中考英语写作讲评(一)PPT课件
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九年级中考英语总复习--作文讲评课件(共15张PPT)
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第二档（4-6分） 只能写出少部分内容要点，文中有许多语 法错误，只有个别句子可读。
第一档（0-3分）
只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或 1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分； 写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。
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English Composition
英语作文
2018年九年级模拟考试英语作文
书面表达：近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引起了热
烈讨论。作为一名中学生，请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文，
呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。
1.见面跟人打招呼
2.与同学友好相处
提示词：
3.保持教室及社区环境卫生
评分标准： 第五档（ 13-15分）能写明全部要点，文
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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
初中英语作文讲评课件(PPT18张)
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
upstairs or downstairs.
3. 不要和同学吵架或是打架；
Don't quarrel or fight with classmates.
4. 不靠近火源，更不能玩火；
Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire.
5.不吃垃圾食品。
第四档：(7~8分)能写明全部或大部分内容要点； 语言有少量错误；行文连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档：(5~6分)能写明大部分内容要点；语言 错误较多，尚能达意。
第二档：(3~4分)只能写出少部分内容要点；语 言错误很多，只有个别句子可读。
第一档：(0~2分)只能写出与所要求内容有关的 一些单词。
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
upstairs or downstairs.
3. 不要和同学吵架或是打架；
Don't quarrel or fight with classmates.
4. 不靠近火源，更不能玩火；
Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire.
5.不吃垃圾食品。
第四档：(7~8分)能写明全部或大部分内容要点； 语言有少量错误；行文连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档：(5~6分)能写明大部分内容要点；语言 错误较多，尚能达意。
第二档：(3~4分)只能写出少部分内容要点；语 言错误很多，只有个别句子可读。
第一档：(0~2分)只能写出与所要求内容有关的 一些单词。
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT)演讲稿.ppt
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
课件
4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
课件
一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
课件
4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
课件
一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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For example
There are many things we can do. we can plan
play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧，上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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中考英语写作专题讲座课件 (共30张PPT)
2016年中考
66.学生最好不要单独下河游泳。 Students ① ② not go swimming alone in the never 67.对不起,你的问题太难了,我回答不了 I’m sorry, your question is ① difficult for me ② answer it. 8.我们应该学会如何与别人相处融洽 We should learn how to ② well with others. 69.这个故事多么有趣啊! ① ② the story is! 70.约翰过去说英语时很害羞 John ① ② be very shy when he spoke English.
语篇翻译（10分）
写作技 能部分
02
完成对话（10分）
书面表达（10分）
03
得分情况
2017年永州市中考试卷主观题得分统计表
题号 题型 满分 5 平均分 实测难度 得分排序 （2017） 1.34 0.27 6 4.01 3.29 2.75 0.40 0.33 0.28 1 3 5 16-20 笔录要点
10
10
10
10
15
30
5
10 41.7%
5
10
5
10
5
10 25%
1
10
16.7%
2017永州中考试题特点
题型结构变化
听力技能 题型 知识运用 阅读技能 写作技能
对话 笔录 语法 词语 选择 摘录 回答 语篇 句子 完成 书面 理解 要点 填空 填空 阅读 要点 问题 翻译 对话 表达 5 5 10 15 15 10 10 10 10 15 20 30 5 10 5 10 5 10 5 10 1 15 10
人教版中考英语议论文写作讲解PPT课件(共23页)
笔记区 合理的分段：
1. 文章结构清楚
演算区 2. 行文逻辑更强
第三段：结尾。紧扣主题，两句话内结束，升华主题。字数20-30。
2020/6/9
范文赏析
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted.（提出现象） As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.（引入主题）
2020/6/9
注意： 1. 充分利用语料 2. 表达自己观点时，可用群体
代替个体，增强说服力。 如： 用As a student 代替I
笔记区 3. 题目中给出比较笼统的措施 时，需在在文章body 部分 演算区 具体化。 如：“保护环境”具体化为 “步行上学”，“随手关灯” 等。 4. 如给出题目，则一定要写题
笔记区 演算区
2020/6/9
第一步：审题
【写作要求】现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学 生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个 “低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短 文描述自己的“低碳生活”。 1. 作为一个中学生: 表达观点的角度 2. 节约资源，保护环境:措施综述 3. My Low--carbon Life: 题目必须写
内容包括： 1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开 教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
英语作文讲评PPT课件
校模情景作文
1
第一部分
整体概述
THE FIRST PART OF THE OVERALL OVERVIEW, PLEASE SUMMARIZE THE CONTENT
2
• 欢迎的横幅 • 摊位
• 社团
Word list
• welcome banner • house/room/shed/tent/table • stand • community/association/club/
2. Since I want to learn English in college, we spent most of the time in front of its stand, enquiring information and reading relevant papers.
