人教版初中八年级英语上册1-10单元话题写作范文
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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. We enjoyed ourselves very much.①At 8:00 on Sunday morning②,we got together③at the school gate. When all of us arrived, we started. We liked riding, so we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes' ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took quite a few photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic.④Everyone ate a lot. We all had a good time.
①学习本文“开门见山”的写法,引出上周末做的事情。
②文中以时间为主线叙述了上个周末发生的事情。
③学习文中词组的恰当运用,如get together、by bike、have a rest、take photos、quite a few等,让行文更加流畅。
④学习文中简练的结尾表达,一句话概括了作者对这次活动的感受。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦!
时态为一般过去时,注意保持通篇时态前后一致。
Unit 2 How often do you exercise?
Early rising is important
Early rising is good for us in many ways.①First②,it is healthy for the mind and the body. We can do morning exercises to keep us healthy③. It's also good to take a walk along the street.Second,early rising helps us with studies. When we get up very early in the morning, everything around is quiet. In the morning we can learn more quickly and memorize what we have learnt easily.Third,early rising gives us enough time so that we can have a relaxing breakfast.④So I think it's important for us to form the habit of getting up early.
①开门见山地提出了本文的论点-早起有益。
②学习文中分层次论证。
first、second、third的运用使得文章清晰、条理。
③学习文中固定短语的运用技巧,如be good for、keep sb. healthy、so that的运用让行文更加流畅。
④文章结尾作者表达了自己的看法,给出了结论,既照应了开头也重申了自己的观点。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦!
do morning exercises(做早操)中的exercises不可以写成exercise.
Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
I have a good friend. Her name is Alice.①We are in the same class. In some ways , we are the same,but in some ways, we are different.②I am as tall as Alice.③But she is heavier than me. We both have black hair. But my hair is longer than hers. Alice is more outgoing than me. She likes sports. But I like music. She exercises every day and she is stronger than me. I am smarter than her. And I am better at English than her.I don't think differences are important in a friendship.④
①开门见山介绍朋友的姓名。
②学习本文巧妙过渡,介绍与朋友的相同和不同之处。
③as...as和比较级的应用使文章更加自然、流畅。
④文章最后一句阐述了作者的朋友观。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦!
heavy的比较级是heavier,不能写成more heavy或heavyer.
Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater?
There are three restaurants near our school. Of the three restaurants, I like Ham's best.①Because it has the best food. And it has the friendliest service of the three.However, people don't often eat there because the food there is the most expensive.
I also like Miller's. The food there is cheaper than that in Ham's. And it has better food than Jason's.②It also
has friendly service. It is the most popular restaurant near our school.
As for Jason's, I don't like it. Though it's the cheapest, it has the worst food.③And it doesn't have
friendly service at all.
①开门见山,点出自己最喜欢的餐馆。
开篇引题,值得借鉴。
②学习本文正确运用形容词的比较级,清晰明了地表达了自己的观点。
③though引导的让步状语从句的使用使文章句式灵活,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这两颗地雷哦!
A.friendly的最高级是把y改为i,再加-est.
B.though引导让步状语从句,不与but连用。
Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show?
I asked some of my friends about their favorite TV shows. Here are their answers.①Judy likes soap operas best②because she thinks they are very funny and romantic. Alex's favorite TV shows are sports shows. He likes doing sports and he wants to know more about sports.Li Ling likes to watch English shows. She likes English very much. She wants to learn it well and improve her listening.As for③me, I like talent shows. I don't mind English shows or sports shows but I can't stand soap operas because they are too boring.
①开篇引出话题,简洁明了。
②学习Judy likes ...best、Alex's favorite ...等句式的变化,避免表达句式单一,增强文章的可读性。
③学习as for、don't mind、can't stand等短语的运用,学以致用,使文章意思连贯,表达准确。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这两颗地雷哦!
A.favorite本身意为“最喜欢的”,故没有最高级形式。
B.boring“令人厌烦的”,一般用来修饰物。
此处不能用bored.
Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science.
