[高考总复习资料]英语二轮复习 短文改错精选(4)

山西黎城县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精选（4）
短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother.So am I ．My mother is an ordinary teacher.She always works hardly ，just as other mothers do every day.In fact ，she isn't good health.She had been suffering from arthritis (关节炎)for many years.In spite of this ，he never stops working or gives up hope.I still remember the day that my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers' Day from her director.The card was read“Thank you for your hard works；Happy Teachers' Day to you ！”At that moment，I was so moving that tears came to my eyes.I am proud of my mother.
【参考答案】： I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother.So am do
I ．My mother is an ordinary teacher.She always works hardly hard
，just as other mothers do every day.In fact ，she isn't ∧in good health.She had has
been suffering from arthritis (关节炎)for many years.In spite of this ，he she
never stops working or gives up hope.I still remember the day that when my mother accepted a card of congratulations congratulation
for Teachers' Day from her director.The card was read“Thank you for your hard works work
；Happy Teachers' Day to you ！”At that moment ，I was so moving moved
that tears came to my eyes.I am proud of my mother.
短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My favorite sport is football.I was a member of our school football team.We
practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in minds that we play for the team instead
ourselves.Also sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从)．Each player must obey the captain ，which is the leader of the team.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
【参考答案】： My favorite sport is football.I was am
a member of our school football team.We practise for three times every week and often watch football match matches on TV together.Play Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give gives
us a sense of fair play and team spirit.We must keep in minds mind that we play for the team instead ∧of ourselves.Also sport teaches us the important importance
of obedience (服从)．Each player must obey the captain ，which who is the leader of the team.And they we
must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.
【由宁夏银川市第九中学2014一模改编】短文改错:
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to
help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of
knocking
her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,
another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots
of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.
As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are
becoming immora lly, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out
my hand without hesitation next time.
【答案】
【小题1】the改成 an
【小题2】while 改成when
【小题3】stop改成stopped
【小题4】Heard改成 Hearing
【小题5】that 改成who
【小题6】thank改成thanks
【小题7】help改成 helping
【小题8】immorally改成 immoral
【小题9】去掉to
【小题10】made后面加up
【解析】
考点：考查短文改错
【由四川省成都市2014届高三英语摸底测试模拟试题（二）改编】
短文改错。

After watch “En glish TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my China teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
After watch “E nglish TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and told watching
him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school
When/After
to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my China were Chinese
teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese
progress
lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and should/去掉
keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers keep
would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What good a或 a
they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
【由四川省成都市2014届高三英语摸底测试模拟试题（一）改编】
短文改错。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的添加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,在该词下边写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary. Let’s take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won’t make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That’s because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force
made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don’t cooperate with each other, it’s impossible for us learn from each other. And that’s why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.
To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.
【参考答案】短文改错
1.第2句第一个a→an;
2.第2句problem→problems;
3.第3句Therefore→However;
4.第3句stress→stressed或would→will;
5.第4句all→both;
6.第6句去掉第二个a;
7.第7句and→or;（or rather意为“确切地说”，为固定搭配）
8.第7句made→making;
9.第8句us和learn之间加to; 10.第10句successful→successfully.。