省宝鸡中学高考英语一轮复习写作提升训练致歉信._
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13.多么难忘而有意义的一天啊。--感叹 What a meaningful and unforgettable day!
14.与男性相比，女性面临着更大的就业压力。--非谓语
Compared to the male, the female are faced with greater pressure on employment.
5.7管道系统应以最大工作压力进行严密性试验，试验介质应为压缩空气或氮气。
⑵ 用户对管理机构及工作人员进行广泛监督，形成多方面综合监督体系。
As a child, I was fond of listening to music and 12.2竞争性磋商文件、供应商提交的响应文件、磋商中的最终报价、供应商承诺书、成交通知书等均成为有法律约束力的合同的组成
10.人们普遍认为，通过不断努力，良好的学习 习惯将带来更大的成功. —(it) It is widely believed / universally acknowledged that through constant efforts, good learning habits will contribute to greater success.
2．只有这样你才能欣赏到唐诗的美。— 倒装 Only in this way can you enjoy the beauty of Tang poems.
3.说实话，我真的很喜欢昨天你给我的小 说。—强调 To be honest, I do like the novel that you gave me yesterday.
me. As a result, I had no choice but to perform in
pubs to earn some money. It was three years or so
before such painful days came to an end. Happily, 3._i_t _w_a_s_w__it_h__m_y__g_r_e_a_t_e_ff_o_r_t_s_t_h_a_t_I_s_u_c_c_e_e_d_e_d_i_n _a_c_h_i_ev_i_n_g__m_y__li_f_e_g_o_a_l__([强调句]在我的巨大努 力下，我实现了自己的人生目标) at last.
night.
→__N_o_t__u_n_t_il_m__y_f_a_t_h_e_r_c_a_m__e_b_a_c_k_ last night did I go to bed. (倒装)
3．When I left for America 1.通过对自由与规则关系的认识,增强我们按规则办事的意识和能力。 I realized how much my
is a way.” Therefore，
5.____I_s_u_g_g_e_s_t_t_h_a_t_y__o_u_s_h_o_u__ld__n_o_t_g_i_v_e__u_p_______ _y__o_u_r_d_r_e_a_m___e_a_si_l_y____([虚拟语气]我建议你们不要
4.正是在巨大的努力下，我才实现了成为一 名医生的梦想。—强调 It was with great efforts that I realized my dream of becoming a doctor.
5.结果这个晚会比预料的成功得多。(it形式主语) It turned out that the party was far more successful than expected.
tough task on time. →__A_l_t_h_o_u_g_h_t_i_re_d__a_n_d__h_u_n_g_r_y____, I finished the tough task on time. (省略句)
Ⅱ.语篇应用
结合括号中的提示，把下面的文章补充完整。
1．遇心服务技巧
（四） 制定活动规则
写作提升训练
致歉信
一.高级句式的运用
倒装、强调、省略和虚拟语气是提高作 文档次的高级表达形式，合理地运用它 们将为我们的写作“锦上添花”。
请用以上表达方式来翻译以下句子。
1．在业余时间，我不仅喜欢踢足球，而且喜欢 听音乐。—倒装 Not only do I like playing football but I also like listening to music in my spare time.
4．The city is so fascinating 1.原因
8、丞相制度:秦始皇时期开始,明太祖废除 2、根本原因：英国为了打开中国市场，并掠夺工业生产原料。
that
it
attracts
visitors
from all over the country. 贾生名谊，雒阳人也。年十八，以能诵诗属书闻于郡中。吴廷尉为河南守，闻其秀才，召置门下，甚幸爱。孝文皇帝初立，闻河南守
郁的时候), I would adjust my emotion by listening 承担误期赔偿或终止合同的责任。
全面顾客服务制度的规划与建立，属于策略规划范畴。在日常工作中，企业的服务人员更多接触到的是服务规划和执行技巧的落实，
即如何建立全面参与的植根式服务文化、落实顾客满意服务。这些执行技术的实用性更高、针对性更强。
from all over the country. (倒装) B.三年/权知礼部贡举/会大雪苦寒/士坐庭中噤/未能言轼/宽其禁约/使得尽技/巡铺内侍每摧辱举子/且持暖昧单词/诬以为罪/轼尽奏逐之/
5．Shooting, originated as a means of survival,
didn't earn its status as a sport until the end of the
19th century.
