2021届全国卷高考英语书面表达专项突破-感谢信
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which I will never forget. 请接收我真挚的感谢,我 会永远铭记你的帮助。
范文欣赏:假如你是李华,你的朋友 Jack在你生日的时候送你一个MP3作 为一生日礼物,请你表达一下你的感 谢。
Dear Jack,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for the mp3 you sent to me as my birthday gift last Sunday.
6. many →much因为homework是不可数名 词,故要用much修饰。 7. makes →made根据前面的时间状语at one time(曾经一度)可知此处要用过去时。 8. warning前的a → the此处是特指。 9. encourage →encouragement形容词性物主 代词后接名词。
I am looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical birthday gift.
常用语块 1. 非常感谢……Th__a_n_k_y_o_u__v_e_r_y_m__u_c_h_f_o_r… 2. 写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意
3. 你太好了,假期照顾我弟弟。
3. It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.
4. 请再次接受我诚挚的谢意。
4. Please accept my sincere appreciation again.
感谢信
文体特点:感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式, 当收到别人赠送的礼物,得到别人的帮助,收到 别人的慰问时,都应该表示感谢。感谢信最主要 的特点是真诚,其次要具体,着重于具体的感谢 事由。
写作步骤
一、定人称。定时态
1、人称:常用第一人称
2.时态:表达感激之情用一般现在时态,提到对方 的帮助时用用过去时态。
I am writing t_o_e_x_p_r_e_s_s_m_y__t_h_a_n_k_s_f_o_r… 3. 请接受我诚挚的谢意……
Please accept my__s_in_c_e_r_e_a_p_p_r_e_c_i_a_ti_o_n_f_or… 4. 我真的很感激你……
I am tr_u_ly__g_r_a_te_f_u_l_t_o_y_o_u__f_o_r…_ 5. 你真好…… It w_a_s__r_e_a_ll_y_k_i_n_d__o_f _y_o_u_t_o…
encouragement
more and more of your student could go to their ideal colleges. students
Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua
1. exciting →excited因为主语是人,故用 excited。 2. 去掉dreamed about后的it因为which在该 定语从句中充当宾语,故about后无须再接it。 3. which →when因为在该定语从句(you taught me English)中的成分已完整,故只能 用关系副词引导,故用when。 4. have →has主语是第三人称单数,故用has。 5. 在because后加of后面是名词短语,故要加 of。
t_o_l_er_a_n_t__a_n_d_g_e_n_e_r_o_u_s_
套用句式 1. 非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。
1. Thank you very much for the gift you sent me.
2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口 语的谢意。
2. I am writing to express my thanks for (your) helping me improve my spoken English.
5. 我谨借此机会感谢您给பைடு நூலகம்我们的及时支持和帮 助。
5. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.
习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文) Dear Mr. Li,
I’m very exciting to write to express my thanks
excited
to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreamed about it. Mr. Li, I still
3.结尾段:再次表达感激之情
常用表达 Thank you again for your generous help. 再次感谢你的慷慨相助。 Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me . Please accept my sincere thanks for your help,
How considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday. It’s one of the most wonderful gifts I’ve ever got and I like it very much. You have a positive genius for selecting the right gift! The four years I spent with you at university has always been the most pleasant period in my life. I will cherish this memory forever. How nice it would be to see you again!
Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
I’m writing this letter to thank you for With deepest gratitude I write to you this letter for … 带着我深深的感激我给你写信
2主体段:具体描述对方给予的帮 助
常用表达:
If it hadn’t been for your help, I wouldn’t have…
thanks to/due t_o_/b_e_c_a_u_se__o_f _y_ou_r__en_c_o_u_ragement 13. 无私的奉献
selfless ded_i_ca_t_i_o_n_/d_e_v_o_t_i_o_n_/c_o_n_t_ribution 14. 对某人有耐心
be patient with_s_b_._/_h_a_v_e_m_u_c_h__p_at_i_en_c_e with sb. 15. 宽容的和大方的
It was you who helped me out of trouble. It was your kind help that 是你的热情帮助…
It was so kind of you to treat me as your best friend.
