英语强化笔记

写作：

30 分

10分：51 小作文信件

5-7

20分：52

英语一：漫画作文

英语二：图表作文

1）笔记：思路

2）讲义，辅导材料：素材，语言

3）实践：

--- 片段

---- 完整

---- 按照考试时间要求

小作文：10分钟100

大作文：30-35分钟160-200

小作文--- 大作文--- 传统阅读--- 新题型--- 完型--- 翻译

小作文：

公文信件（正式）

一：仔细阅读directions

1.称呼：write a letter to _____________

1)姓名Dear 姓名，

08：Dear Bob,

05: Dear Mr. Wang,

2)职务，职位，职业，身份

Dear 首字母大写

Dear Sales Manager,

09: Dear Editor, / Dear Editors,

11: Dear Friend,

07: write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service

3)部门，机构( 06,07)

Dear Sir or Madam,

To whom it may concern,

总结：具体--- 笼统

12：Some international students will visit your school, write a letter to

1)extend your welcome

2)make some suggestions about their campus life.

Dear International Students,

13: write a letter to the foreign teacher in your university, inviting him to be the judge of English speech contest.

Dear Foreign Teacher,

2.署名

Yours sincerely,/ Sincerely yours

空一行

Li Ming

格式：1 称呼恰当

2署名格式正确

正文：三段

3.信件类型---信件目的（第一段明确给出）

关键动词、名词（提纲中）

1）事件：态度原因

态度：态度词变成信件类型

Apology, thanks, complaints, congratulation, praise

3)涵盖范围最广词变成信件类型

Suggestions, application , invitation, recommendation, help

总结：1.事件类: 由已发生事件表达相应态度

2. 中心话题类：中心话题给出，具体展开

4. 细节：第二段

三段：para 1：信件目的

Para 2：细节

Para 3：语域

正文写作：

第一段：信件目的1句

1）正式：

I am writing to do …

I am here to write to ….

I write to do ….

2) 关键词：信件类型

投诉：to complain about/ of

to express / convey/ deliver/ extend my disappointment / dissatisfaction / fury/ pity

about ….

To make/ lodge/ issue/ raise/ present/ put forward my complaints of/ about

道歉：apologize/ say sorry to you for …

To express/ convey my heart-felt apology/pity/ regret to you for …

感谢：thank/ appreciate you for …

Be thankful/ grateful/ appreciated / obliged to you for …

To express my sincere thanks/ gratitude / appreciation/ obligation to you for ….

建议：to make/ lodge/ present my suggestions/ proposals/ advice on …

To put forward my solutions/ measures/ countermeasures/ approaches to ….

求助：to ask for your help/ assistance/ favor in ….

To beg you to do me a favor/ offer me a hand in ….

举一反三：

1）表达态度：express/ deliver/ convey/ extend

Eg.

I am writing to deliver my sincere congratulations to you on ….

2) 提出要求：make, put forward, issue, lodge, present, raise

Eg.

I am here to write to lodge my sincere application to you for ….

3) 介词+ 事件，话题

a. 名词：把事件或话题概括成一个名词

mistake/ carelessness/ lapse of attention / help/ kindness/ instructions /

experience ….

Eg. 05

I am here to write to deliver my heart-felt apology to you for my resignation.

b. doing

eg. 07

I am writing to lodge my proposals on making some refinements of the service in

the library.

c. 名词从句、省略结构

what/ how …

eg. 09:

I, as a regular reader of your magazine, am writing to put forward my

suggestions on how to deal with the problem of White pollution.

练习：

08：I am writing to express my regret to you for my lapse of attention to take your CD by mistake.

06: I am here to write to ask for your help in hunting for a student to receive my

fund.

第二段：细节（题干+信件层次）

（一）事件类：道歉，感谢，投诉，祝贺，表扬

三个层次：经过--- 影响--- 解决措施

层次一：事件经过（过去时）

2句：

S1--- 次要细节

S2 ---（突出，强调）主要细节

突出，强调：to one’s ….

To my dissatisfaction/ disapointment/ regret/ fury

To my joy/ movement

To my pity/ to my regret

To my surprise/ beyond my expectation