雅思作文---杨琳强化写作讲义

真题示范：
1．Tourism is becoming good source of revenue for many countries.Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of exploiting this resource.
2．What is your opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food?(2002,10;2003,1;2004,4)
3．In1995,an Englishman killed a burglar who broke into his house.He was sentenced.Do you think he should be sentenced?How can we protect our property?
4．With the development of a market economy.Advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry,despite the rich information brought by television.There still exists strong criticism against television advertisement.Write an article analyzing the positive and negative effects of television advertisement.
5．作业：version:000121(2005年G类新题)
Some people think that visitors to other countries imitate local custom and behaviors.Some people disagree.They think the host country should welcome culture different.Discuss the two views and give your own opinion.
主体和方向
例文讲解：真题重现：
1．Some people think that people at the age of55and over should be encouraged to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation.Do you agree or disagree?
2．A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy,fat and unsociable.Give the reasons for this and a proposal for a solution.(2003)主体相似方向不同：
3．Computers are widely used for education and some people think that teachers will not play important role in the classroom.Disagree or agree?
4．People use computers when they work,go banking and so on,but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
5．Some people think that traditional techniques and modern technology are incompatible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
6．Oriental session
7．Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians,artists,actors and drama companies.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?what should government do?
8．Is it possible for a woman to be a good mother and a successful career woman at the same time?some people agree that government should pay some money to women so that they can stay at home to look after their children.Do you agree or disagree?
9．Modern technology,such as fertilizer and machinery has changed our world so much.
What are the advantages and disadvantages?Discuss
10．There have been many technological developments in the20th century.For example, computer and electric power.Choose either of them,describe the change it has brought about and discuss whether all the changes are positive.
11．作业：What are the purposes of places,such as museums and how should they be funded?
审题和构思后如何展开段落
题目重现：首段展开
1．电视对儿童的影响？正面还是负面？你的观点
A．Television is the most popular form of entertainment in the modern household.(引入话题)people of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average of
four hours a day.(发展话题)thus,television has had a tremendous influence on its
viewers,especially children.(缩小话题范围指电视对孩子的影响)scientists now
say that children can be negatively effected by constantly watching television.(继续
缩小范围至电视对孩子的负面影响)。

I take their side.
B．We hear a lot about negative effects of television on the viewers.Obviously, televisions can be harmful if it is watched constantly.However,when television is
watched in moderation,it is extremely valuable,(点名观点)as/for it provides
relaxation entertainment and education.
2.Some people think that the government should not put money in building theaters and sports stadium,they should spend more money on education and medical care.
a.Theaters and sports stadium are the most popular places in the modern
society.People of all ages love to entertain themselves and enjoy the
relaxation.Plus,as the desire for music and sports is increasing,the
government ought to spend more money on that.
b.Most people hold the point that theaters and sports are losing their
importance as time passes by.It is no denying that modern people are leading
an increasingly busy life.Nevertheless,not a single place can replace the
status in helping people develop their physical body and mental condition
like theaters and stadium.
理由段展开：
1．中西方思维差异：讨论计算机重要性？
We are now living in high developing world.Great changes have taken place.The computer was born in1946in America and was named ENTAC by researchers.It’s development is very quick.It had made greater progress recently and plays a more important role in our society.(汉语思维)
It is of great value to master necessary computer knowledge In world today.(开门见山点名本段中心思想)。

That is to say,one can never live without sufficient knowledge of computer.As what happens in Britain,a college graduate even from Cambridge University may face a difficulty in finding a job if he or she does not know how to manage computers.It is true in other countries.Therefore,it will be very hard to live free from contact with computers.
结尾段标志词：
From the above,in conclusion,in short,all in all,on the whole,in one word
作业：
some people claim that disadvantages of cars are more than advantages,do you agree or disagree?
作业2：2005真题version00110
Many of the world’s languages and cultures are dying out.Give possible reasons and your recommendations.
1．抱怨信：
2．抱歉和解释信
首段：Dear Mr.Wang:
I am awfully sorry about what my dog did to your garden the day before yesterday,I want
you know how badly I feel about it.I assure you that it will not happen again.
经过：因为狗链段了，家人不知道，跑去邻院，糟蹋了花草，我知道那是邻居爷爷精心培育的，感觉更对不起，对生起能理解，主动要求赔钱赔花，问还有什么别的要求）
结尾：Being sorry is not enough.But we honestly thank you for being so generous with us and our dog.