But for your sincere assistance, I wouldn’t have…
remember the days which you taught me English.
when
My English have been improved greatly
has
because your creative work. However, at one of
∨
time, the pressure of examinations, too many much
homework and the high expectations makes
me depressed.
made
I was tired of a warning that if I didn’t do the
my best, I wouldn’t have a chance to go to college. Thanks for your encourage, I wish
1. 梦想成真,考上理想大学。 2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励,英语由差变好。 3. 对老师表示祝福。 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Wang, Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!
二、文章框架
三段式结构 首段:直接具体地表明感谢的事由 经典起始句 Thank you so much for… 非常感谢。。 I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart
for… 我由衷地感谢你 I truly appreciate your … 我真诚感谢你 Words fail to convey my gratitude to you 我对你的感激之情难以用语言表达
6. 我真诚地感激…… I _s_in__c_e_r_e_ly__a_p_p_r_e_c_i_a_t_e_…_
7. 我想表达我对……的谢意
I wish to express _m__y_a_p__p_r_e_c_ia__ti_o_n__f_o_r_…_
8. 我谨代表我全家,我想……
On behalf of my whol_e_f_a_m__il_y_, _I_w_o_u_l_d__li_k_e_t_o_…
10. student →students根据前面的more and more和后面的their可知要用复数。
课堂练习
假定你是李华,现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王 老师的帮助下,英语进步很大,为表示感谢,给王 老师写一封感谢信。要点如下:
9. 我真诚希望…… I _s_in__c_e_r_e_ly__h_o_p_e__t_h_a_t_…__
10. 没有你的帮助,我就不会……
Without y_o__u_r_h__e_lp_,__I_w__o_u_l_d_n_’_t_…_
11. 在某人的帮助下
with one_’_s_h_e_lp__/_w__it_h_t_h_e__h_e_lp_ of sb. 12. 由于你的鼓励
I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.
范文欣赏:假如你是李华,你的朋友 Jack在你生日的时候送你一个MP3作 为一生日礼物,请你表达一下你的感 谢。
Dear Jack,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for the mp3 you sent to me as my birthday gift last Sunday.
6. many →much因为homework是不可数名 词,故要用much修饰。 7. makes →made根据前面的时间状语at one time(曾经一度)可知此处要用过去时。 8. warning前的a → the此处是特指。 9. encourage →encouragement形容词性物主 代词后接名词。
I am looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical birthday gift.
常用语块 1. 非常感谢……Th__a_n_k_y_o_u__v_e_r_y_m__u_c_h_f_o_r… 2. 写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意
3. 你太好了,假期照顾我弟弟。
3. It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.
4. 请再次接受我诚挚的谢意。
4. Please accept my sincere appreciation again.
感谢信
文体特点:感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式, 当收到别人赠送的礼物,得到别人的帮助,收到 别人的慰问时,都应该表示感谢。感谢信最主要 的特点是真诚,其次要具体,着重于具体的感谢 事由。
写作步骤
一、定人称。定时态
1、人称:常用第一人称
2.时态:表达感激之情用一般现在时态,提到对方 的帮助时用用过去时态。
I am writing t_o_e_x_p_r_e_s_s_m_y__t_h_a_n_k_s_f_o_r… 3. 请接受我诚挚的谢意……
Please accept my__s_in_c_e_r_e_a_p_p_r_e_c_i_a_ti_o_n_f_or… 4. 我真的很感激你……
I am tr_u_ly__g_r_a_te_f_u_l_t_o_y_o_u__f_o_r…_ 5. 你真好…… It w_a_s__r_e_a_ll_y_k_i_n_d__o_f _y_o_u_t_o…
encouragement
more and more of your student could go to their ideal colleges. students
Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua
1. exciting →excited因为主语是人,故用 excited。 2. 去掉dreamed about后的it因为which在该 定语从句中充当宾语,故about后无须再接it。 3. which →when因为在该定语从句(you taught me English)中的成分已完整,故只能 用关系副词引导,故用when。 4. have →has主语是第三人称单数,故用has。 5. 在because后加of后面是名词短语,故要加 of。
