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1. 读后续写(一)

读后续写
crow
conflict
beak
resolution
conflict
Suddenly , he found a water bottle, but the opening was too small for the crow’s beak to fit in.
The wise crow found a lot of stones and put them in the bottle , making the water come up.
resolution
A peek into the story
Activity : Read for basic information.
help the plane; show
before task
first task
the light
look after goats
the
happy/proud/excited/~~~
Why did Marie feel more and more anxious? And how did the author bring out her anxiety?
Construct the content of the story
Activity: Review the text and find out ways to express the feelings
Marie French soldiers
story
promise; can’t show
second
the light
task
German soldiers
nervous/calm/worried/~~

读后续写范文20篇点评

读后续写练习（一）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining heavily that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to stand up. At that time, he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him. The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours?” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). ?” “Have you k illed the mankilled the man?” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “At about seven last night.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” “No, sir.”The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat(打) him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap(供认), but the farmer 设陷阱) the farmer into the confession(didn’t admit he was the murderer(谋杀犯). 注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

英语读后续写优秀范文(6篇)

We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. It was apparent that he was still hesitant whether he should have a try in running with others. Spotting this, I approached him gradually and told him he was no different from other normal students in my opinion and that doubtlessly he could make it without much difficulty. With my words of encouragement David stood up firmly and went to the join the other runners.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other the very beginning he lagged behind others for his strange running style. However, he didn’t lose heart and quit. On the contrary, he sped up little by little and much to the audience’s surprise he was among the first runners who arrived at the finishing line early. Not only were the audience and other students impressed by the fact that David eventually made it in finishing the race, but also they admired him very much for his great determination.英语读后续写优秀范文第2篇We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. He buriedhis face in his arms and began to a split second of pause,I put one hand on his shoulder gently, reached the other out to him and said in an inspiring voice,_You can make it, David! We are all looking forward to your raised his head, looking at me with confidence in his eyes. For a moment he hesitated, but the idea of beating himself made him gather all his courage to take my hand. Then I nodded to him, giving him a bigbright smile.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He took a deep breath and calmed himself soon as the event began, everyone rushed to the head of the team, leaving David's small figure behind, who swung his body side to side. Eventually, he gathered all his strength and struggled his way to the finishing line. At that moment, all his classmates and even other schools' students ran to embrace him and cheered for him. Seeing what was happening in front of him, he flashed that familiar big toothy smile again. Needless to say, David was filled with so much encouragement and his heart was actually lit up by this event.英语读后续写优秀范文第3篇We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. Looking directly at him, I firmly said, “David, it’s your rights to pull out of the competition if you don’t want to run today. But it’s not good enough to do so only because you fear the worst for possible sarcastic comments. There are people like doing these mean things. The real matter is whether you let these few people stop you from pursuing your passion for running. If you want to run, David, then you run.” Several minutes after his taking my words, David said with fierce determination, “I’m gonna run.”I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. After the starting pistol exploded, all the runners sprang into action and ran forwardonly to find David fell on the track from time to time. Then, the small bold figure picked himself up and started again and again. I knew he would with the rhythm of his run, he finally crossed the finish line long after other children. There, he gave me his typical toothy smile, saying, “That was easy!”We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn\'t look at me. It was apparent that he was still hesitant whether he should have a try in running with others. Spotting this, I approached him gradually and told him he was no different from other normal students in my opinion and that doubtlessly he could make it without much difficulty. With my words of encouragement David stood up firmly and went to the join the other runners.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other the very beginning he lagged behind others for his strange running style. However, he didn’t lose heart and quit. On the contrary, he sp ed up little by little and much to the audience’s surprise he was among the first runners who arrived at the finishing line early. Not only were the audience and other students impressed by the fact that David eventually made it in finishing the race, but also they admired him very much for his great determination.英语读后续写优秀范文第5篇We sat down next to euch other, but David wouldn't look at me. Depressedand low-spirited, David sat silently with his head dropping. And from time to time, he stole a glance at me as if he had something to say. Noticing this scene,I patted him on the shoulder and said with patience and eagerness, _It's been a long time since you started to prepare for the big cross-country run. You really want to let it go?Just try it!?_While he didn't say a word, I knew there was a decision in his heart.I watched as Duvid moved up to the starting line with the other a whistle, everyone rushed held on for a while and then he dragged his legs with inner firmness. What was alarming was that he fell down. Gasping with pain,he forced himself to his feet and with slow,shaky steps, began to silence came a storm of applause. Even if David didn't get a good place, he was still happy. I nodded with satisfaction anda little bit more effortsthumbed up at him. Such is the key to_success_—and determination will create a little bit more miracles.英语读后续写优秀范文第6篇We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn\'t look at me. He buriedhis face in his arms and began to a split second of pause,I put one hand on his shoulder gently, reached the other out to him and said in an inspiring voice,^You can make it, David! We are all looking forward to your performance.^He raised his head, looking at me with confidence in his eyes. For a moment he hesitated, but the idea of beating himself made him gather all his courage to take my hand. Then I nodded to him, giving him a bigbright smile.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. He took a deep breath and calmed himself soon as the event began, everyone rushed to the head of the team, leaving David\'s small figure behind, who swung his body side to side. Eventually, he gathered all his strength and struggled his way to the finishing line. At that moment, all his classmates and even other schools\' students ran to embrace him and cheered for him. Seeing what was happening in front of him, he flashed that familiar big toothy smile again. Needless to say, David was filled with so much encouragement and his heart was actually lit up by this event.。

