读后续写Nupur篇课件高一英语作文复习专项
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3. 写作风格
哪些细节描 心理；动作；语言；表情；环境 写为主？
Байду номын сангаас
PA R T 3
细读首句，构思框架
两段句首定一框
注意：
One day
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写局部分为两段，每段的In开se头nio语r s已ch为oo你l 写好;
Paragraph 1:
Tyler, Teacher
After a long time the lady came out. Nupur handed her the wallet that she had dropped. The lady could not believe it.The little girl had been waiting for her for so long, just to give back the wallet. The lady looked at the contents and everything was just the way she had left it. She looked at the girl's old and dirty clothes.“What is your name and where are you going? Can I drop you home?" The lady asked. Nupur told thelady that she was going home. She also said that she had been to the tailor to get a dress tailored to wear for her friend's birthday party but the tailor had refused to do so and her father was jobless.
In the evening, Nupur went to the lady’s home to get her old dress
back.
____________________________________________
两段句首定一框
Para.1 :The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots.
The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots.
____________________T_y_l_e_r _w_a_s_a__p_ro_b_l_e_m__s_tu_d_e_n_t_th_at
Paragraph 2:
had been suspended many times .
In the evening, Nupur went to the lady's home to get her old dress back. Entering into the house, she immediately noticed her beautiful and clean dress on the table. Overjoyed but nervous, Nupur asked timidly how much she should pay for it. “It's a gift for free that such an honest girl like you totally deserves,” the lady laughed. Nupur thanked the lady and left, feeling satisfied.
动作
What did Nupur see when she went to the lady’s
home?
心理
How did Nupur feel?
语言
What did Nupur say?
主题升华 What did the woman say?
Ending: What happened in the end?
Para.2: In the evening, Nupur went to the lady’s home to get her old dress
back.
第二段句首及正能量结局定第二框
Para.2: In the evening, Nupur went to the lady’s home to get her old dress back.
PA R T 2
读懂大意，理清脉络
文章浅析
When
Where
1. 六要素： Who 5W1H
What Why How
the day before Nupur went to her friend’s birthday
the bank
Nupur, the lady
2. 时态
一般过去时
深度分析
1. 人物特点
The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots. Her heart was touched by something at that moment, taking out some money from the wallet that Nupur handed back to her just now. To her surprise, Nupur refused to take the money and said she only wanted to have her beloved dress trimmed. Hearing what Nupur said, the lady smiled, “may be I can do it. Come over in the evening and collect your dress.” She told Nupur her address and left.
升华
Nupur walked along the road with a sad look on her face. Tomorrow was her friend Neeta's birthday but she did not have anything nice to wear to the party. Her father's small factory had closed down and there was hardly any money left at home to buy a new dress. Nupur decided to wear an old dress that had been her favourite for many years but was a little too short for her now. “I will ask the tailor to lengthen it,”Nupur said to herself.The tailor however refused to do so. “I don't take such work right now since the orders have started pouring in and my hands are full.” Nupur left holding the bag with the dress in it and thought,“What am I to do?” Suddenlyshe saw a lady get out of the car and walk towards the bank. The lady opened her handbag to take out some papers but her wallet fell to the ground. Unaware of it, the lady went into the bank. Nupur ran and picked up the wallet. There were so many people in the bank that she decided to wait on the steps.
心理
How did the lady feel?
语言 动作 关键情节
What would the woman do? What did Nupur say and do about the lady’s behavior?
What was the lady’s reaction?
第二段句 首决定
What did the lady ask Nupur to do?
展和变化，呈现令人惊喜的结局。
要做的事
✓衔接首句 ✓注意时态！！！ ✓正向结局
PA R T 1
734原则
734原则
四个支点
1. 承接首段首句： 就地取材，文字 2. 衔接接第龙二段首 句： 就地取材， 3. 承反接向第推二导段首 句：就地取材， 4. 紧文扣字文接章龙主题： 交代结局，点睛
Nupur
honest, kind, vOirntueoduasy
the lady grateful, kindIn senior school
2. 明确故事主题
Tyler, Teacher
拾金不昧，好人有好Ty报ler。was a problem student that
had been suspended many times .