The winter holiday is coming. I'm going to do what I want to do.①
First②, I'm going to have a good rest and relax. I will read some good books. Reading books is useful Because③it can not only open up my mind but also help me get more knowledge. Next, I'm going to spend more time talking with my parents. I will also try my best to help them do some housework. Then, I'm going to take part in social activities so that I can get to know more people.
What do you think of my holiday? I hope you will have a happy winter holiday.④
①学习本文“开门见山,表明写作目的”的写法。
②first与下文中next、then的使用使文章条理清晰,层次分明。
③because、so that等连接词的巧妙运用使行文更加流畅。
④最后一段中的问句拉近了作者与读者的距离。
作者还表达了自己的祝愿,是我们可以学习的一种结尾方式。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这两颗地雷哦!
e leave等表示位置移动的词用现在进行时表将来。
B.在含有宾语从句的主从复合句中,宾语从句用陈述语序。
Unit 7 will people have robots?
In ten years, I will be 24 years old.①I will be a teacher. I will work in Beijing because②it is a big and beautiful city. I really loved it when I visited it last year. In ten years, I will travel around the world because I like to travel. I don't like living alone , so I'll live in an apartment with my best friends. I like keeping pets , so I'll have many different pets.
I'm sure I will have a more wonderful life in ten years.③
①学习文章“开门见山、引出话题”的写法。
②because、so等连词的运用使文章行文流畅,增加了文章的亮点,是我们可以学习借鉴的。
③学习作者用宾语从句提出期望,总结全文的结尾方式。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦!
apartment以元音音素开头,其前应用不定冠词an修饰。
Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake?
Do you know how to make a beef sandwich ?①Now,let me tell you.
First②, put a spoon of cheese om a piece of bread.③Next, cut up a green pepper and an onion.Add these to the bread. Then, put some mushrooms and 2 pieces of beef on the bread. Put two spoons of relish on the beef. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top.
Now you can en joy it. It's very delicious.④
①学习本文用疑问句开头,点出写作话题,为下文作铺垫。
②学习本文对first、next、then、finally的运用,使对制作过程的描述条理有序。
③学习文中祈使句的用法。
④此结尾显得亲切、自然,容易引起读者的共鸣。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦!
祈使句要以动词原形开头,莫要用错!
Unit 9 Can you come to my party?
Hi Henry,
Thanks for inviting me to go climbing next week.I'm sorry. I'm not available.①I am really busy next week.②On Sunday I am going shopping in the supermarket,and on Monday I will go to Mary's birthday party. On Tuesday I'll go to the doctor. On Wednesday I am going to play tennis with the school team and I will have a science test on Thursday. I will go to the movies with some friends on Friday. On Saturday I will have to do some washing.Oh,it is late.I must stop now.③I hope you will have a good time.④Write back soon.
Yours,
Kate
①学习这两句拒绝别人邀请的说法,委婉而不失礼貌。
②先总述下周的活动,然后在下文中细说具体的活动,层次鲜明。
③借此收笔,构思巧妙。
④学习此处主从复合句的表达,以此句表示祝愿,不失礼貌。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这两颗地雷哦!
A. thanks for...中,for为介词,其后接名词、代词或动词-ing形式。
B.表示“希望某人做某事”时可以用“hope+从句”,而不能用hope sb.to do sth.
Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!
If I have a lot of money
If I have a lot of money, I will have the chance to do what I want to do.①It is best to do good things with the money.②So I think I'll give some money to charities to help the people in need. I'll try my best to help the people who are in trouble.③Then, I will buy a big house with a garden and a swimming pool for my parents, so they will live a happy life. I'm sure I will enjoy a better life.
①开篇点题,概述了自己的想法。
②学习“It is best to do...”句型的灵活运用,增加文章的亮点。
③学习文中who引导定语从句的用法,这类高级句式的运用是文章的一大亮点,也是写作得高分关键。
易错提醒:动笔的时候一定要小心,千万别踩到下面这颗地雷哦!
注意if引导的条件状语从句的时态,即遵循“主将从现”原则。