读后续写练习1

读后续写练习1Joe was an old man. He was 75-year-old. He lived very happily and formed a beautiful family. His children grew up and moved to different cities in order to pursue of good career and future. He lived in a small village carrying the memories of his deceased(已故的)wife. Joe had 4grandchildren and they used to visit him during their holidays.And it was the vacation time and Joe was eagerly waiting for the arrival of his grandchildren. He was preparing his home for the kids, cleaning the home,harvesting the garden, rearranging the household items, buying the favourite foods, dresses for the children, etc. In the busy arrangements, he lost his favourite watch.The watch was gifted by his dead wife when their first child was born. Joe treasured the watch and it became his only companion after his wife’s death.He forgot the watch missing and was happy receiving the kids at home. It was only the next day when he was about to take bath, he remembered that the watch was missing. He saw the watch lost when he was arranging things in the barn. He was shocked and very upset.His grandchildren asked him why he was so dull and asked him what troubled him.Joe said,“Dear children, I lost the most precious watch I have ever had and I ever got in my life. It was gifted by your grandma and I lost it while cleaning the home! I feel like I’m missing my heart.”Joe was on tears and the children promised him that they would search for the old watch for him.注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2023届高考英语一轮复习语法总动员之读后续写(1)

2023届高考英语一轮复习语法总动员之读后续写（1）1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Pembral was a good boy. But he was always forgetting things. Big things, small things, important things, little things. His mother was a patient woman, which was a good thing. Pembral regularly tested her patience. She learned early on to remind him of everything: big things, small things, important things, even the little things. Once in a while the little things that didn't seem important at the time became more important later.Sometimes she thought that Pembral forgot things on purpose — things like washing behind his ears; or picking up his toys; or feeding the dog. It bothered (麻烦) her to remind him of these sorts of things. However, for the most part, she knew that his mind just wandered off and it was her job to bring it back.Fall weather had arrived. The air was cool and fresh, especially in the morning, even if the skies were brilliant blue and the sun was shining brightly. The light of the morning made wisps (缕) of fog come up from the ponds. The trees were changing their summer greens to coats of brilliant yellow, orange and red.This was a time when Pembral's mother cooked things that smelled and tasted really good. It seemed like he was just hungrier in the fall or something, and he liked how the windows steamed up and how the kitchen smells filled up the whole house when his mother was cooking up something good at that time of the year.Pembral's mother was baking (烤) something special that day: a carrot cake. It was one of Pembral's favorites. But she needed some things from the store, and sent Pembral to get them. “I need eggs, sugar and raisins ( 葡萄干),” she said. “Here's some money,” she went on. “Put it in your pocket where you won't lose it.”Pembral pushed the money into his pocket, and headed toward the door. He went outside and down the street, kicking dry leaves on the sidewalk into the air and breathing in their smell, and watching flying birds.注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

