2012年专转本冲刺班作文实例讲解

2012年南师专转本冲刺班作文实例讲解
例文1
1.现在大学校园里的迟到，早退，旷课是常见现象；
2.保证学生的出勤率对大学教育很重要
3.作为大学生该如何做?
Attend your classes regularly
At present, there is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent
from classes. Furthermore,there are some students who slip out of the classroom during the class. Class attendance has become a tough/thorny problem to both the students and teachers in university.
As a matter of fact, it is very essential for
the students to attend their classes regularly. At the very beginning, if you attend the class punctually, you can keep up with the lectures in your learning which is very helpful to you if you want to score high. In the second place, regular class
attendance is a way of showing respect to your teachers as well. Your teachers will feel awarded if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will have bad influence on their teaching and be of no good for the students. Last but not
least, attending classes regularly will help to come into a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for our students to have a promising future.
It is concluded that university students should form the good habit of attending our
classes regularly once they enter the university. Surely, we’ll benefit much from it.
例文2
目前网络教育形成热潮;
你认为这个热潮形成的原因是…
你对网络教育的评价.
My view on on-line Education
It is not uncommon to find that a growing number of people deal with a variety of things online. In a great way, it has become part of our daily life. We can do different things online,
such as searching for information, communicating with our friends and shopping far away. However, recently, another helpful online activity has become very prevalent, which is online education.
So why could online education
become so popular within such a short period of time? Among these reasons, the first to be chosen is that the quick development of internet. It should be a critical one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible.
Another underlying reason is the rapid development of science and technology. Today modern science and technology is developing with underestimated speed. In order to catch up with this development we can feel an urgent
and strong desire to study. However, because of the great pace of modern society, many people are so busy that they can not study full time at school. Online education just can make up for their regret.
Personally
speaking, I appreciate this new form of education. In one way it’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. Not only it can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning, but
also, best of all, with online education, we can keep our jobs going on and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge we need.
例文3
在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重;
城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响；
解决方法与措施
It is well known that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Every day and every area in rush hours. Some major roads are regularly
choked with traffic. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the vexing problem. What should we do confronting with the tough situation?
Aiming at the difficulty, the proper solutions to traffic jam mainly are creating metro bus systems and broadening major roads. Relevant department can solve traffic jam on some level with
widening the existing roads. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic annoying problem, so there is a cheap and good way we can sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. Thus, we can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective
combination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.
例文4
一些人喜欢生活在城市因为城市生活有很多便利；但有些人喜欢住在农村，原因是…
我的观点是…
Where to live-in the city or in the country
Lots of people like living in the city because city life has many advantages. They think there are more job opportunities in urban, and life there is more colorful
and meaningful than that in the rural. In addition, there are more conveniences in cities for people to enjoy. There are some other people preferring to live in the country. They say life in the country is closer to nature and better for their health, life there is harmonious and that country people are more honest than city people. Obstinate 倔强的
In my opinion, I would like to live in a city when I am young to earn enough money and to live in the countryside when I am old for having a quiet life. optimize
例文5
假冒伪劣产品是个严重的问题;
一些原因导致了这个问题；
为了消灭假冒伪劣产品，应该…
Fake commodity
It is believed that fake and poor quality commodities are a serious and pressing problem. Many things can be faked, such as soybean sauce, vinegar, bicycles and many other things. The interests of consumers are badly affected, at the same time,
many enterprises lose their reputation and earn less money because of cheap fake commodity.
How can we illustrate the situation? There are some reasons for such a phenomenon. The major one is that some people harbor the desire of making easy money. These people mistake nothing of the law of the protection of intellectual property rights.
The government should educate people to obey the law of the protection of individual intellectual property rights and not to sell any fake goods to get rid of fake and poor quality commodities. Even the government should punish severely and close down all the factories producing fake goods.
One way to update the function of libraries
In the first part, state specifically what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with a few reasons
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Contrasted with their past glories, some libraries have become deserted facilities scarcely visited by university students. More students turn to more advanced means to conduct academic research, such as search engines on the Internet, and online database. From my point of view, to gear traditional libraries to the development the most progressive technologies will surely help them out of the present plight. What are the possible reasons?
First of all, only the libraries are properly updated with more online services could they provide instant access to books and materials in pressing need. As we know, traditional libraries open and close at regular time. With more academic articles being authorized for online reading via library systems, students’ urgent needs for research
materials can be easily met beyond library office hours. Secondly, digit-related catalogs can facilitate students’ search. It saves time when material searching can be done instantaneously by entering the key words on computers. Last but not least, in the era of information explosion, if modern libraries can have some technological tools, such as computer data banks , at their disposal, they will become more powerful in storing more diversified and updated information.
It is high time that we revived academic libraries by deploying modern technologies. Though equipping libraries with advanced technologies calls for enormous investment, its significance will be far-reaching, because it will undoubtedly boost the development of higher education and academic research.
How can poor university students finance their college education?
If you study at college, have you ever noticed that some students are living under financial hardships? They encounter many difficulties in finishing higher education because they are poverty-stricken. Those impoverished students suffer not only physically but also mentally from their financial predicament. There is no doubt that it is high time to address the poor students’ concern.
Yet, how can they better finance their college education? In fact, they may adopt various ways. The best one is to get a loan form the university. My cousin’s experience is a good case in point. In order to finish his higher education , he managed to get a sum of 20,000 yuan interest-free bank loan from the university, which made it possible for him to afford the 4-year tuition and concentrate whole-heartedly on his study. Consequently, with the scholarship awarded and pocket money earned from occasional part-time jobs, he has got enough money for daily expense, and even set aside some for paying back the bank loan.
From the above-mentioned example, we can clearly see that getting a bank loan
and scholarship and taking some suitable part-time jobs may help those poor university students a lot in finishing their college education.
细节分析型
Cheating on Exams
Cheating has been an issue over last several decades and continues to be a thorny problem on campuses. During an exam, some students scribble notes on their hands or even adopt ingenious devices, such as microscopic earphones and wireless devices, for unprecedented hi-tech cheating. What do you think of this?
Statistics show that academic cheating on campus had risen dramatically during the past score years. It takes shape in various ways, such as scribbling notes on the hand, looking at another students’test paper during the exam, or even adopting hi-tech devices. As I see it, cheating on exams is a serious offense because it may bring about detrimental consequences.
The adverse effects of cheating on exams are far more than as follows: first, it results in an unfair competition and may destroy the confidence of those diligent
students because test is no longer an objective or just means to assess a student’s achievement. Second, it will ruin the students’ honesty and integrity in the long run. Good moral qualities are worth more than a passing grade when cheating is involved. What’s more, under that kind of circumstances, the whole society would suffer from the bitter consequences as these students could not meet the need of society not only academically but also morally.
In this case, what should be done? First, a severe punishment should be put into effect to prevent students from cheating. Second, great effort should be made to help students understand that what the society needs are morally, socially and intellectually healthy people.
原因分析型
Is it necessary to attend training classes?
The past few decades have witnessed a sturdy growth of various training courses in China. With all
kinds of tests springing up like bamboo shoots, corresponding classes are winning/gaining more and more popularity with different people.Views on whether to attend these classes or not vary from person to person. In my opinion, they are necessary and beneficial.
Above all, training plays a direct part in helping us to attain our goals effectively
and efficiently. For instance, if you intend to set foot in the fields for foreign trade , yet with poor foreign languages, you may just take a short-term intensive training course to improve your language skills. In addition to,with the improvement of the living standards, we can afford some special training, which is considered a preferable way to cultivate our interest
and make our lives more colorful and meaningful.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we can safely conclude that through attending various training classes we can not only learn what we need but also broaden our horizons.
In recent years, … has become a hot/thorny pressing issue.
According to recent survey conducted by…people have been attaching greater weight to this problem, because it may give rise to a host of problems such as…In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives,
identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measure.
A most obvious cause of the problem is that…Another contributing factor is that…
Last but not least…is also responsible for the problem in question.
in view of the above, I would recommend that some urgent steps should be taken to put an end to this serious problem.
经典句式35:
1. ~~~ the + ~ est + 名词+ (that) + 主词+ have ever + seen
( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词+ 名词+ (that) + 主词+ have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

2. Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容词+ than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。

3. ~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。

）
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

4. There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的...）
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

5. It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道...）
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

6. There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的...）
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

7. An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的优点是...）
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won‘t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

8. The reason why + 句子~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

9. So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 句子（如此...以致于...）
例句：So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。

10. Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然...）
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

11. The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~（愈...愈...）
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。

The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。

12. By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着...，..能够..）
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

13. ~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （..使..能够..）
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

14. On no account can we + V ~~~ （我们绝对不能...）
例句：On no account can we ignore the ＆#118alue of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

15. It is time + S + 过去式（该是...的时候了）
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了
16. Those who ~~~ （...的人...）
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

17. There is no one but ~~~ （没有人不...）
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学。

18. be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V （不得不...）
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

19. It is conceivable that + 句子（可想而知的）
It is obvious that + 句子（明显的）
It is apparent that + 句子（显然的）
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

20. That is the reason why ~~~ （那就是...的原因）
例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don‘t like it.
夏天很热。

那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

21. For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...（过去...年来，...一直...）
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。

22. Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

23. It pays to + V ~~~ （...是值得的。

）
例句：It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。

24. be based on （以...为基础）
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

25. Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

26. bring home to + 人+ 事（让...明白...事）
例句：We should bring home to people the ＆#118alue of working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

27. be closely related to ~~ （与...息息相关）
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关。

28. Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V （养成...的习惯）例句：We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

29. Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~ （因为...）
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。

30. What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多么...！）
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事！
31. Leave much to be desired （令人不满意）
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。

32. Have a great influence on ~~~ （对...有很大的影响）例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

33. do good to（对...有益），do harm to （对...有害）
例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。

Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

34. Pose a great threat to ~~ （对...造成一大威胁）
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。

35. do one’s utmost to + V = do one‘s best （尽全力去...）例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目。

modify
be in debt to sb credit
credible incredible
be on the decline
be on the rise
depression
economic depression
recession
slowdown beneficial
detrimental 坏的
that accident will bring about/give rise to detrimental consequence. Marketing network
Via internet
By
Have the conception that
As far as I am concern, I am inclined to believe that…Consumption
Consume
He left with the water running.
Harmonious society
We have multiple choices.
Options idealized
forecast
depict 描写，描述stagnant 停滞不前的
stagnate
well-to-do family graceful
feeble
fragile eco-system mirror 镜子
反映
it is a part of which Innate
Inborn Something hidden Clash
Monopoly 垄断prudent 谨慎的
Risk-free
Highlight all the involved risks
Offensive 冒犯的Offensive words
Out of sight, out of mind Be ignorant of
Fall into three categories。