初三中考英语作文模板好词好句总结讲义教案(精心整理含范文)

其实阅卷者每天有一定的阅卷量，真正停留在每个考生的阅卷时间其实还是有限的，但一定是充足的。

教师每天在完成大量阅卷工作后，也会有一定的审美疲劳，所以首句最好能出彩。

（供参考）
教师实际阅卷重点：
1、首句：首句出错，印象非常糟糕
2、连接词/逻辑(结构清楚)
3、尾句
4、内容/例子
5、模版使用/套题
近5年上海中考作文分析
2011年
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of___________”.（以“我是......的一员”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。

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提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。

Use the following points as reference:
Are you glad to be a member of……?
What do you do in it?
How do you feel as such a member?
5. 主谓，单复数，拼写，标点等
一、专题知识梳理
1. 中考英语写作无论是议论文还是记叙文，在具体写作过程中我们不妨按如下顺序进行。

1. 确定写作中心。

根据中心，能够扩展的材料有哪些。

要避免写那些与中心内容无关紧要的细节
2. 围绕中心，列出写作提纲。

提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。

3. 根据字数多少，扩展成篇。

扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。

扩展时要注意短文的字数，要写够80~90个英语单词，以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分。

如何列提纲:
例：Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to find happiness”. ( 以“How to find happiness”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

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（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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Use the following points as a guide. (短文必须包含以下要点)
●What’s your view on happiness?
●Do you agree with the saying, “Money is happiness.”? ( give two reasons )
●How do our students find happiness in our study and life？
中文提纲：
1.Beginning：你认为开心是什么
开心对我们来说很重要
2. Main body 说明观点：认同金钱就等于开心吗？
Writing(作文) (共20分)
94.Write at least 60 words on the topic ”Tom’s Christmas”
(以汤姆的圣诞节为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
汤姆在圣诞节发生了什么事？由此他产生了怎样的感想？请根据图片进行描述。

(注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
Strange, disappointed
At midnight
The next morning
Tom’s Christmas
Christmas without gifts is like the day without sunshine. December 24th, 2015, in Tom’s mind, was the strangest Christmas for the reason that his father didn’t give him a gift. The more he thought it, the more disappointed he felt. At midnight, Tom’s father came into his bedroom quietly and put a pretty gift on the desk. When Tom found the gift the next morning, he couldn’t help opening it. He was deeply believed that his father loved him so much and books in it would make his life meaningful and colorful.
（ 3 ）用于英语结构中的句型推荐：
(一）As we all know款(应用议论文居多/记叙文亦可，描述现象类）
1. There is no doubt that ...(句子）
2. There is no denying that...
3.. It is undeniable that..
4. It is common knowledge that...(句子）
5. It is widely accepted that.....(句子/
6. It is obvious that....(句子）
7. As is well-known to the public that...
8. It is generally believed that
题1. 毫无疑问水在日常生活不可或缺，但鲜少人意识到淡水正日益减少.
译文a. There is no denying that water plays an important role in our daily life , but few people are aware。