英语读后续写范文50篇高一

英语读后续写范文50篇高一英语读后续写是提高英语写作能力的有效方式，它能帮助学生拓展思维，提升语言运用能力。

以下是为高一学生准备的50篇英语读后续写范文，涵盖了不同题材和风格，旨在帮助大家提高英语写作水平。

篇章一：The Lost WalletOne day, while walking in the park, Tom found a wallet on the ground...续写：Tom opened the wallet and saw various IDs and a significant amount of cash inside.He thought about how the owner must be feeling worried and decided to find the owner himself.He went to the park"s information center and left his contact information, hoping the owner would reach out.A few days later, he received a phone call from a man named Mr.Smith, who was extremely grateful to have his wallet returned.Tom"s kind act not only made Mr.Smith"s day but also inspired him to perform good deeds for others.篇章二：The Unforgettable Soccer MatchThe final whistle blew, signaling the end of a thrilling soccer match...续写：As the players shook hands, the losing team felt disheartened.However, their coach reminded them that the match was avaluable learning experience.The next day, the team analyzed their performance and worked on improving their weaknesses.With renewed determination, they practiced harder than ever.Their efforts paid off in the next match when they secured a victory.The team learned that setbacks are opportunities for growth and that perseverance is key to success.篇章三：The Magic LampWhile cleaning his attic, Jack stumbled upon an old lamp...续写：Curious, Jack rubbed the lamp, and to his astonishment, a genie appeared.The genie granted Jack three wishes.Jack thought long and hard about what he wanted.最终，他decided to wish for wisdom, kindness, and good health for his family and friends.Years later, Jack realized that these wishes brought him immense joy and fulfillment, far more than any material possession could.He learned that the true value of life lies in relationships and inner peace.（由于篇幅原因，此处仅展示三篇续写范文，其余47篇同理创作。

高考英语作文读后续写20篇附范文

高考英语作文读后续写20篇附范文**1. 范文一：****原文：**Last summer, my family and I visited the Great Wall. The moment we arrived, we were greeted by its majestic beauty. As we started our climb, I noticed a small girl sitting on the steps, looking lost.**续写：**Approaching her, I asked if she needed help. She nodded and said she had separated from her parents. Together, we searched for them, eventually finding them at a nearby restaurant. Her parents were relieved and grateful,offering us a meal as a token of their appreciation. That day, I learned that kindness can bring people together in unexpected ways.**中文翻译：**去年夏天，我和家人参观了长城。

我们一到那里，就被它雄伟壮丽的景色所迎接。

当我们开始攀登时，我注意到一个小女孩坐在台阶上，看起来很迷茫。

我走近她，问她是否需要帮助。

她点了点头，说她与父母走散了。

于是，我们一起寻找他们，最后在附近的一家餐厅找到了他们。

她的父母非常感激，请我们吃了一顿饭作为感谢。

那天，我学到善良可以以意想不到的方式将人们聚集在一起。

**2. 范文二：****原文：**The school festival was upon us, and everyone wasexcited about the talent show. Alice, a quiet girl in our class, had been practicing a piano piece for weeks.**续写：**On the day of the show, Alice's hands trembled as shesat at the piano. She closed her eyes and began to play.The music filled the room, captivating everyone. When she finished, there was a moment of silence, followed by thunderous applause. Alice smiled shyly, her confidence restored. That performance marked a turning point in her school life.**中文翻译：**学校节日即将到来，每个人都对才艺表演感到兴奋。