ENGLISH CONTINUATION WRITING
读后续写
写作步骤和方法技巧：
• 1. 通读阅读材料,找出文章的六要素 （5w1h)； • 2. 用中文记录主要情节, 找到原文中的关键信息点; • 3. 研读续写所给第一段首句和第二段开头； • 4. 最后紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局为起点，写出故事情节的发
哪些细节描 心理；动作；语言；表情；环境 写为主？
Байду номын сангаас
PA R T 3
细读首句，构思框架
两段句首定一框
注意：
One day
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写局部分为两段，每段的In开se头nio语r s已ch为oo你l 写好;
Paragraph 1:
Tyler, Teacher
After a long time the lady came out. Nupur handed her the wallet that she had dropped. The lady could not believe it.The little girl had been waiting for her for so long, just to give back the wallet. The lady looked at the contents and everything was just the way she had left it. She looked at the girl's old and dirty clothes.“What is your name and where are you going? Can I drop you home?" The lady asked. Nupur told thelady that she was going home. She also said that she had been to the tailor to get a dress tailored to wear for her friend's birthday party but the tailor had refused to do so and her father was jobless.
In the evening, Nupur went to the lady’s home to get her old dress
back.
____________________________________________
两段句首定一框
Para.1 :The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots.
The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots.
____________________T_y_l_e_r _w_a_s_a__p_ro_b_l_e_m__s_tu_d_e_n_t_th_at
Paragraph 2:
had been suspended many times .
In the evening, Nupur went to the lady's home to get her old dress back. Entering into the house, she immediately noticed her beautiful and clean dress on the table. Overjoyed but nervous, Nupur asked timidly how much she should pay for it. “It's a gift for free that such an honest girl like you totally deserves,” the lady laughed. Nupur thanked the lady and left, feeling satisfied.
动作
What did Nupur see when she went to the lady’s
home?
心理
How did Nupur feel?
语言
What did Nupur say?
主题升华 What did the woman say?
Ending: What happened in the end?
Para.2: In the evening, Nupur went to the lady’s home to get her old dress
back.
第二段句首及正能量结局定第二框
Para.2: In the evening, Nupur went to the lady’s home to get her old dress back.
PA R T 2
读懂大意，理清脉络
文章浅析
When
Where
1. 六要素： Who 5W1H
What Why How
the day before Nupur went to her friend’s birthday
the bank
Nupur, the lady
2. 时态
一般过去时
深度分析
1. 人物特点
The lady looked at the dress with visible dirty spots. Her heart was touched by something at that moment, taking out some money from the wallet that Nupur handed back to her just now. To her surprise, Nupur refused to take the money and said she only wanted to have her beloved dress trimmed. Hearing what Nupur said, the lady smiled, “may be I can do it. Come over in the evening and collect your dress.” She told Nupur her address and left.
升华
Nupur walked along the road with a sad look on her face. Tomorrow was her friend Neeta's birthday but she did not have anything nice to wear to the party. Her father's small factory had closed down and there was hardly any money left at home to buy a new dress. Nupur decided to wear an old dress that had been her favourite for many years but was a little too short for her now. “I will ask the tailor to lengthen it,”Nupur said to herself.The tailor however refused to do so. “I don't take such work right now since the orders have started pouring in and my hands are full.” Nupur left holding the bag with the dress in it and thought,“What am I to do?” Suddenlyshe saw a lady get out of the car and walk towards the bank. The lady opened her handbag to take out some papers but her wallet fell to the ground. Unaware of it, the lady went into the bank. Nupur ran and picked up the wallet. There were so many people in the bank that she decided to wait on the steps.
心理
How did the lady feel?
语言 动作 关键情节
What would the woman do? What did Nupur say and do about the lady’s behavior?
What was the lady’s reaction?
第二段句 首决定
What did the lady ask Nupur to do?
展和变化，呈现令人惊喜的结局。
要做的事
✓衔接首句 ✓注意时态！！！ ✓正向结局
PA R T 1
734原则
734原则
四个支点
1. 承接首段首句： 就地取材，文字 2. 衔接接第龙二段首 句： 就地取材， 3. 承反接向第推二导段首 句：就地取材， 4. 紧文扣字文接章龙主题： 交代结局，点睛
Nupur
honest, kind, vOirntueoduasy
the lady grateful, kindIn senior school
2. 明确故事主题
Tyler, Teacher
拾金不昧，好人有好Ty报ler。was a problem student that
had been suspended many times .
ENGLISH CONTINUATION WRITING
读后续写
写作步骤和方法技巧：
• 1. 通读阅读材料,找出文章的六要素 （5w1h)； • 2. 用中文记录主要情节, 找到原文中的关键信息点; • 3. 研读续写所给第一段首句和第二段开头； • 4. 最后紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局为起点，写出故事情节的发