山东省潍坊市2014高考英语课外训练(8)

山东省潍坊市2014高考英语课外训练（8）及答案
短文改错
I was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. __________
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. __________
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. __________
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________
my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________
easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________
way, w as much more impo rtant as what I earned. 85. __________
【参考答案】
I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income 76. ____a______
family. So I have to work to support my family. My 77. ___had ____
first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___
I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______
the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of 80. ___hard_______
losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______
my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______
easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____
my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______
way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____
短文改错---1
Choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. Our eating habits 1.
have changed , as have our way of life. And the fuel we need for our 2.
body is also different. Tradition diets often have too much fat and too 3.
much calories for t he 21st-century person. If we want to keep up with the 4.
high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices 5.
about what and how we eat. Because we have so much to choose, many 6.
companies offer advice about what we s hould eat. It’s good if we spend our 7.
time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. Instead of eating 8.
expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9.
sugar and take more exercise. I hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10.
答案及解析
Choose 改为 Choosing 。

动名词作主语
have 改为has 。

倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语
3.Tradition 改为Traditional
4.much 改为many 。

calories 是calorie （卡路里）的复数
5.better 后面的to去掉。

had better do sth 最好做某事
6.choose 后面加from
7.正确
8.keep 改为keeping 。

keeping 和前面的buying 构成介词in 的宾语
9.little 改为 less 。

less 和后面的more 构成对应关系
10.a 去掉 。

health 是不可数， keep good health 保持身体健康
(绍兴市二模)
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
答案：
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the a
senior high school student.
When I started senior English, I found ∧it much more difficult than that what
we learned in ju nior school and I almost lost my ＼ heart. Later, I realized the important importance
of
English, so I got up early every morning, recite recited English word, listened to English
tapes and did a lot of exercise exercises
. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better
ways to of
learning English.
Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But And I'm getting more and more interested with in
learning it.
Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
短文改错
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous1. _______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather2. _______
was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______
the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7. _______
Evening c ame down. We spent the night in a hotel at8. _______
the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
at the moment my head touched the pillow.10. ______
答案及解析
1. famous 前加 a。

mountain 为可数名词。

又是第一次被谈及，故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。

2. 此行无错。

3. noon 后加 when 。

It was about noon 是主句，后面的应为从句，故在 noon 后加when，此处 when 意为“在……时候”。

4. them 改为 us。

综观全文可知，此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。

5. visiting 改为 visited。

此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。

6. picture 改为 pictures。

7. passes 改为 passed。

应与全文时态一致。

8. 删去 down。

9. and 改为 but。

饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事，而服务质量很高确实是一件好事，故前后为转折关系。

10. 删去 at。

the moment直接引导时间状语从句。

短文改错-----1
【2013·陕西卷】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the p ole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
（第二段）第一句go→went。

第二句ours→our。

第三句so去掉。

第四句Before→After。

第四句impatiently→impatient。

第五句中and→but。

第六句were→was。

第六句中and ∧fish-a。

第七句minute→minutes。

第八句Felt→Feeling。

短文改错
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76
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topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77
________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78
________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our
79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rub bish anywhere they like, 80
________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81
________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82
________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83
________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84
________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 85
________
【参考答案】76. 去掉第二个in. 77. 正确.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise. 80. 去掉the 81. in---into 82. had---have.
83. ways—way 84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
短文改错
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________ was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________ one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________ her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________ us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________ an outing. She didn’t get angry even if a ny of them was late for 83.________ school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________ because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________
【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when
78. to → with 79. well ∧ as
80. of →for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个 to 83. them → us
84. until → before 85. can → could
短文改错----1
[2013·新课标II]短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have starte d in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
1.【答案】of---去掉
2. 【答案】have—having
3. 【答案】that—which
4. 【答案】becomes—became
5. 【答案】在day前加the
6. 【答案】interesting---interestingly
7. 【答案】by---with/to
8. 【答案】drank---drunk
9. 【答案】cup—cups
【答案】grow-growth。