高考英语真题读后续写1原题+翻译+练习-2021年6月浙江卷

真题读后续写2021年6月浙江卷：“我”的工资一、试题呈现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock (牲畜) trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-’70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback (四分卫) on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor (拖拉机) fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray (喷洒) with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad’s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2021届高考读后续写专项训练一(含答案)

2021届高考语法专题读后续写专项训练一(含答案)(1)南通市2021届高三第三次调研测试读后续写（满分25 分）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150 左右。

After watching my son Todd run in an annual race, I made my usual comment, “Todd, I could walk faster than those women run." Todd laughed as he knew I wasn't a runner."Listen, Mom, I want you to show by your actions. How about you running with me next year at this race?” Without thinking, I quickly agreed to this challenge.But when it was almost time for this race to occur, Todd wasn't going to berunning. He was sent to Africa as a soldier for three years. A few of his friends knew this “challenge" I had agreed to with Todd. They started to encourage me to run the race. I hadn't trained or anything. Quite frankly, I had almost forgotten I said I would do it.I decided I should keep my promise to Todd and run the race. The first thing Idid was go out and buy some running clothes. I might as well look good, was mythought, even though I hadn't trained at all.The day of the race came. I was not well prepared, but I started off. It wasn't longbefore some guy on the roadside started to run next to me. I wasn't in the talkingmood. However, this guy was very talkative. He kept making remarks on how tired hewas, and I must be tired too. The race was over, and this guy's wife won! I was justhappy to finish and keep my promise to Todd.I came home, and my neighbor asked about the race. I told him what hadhappened and how this guy would not shut up his negative talk. My neighbor laughedand set me straight,' "Kay, don't you know what this guy was doing? He thought youwere the competition (竞争对手) by the way you were dressed. He wanted his wife towin.” Oh really!?注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

英语读后续写范文含题目(推荐8篇)

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读后续写范例1 (1)

优秀范例点评范例一But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she coul dn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreled with Tom, walkedawayand climbedto the high place, I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopterwas flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouseand spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest.【点评】该篇作文在逻辑、语言方面做到了平衡、全面、出色。

英语读后续写范文(实用5篇)

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高考英语一轮复习读后续写精讲精练：读后续写素材1(肖像描写)

【素材5】In the mirror, Mariam had her first glimpse of Rasheed: the big, square, ruddy face; the hooked nose; the flushed cheeks that gave the impression of sly cheerfulness; the watery, bloodshot eyes; the crowded teeth, the front two pushed together like a gabled roof; the impossibly low hairline, barely two finger widths above the bushy eyebrows; the wall of thick, coarse, salt-and-pepper hair. 在镜子里,玛丽亚姆第一次看到了拉希德:那张又大又方又红的脸;鹰钩鼻;红润的双颊给人一种狡猾快乐的印象;水汪汪、充血的眼睛;拥挤的牙齿,前面两颗挤在一起,像个山墙屋顶;难以置信的低发际线,在浓密的眉毛上方只有两指宽;浓密的、粗糙的、花白的毛发。
【素材4】Mr Gray was my history teacher in tenth grade.I couldn’t tell what kind of history he taught for two reasons: one, I never liked history, and two, my body was in class, but my mind wasn’t.Mr Gray wasn’t the teacher who offered retakes on tests; he did so much more for me than that.He offered me a pair of ears and a shoulder to cry on. 格雷先生是我十年级的历史老师。我不知道他教的是什么样的历史,原因有二:一, 我从来不喜欢历史,二,我的身体在课堂上,但我的心不在。格雷先生不是那种提供补考的老师;他为我做的远不止那些。他给了我一双耳朵和一个可以依靠的肩膀。

2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼(一)(含答案)