Yours sincerely
Lynn
3.感谢词：thank you from the bottom of my heart
thanks a million
I sincerely appreciate
Many thanks for your kindness
作业：Write a letter to thank your friends for caring for you when you were in hospital after an accident.
4.要求和申请信：例：Write a letter to Mr.Wang who works in administration office to ask for an increase in financial aid.
Dear Mr.Wang:
I am writing to you to see whether or not I can get an increase in financial aid.As the administration office had done a lot in helping people with financial need.I tend to ask another help from you.
5.邀请信和拒绝信：
you have come back to your hometown after the first term in Canada.Write a letter to your good friend,Mike,inviting him to visit your hometown in summer vacation.
One of your friends invites you to visit his hometown.But you have made your plans.Write a letter to refuse his invitation.
Version00113
Some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge,but to give practical training beneficial to the society.Do you agree or disagree?Use your own experience and knowledge to support you idea.
范文5：
Most universities and colleges spend rather long period in fundamental theories and elementary course.But students regard these kinds of knowledge useless,and pay less attention to it.Some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge,but to give practical training beneficial to the society.As for me,I think this view is reasonable in some aspects.
First of all,the theoretical knowledge just handles problem is an abstract concept.It must combine with real job.For instance,as everyone know,with the development of society,work position more and more need experienced and technical talent,especially in Shanghai of China,one of the biggest city throughout the world.So,more offering practice training to university students can help them to adapt to the society better.Therefore,the theoretical knowledge losing contact with reality is nonsensical.
Secondly,the theoretical knowledge comes from practice.Any theoretical knowledge is obtained form the work of practicing.The universities provide practical training to students,making them understand the theoretical knowledge deeply.Just because of this,our universities believe that students should participate in social work at least one year in the four years in order to get practical training.
However,the theoretical knowledge is the essence of practice,and it is the important course that we can’t ignore too.So,theoretical knowledge and practice have the equal status in our study.
In a word,theoretical knowledge and practical training is all our require courses.We should study theory knowledge,and then apply it to practice.
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version00121(2005年G类真题)
Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree.they think the host country should welcome culture different.Discuss the tow views,and give your own opinion.
范文4：
Recent years,because traffic is convenient day-by-day,people have more chances to travel around the world.The plane can make us reach any corner of the earth in a short time.Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors,but some people disagree.As far as I am concerned,necessary imitation is,in contrast,a wiser choice.
As a famous saying goes,do as they do when in Room.The knowledge of local custom can help outside people adapt to the new environment rapidly.For instance,a Chinese student came to Britain,he can imitate British life style.In this way,he can understand British habit more thoroughly,thus,make himself live a more comfortable life in Britain.
In addition,the cultural uniqueness that should be maintained need more attention.If people did not adhere to their national symbol especially in foreign country,these treasures would disappear. Take American hug for instance.Opposed to it,Chinese people greet each other with a formal handshake instead of warm hug.Because of this,different countries know each other to a greater extent.
On the other hand,it is generally believed that outside cultures take a significant role in shaping the new world.Without taking back foreign customs home,a traveler can do nothing to help promote his or her country’s civil variety,
In conclusion,according to the above reasons,the transformation to total reference to foreign customs gain an upper hand over the persistence in cultural identity abroad.
Version00110
Many world languages and cultures are dying out.Give possible reasons and your recommendations.
Nowadays,international communication has become more and more important.But many world languages ad cultures are dying out.In this essay,we will examine the problem of languages and culture dying and the solutions.
Firstly,as the technology improves,people around the world are relying more and more on electronic devices to communicate with each other.Take internet for example.In order to make international conversations,people attempt to talk and send e-mail with the commonly-spoken language,say,English.As a result,cultural uniqueness will fade away gradually.
Secondly,some of the world languages and cultures are not being learned widely by children.As what happens in China,Chinese youngsters tend to avoid speaking as their elders do.Because of their contact with foreign cultures,they prefer imitating some odd sayings and behaviors.That is also the way Peking opera is dying out.
In order to solve the problems illustrated above,I offer two solutions in this special occasion.For one solution,people might record the culture and languages on books or tapes,making sure our descendants can learn or use them in the future.The second solution is to increase the awareness of the importance of national cultural identity among young people.