→_I_t_w__a_s_n_o_t_u_n_t_i_l _th_e__e_n_d_o_f__th_e__1_9_th__c_e_n_t_u_r_y_t_h_at
shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. (强调句型) 6．I visited my good friend the other day. →__I_d_i_d_v_i_s_it_m__y__g_o_o_d_f_r_ie_n_d__t_h_e_o_t_h_e_r_d_a_y_.____ (强调谓语动词)
11.记住这一点，你会慢慢地从中受益—句型 Bear it in mind and gradually you will benefit from it.
12.随着一个令人惊叹的新体育场的建立，各种各样的体 育赛事可以在里面举行。—with
With an amazing new stadium set up, a wide range of sports events can be held.
解析：
parents loved me. 资料：1、《古代人们对地球的认识》在古代，科学不发达，交通工具落后，人们活动的范围很小，他们对地球只能限于局部的了解。
因此，人们对大地的形状，曾经有过形形色色的猜想。我国古代流行着“天圆地方”的说法，有一本名叫《周髀》的书上写道：“天
→Only when I left for America 圆如张盖，地方如棋局。”意思是说，天是圆形的，像一把张开的伞；地是方形的的，像一个棋盘。我国古代还有一本叫《淮南子》
吴公治平为天下第一，故与李斯同邑而尝学事焉，乃征为廷尉。廷尉乃言贾生年少，颇通诸子百家之书。文帝召以为博士。
7、漠北大战:前119年，卫青、霍去病破匈奴,匈奴再也无力与西汉对抗。
C3.．掌→每握至维汀护_/与风_S改春_进溪o规_月则/f_秋的a花_做繁s法_鸟c。_/啼in_之旦a_/莲t_开i_n水_香g之_夕i_/s宾_友t集_h歌_e/咏_作c_舟i棹_t徐y_动_/觞t咏h半a酣/t飘然it恍然ay then 4._d_id__I__tr_u_l_y__r_ea__li_z_e_([倒装句]我真正意识
到) that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into
it. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there
Ⅰ.根据括号中的要求进行句型转换 1．Traveling can not only relax us but also broaden
our horizons. →__N_o_t_o_n_l_y_c_a_n__t_ra_v_e_l_i_n_g_r_e_la_x__u_s___ but also broaden our horizons. (倒装) 2．I didn't go to bed until my father came back last
汽油擦洗车辆。
to people. 1.__W__h_e_n_f_e_e_li_n_g_b__lu_e___([省略 （2）提供货物组装和维修所需的专用工具和辅助材料；
（6）“原产地”系指货物的生产所在地，或提供辅助服务的来源地。
]
感
到抑
21.1 如果买卖双方因不可抗力而导致合同实施延误或不能履行其它合同义务时，双方由此产生的损失不得向对方提出索赔要求，也不
的书上写道：“天道曰圆，地道曰方。”意思也是“天圆地方”。
要坚持把选项中诸如事情的发展、因果，人物行为的程度、实效等方面内容，细细从原文词句中查出核对；努力培养能把题目中用现
代键d汉所_i语 在d_叙。_述I的_内r_容e_，a一_l一i_迅z_速e地_从h_原o_文中w_找_出m_对应_u内_容c_的h能_力_m。_分y析_、_p评_价a选_r项_e叙_述n与_t文s_中_用lo词_造v_句e_的d细_微m差．别，e正(是倒把握全装文的)关
6.如果没有你的支持和鼓励，我也不可能熬过那 段艰难的时期。（虚拟语气） Without your support and encouragement, I couldn’t have got through those hard times.
7．要不是你的帮助，我不可能在英语上取得如 此大的进步。—虚拟语气 But for your help, I couldn't have made so much
progress in English. 8．我的建议是你每天都练习说普通话。-虚拟 My advice is that you should practice speaking
Mandarin every day. 9。所有的学生都应该准时参加讲座。-被动语态 All the students are expected /supposed to attend the lecture on time.
7．When I meet with challenges in study, I never
give up.
→_W__h__en__m__e_e_ti_n_g_w__it_h__c_h_a_ll_e_n_g_e_s_in__s_t_u_d,yI never give up.(省略句) 8．Although I was tired and hungry, I finished the
内容。
（二）成交候选供应商因不可抗力、社会经济形势发生重大变化、破产、重组等原因确定无法履行政府采购合同的；
dreamed of becoming a musician who was familiar 1.5进站充气的车辆，应按指定位置停放，加气时必须先熄火、关闭车上所有电器设备，严禁在加气时发动车辆，严禁在站内检修和用
to 表7－1 s顾客o满m意的e类型relaxing or exciting music.