5
佳句欣赏
After having visited the school, I was deeply absorbed in the atmosphere and was determined to spare no effort to be admitted into the university. My parents and I put our hands together to cheer me up for the bright future.
organization/group/team • society
3
应注意：
1. 时态：一定是过去时，一直是过去时 2. 衔接：图与图之间要自然连接（连接词，
非谓语，状语从句……） 3. 篇幅：每幅图的长短差不多（如何？为什
么？怎么样？心情？环境？）
4
佳句欣赏
1. Hardly had we arrived there when we were attracted by the beautiful sight and we noticed that there were banners hanging on the gate, reading “welcome students and parents to our school” .
1
第一部分
整体概述
THE FIRST PART OF THE OVERALL OVERVIEW, PLEASE SUMMARIZE THE CONTENT
2
• 欢迎的横幅 • 摊位
• 社团
Word list
• welcome banner • house/room/shed/tent/table • stand • community/association/club/
2. Since I want to learn English in college, we spent most of the time in front of its stand, enquiring information and reading relevant papers.
5
佳句欣赏
After having visited the school, I was deeply absorbed in the atmosphere and was determined to spare no effort to be admitted into the university. My parents and I put our hands together to cheer me up for the bright future.
organization/group/team • society
3
应注意：
1. 时态：一定是过去时，一直是过去时 2. 衔接：图与图之间要自然连接（连接词，
非谓语，状语从句……） 3. 篇幅：每幅图的长短差不多（如何？为什
么？怎么样？心情？环境？）
4
佳句欣赏
1. Hardly had we arrived there when we were attracted by the beautiful sight and we noticed that there were banners hanging on the gate, reading “welcome students and parents to our school” .
中考英语写作专题精讲课件(共39张PPT)
2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;
4. .......
注意:
1. 词数80~ 100 ;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
应试策略
时间
地点
人物 经过
12
9
3
6
原因 结果
应试策略
01
列要点
02
03
人物 原因
I'd like to say thanks to my English teacher.
because
时间 once I failed. 地点 when She encouraged me. 经过 after that I turned to her for help.
结果
with her help I made progress.
应试策略
范文
Thank you, my teacher! I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she has helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam.When she found I was very worried, sh e encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I tur ned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
中考英语作文讲解(共18张PPT)
However, I think it’s necessary for me to learn physics well. I will spend more time on it and study harder. “ Nothing is difficult to a willing heart.” I believe I can improve it sooner or later.
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!
六、誊写
（2004年陕西省中考试题） VII. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
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B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
中考英语作文讲评课(精品)PPT课件
The following points are for your reference: (所给
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy".
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
The best way to make me happy is achieving good marks. I think this way is the best one to make me happy because it is the easiest ways and it can improve my ability so I think it is the best way. In this way, I can get some prizes, so I will feel happy, what’s more it can also make my parents happy.
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I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and
more comfortable.
不宜太多 不宜太少 10*10/ 8*12
结构清楚 三段式 总分总
书写规范
书写 handwriting
大小合适 布白均匀
“Outer beauty” comes first!
10行 每行10个字；
8行 每行12个字
when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t use others’ things without
permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room.
If another opportunity is given, one of my colleagues will give a presentation on the “inner beauty”.
写在最后
成功的基础在于好的学习习惯
The foundation of success lies in good habits
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谢谢大家
荣幸这一路，与你同行
It'S An Honor To Walk With You All The Way
讲师：XXXXXX XX年XX月XX日
格式 format
neat and clear
书写 handwriting
standard and clean
书写 handwriting
字母书写规范 字母大小合适 卷面布白均匀
留白
倾斜度 一致
格式 format
字数 number of words
假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory）规定，如不 整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可（permission）动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯 等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。 要求： （1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； （2）字数：60-80词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）； （3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。 参考词汇： respect each other 互相尊重 therefore 因此 obey the rules 遵守规定 without permission 未经允许
Dear Wang Ming, I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we
live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t use others’ things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.
Best wishes, LiHua
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I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we
live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls
晕轮效应又称“光环效应”，属于心理 学范畴，是指当认知者对一个人的某种 特征形成好或坏的印象后，他还倾向于 据此推论该人其他方面的特征。本质上 是一种以偏概全的认知上的偏误。
dirty clean
messy
over
neat
moderate
字数 number of words
not too many or too few