七年级英语下册Unit9Whatdoeshelooklike写作导引素材人教新目标版(new)
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Unit 9 What does he look like
【写作任务】
假如你计划参加明天的英语课堂活动。
按照活动要求，你需要口头描述一位你的同学或老师，然后让大家猜猜你所描述的是谁。
请你写一篇不少于60词的短文，为活动做准备。
【任务分析】
该写作任务要求写一篇描述人的短文，同学们可以从这个人的外貌、性格等方面来写。
写作时，要突出这个人的显著特点，方便其他人猜测.
【学生习作】
Now let me tell you something about this girl. She is 13 years old. She is of medium height and kind of thin. She has long straight hair. She usually wears jeans and a T—shirt. She is friendly to everyone。
She likes music and is really good at singing。
Oh， I forget to tell you that she is my best friend.
【习作点评】
1。
该习作从年龄、外貌、性格、兴趣爱好等方面描述了一位女孩，内容详细、有条理。
2. 作者在对这位女孩进行描述时，句型比较单一。
如果能使用多样化的表达,文章会显得更生动。
【习作改进】
Now let me tell you something about this girl. She is 13 years old。
She is of medium height and kind of thin。
Her hair is long and straight。
She usually wears jeans and a T-shirt。
This girl is friendly to everyone。
She likes music and is really good at singing。
Oh, I forget to tell you that she is my best friend.
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