2012年下半年——2013年上半年 雅思大作文机经

雅思写作官方评分标准(TASK 2)：8●sufficiently addresses all parts of the task●presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extendedand supported ideas●sequences information and ideas logically●manages all aspects of cohesion well●uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately●uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precisemeanings●skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuraciesin word choice and collocation●produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation●uses a wide range of structures●the majority of sentences are error-free●makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies7●addresses all parts of the task●presents a clear position throughout the response●presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency toover-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus●logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progressionthroughout●uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be someunder-/over-use●presents a clear central topic within each paragraph●uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision●uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation●may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation●uses a variety of complex structures●produces frequent error-free sentences●has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors6●addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully coveredthan others●presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear orrepetitive●presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear●arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overallprogression●uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or betweensentences may be faulty or mechanical●may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately●uses paragraphing, but not always logically●uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task●attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy●makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impedecommunication●uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms●makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reducecommunicationTASK 1 题目类型2012.8.4In some countries, TV programmes are transmitted throughout day and night. Some people think that 24-hour TV transmission is a positive development, while others think it is negative. Is it a positive or negative development?在一些国家，电视节目从早播到晚。

有些人认为全天候的电视播放是一种积极的发展，而另一些人则认为这是消极的。

这是一种积极的还是消极的发展？积极方面：1.电视节目是人们得以消遣和得到信息的重要媒介（medium for entertainment and information）。

24小时播放，能够保证信息的最大化，无论人们什么时候打开电视都可以看到电视节目和来自任何国家的新闻信息，也有助于全球化的发展。

2.从某种程度上说，这种播放方式提高了电视台的收视率。

而且，还可以最大化的招商引资，比如广告等，都会增加电视台的信息。

3. 电视节目反映了一个国家的文化事业的发展，全天播放电视节目证明了居民丰富的文化生活。

文化事业的发展代表了一个国家软实力（soft power）的进步，这方面的进步必然是积极的。

消极方面：1. 24小时的节目会影响人们的生活习惯，最终损害人们的身体健康（impair the viewer’s health）.2. 对于电视台的工作者来说，无疑增加了他们的压力，增加他们的工作压力。

3. 节目过多，必然会伴随着一些质量较差的节目，其中不健康的电视节目给观众带来消极影响。

Mobile phones and the internet play an important part in the way which people relate to one another socially. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 手机和因特网在人与人交往方面扮演着重要角色。

电话和网络的优缺点有哪些？优点：1. 方便沟通：手机使人们可以随时随地进行联系，尤其是在有突发性事件的时候〖in the event of an emergency〗，联系十分及时；因特网上，人们可以收发电子邮件和使用网上聊天工具（internet massagers）2.增进感情：正因为手机、网络在通讯上的便利，人们常常发祝福短信（blessing messages）或者电子贺卡(electronic greeting car)给亲友，这样就增进了感情（promote relationship）。

缺点：1. 引起人际交往中的焦虑(anxiety)。

人们.太习惯于通过手机和网络交流，面对面的交流方式越来越少，朋友之间在一起的时候反而不太自在（at ease）.2 手机和电脑都具有加大的辐射，经常使用有可能增加癌症的患病率〖increase the risk of suffering cancers〗，尤其是孕妇，孕妇在怀孕期间使用手机甚至会影响胎儿的发育〖it is harmful to the growth of the foetus, if the pregnant overuse the mobile phone during the gestation〗3. 手机/网络诈骗〖use the cell-phone or internet to bilk〗增加社会不安全因素Large numbers of young people are leaving school and can not find a job. What problems will youth unemployment cause in individual and for society? Give some measures.大量的年轻人从学校出来找不到工作。

从个人和社会角度来看，年轻人找不到工作会导致什么问题？给出解决措施。

【给个人带来的问题】1.许多年轻人在经济上只能依靠父母，加重了自己和家人的经济负担〖financialburden〗。

2.不利于年轻人自身能力的锻炼和经验的积累〖accumulate experience〗，从而在以后的工作中缺乏竞争力。

3.对年轻人心理造成负面影响〖distorted personality〗，不利于更好地融入社会，甚至还会对社会产生敌视的情绪〖be hostile to the society〗。

【给社会带来的问题】1.使很多家庭对于教育失望，从而减弱了资助孩子接受更高教育的热情，不利于整个国家教育的普及。

2. 造成后备人才〖reserve talents〗的缺乏，不利于社会的可持续发展〖sustainable development〗。