2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（一）一：原文重现Dad and Mom had got to go on a four-day business trip. They taught their elder son Daniel and younger daughter Jane how to feed and look after their dog, Spot, how to take good care of themselves—learning to cook if they could, or ordering pizza—with money left on the table—if they were busy, and told them to keep their rooms clean and tidy. They asked Daniel to be in charge.On the very morning when the parents left, Mom kissed them and said to Daniel gently, “Young man, do take care of Spot and Jane.” Daniel promised, “I will, Mom.”Too excited to fall asleep again, Daniel and Jane jumped out of bed, calling out each other to get up. Their pet dog, Spot, heard the similar voice and rushed in, with a ball in its mouth. Jane stuck(伸) her head into Daniel’s room,“Spot got up an hour earlier. Let’s walk it.” Daniel said excitedly, “I’m coming, but, Jane, don’t forget to keep your room clean and tidy.” “I will.”They ran with the dog in the yard and threw the ball away for Spot to bring it back. They had fun playing with Spot the whole morning. Washing Spot was slow and tiring as it was the first time they had done it. Then Daniel settled down to his homework while Jane did her reading with interest.The following day, Jane begged her brother to order pizza for lunch. Daniel agreed excitedly, “We haven’t tasted that for long and we behave ourselves, right?”After a while, he added, “We should save money, too.” Within half an hour, they treated themselves to a big pizza. However, in the afternoon, Spot looked sick, lying lazily and unwilling to move. Daniel was concerned about the dog and took it to the pet clinic immediately with Jane as their parents had done.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

读后续写 (1)

பைடு நூலகம்
• 地点：Park Street, bank
• 人物：Arthur ,The young man, the bank thief，
• 事件: suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, robbery, the shouts
• 在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：
Arthur…
•
原题：
Paragraph 1: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur... _____________________________________________________________
• 文所给关键词分类：
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on the Park Street and reported the young man to the police, he heard a voice outside, “Help! Help!” To the surprise of Arthur, it was the young man. He had followed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes. Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words: 158)

读后续写--magic Marty

读后续写专练（一）Class_______ Name __________ 第二节：读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Marty was new at school. Usually when you're the new kid, you lay low(保持低调), but not Marty.On his first day, he made a toothpick(牙签) disappear. One second he was holding the toothpick, and the next second it was gone! Everyone was asking him how he did i t. “It's magic! At my old school, they actually called me Magic Marty. " Marty said proudly. “Is he serious?" I whispered to my friend Brian. “I don't know, but that was pretty cool, "Brian said, still watching Marty. I knew Marty's magic was fake, but I just couldn't prove it.Another time, Marty pulled a water bottle out of his bag, along with a cup and carefully poured water into it. Marty got a handful of ice cubes! Applause filled the hallway. When asked how he did it, he just smiled," Sorry, but that's the first law of magic. A magician never reveal (give away) his secrets. "Well, he won't have to, I thought to myself. I'll reveal his secrets for him.That night, at home, I sat at the kitchen table for almost an hour, trying to figure out t he trick. " At it again, honey?” My mom watched me wiggle (摆动)my fingers hopelessly over a cup of water. "He's tricking people!" I cried. " Sounds as if he's trying to make friends. "My mom patted my arm.Magic Marty had me stumped (把…难住), but the next day I caught a lucky break. At lunch, Marty was going on about how he could make things float. He had a ring in one hand and a pencil in the other. That's when I saw it: a thin piece of fishing line tied around the end of the pencil and attached to a button on Marty's shirt! Sure enough, he made the ring “float” by sliding it over the pencil and hanging it from the line. No one else noticed, and soon the whole cafeteria was clapping. However, I wasn't.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:It was time to put an end to the Magic Marty show.______________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:“Wait!” Marty jumped in front of me._____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写（一）答案读后续写范文It was time to put an end to the Magic Marty show. Excited at the thought, I couldn't resist crying out, “It was fishing line!” Totally surprised at my abruptness, all the classmates including Marty had their attention fixed on me, waiting for an explanation. I pulled out the fishing line to reveal his secrets in front of the classmates. Marty lowered his head with a burning face. Having broken the first law of his proud magic, I was about to leave quietly.“Wait!”Marty jumped in front of me. With lips trembling, he attempted to say something but in vain and tears were rolling in his eyes. It suddenly occurred to me what magic meant to him. My satisfaction disappeared, turning into the shame of jealousy(嫉妒). To Marty, all he had done was merely to make friends with more classmates. Out of guilt and regret, I explained my original intention and apologized. Only then did I realize that jealousy should never gain the upper hand at any time.是时候结束马蒂的表演了。

