江苏省2015年中考英语书面表达专题《叙事类记叙文》

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2015年中考英语书面表达专题《叙事类记叙文》

【写法指导】

◇【题型设置与意图】

叙事类记叙文主要是对事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。主要是说明事件的时间、背景、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个“W”(what,who,when,where,why)和一个“H"(how)。叙事类记叙文的表达方式主要是“叙述”和“描写”,因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。题型设置旨在考查学生叙述事件的能力,以考查学生对一般过去时态和一般将来时态陈述句的运用为主要目的。

◇【写作角度与注意事项】

写作时要写清事情发生与发展的过程以及事情发生的前因后果等。一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述。写已发生的真实事情和虚拟的故事常用一般过去时;写将要发生的事情用一般将来时。叙事类记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交代人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在英文写作中很少用到。

写作演示

◇【真题再现】

(2013·济南)根据所给图画,用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

参考词汇:blind adj.盲的,瞎的stick n.拐杖

【写作思路】

1.中心人称:第一人称

2.主体时态:一般过去时态

3.要点梳理:玩耍,拍照;发现拄拐杖的盲人,帮助他过马路,得到感谢

【语句构建】

交代时间→I went to the park last weekend/yesterday.

叙述事件→We saw an old man.

He was walking with a stick alone.

I ran to the man and helped him.

His daughter thanked me and praised me.

事后感悟→1 was very happy.

【写作模板】

感悟:I was tired but happy.

It was an educational day.

I learnt a lot today.

【范文展示】

Last weekend,1 went to the park with my mother and sister.It was sunny and there were some people and traffic in it.We played very happily.When we wanted to take photos,I saw an old blind man far from us,and he was walking with a stick alone.I thought it was very dangerous for the old man,so I ran quickly to him and helped him walk on by catching his stick.When the blind man’s daughter found him,she thanked me and praised me.At that moment,the photographer took the precious photo.1 was tired but happy.It was an educational day and I learnt a lot.

【名师点评】

范文按照正叙的顺序,记录了一次外出游玩时发生的事件。故事情境想象合理,要素交代清楚,要点叙述完整,语言富于变化,条理性较强。

知识清单

【实战演练】

(一)

请以“My pleasant trip”为题,根据提示和要求写一次你记忆中愉快的旅行。

提示:1.请叙述本次旅行的时间、地点、人物以及活动;

2.体现出这是一次愉快的旅行。

要求:1.词数:80左右;

2.文中不能出现作者的真实信息。

My pleasant trip

(二)

你喜欢过生日吗?你的生日过得开心吗?每个人都曾有过难以忘怀的生日。请以“My birthday”为题写一篇短文,介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日,让大家共同分享你生日的快乐。

要求:1.词数:80左右;

2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;

3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。

My birthday

(三)

根据提示,写一篇英语短文,60—70词。

提示:昨天小华骑自行车去上学,过马路闯红灯时,被一辆出租车撞倒,然后被一名警察送去医院。老师和同学们听到了这个坏消息,放学后去看望他,他很高兴能见到老师和同学们。他说:“我知道错了,我以后会遵守(obey)交通规则的。”

(四)

初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要出现真实的学校名称以及姓名)。

参考词汇:three years,memories,one of,think,happy/sorry

(五)

假如明天是你妈妈的生日,你想为妈妈做一份炒饭,请根据所给内容提示,写一篇你做炒饭的过程。

参考词汇:1.fried rice cooked meat oil salt green onions(葱)

2.cook cut put fry add

3.carefully finely(细微地) slowly lightly

要求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯;

2书写工整、规范;

3根据所给内容及参考词汇,可适当发挥;

4.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;

5,词数:70词左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Tomorrow is my mother's birthday

参考答案

(一)

My pleasant trip

One day when I was in Grade 7,I went to Fu yan Hill with my friends by bike.

The weather was pretty fine that day.First we climbed the hill,then we flew kites.At noon we sat on the grass,having a picnic.In the afternoon,we met several soldiers who were only a little older than us.So we could play games together and they also told us interesting stories We laughed and laughed happily.

What a pleasant trip! I will never forget it.

(二)

My birthday

March 5th is my birthday.This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way.In the morning,I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents.At school,I helped my desk mate to repair her broken chair.After school,I took my birthday cake to the old folk's

home.The old men were so happy to see me.All of them hoped that I would be back again.What a joyful birthday it was!

(三)

Xiao Hua went to school by bike yesterday.When the traffic light was red,he crossed the road and was hit/knocked down by a taxi.He was sent to hospital by a policeman.When his teachers and classmates heard the bad news,they went to see him after schoo1.He was very glad to see them.And he felt sorry as well.He said,“I know what I have done is wrong.I will obey the traffic rules from now on.”

(四)

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from it in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I have so many memories in the three years’life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember when I began to learn English,I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried,I still couldn’t do well in it and almost

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