From the above analyses,the important thing is to learn the elder’s tongue and culture before it is too late.Otherwise,we will lose them.
V120
What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded?
范文：
As we all know,museums are unreplaceable places for human beings.However,more and more
museums have to face the serous economic problem nowadays.Therefore,many people doubt museum’s significance.On the contrary,I am a firm believer that museums is still of great importance.
Firstly,museum is considered the historical symbol that it exhibits traditional culture of a nation. Nations of difference have different culture and history.Taking the history and revolution museum for example.The museum is the best way to let the Chinese youngsters enjoy their ancestor’s history and let visitors and foreigners know what china was like century ago.
Secondly,museum could help improve people’s love for art and beauty.As a result,museums aiming to exhibit artist paintings,photos and the like can never be replaced.For instance,the greatest art museum in Paris represents things alike every year.Without it,we would not have a so keen taste for beauty.For one solution,the government ought to buy all museums.If museums belong to government,it means main economic problem of museums is solved.The second solution is that society ought to donate lots of money to maintain development of museum.The museum protects out history and culture,so we have obligation to support progress of museums.
All in all,it is museums,along with other institutes,that enrich our dull lives.Only by permanently funding them can we share the magnificence.
V105
Some people claim that the disadvantages of cars are more than the advantages,do you agree or disagree?
With the development of science and technology,the cars have already become the important component in our daily life gradually.Cars make our life convenient and swift.However,too many cars have caused very serious social problems.Some people claim that the disadvantages of cars are more than the advantages.I doubt it.
Since one century ago,the auto industry has been developed at full speed worldwide,and has brought the enormous progresses to our life.For example,the car is the most convenient tool of transportation.We can be on and off duty by car every day;we can go to travel by car on the vacation;we can utilize the cars to deal with some emergency too.The car is playing an important role in our daily life.They make our rhythm of life faster and faster and make our business become more and more efficient.
On the other hand,the development gives people countless employment opportunities too,such as manufacturing industry,repairing industry and maintaining industry.We are enjoying the convenience that the cars bring to us;at the same time we can utilize the auto industry to support ourselves.
However,we ca not ignore that too many cars cause enormous social problems,for example, traffic jam,air pollution,traffic accident,to which we have to find a solution.In a word,the cars have brought enormous change to our life.The advantages are far more than the disadvantages.
图表作文范文
曲线图：
The graph below shows the percentage of people unable to find work in three major countries from1983to1992.
The line graph shows a comparison of unemployment rates in Japan,the United Kingdom and Canada between1989and1992.
In Japan,the percentage of unemployment from2.3%to3%between1983and1986.After that,the percentage started decreasing with minor fluctuation and returned to the original value in 1992.(第一组：具体谈日本的变化趋势，起末点，最高最低)
In1983,the percentage of umemployed people was12%in Canada and13%in the UK.(起点)These values decreased dramatically and at a constant rate over the next few years.(趋势)and unemployment reached the lowest percentage in Canada with about7.7%in1988-1989,and in the UK with7%in1989-1990.(最低点)（介词短语的并列形式）The unemployment rates of the two countries reaches the same point between1988and1989.And then the figures(替换))started increasing in both countries.in1992,Canada reached its original value.Meanwhile,UK reached 10%,three points below the original percentage in1983.(终点)
From the above analysis,the unemployment rate was more stable than those of UK and Canada. (结论)
柱状图：
The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in
one European city in1950,1970,and1990.
bar chart represents a contrast in terms of bus,car,bike,foot in years of1950,1970and1990.
From1950to1990,the percentage of people who travel(替换)by bike and on foot decreased from 27%to7%and33%to10%respectively.Similarly,the percentage of people taking bus dropped after1970but increased before that.However,car’s percentage use sharply boomed year after year.(第一组：柱自身比较)
Traveling by bike or on foot were most popular in1950.but percentage of car users was far more smaller.After two decades,with the decrease of bike users and travelers on foot,bus and car gain a lot of popularity.Bus reached its peak at27%.in1970,over one out of three(替换)people drive to and from work.(替换第二组，柱间比较)
All in all,as the economy increases gradually,people prefer to go to work and come home by driving rather than taking bus or walking.