t_o_l_er_a_n_t__a_n_d_g_e_n_e_r_o_u_s_
套用句式 1. 非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。
1. Thank you very much for the gift you sent me.
2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口 语的谢意。
2. I am writing to express my thanks for (your) helping me improve my spoken English.
5. 我谨借此机会感谢您给பைடு நூலகம்我们的及时支持和帮 助。
5. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.
习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文) Dear Mr. Li,
I’m very exciting to write to express my thanks
excited
to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreamed about it. Mr. Li, I still
3.结尾段:再次表达感激之情
常用表达 Thank you again for your generous help. 再次感谢你的慷慨相助。 Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me . Please accept my sincere thanks for your help,
How considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday. It’s one of the most wonderful gifts I’ve ever got and I like it very much. You have a positive genius for selecting the right gift! The four years I spent with you at university has always been the most pleasant period in my life. I will cherish this memory forever. How nice it would be to see you again!
Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
I’m writing this letter to thank you for With deepest gratitude I write to you this letter for … 带着我深深的感激我给你写信
2主体段:具体描述对方给予的帮 助
常用表达:
If it hadn’t been for your help, I wouldn’t have…
thanks to/due t_o_/b_e_c_a_u_se__o_f _y_ou_r__en_c_o_u_ragement 13. 无私的奉献
selfless ded_i_ca_t_i_o_n_/d_e_v_o_t_i_o_n_/c_o_n_t_ribution 14. 对某人有耐心
be patient with_s_b_._/_h_a_v_e_m_u_c_h__p_at_i_en_c_e with sb. 15. 宽容的和大方的
It was you who helped me out of trouble. It was your kind help that 是你的热情帮助…
It was so kind of you to treat me as your best friend.
But for your sincere assistance, I wouldn’t have…
remember the days which you taught me English.
when
My English have been improved greatly
has
because your creative work. However, at one of
∨
time, the pressure of examinations, too many much
homework and the high expectations makes
me depressed.
made
I was tired of a warning that if I didn’t do the
my best, I wouldn’t have a chance to go to college. Thanks for your encourage, I wish
1. 梦想成真,考上理想大学。 2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励,英语由差变好。 3. 对老师表示祝福。 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Wang, Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!
二、文章框架
三段式结构 首段:直接具体地表明感谢的事由 经典起始句 Thank you so much for… 非常感谢。。 I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart
for… 我由衷地感谢你 I truly appreciate your … 我真诚感谢你 Words fail to convey my gratitude to you 我对你的感激之情难以用语言表达
6. 我真诚地感激…… I _s_in__c_e_r_e_ly__a_p_p_r_e_c_i_a_t_e_…_
7. 我想表达我对……的谢意
I wish to express _m__y_a_p__p_r_e_c_ia__ti_o_n__f_o_r_…_
8. 我谨代表我全家,我想……
On behalf of my whol_e_f_a_m__il_y_, _I_w_o_u_l_d__li_k_e_t_o_…
10. student →students根据前面的more and more和后面的their可知要用复数。
课堂练习
假定你是李华,现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王 老师的帮助下,英语进步很大,为表示感谢,给王 老师写一封感谢信。要点如下:
9. 我真诚希望…… I _s_in__c_e_r_e_ly__h_o_p_e__t_h_a_t_…__
10. 没有你的帮助,我就不会……
Without y_o__u_r_h__e_lp_,__I_w__o_u_l_d_n_’_t_…_
11. 在某人的帮助下
with one_’_s_h_e_lp__/_w__it_h_t_h_e__h_e_lp_ of sb. 12. 由于你的鼓励
I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.