九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编技巧(很有用)及练习题

九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编技巧(很有用)及练习题
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达
假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。

提示问题：
1. What’s your hobby?
2. Why do you like it?
3. When did you start it?
4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 不少于80词。

My hobby
【答案】My Hobby
I have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇作文按照要求可分为4块儿内容，首先指出我的爱好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接着说明为什么喜欢这个爱好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old.我开始这个爱好的时间，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.自己的收获以及期望. 中间用到短语such as…,以及连词because…., when….and…等，使文章表达清晰，也具有连贯性，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的文章。

2．（·扬州市江都区第三中学中考模拟）毕业之际，学校要求每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。

假如你是Jim,请根据下表的提示，用英文做一个简短的汇报。

要求：
（1）：表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）：必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

（4）：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Jim
【答案】例文Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,
I’ll leave jun ior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.
However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.
Yours sincerely
Jim
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。

在毕业之际，学校要求每位九年级学生给各自家长写封信，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在的问题。

假如你是Jim，要求根据表格的提示内容，用英文做一个简短的汇报。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作过程中，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
➢ recommend two traditional Chinese things
➢ show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意事项：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintin gs have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】
【详解】
本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。

第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。

例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。

理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。

文章干净利落，层次分明。

4．（·北京中考模拟）题目①
假如你是李华，你们学校的英国友好校下周将要来访。

学校国际部正在招募接待英国学生的志愿者，陪伴他们度过周末。

你想成为志愿者。

请用英语写一封申请信，在信中说明你申请的理由，以及你打算拿给英国学生安排哪些周末活动。

提示词语：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes
提示问题：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?
2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，Li Hiua
【答案】Dear SiraMadam.
I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it's easy for me to get along well with them.
I have some plans for the weekends.First of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.
I'll also cook some Chinese dishes for them.I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，Li lHua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，以书信格式，根据所给材料写申请信；书写时材料要用全，注意紧扣主题，结构严谨。

【详解】
1.本篇是书信格式，以第一人称向学校国际部申请当志愿者；根据材料提示，介绍自己的情况用一般现在时，计划如何安排周末活动用一般将来时。

2.本例文层次分明，第一层阐述自己申请的理由，介绍自己开朗的性格适合志愿者的工作；
第二层详细介绍给英国学生安排哪些周末活动；最后表明自己的期待。

文体正确，文句通顺，内容完整。

3.本例文恰当地使用了很多的短语和句型，是文章文句精彩。

如：用不定式would like to be
a volunteer to receive the British students阐述自己的愿望，make friends、It's easy for me to get along well with等介绍自己合适志愿者的工作；用动词短语have some plans for、介词短语like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、宾语从句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.详细介绍周末的活动，短语丰富，句型多样。

5．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
86.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。

请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

（1）父母规矩太多，不允许晚上出去，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己。

（2）你应该理解父母，他们是爱孩子的，希望孩子前程似锦。

（3）你与父母保持良好关系的做法：努力学习，听父母话。

（4）……（至少一条）。

要求：
（1）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。

（3）词数：80～100个。

（4）短文的开头己给出，不计入总词数。

How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me...
【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at n ight. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【解析】
【详解】
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。

请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

注意文中用第一人称书写；2.时态以一般现在时为主；3.体裁为说明文，可稍加评论；4.合理想象，发表你对压力的看法；5.语句通顺。

意思连贯；
【点睛】
本文语句通顺，段落分明。

文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,这里给文章增色不少。

6．（·天津中考模拟）假设五一小长假期间，你去故宫博物院参观，请根据以下要点提不与一篇英语短文，讲述你在故宫的所见所闻。

（1）你提前在网上购买了故宫门票。

（2）你乘火车到达北京后’转乘地铁来到故宫。

（3）故宫的建筑高大雄伟，展品琳琅满目，精美绝伦。

（4）故宫内游人如织，人们纷纷拍照留念。

（5）闭馆时间到了，你仍然不愿离去。

（6）你的感受……
参考词汇：故宫博物院the Palace Museum 提前in advance
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

My visit to the Palace Museum
On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum.
___________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
【答案】My visit to the Palace Museum
On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession. It's closing time. I still don't want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇发言稿。

题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。

注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。

在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。

为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。

【点睛】
这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession.这些给文中增色不少。

7．（·吉林中考模拟）“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。

请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？
2. How did he/ she inspire you？
要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired me
Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.
Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always
keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.
You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。

题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。

学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。

写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。

其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。

应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。

为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。

同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。

各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。

其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。

用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

8．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。

内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.____________________________
【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文
【详解】
这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。

这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。

9．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。

请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。

【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t contr ol the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。

作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己
发挥想象力去补充。

审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。

短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。

为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。

或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。

短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。

文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。

结构清晰，安排合理。

其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。

语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。

短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。

10．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Jack，中学英文报 WARM HEART专栏的编辑，近期你收到一封署名为 Asking的求助信，该同学在信中诉说了自己当前焦虑的情绪，请根据以下信息，给他写一封回信。

写作要点：
1. 表达你对他的理解并给予安慰。

2. 求助人焦虑情绪产生的原因。

（1）下周将要进行期末考试。

（2）尽管准备了很长时间，对成绩仍没有把握。

3. 为他如何消除考前焦虑提出具体建议并说明理由。

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Hi, Asking,
I’m the editor of WARM HEART.
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Editor,
Jack
【答案】I’m the editor of WARM HEART.I hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.
First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to p repare for the test.
What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.
Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对某位同学考前焦虑进行安慰，分析原因并给出消除焦虑的建议。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比较级，the+比较级，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+状语放句首，用半倒装。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

11．（·北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。

某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为
主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待
他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

提示词语： important, help, happy
提示问题：● What do you think of being kind to others?
● What did you do?
● How do you feel?
Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德）of Chinese people. ______
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【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the
English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,
when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.
Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,
he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.
【解析】
试题分析：
本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。

短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。

文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。

但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。

写作亮点：
短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is…），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动词过去时使用正确。

有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。

12．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe
you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it.
Please write a composition with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included:
1. How did you get the story?
2. When and where did it happen?
3. What happened exactly?
4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.
【答案】请参考范文：
The happy thing that I have ever experienced
This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.
I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple life.When I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.
Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice ter, I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano teacher.So I learned the piano from my teacher there.
Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for it.He advised my father to give up.But my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn't give up. I was moved by my father's encourgement.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是关于自己经历或看到的故事为话题的材料作文，要求根据内容要点来写作。

学生首先要认真阅读材料中给出的短语及相关信息,认真审题,确定文章的中心。

在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。

写作时还要注意:1.书写规范；2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。

高分句型：This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father's love for me, warm and deep love.这是一个关于我自己经历的故事，从这件事上，我真的感受到了爸爸对我的爱，温暖而深沉的爱。

Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice place.突然有一天，爸爸说带我去一个好地方。

But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn't matter.但是我爸爸说只要我高兴就行，没关系。

【点睛】
注意写作过程中，将要点展开并表达清楚，注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。

13．（·广东蛇口育才二中中考模拟）书面表达
初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。

就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。

请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试
2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习。