表格图：
The table below shows information on income,taxes and prices in five cities around the world.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
City Average hourly wage Tax as%of wage Monthly rent for
4-bedroom flat Athens￡418.9%￡700
Geneva￡1326.6%￡1,300
￡315%￡2,400 Hong
Kong
London￡731.3%￡1,200
Tokyo￡1219.3%￡5,300
This table graph demonstrates a comparison of wages,taxes and rents in five important cities, Athens,Geneva,Hong Kong,London and Tokyo.
Geneva and Tokyo offer the highest average hourly wage,13and12pounds respectively.Within expectation,the tax as percentage of wage is also high.However,the rent in Tokyo is much more than that in Geneva.
On the contrary,the lowest wages are offered by Hong Kong and Athens,3and4pounds respectively.It is not surprising that the taxes are correspondingly lower than the rest.The difference between the two cities is the rent,with the lowest700pounds in Athens and more higher2400pounds in Hong Kong.(第二组：工资最高，相似和不同)
With the average rent and wage,London has the highest tax（其他有特点但未提到的）
In conclusion,in terms of living cost,living in London might harder than the others.(合理推断)
饼状图：
The two pie charts below show the types of communication used in1962and1982.
two pie charts demonstrate a comparison in different patterns of communication which were used in1962and1982.
As what has been shown in the two charts,the percentage of letters drastically decreased from 50%in1962to10%in1982respectively.
The figures of phone and computer usage,on the contrary,increased correspondingly at a high rate.The percentage of computer communication in1982was exactly twice that in 1962.Similarly,the popularity of phone in1982can also be suggested by its rise-25%from the original value,35%.
In conclusion,communication devices,as economy and technology are being enhanced,have changes greatly.High-tech ways will gradually take the place of private and traditional ones.
高分范文展示
1.21世纪的利弊？discuss?
With our entrance to21st century,there rises the controversy of whether our future would turn to the bright one.Many people claim that21st century would be taken into a positive way through
scientific and technological advance while a great number of pessimists argue that our future is threat123d by lots of ongoing disasters.As for me,I prefer a balanced view that there will be crisis and opportunities.
On one hand,we have reasons to be optimistic.For one thing,the development of information technology will make it possible to for all the people in the world to communicate with each other easily.Take the internet as an example.A simple click on the mouse could lead you to every place and person all over the world.For another,as the medical treatment develops,it could be expected that there will be cure for such deadly diseases as cancer and AIDS and that human beings would be able to enjoy a long life expectancy.Moreover,with the ongoing mechanization,an increasing amount of dangerous and heavy-labor work would tend to be taken by the robot.In this case,man can work in more safe and comfortable conditions,as well as enjoy more leisure time.
On the other hand,it can be foreseen that there may be crises in the future.First,people will run high risk of psychological problems for dealing with computers in long-term is likely to cause the loneliness and infantile autism.Consequently the rate of suicide would experience a sharp rise. Besides,there is possibility that the robot would take over the earth,enslaving our mankind who is originally its creator.Furthermore,it is not impossible that a global nuclear war would break out. As a result,none of all creatures on the earth can escape this disaster so that from then on the civil history comes to an end.
From the discussion above,it can be concluded that we would confront both opportunities and crises.The advanced science and technology could obtain merit and drawback.So what I hope to see in the future is that we can enjoy healthier and longer life and that more and more science and technology will be employed in the peaceful way.
2.Some people claim that the increasingly frequent business and cultural communications are positive whereas others hold a different opinion.Discuss.
Although a slight mention of the past pastoral life arouses a nostalgia and reminiscent beauty, which is unexceptionally characterized by isolation and somewhat disconsolation,various and frequent communications in business,education,scientific research,and even the daily life are flooding the existent values,ideas,and ideals.Inevitably,this social phenomenon provokes a storm of commendation and criticism as well.
Frequent communications in various fields among cultures and people undoubtedly benefit individuals’life.Almost every citizen becomes the beneficiary of the communications.People around the world today are able to enjoy otherwise unavailable products and services.For instance, it is due to the international communication in business that people in China can enjoy such high quality products as Mercedes Benz from Germany,Titoni watch from Switzerland,and IBM computers.All these cases demonstrate one thing:communications contribute to human beings.
Not only are diverse array of communications in the international spectrum positive to individuals, they also have been exerting significant favorable influences on family life.It was virtually incredible to imagine an international family five decades ago,but today on account of the rapid development of communications and transportations,religious and racial discriminations have almost entirely“gone with the wind”.It is no longer an“abnormal”thing that a Chinese husband
gets married with a Japanese wife.Such international family,as scientific research warrants,is a welcome development in terms of both biological and political elements.
