英语专业四级考试写作2

中间段落的写作技法
• 1、分主题句的写法 • 首先我们要明确两个概念：主旨和主题句。 主旨（thesis statement）针对整个文章而 言；而主题句（topic sentence）针对段落 而言。
• ★分主题写作妙招1：分主题的结构：分主题 =论题+具体观点（主旨的某一具体体现） • There are two ways to improve mental health. • Firstly, we should do some sports regularly. This can help build our body which is the precondition for mental health…. Secondly, communication is also important. We should talk to family memwk.baidu.comers, friends so as to release….
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★分主题写作妙招2：观点不可过宽或过窄 Cell phone is very important to our life. Communication, entertainment,information Reading humorous stories is a good way to improve mental health. • Reading
• ★分主题写作妙招4：分主题表达要充分自 信、坚定 • I think students fees are too much high. • Student fees need to be explained and justified. • In my opinion, everyone should exercise • Everyone should exercise to reduce stress.
• ★分主题写作妙招3：分主题要足够概括 • We should listen to music, read novels so as to to improve mental health. • Developing some positive hobbies can work effectively to improve mental health.
• 句（2）可作如下的改写和扩写 • a.Making friends through the Internet has become a popular thing among young people. • b.Millions of young people make friends with those on the other end of the Internet.
• ★开场白写作妙招2：改写、扩写指令情景 简易法 • 抄指令时，字数不记入总分。但我们只要 将其做简单的改写、扩写，一个相关性好 的开场白就写成了。
• (1)Nowadays the Internet has become part of people’s life, and(2)millions of young people have made friends online. Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the topic:(3)Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
• ★开场白写作妙招4：贴切简单的例子十观点 • Last National Day, I visited the Great Wall, a place I had been longing for since I was a young girl. I was deeply moved by its magnificence. More important, the trip brought me into the history, the Chinese history of fighting against the foreign aggressors. So it is natural to say that travel broadens people’s mind.
• 句（1）可作如下的改写和扩写 • a.Today,the Internet has become essential to our daily life: we get information, buy things, and see a doctor online. • b.Today, the Internet has permeated almost every part of our life, getting information, buying things, etc.
• ★分主题写作妙招5：分主题表达形式要规 范 • 应该是完整的句子 • 最好使用陈述句 • Why shouldn’t we keep healthy by doing regular exercises? • We should keep healthy by doing exercises
• ★分主题写作妙招6：分主题句表达要兼顾 行文的连贯与衔接 • Firstly, secondly … • The first reason for A is that…., the fact that ….can also justify A, we insist on A also because…
• ★开场白写作妙招3：论点十解释 • 开场白最简单的写法是在段落一开始就直截了当 地表明自己的观点，然后对论点稍加解释说明， 以便为下文的发展限题。 • The Best Way to Stay Healthy • (1)There are various ways of keeping healthy, but enough sleep is definitely the basic element to stay fit. (2)I have several reasons to support my view. • First, adequate sleep can bring an energetic day … Second, the lack of sleep will affect …
• Internet is a Better Way to Get Information(1) • (2) • (3) • (4) • .
• (1)It is said that the 21st century is “the century of information”. (2)And the ways for people to get information are varied. (3)Among the numerous sources, the Internet and printed books are two main kinds. (4)However, with the technological development, Internet has become obviously superior to printed books
• 根据这些分析，我们不难得出如下的开场白： • Today, the Internet has become essential to our daily life: we get information, buy things, and see a doctor online. More and more young people are even trying making friends in this virtual space. As to such a matter, some people applaud, but many others take it a dangerous beast. As far as I am concerned, it has more benefits than negative effects.
• Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? • (1)A recent survey shows that more than 85% of the college students choose telephone rather than letter to communicate with their relatives or friends. (2)They think that telephone is more convenient than letter in information conveyance. (3)Some people even think that telephone will kill letter writing. (4)But I hold that letter writing cannot be replaced by telephone for the following reasons.
英语专业四级考试专题讲座
写作（2）
TEM-4的段落写作
• 1、开场白段落和写作技法 • ★开场白写作妙招1：“引—限—提”简易 法 • 以“Internet is a Better Way to Get Information”为例来解释这种方法的操作过 程。 • 这个题目中至少有四个关键信息，（1） information,(2)ways to get information,(3)a better way to get information,和(4)internet is a better way to get information,即
• 句（3）可作如下的改写和扩写 • a. Making friends online is a controversial issue. • b. As to such a new thing," how many people how many minds”. • 句（3）在表明观点时可有多种方法： • a. In my opinion, … is a wise choice. • b. As far as I am concerned, it has more benefits negative effects) than negative effects benefits).
• ★开场白写作妙招5：引言（数据、格言、谚语）十 观点 • 为了避免写作的主观性，我们在写作中可以出现别 人的声音，通常我们可以以一个或几个令人吃惊的 数据（如，According to a recent poll, 61 percent of American high school students have admitted cheating on exams at least once.）、别人的话（如， “My teacher often said that you can’t tell a book by its cover”）、名人的至理名言（如，“Love makes all hard hearts gentle” by George Herbert）、 一条颠扑不破的谚语（如，“Never give advice to a friend”）等作为文章的开头。这种方法开头同样要 求所引内容对于主题来说是准确而且合适的。
• ★开场白写作妙招6：疑问或问题十观点 • 在开场白里提出一个疑问（question）或展 示一个问题（problem）人们会思考其解决 思路。这两种办法能让人们投入作者的写 作中，所以在下文作者就可以顺理成章做 答和讨论解决办法。
• ★开场白写作妙招7：不同或相反的观点十 观点 • 这种方法也叫反转法。作者用与自己的主 题相反或不同的观点开头，然后与之相悖， 表明自己的观点和立场，写出主题句。