高一假期充电系列读后续写篇01

高一假期充电系列读后续写篇 011．读后续写Jessie had two days’ leave in January this year. She surfed the Internet for cheap travel deals and found the most impressive to be a two-day trip to Dublin. Jessie had never visited Ireland so she knew this was the destination for her.She arrived in Dublin and headed for her hotel. She was excited. When she found her hotel, she paid her money for both nights in advance. The receptionist (接待员) said that was possibly the smartest thing she had done since she decided to take the trip. Jessie dropped her bags in her room and immediately went out to check out some of the sights. It was getting late as Jessie wandered in the streets and decided that even though she was starving, she would rather wait to have dinner later after having a drink.She headed into the closest pub. Jessie noticed a rather strange-looking man staring at her from across the room. He walked to her table and asked her in his most polite manner if she would like to have a beer. After about ten seconds of thought, Jessie came to the conclusion that she would and accepted the offer. But she proposed that she should treat him to some fruits. The man smiled and accepted.Their conversation was mainly about places they had been and places they wanted to go. Jessie soon found out that he was traveling alone too and as soon as he started mentioning that he was staying in the same hotel as her, Jessie swiftly rose from her seat to get another drink.Searching through her bag Jessie found that her wallet was gone! Immediately she realized she took the wrong bag. Her wallet was in another bag. Jessie didn’t panic at first until it hit her that without it, she had not one penny in hand. She was starving. Worst of all, she had generously proposed a treat to the man.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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the brothers the rht? not caught?
parents? the police?
(tone: dangerous→ safe → a happy ending)
The underlined words:
in our apartment, parents, the door, unlocked, comic books, terrible, tie up, the man, the kitchen, the police
Para1: The door of the kitchen was locked and what's
worse, I did not have the key.
Escape
Para2
or not?
Just at the same time our parents came back home.
Step 3. Predict possible plot development
（读后续写）
新高考考试说明
读后续写:
提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。
第五档 (21-25)
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。
Tips for drafting a continuation(起草续篇)
Content: include the underlined words (≥ 5)
Language characteristics:
simple (简单) vivid (生动)
Polish and cohere (润色衔接):
discourse marks (衔接语)
Step 4. Draft a continuation(起草续篇)
Para.1: The door of the kitchen was locked and what's
worse, I did not have the key.
Para.2: Just at the same time our parents came back
I managned to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands...
a happy ending
safe
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics (语言特征) : ?
One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment...
Story narration (故事旁白) simple (简单)
Ding-Dong! Ding-Dong! Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots.
were caught by him.
How: How will the story develop?
Step 2. Read for plot development clues
(情节发展线索)
Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:
Step 1. Read for basic information
1. tone (情节基调): ?
dangerous
Then I realized something terrible would happen....He took out a knife and forced me to ...
Without any thinking，my brother said, “No.”
vivid (生动)
Step 1. Read for basic information
3. content (内容: plot development --- “W&H”) WPahsesna:geomneadianyly tells: WhereO:inneoudraayp, amrtmy ebnrtother opened the door of Wohuor:hoIu, mseyfborrotaherroabnbdera, raonbdbewr e were caught by Whhimat.: My brother opened the door for a robber and we
home.
融洽度高
tone (情节基调) language characteristics(语言特征) content (内容: plot development --- “W&H”)
Step 5. Check and copy your version
(检查誊写)
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
高融洽度
tone (情节基调) language characteristics(语言特征) content (内容: plot development -- “W & H”)