At that time, 2.__n_o_t_o_n_l_y_d_i_d_I__h_a_v_e_n_o__c_a_s_h__([倒 装句]我不仅没有现金) but also no one would help
14.与男性相比，女性面临着更大的就业压力。--非谓语
Compared to the male, the female are faced with greater pressure on employment.
5.7管道系统应以最大工作压力进行严密性试验，试验介质应为压缩空气或氮气。
⑵ 用户对管理机构及工作人员进行广泛监督，形成多方面综合监督体系。
As a child, I was fond of listening to music and 12.2竞争性磋商文件、供应商提交的响应文件、磋商中的最终报价、供应商承诺书、成交通知书等均成为有法律约束力的合同的组成
10.人们普遍认为，通过不断努力，良好的学习 习惯将带来更大的成功. —(it) It is widely believed / universally acknowledged that through constant efforts, good learning habits will contribute to greater success.
2．只有这样你才能欣赏到唐诗的美。— 倒装 Only in this way can you enjoy the beauty of Tang poems.
3.说实话，我真的很喜欢昨天你给我的小 说。—强调 To be honest, I do like the novel that you gave me yesterday.
me. As a result, I had no choice but to perform in
pubs to earn some money. It was three years or so
before such painful days came to an end. Happily, 3._i_t _w_a_s_w__it_h__m_y__g_r_e_a_t_e_ff_o_r_t_s_t_h_a_t_I_s_u_c_c_e_e_d_e_d_i_n _a_c_h_i_ev_i_n_g__m_y__li_f_e_g_o_a_l__([强调句]在我的巨大努 力下，我实现了自己的人生目标) at last.
night.
→__N_o_t__u_n_t_il_m__y_f_a_t_h_e_r_c_a_m__e_b_a_c_k_ last night did I go to bed. (倒装)
3．When I left for America 1.通过对自由与规则关系的认识,增强我们按规则办事的意识和能力。 I realized how much my
is a way.” Therefore，
5.____I_s_u_g_g_e_s_t_t_h_a_t_y__o_u_s_h_o_u__ld__n_o_t_g_i_v_e__u_p_______ _y__o_u_r_d_r_e_a_m___e_a_si_l_y____([虚拟语气]我建议你们不要
4.正是在巨大的努力下，我才实现了成为一 名医生的梦想。—强调 It was with great efforts that I realized my dream of becoming a doctor.
5.结果这个晚会比预料的成功得多。(it形式主语) It turned out that the party was far more successful than expected.
tough task on time. →__A_l_t_h_o_u_g_h_t_i_re_d__a_n_d__h_u_n_g_r_y____, I finished the tough task on time. (省略句)
Ⅱ.语篇应用
结合括号中的提示，把下面的文章补充完整。
1．遇心服务技巧
（四） 制定活动规则
写作提升训练
致歉信
一.高级句式的运用
倒装、强调、省略和虚拟语气是提高作 文档次的高级表达形式，合理地运用它 们将为我们的写作“锦上添花”。
请用以上表达方式来翻译以下句子。
1．在业余时间，我不仅喜欢踢足球，而且喜欢 听音乐。—倒装 Not only do I like playing football but I also like listening to music in my spare time.
4．The city is so fascinating 1.原因
8、丞相制度:秦始皇时期开始,明太祖废除 2、根本原因：英国为了打开中国市场，并掠夺工业生产原料。
that
it
attracts
visitors
from all over the country. 贾生名谊，雒阳人也。年十八，以能诵诗属书闻于郡中。吴廷尉为河南守，闻其秀才，召置门下，甚幸爱。孝文皇帝初立，闻河南守
郁的时候), I would adjust my emotion by listening 承担误期赔偿或终止合同的责任。
全面顾客服务制度的规划与建立，属于策略规划范畴。在日常工作中，企业的服务人员更多接触到的是服务规划和执行技巧的落实，
即如何建立全面参与的植根式服务文化、落实顾客满意服务。这些执行技术的实用性更高、针对性更强。
from all over the country. (倒装) B.三年/权知礼部贡举/会大雪苦寒/士坐庭中噤/未能言轼/宽其禁约/使得尽技/巡铺内侍每摧辱举子/且持暖昧单词/诬以为罪/轼尽奏逐之/
5．Shooting, originated as a means of survival,
didn't earn its status as a sport until the end of the
19th century.
→_I_t_w__a_s_n_o_t_u_n_t_i_l _th_e__e_n_d_o_f__th_e__1_9_th__c_e_n_t_u_r_y_t_h_at
shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. (强调句型) 6．I visited my good friend the other day. →__I_d_i_d_v_i_s_it_m__y__g_o_o_d_f_r_ie_n_d__t_h_e_o_t_h_e_r_d_a_y_.____ (强调谓语动词)
11.记住这一点，你会慢慢地从中受益—句型 Bear it in mind and gradually you will benefit from it.