In fact,the advantages of communications are also shaping and reflecting the general human civilization development.If God,as Bible says,created different languages among men,then men all over the world today are able to work together,pray together,and struggle for freedom together. The communications are actually a process of globalization.This is the trend of sustainable development.With communications,people become brothers and sisters rather than enemies. With communications,there will be peace rather than war.With communications,the mundane mortals will eventually retrieve the paradise that our forefathers lost and get renascence.
Admittedly,the communications might have some negative influences.But the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.Therefore,the communications should be advocated and encouraged with the utmost enthusiasm
A,B类题型理由段解决方案：单边支持类
Wild animals have no place in the21st contrary,and the protection for them is a waste of resource.To what extent,do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Humans share the planet with the wild animas who have contributed a lot to our society and economy.But today,the world is poised on the brink of the largest wave of extinctions.So we have to do something to protect wild animals.
Firstly,faming to feed the growing human population is one of the chief cause of extinction.From this millions of hectares of forests and natural vegetation have been cleared for agricultural use. Secondly,excess mining has destroyed the habitat of wild animals.Then came the threat of illegal logging,poaching and smuggling.Wild animals are now facing severe problems,but fortunately more and more people begin to realize the value of wild animals to our human-beings environment.
As we know,wild animals together with wild plants consist of a complex ecosystem,which is significant to our natural environment,providing clean water,clean air and various resources. They are so connected and interacted that even extinction of several species will lead to a disaster to the whole ecosystem.Furthermore,the variety of species and genes founding wild animals are critical resources that could be utilized in each country’s development,especially in science and medical.In history,many ideas of famous inventions originated form animals such as ultrasonic fro bat.Moreover,there are still so many undiscovered fields of science,maybe we can get use of one kind of wild animals one day.Before this,we had better keep them protected,particular to some rare species.
Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource,but I do not agree.It seems that we would spend some time,wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing.Actually we also do this for human being ourselves.
Wild animals have no place in the21st contrary,and the protection for them is a waste of resource.To what extent,do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
With the rapid progress of society,people’s living standard is dramatically improved,with more convenience and resource coming to us.However,our living environment at the same time is getting more polluted.One effect of this phenomenon is that there is not enough space for wild animals to survive,and many people hold an opinion that it would be a waste of resource to protect wild animals.Nevertheless,I think exactly the opposite way.
The environment is a comprehensively biological life cycle,with human beings,animals and plants playing affecting each other accordingly.Wild animals occupy an essential position in the life cycle.Let’s look at a very simple example.Although snakes are very dangerous and frightening,they can catch mice,and mice can destroy the crop as well as sanitary surroundings. Here it is easy to understand that if there are not enough snakes,the number of mice would grow rapidly,doing more harm to us.Then,should not we protect the snake?Actually,we are saving resource by doing this because trying to save something that is already destroyed seriously costs more.
Secondly,in present,quite a number of problems such as desertification and rivers dried up, caused by excessive exploitation of natural resource,have arisen an increasing number of people aware of environment protection.More and more places,I think,should be planned for wild animals in21st contrary.Thus,it is obviously noticed that more trees are planted and more wildlife conservation areas are planned,ensuring that wild animals will be under protection.As we can see from the improvement,in the21st contrary,wild animals would be leading a happy life.
To sum up,we cannot live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us.For this reason,we should try our best to protect them.Let’s remember one thing—protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.
Wild animals have no place in the21st contrary,and the protection for them is a waste of resource.To what extent,do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Biological diversity has never been as threatened as it is today as a result of the process of human civilization.The various forms of pressure created by human activity have destroyed natural balance,led to the deterioration of natural habitats,genetic erosion and the rarity,even disappearance,of a number of plant and animal species.
As the pace of civilization accelerates,more people,taking more space,needing to use more natural resources,engaging in ever-growing consumption,impose sever deterioration on the habitat of animals.An increasing number of people come to realize that the disappearance of animals will result in serious threat to the equilibrium of ecosystem.Simply put,the extinction of hawks,rat-eating bird seen in many regions,will result in the rapid propagation of rats.And rats, further,will destroy the prairies and threaten the other animals like gazelles,zebras,and others,。