there.
23.The question is really difficult to understand
The question is beyond my understanding.
24.I decide to study hard.]
I made a decision to study hard. / I am determined to devote to my study.
25. While he was walking the dog, the man happened to meet an old friend.
Walking the dog, the man came across/ ran into an old friend of his.
While walking the dog, the man met an old friend of his by chance.
26. I am in Class 1, Grade 3. Our class is a big family.
27. If weather permits , I will come tomorrow.
Weather permitting, I will come tomorrow.
28. We couldn’t leave until we finished the whole project.
Only after we finished the whole project could we leave.
29. My brother was riding a bike and I sat at the back of it.
My brother was riding a bike with me sitting/ seated at the back of it.
30. Many students have the ability to learn by themselves. They can learn what they need at anytime.
It will save more time for them to learn more.（零散的三个句子）
31. 三亚是一个小城市，有60万人口。

Sanya is a small city and it has a population of 600,000.
Sanya is a small city which has a population of 600,000
Sanya is a small city whose population is 600,000.
Sanya is a city with a population of 600,000.
32. A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide.
A pretty girl was crossing a wide road.
33. In the middle of the road, the girl stopped to look at her skirt. She was silly. She looked at her new skirt.
In the middle of the road, the silly girl stopped to look at her new skirt.
34. A truck turned round the corner. The truck turned suddenly. The truck was big.
Suddenly, a big truck turned round the corner
35. A woman on the sidewalk let out a scream. The woman was terrified. The scream was loud.
A terrified woman on the sidewalk let out a loud scream
36. The scream woke the girl up. The scream was loud. The girl was absent-minded.
The loud scream woke up the absent-minded girl
38.They walked down the street. They saw a robber.
Walking down the street, they saw a robber
39. He took a large paint brush. He began the task of painting the house.
Taking a large paint brush, he began the task of painting the house
40. The farmers get very thirsty. They work under the hot sun.
Working under the hot sun, the farmers get very thirsty
41. We followed a dirt track. We came to an old gold mine.
Following a dirt track, we came to an old gold mine
42. Y ou can find some very unusual plants. You walk through the bush.
Walking through the bush, you can find some very unusual plants.
用高级词汇和结构改写句子
第一组：
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.
2. We all think he is a great man.
We all think highly of him .
3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
4. The students there needn’t pay for their books.
Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure.
The plan turned out a failure.
6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music.
She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt
9. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
10. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
第二组：
1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.
On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）
I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.
6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
Singing and laughing, they went back to school.
8. I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句）
No matter what he says, I won’t believe.
9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.
10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad
第三组：让语段鲜活起来：
A Traffic Accident
1. A traffic accident happened yesterday. A truck knocked a car over at the second turning. Four people died and several injured. The driver had too much wine. When he drove, he felt dizzy. He couldn't control the truck. The accident delayed the traffic. It caused an economic damage of one billion yuan. The government warned the drivers to learn a lesson from the accident. (64)
2. A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. In the middle of the road, the girl stopped to look at her skirt. She was silly. She looked at her new skirt. A truck turned round the corner. The truck turned suddenly. The truck was big. A woman on the sidewalk let out a scream. The woman was terrified. The scream was loud. The scream woke the girl up. The scream was loud. The girl was absent-minded. The truck stopped just in front of the girl. The girl was frightened.
3. An old man was standing by the door. The conductor asked the young man to give his seat to the old man. The young man pretended to have fallen asleep. I felt sorry for the old man and angry with the young man. The young man should be ashamed of himself and learn to respect old people.
4. Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! ①This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ②It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
你是李华，申请到一外企工作。

对方要求你用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的基本情况。

李华，1993年2月出生在大连，学历：1999-2005光明小学；2005-2008大连市第六中学，
主要课程：语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑。

特长：英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）。

业余爱好：游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐。

My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in February 1993. I started school in 1999 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1999 to 2005. After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated in2008.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I likeEnglish and computer best and I am very good at st year I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
请用多种形式翻译下面语段：
我的语文老师名字叫李华，今年35岁，182高。

他喜欢音乐，也爱好体育。

他出生于河北石家庄市。

同学们都很尊敬他。

第三组：让语段鲜活起来：（参考语段）
A terrible traffic accident happened in a downtown street yesterday. A speeding truck knocked a car over at the second turning of the main street. As a result, four people were killed and several injured. It was soon found out that the truck driver had had too much wine before driving. While driving, he felt dizzy and couldn't control the truck. The accident delayed all the traffic for an hour. and caused an economic damage of one billion yuan. The city government warned all the drivers to learn a lesson from the accident. (93)
A pretty girl was crossing a wide road. In the middle of the road, the silly girl stopped to look at her new skirt. Suddenly, a big truck turned round the corner. A terrified woman on the sidewalk let out a loud scream. The loud scream woke up the absent-minded girl. The truck stopped just in front of the frightened girl.
The bus was not crowded. When I got on it, I saw an old man standing by the door.Then I heard the bus conductor asking a young man to give his seat to the old man. But he did not move. I could see that he pretended to have fallen asleep.So I felt sorry for the old man and angry with the young man .I thought the young man should be ashamed of himself and learn to respect old people.
①This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much better life than before on a new look.
我的语文老师李华译文：
1. Born in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province, our respected Chinese teacher Li Hua, 35 years old, 182 cm tall, is crazy about music and sports.
2. Crazy about both music and sports, our 35-year-old Chinese teacher Li Hua, 182cm, was born in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province and is respected by all the students in our class.
3. Li Hua, our respected Chinese teacher, 35 years old, was born in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province, who is 182 cm tall and crazy about music and sports.
4.Respected by all the students in our class, our Chinese teacher Li Hua, 182cm tall and 35 years old, is crazy about music as well as sports , who was born in Shijiazhuang Hebei province.
5. Our respected 35-year-old Chinese teacher Li Hua, who is 182 cm in height and crazy about both music and sports, was born in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province.
6. Born in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province, our 35-year-old Chinese teacher Li Hua, 182cm, is crazy about music as well as sports，Who is respected by all the students in our class.。