2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练(23) 含答案

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（23) 含答案
第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词.
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一个横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.
注意：原行没有错的不要改.
Everyone can do something for our environment。

For me,
76._______
I should try to save electricity in our daily life。

For example，
77._______
if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening，78。

_______
I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to 79。

_______ protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try 80._______ to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible。

I would 81。

_______
not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks 82。

_______
because they are made of wood。

I believe that by doing all 83。

_______
these small things will improve our environment but help 84。

_______
make our world the much better place to live. 85._______
答案与解析
76. √
77.our→my。

代词的错误。

这里与主语保持一致，用my表示“在我的日常生活中”。

78。

leave 前加to。

非谓语动词的错误。

这里用不定式做定语修饰the last person 。

79. on→off.动词短语的错误。

语境表示把灯关掉而不是打开，因此用turn on。

80. wise→wisely。

副词的错误。

用而不是形容词做状语表示方式。

81。

would→will。

时态的错误.这里与语境保持一致，用一般将来时而不是过去将来时。

82. cup→cups。

名词的错误.用复数名词cups表示泛指。

83。

by删除。

从句子结构看，这里的v.—ing结构做句子主语，应该将介词删除.
84。

but→and连词的错误.这里表示顺接和递进关系，用连词and 而不是but。

85. the→a。

冠词的错误。

这里表示“一个更好的地方”,用a better place
而不是“那个更好的地方"；注意后面的place to live是正确的，可以将掉尾介词in省略。

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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
7．The Most Important Thing in the World / money is everything
Directions：
A)Title：The Most Important Thing in the World
B)提示:有人认为，世界上最重要的东西是“钱”。

许多人不同意这个看法。

请就这个问题谈谈你的意见.
C）Time limit：30minutes
D）Word limit：150～200words
E）Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet。

The Most Important Thing in the World
In my opinion，the most important thing in the world is TIME。

However long one may live,his life consists of a certain number of years,and a year has only12months，a month30days and one day24hours。

Once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.
Even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society。

Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money。

In their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want。

I would like to ask them a simple question：Can you buy time？
The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.
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（重庆卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧），在该行右边横
线上写出该加的词.
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

Today is Sunday 。

I′ve been in Canada for two months 。

This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a 76。

long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me，I′ve 77。

soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia，like 78。

many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79。

friends shortly after we meet each other。

Although her English 80.
is a little hardly to understand，we enjoy chatting and we 81.
usu ally talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different。

Now，83.
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ，Katia 84。

will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85。

to China several times.I just can't wait.
【答案】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Today is Sunday 。

I′ve been in Canada for two months .
This is the first time that I′ve been away ^ m y family for such a 76。

from
long time. With the help of Katia， a roommate of me，I′ve 77. mine
soon got used to live without my parents around。

Katia,like 78. living
many other Russian girls，are nice and lively. We became 79. is
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. met
is a little hardly to understand，we enjoy chatting and we 81。

hard
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82。

families
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different。

Now，83. and
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday。

There ,Katia
84。

the
will introduce me to some of her friends，one of who has been 85. whom
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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
8．高考英语（江西卷)
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法.
留意：1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。

2．词数为100左右。

3．参考词汇：网络朋友on-line friend(s），上当受骗to be cheated 开头：Should students make friends on line ？展开:Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends。

Chatting on line，
students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies. 展开：Others，however, think students should not。

They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study。

Besides，some students get cheated on line。

结尾：It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题,每小題1分,满分10分）
When my twenty birthday came , I was not at home. 76。

________
In order to celebrate such important day with my 77_________
Parents, I wrote him a letter，in which I thanked them 78_________
For having raised me for twenty years，and expressed 79_________
my love to them。

Later mother talked me when they 80_________
read the letter，tears were filled her eyes. But father 81________
appeared much cool。

After that。

he read it alone carefully，82________
and then he put it up into a desk drawer. I can imagine the 83________
scene clear because I know father。

Being a man with few 84________
word，he prefers to show his love for me in a silent way. 85________
参考答案
76.twenty—twentieth 77.such 后加an 78.him-them 79.正确
80.talked—told 81。

