遣词造句

二、造句方面：句式要准确而多变. 造句方面：
一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 句式多样
二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力 文章增“ 文章增“靓”
三. 尝试多样化表达方式
第一类是复合句，包括含有名词性从句的复合句，含有定 第一类是复合句，包括含有名词性从句的复合句， 语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的复合句。 语从句的复合句，含有状语从句的复合句。 第二类是并列句，包括具有递进关系的并列句， 如由and， 第二类是并列句，包括具有递进关系的并列句， 如由 递进关系的并列句 ， then，besides，in addition, furthermore， ， ， ， moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句，具有转折关 等连接的并列句， 等连接的并列句 具有转折关 的并列句，如由but，however 系的并列句，如由 ， on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句，具有平行 等连接的并列句， 等连接的并列句 具有平行 选择关系的并列句 如由both…and…，as well as， 的并列句， 选择关系的并列句，如由 ， ， as well, neither…nor，either…or…， ， ， not only…but also…等连接的并列句。 等连接的并列句。 等连接的并列句 第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用强调句、倒装句、 第三类是一些特殊句型，如使用强调句、倒装句、含有 with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主 复合结构的句子、 开头的句子、 复合结构的句子 开头的句子 开头的句子等。 语it开头的句子等。 开头的句子等
方法二. 方法二 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 Complete the sentences
1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishness. 2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth. 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. Clever as/though he is, he does not work hard. 4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the street stands the clock tower.
常用的过渡表达法: 常用的过渡表达法 1.表增加 表增加:and ,also, in addition, furthermore, moreover 表增加 2.表时间顺序 表时间顺序:now, then, before, after, soon, gradually 表时间顺序 3.表空间顺序 表空间顺序:near, beyond, above, around, outside 表空间顺序 4.表示比较 the same way, just like, just as 表示比较:in 表示比较 5.表示对照 5.表示对照:but, still, yet, however, on the contrary 表示对照:but, 6.表原因和结果 表原因和结果:because, since, so, as a result, 表原因和结果 therefore 7.表目的 表目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that 表目的 8.表强调 表强调:indeed, surely, without any doubt, truly 表强调 9.表解释说明 表解释说明:for ,for example, in fact, actually 表解释说明 10.表总结 conclusion, in brief, in a word 表总结:in 表总结
如何在写作中避免句式单一
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方法一. 方法一 使用非谓语动词及复合句使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. If I am given another chance, I will succeed. Given another chance, I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.
3.避免重复使用词汇
他以．．．为偶像。 ．．．为偶像 他以．．．为偶像。
He He He He He . regards…..as
chooses… as
his idols.
takes…..as looks upon…..as views…..as
4.要善于运用短语 When he was a child, he wanted to learn everything . ---When he was a child, he had a strong appetite for/ was thirsty for knowledge. Hacker attackers are increasing. ----Hacker attackers are on the increase/rise. Your work is so good that it cannot be praised enough. -----Your work is beyond all praise.
• 写作 • 请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描 述全部所给的信息内容。 • [情景说明] • 根据提示写出你对环境污染的看法。 • 1.汽车的不断增加，排放大量废气。 • 2.森林减少，气候变得干燥。 • 3．河流被污染，城市供水不足。 • [写作要求] • 1.标题：Environmental Pollution • 2.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容 • 3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文 • [评分标准] • 句子结构的复杂度和准确性 • 短文内容的完整性和连贯性
三、谋篇方面:结构要清晰流畅,巧用过渡词 下列各组表示列举的短语非常实用,对高考写作 很有帮助: 1.firstly,…secondly,…thirdly,…finally,… 2.to begin with,…then,…furthermore,…finally,... 3.to start with,…next,…in addition,…finally,… 4.first and foremost…,bmost important of all…,moreover…,finally… 如果只有两层意思,可选用下列两组中的任一组. 1.On the one hand,…on the other hand… 2.For one thing,…and for another thing…
Though the development of industry and agriculture has improved our living conditions, it is doing great harm to our life. Now more and more cars and trucks give off waste gases, which are polluting the air. Moreover , more and more trees are cut down, which makes the climate drier. Polluted rivers lead to a lack of water in cities. Now it is time for us to do something to protect our living environment, for we have only one earth.
基础写作
一.遣词方面 1.措辞要贴切具体
A man is walking down the street.(走) A man isstrolling down the street. (漫步 闲逛 漫步,闲逛 漫步 闲逛) 徘徊,漫游 徘徊 漫游) A man is wandering in the street. (徘徊 漫游 A man isstriding down the street. (大步走 大步走) 大步走
方法三. 方法三 尝试多样化表达方式
Use different ways to describe the picture
一…就受到欢迎 就受到欢迎
As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife… Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were … Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were …
2.使用高级词汇
This is a difficult job. (challenging) He learned about everything at (eventually) last. I should thank you for taking so much trouble to help me. (grateful)