人教必修一Unit1 解透单元写作

Unit1 解透单元写作
主题写作——建议信
1. 写作任务
假如你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。

你收到一封署名为Miss Worried的来信。

信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：进入高中后经常感到压力大，晚上睡不好，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。

请用英文给该同学写封回信。

内容包括：
①表示理解并给予安慰；
②提出建议并说明理由。

注意：
①词数：100左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2. 写作思路
（1）一审：体裁、结构和主题
体裁：应用文——应用文书信建议类
交际用语—导入—写信目的
结构：三段概括句+2—3条建议（关联词连接；建议+必要的细节支持）祝愿+交际用语
主题：缓解压力的建议
（2）二定：时态与人称
时态：一般现在时
人称：主要为第二人称
（3）三明确
明确写作要点：安慰、方法建议（缓解压力）、祝愿
3. 素材整理
（1）关键词语
be confused about sth. 对某事感到困惑
sign up（for）报名参加
attract one’s attention吸引某人的注意力
be suitable for适合
work out a schedule制订时间表
recommend that sb. （should）do sth. 建议某人做某事
（2）完成句子
①事实是你这个年龄的青少年们在进入高中后都会面临巨大的压力和挑战。

（表语从句）
The truth is ________ teenage youth of your age will face ________ ________ and________ after ________ senior high school.
②一个解决方法是向你信任的人谈谈你的感受和你困惑的事情。

（定语从句，介词后接宾语从句）
One solution is to talk to someone ________ ________ about ________ you feel and ________ you are confused about.
③我建议你把你的关注点转移到其他事情上去。

（宾语从句）
I recommend that you ________ ________ your ________ to other things.
④报名加入一些课外的俱乐部或与朋友去户外玩团队游戏，这适合你转移注意力并消除你的压力。

（sign up，定语从句）
________ ________ ________ some extra-curricular clubs or go outdoors and play team games with your friends, ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ you to divert your attention as well as get rid of your pressure.
⑤制订一个时间表，并尽力遵循它。

Work out ________ ________ and try to follow it.
⑥我希望我的建议能够有帮助。

（find后接复合宾语结构）
I________ you’ll find my advice________.
答案：①that, great pressure, challenge, entering②you trust, how, what③should tur, focus④Sign up for, both of which are suitable for ⑤a schedule ⑥hope useful 4. 满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
Dear Miss Worried,
I’ m sorry to know that you’ re having difficulty falling asleep. The truth is that teenage youth of your age will face great pressure and challenge after entering senior high school. Thus, there is no need to worry so much. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
Actually, you can reduce your pressure in many ways. One solution is to talk to someone you trust about how you feel and what you are confused about, which is obviously a good way of sharing your feelings and getting support. Besides, I recommend that you should turn your focus to other things. For example, sign up for some extra-curricular clubs or go outdoors and play team games with your friends, both of which are suitable for you to attract your attention as well as get rid of your pressure. And thirdly, work out a schedule and try to follow it. This way, you can make good use of your time.
I hope you’ll find my advice useful. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua 第一段：导入话题和写信的目的，表示理解第一句导入话题，第二、三句表示理解，第四句表达写信目的。

第二段：第一句概述，接下来三个建议，用关联词besides，and thirdly进行连接句型：第二句用了定语从句、宾语从句，不定式作表语；第三句用了recommend 的虛拟语气句型；第四句用了both of which引导的定语从句。

第三段：表达希望，加入交际用语。

5. 佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony来信告诉你最近他沉迷于电子游戏，影响了学习和健康，希望你能就如何戒掉电子游戏给他提出建议。

要点包括：
①写信的目的；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③你的祝愿。

注意：
①词数100左右；
②内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ One possible version:
Dear Tony,
Hearing that you’re addicted to video games, which does harm to your health and study, I’m writing to give you some advice on how to get rid of it.
Above all, it would be a good idea to focus on some other activities. For example, sign up for some volunteer organisations or join in some meaningful or relaxing extracurricular activities when you feel bored, like reading or doing sports. What’s more, I feel it significant to limit the time you spend playing video games and focus more on study so that you can keep a balance between schoolwork and games. Additionally, I recommend that you should try to get into a good routine and make a schedule, which is beneficial to your health. Try to be responsible for yourself.
I hope you’ll find the advice helpful. As time goes by, I’m convinced that, although it is a great challenge for you, you’ll get rid of the addiction successfully.
Yours,
Li Hua （2）佳作二
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Joe将要来中国做交换生，他发来电子邮件说他担心与新同学相处不好。

请你根据以下提示给他发一封电子邮件。

①安慰对方；
②就如何与新同学相处给出合理建议（两到三条建议）；
③希望他尽早适应新学校的生活。

注意：
①词数100左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Joe,
How is everything going？____________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua One possible version
Dear Joe,
How is everything going? I can understand your worry about how to get along with new classmates Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.
First, I think you should communicate with your classmates as much as you can even though it’s difficult for you to understand them. I believe that all the students are friendly. Second, I suggest you take part in some after-class activities with your classmates. It will help you find out more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too Then you may become friends.
I hope you get used to your new school life quickly and have a happy school year.
Yours,
Li Hua。