去掉were 82.去掉much或改为very
83。

up-wawy 84。

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高考英语书面表达写作指导-——议论文
1.引段
高考英语议论文的引言可以有两部分组成：现象+观点.
现象就来自作文题目.所以学生必须要理解题目中的每句话，把题目中的中文用英语表达出来就能成为不错的开篇.然后再开门见山地
亮出自己的观点.
2.主体段
①引证法(即引用一些名人名言、成语、格言、谚语灯作为论据)；
②例证法（即举例来进行论证)
③喻证法（用比喻的方法来论证事理，把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅显易懂，使文章既生动又形象)
④对比论证法(通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来分析论证,使文章的表达效果更强烈，给人留下深刻印象）
⑤归纳法(从分析典型，即分析个别事物入手，找出事物的共同特点，然后得出结论。

）
⑥推理法（从一般原理出发，对个别事物进行说明、分析,而后得出结论)
⑦驳论法（先列出错误的观点，然后加以逐条批驳，最后阐明自己的观点）。

在主体段中，务必要牢记应采用先总后分的手法——先亮出主题句，然后再用发展句充实段落。

你必须围绕着引言段的观点展开,千万不能让人觉得的的文章段落之间没有衔接.
此外，在主体段中要恰当地使用过渡词,有明显的层次感，引领阅读者一层一层地根据你的分论点走向最终你要阐述的观点。

3.结尾段
结论，用一、二句话来结束文章,做到首尾呼应。

一定要再次澄清你的观点，切记与引言段的观点一致,建议用不同的词句法表达一个意思。

(四）、英语议论文范文
Private Tutors
With the development od science and society，more and more students are keen to take on private tutors.
Some people think taking on a private tutor is good for students in some ways。

The tutor can answer the students’questions individually and carefully and give them detailed advice; some private tutors assign their students more exercises to do and the students will learn extra knowledge from their tutors; it is known to us all that a good and experienced teacher can help his students to review their lessons in a very good way so that they can have a better understanding of the knowledge learned in class，which is help to them in their examinations。

But every coin has two sides. Some people look upon it with disapproval。

They hold the opinion that the students rely too much on their tutor and they even take little notice of what their own teacher says in class；the private tutor assigns them to do a lot of extra exercises，thus occupying plenty of rheir spare time and they will be too worn out;
contrary to what their parents hope，their studies become worse than before.
So it is hard to say whether taking on a private tutor is good or not。

It all depends on the individual. But in my opinion, if you want to take on a private tutor，you should choose one carefully since he or she will have a great impact on your studies。

Money for Education
In my opinion, it is worthwhile to spend more of the money in order to have the children better educated。

First, as there are more than 40 or even 50 students in a class, in most cases, teachers can not take care of all the students in class。

Therefore many students have to attend spare time classes or even go to the tutors to make up for this。

Second, we are now in the 21st century. With the development of society，only those who have a good education are more likely to get good jobs. So the more we learn now，the more chances we will have in the future. Of course we will get a high pay。

In a word，spending money on education is certainly rewarding.
III. Post—task （Each composition 120—150 words）
请你谈谈在学习上遇到困难时，如何想办法去解决，如何克服这些
困难?
IV. Sentence patterns:
The point is that….
From my point of view…
As for me…
As far as I am concerned…
We must recognize that…
There is no doubt that…
The main reason is that…
As we all know…
V. Summary:
VI。

Assignment: ( Each composition 120—150 words）
1.每一位高三的学生都面临着巨大的压力。

对压力,高三的学生看法不一，有的害怕压力；但有的却认为压力不是件坏事。

请你谈谈你的看法。

2 。

2010年世博会将在上海举行。

为了办好这次国际盛会，上海市将进一步改善环境。

与此同时, 提高市民的素质和修养也势在必行，因为文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要。

作为年轻人，我们自身也存在着一些不文明行为。

请例举你所观察到的2-3种不文明行为（如：
大小便后不及时冲刷；随地乱扔纸屑、废物；随地吐痰；插队…)并就此做出评论或提出建议.
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