12.随着一个令人惊叹的新体育场的建立，各种各样的体 育赛事可以在里面举行。—with
With an amazing new stadium set up, a wide range of sports events can be held.
解析：
parents loved me. 资料：1、《古代人们对地球的认识》在古代，科学不发达，交通工具落后，人们活动的范围很小，他们对地球只能限于局部的了解。
因此，人们对大地的形状，曾经有过形形色色的猜想。我国古代流行着“天圆地方”的说法，有一本名叫《周髀》的书上写道：“天
→Only when I left for America 圆如张盖，地方如棋局。”意思是说，天是圆形的，像一把张开的伞；地是方形的的，像一个棋盘。我国古代还有一本叫《淮南子》
吴公治平为天下第一，故与李斯同邑而尝学事焉，乃征为廷尉。廷尉乃言贾生年少，颇通诸子百家之书。文帝召以为博士。
7、漠北大战:前119年，卫青、霍去病破匈奴,匈奴再也无力与西汉对抗。
C3.．掌→每握至维汀护_/与风_S改春_进溪o规_月则/f_秋的a花_做繁s法_鸟c。_/啼in_之旦a_/莲t_开i_n水_香g之_夕i_/s宾_友t集_h歌_e/咏_作c_舟i棹_t徐y_动_/觞t咏h半a酣/t飘然it恍然ay then 4._d_id__I__tr_u_l_y__r_ea__li_z_e_([倒装句]我真正意识
到) that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into
it. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there
Ⅰ.根据括号中的要求进行句型转换 1．Traveling can not only relax us but also broaden
our horizons. →__N_o_t_o_n_l_y_c_a_n__t_ra_v_e_l_i_n_g_r_e_la_x__u_s___ but also broaden our horizons. (倒装) 2．I didn't go to bed until my father came back last
汽油擦洗车辆。
to people. 1.__W__h_e_n_f_e_e_li_n_g_b__lu_e___([省略 （2）提供货物组装和维修所需的专用工具和辅助材料；
（6）“原产地”系指货物的生产所在地，或提供辅助服务的来源地。
]
感
到抑
21.1 如果买卖双方因不可抗力而导致合同实施延误或不能履行其它合同义务时，双方由此产生的损失不得向对方提出索赔要求，也不
的书上写道：“天道曰圆，地道曰方。”意思也是“天圆地方”。
要坚持把选项中诸如事情的发展、因果，人物行为的程度、实效等方面内容，细细从原文词句中查出核对；努力培养能把题目中用现
代键d汉所_i语 在d_叙。_述I的_内r_容e_，a一_l一i_迅z_速e地_从h_原o_文中w_找_出m_对应_u内_容c_的h能_力_m。_分y析_、_p评_价a选_r项_e叙_述n与_t文s_中_用lo词_造v_句e_的d细_微m差．别，e正(是倒把握全装文的)关
6.如果没有你的支持和鼓励，我也不可能熬过那 段艰难的时期。（虚拟语气） Without your support and encouragement, I couldn’t have got through those hard times.
7．要不是你的帮助，我不可能在英语上取得如 此大的进步。—虚拟语气 But for your help, I couldn't have made so much
progress in English. 8．我的建议是你每天都练习说普通话。-虚拟 My advice is that you should practice speaking
Mandarin every day. 9。所有的学生都应该准时参加讲座。-被动语态 All the students are expected /supposed to attend the lecture on time.
7．When I meet with challenges in study, I never
give up.
→_W__h__en__m__e_e_ti_n_g_w__it_h__c_h_a_ll_e_n_g_e_s_in__s_t_u_d,yI never give up.(省略句) 8．Although I was tired and hungry, I finished the
内容。
（二）成交候选供应商因不可抗力、社会经济形势发生重大变化、破产、重组等原因确定无法履行政府采购合同的；
dreamed of becoming a musician who was familiar 1.5进站充气的车辆，应按指定位置停放，加气时必须先熄火、关闭车上所有电器设备，严禁在加气时发动车辆，严禁在站内检修和用
to 表7－1 s顾客o满m意的e类型relaxing or exciting music.
At that time, 2.__n_o_t_o_n_l_y_d_i_d_I__h_a_v_e_n_o__c_a_s_h__([倒 装句]我不仅没有现金) but also no one would help