应用文3：请求信公开课教案教学设计课件案例试卷
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Will it be convenient to you if I ask you to aid me in polishing words and format?
Be a
polite person！
From PMF
What do you need me to do?
Restate your request at the end of the letter
应用文3 请求信
(2016年英语高考全国卷1）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职， 已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教 Mr Jenkins 写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文 字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
From YJQ
I will be more likely to be employed if you could help me revise....
Hopefully, you could spare some time to help me revise the application and resume.
I would appreciate it if you could offer your generous help.
请求信2
假定你是李华,最近获得了某外国语大学英语 面试的机会。请你用英语给外教Mr Hall写一 封信,主要内容包括: 1．请他帮你提高口语; 2．给予一些面试指导。 注意: 1．词数80左右; 2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
I'm writing to ask for your assistance with my interview for a university of foreign languages . I'm writing this letter, hoping that you could do me a favor with my coming interview. I'm writing to ask you a favor with my interview for a university of foreign languages. I wonder if.../ I am wondering if... I wonder if it is convenient for you to help me... Hopefully, could you please spare some time to... I will be more likely to impress the interviewers if
I'm writing to ask for your assistance with my application and personal resume.
I'm writing to ask you a favor in applying for a position.
I'm writing to ask for your help with my application and resume.
Discussion How to ask your teacher to revise the application and resume in an appropriate manner?
I wonder if you could help me revise the application and resume.
I'm writiБайду номын сангаасg to ask for your help. I'm writing to ask for your help.
too much useless information
(From WXM)
Which one is more acceptable?
Order
第二段
➢ express your request in a polite and appropriate manner.
Your suggestion will certainly make my resume a huge success. I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
From SJQ
Why do you write
to me?
第一段
➢ express your purpose of writing directly and clearly in the beginning
Will it be convenient for you if I ask you to help me with...
I will be very grateful if you could help me with...
I'd appreciate it if you could...
From WXM
From LZX From WSW
第三段
➢ express your gratitude at the end of the letter
I will be very grateful if you could help me at your earliest convenience.
学生佳作
I'm writing to ask you for help. Since I'd like to take a part time job in a foreign company, a proper application and resume are badly needed. Until now, I've already completed them by myself. Nevertheless, I wonder whether the format and the attached material is suitable or not. You are always a great suggestion giver and your advice is very instructive.
I will be more likely to impress the interviewers if you can provide me with professional guidance.
Faced with such a fierce competition, I am in really urgent need of your professional help.
Be a
polite person！
From PMF
What do you need me to do?
Restate your request at the end of the letter
应用文3 请求信
(2016年英语高考全国卷1）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职， 已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教 Mr Jenkins 写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文 字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
From YJQ
I will be more likely to be employed if you could help me revise....
Hopefully, you could spare some time to help me revise the application and resume.
I would appreciate it if you could offer your generous help.
请求信2
假定你是李华,最近获得了某外国语大学英语 面试的机会。请你用英语给外教Mr Hall写一 封信,主要内容包括: 1．请他帮你提高口语; 2．给予一些面试指导。 注意: 1．词数80左右; 2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
I'm writing to ask for your assistance with my interview for a university of foreign languages . I'm writing this letter, hoping that you could do me a favor with my coming interview. I'm writing to ask you a favor with my interview for a university of foreign languages. I wonder if.../ I am wondering if... I wonder if it is convenient for you to help me... Hopefully, could you please spare some time to... I will be more likely to impress the interviewers if
I'm writing to ask for your assistance with my application and personal resume.
I'm writing to ask you a favor in applying for a position.
I'm writing to ask for your help with my application and resume.
Discussion How to ask your teacher to revise the application and resume in an appropriate manner?
I wonder if you could help me revise the application and resume.
I'm writiБайду номын сангаасg to ask for your help. I'm writing to ask for your help.
too much useless information
(From WXM)
Which one is more acceptable?
Order
第二段
➢ express your request in a polite and appropriate manner.
Your suggestion will certainly make my resume a huge success. I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
From SJQ
Why do you write
to me?
第一段
➢ express your purpose of writing directly and clearly in the beginning
Will it be convenient for you if I ask you to help me with...
I will be very grateful if you could help me with...
I'd appreciate it if you could...
From WXM
From LZX From WSW
第三段
➢ express your gratitude at the end of the letter
I will be very grateful if you could help me at your earliest convenience.
学生佳作
I'm writing to ask you for help. Since I'd like to take a part time job in a foreign company, a proper application and resume are badly needed. Until now, I've already completed them by myself. Nevertheless, I wonder whether the format and the attached material is suitable or not. You are always a great suggestion giver and your advice is very instructive.
I will be more likely to impress the interviewers if you can provide me with professional guidance.
Faced with such a fierce competition, I am in really urgent need of your professional help.