高考英语短文改错 教案 教学设计

高考英语短文改错教案教学设计The Teaching Plan for Proof--reading and Correctingby Zhang JianTeaching Aims:Learn how to do proof―reading and correcting.Improve the students’ abilities to deal with various errors in passages.Teaching Important Points:Make the students master the skills and ways to do proof―reading and correcting.Train the students’ abilities of discovering and solving problems.Teaching Difficult Points:How to improve the students’ abilities to do proof―reading an d correcting.How to train the students’ abilities to put what has been learned into practice.Teaching Methods:Practice to make the students master what they have learnt.Discussion to help the students master the skills and ways.Individual, pair or group work to make every student work in class.Teaching Aids:1.the multimedia2. the blackboardTeaching Procedures:Step 1: Greetings and lead-inStep 2: PresentationStep 3: Exercises for missing word and the summaryDiscuss these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.1.I met student yesterday.2.He is looking a missing book. 33.He wants have a rest.4. He praised by the teacher several times.5. I’m looking forward your letter.6 .The boy often came late for school and punished yesterday.7. They could say nothing but remain silent.8. Most teachers usually strict with the students.9. Our precious time should be made full use.10. We are waiting the bus to come and pick us up.总结：缺词 Missing word1、名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。

2、不及物动词是否缺介词。

3、不定式是否漏了to。

4、被动语态是否缺少了助动词be 。

5、惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。

Step 4: Exercises for superfluous word and the summaryDiscuss these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.1.We are going to have a meeting on next week.2.He is more taller than me.3.He is fond of like English.4.The boss made workers to work 10 hours a day.5.He married with a beautiful girl.6. Entering into the hall, I found everyone seated in their places.7. We have made a great progress in the resistance against SARS.8. I’m taller than any other boy in their class.9. At last they returned back at 10 p.m.总结：多词 Superfluous word1、时间状语前是否多了介词。

2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。

3、固定搭配中是否多了词。

4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。

5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。

Step 5: Exercises for error word and the summaryDiscuss these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.1. It is time of me to take my dog.2. I had knew him before he lived here.3.They were talking about the persons and things which could be remembered.4.He as well as his sister are a League Member.5. Please remind me with the meeting tomorrow morning.6.As he was old, he could walk as fast as a young man.7. It was he that the girls were talking about.8. The boy they are referring to come from Britain.总结：错词 Error word1、在固定用法中介词是否误用。

2、动词的时态、语态、主谓是否一致。

3、非谓语动词是否误用。

4、从句中关系词是否误用。

5、判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。

6、判断句子中并列连词、从属连词是否误用。

Step 6: The skills and some things that we should payattention to解题技巧:1.通读全文，掌握大意。

2.眼观六路，上下联系，整句修改。

3.先易后难，改出错句，正确的句子放在最后。

4.一行一错，不能改动两个词。

5，正确使用批改符号“，∧，\，√”短文改错应注意的问题 :一.四不改：①标点符号不改。

②大小写不改。

③词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改）.规范做题方法：①要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。

不要用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。

②换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。

Step 7: Exercises for proof―reading and correctingPassage 1My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named himJack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us 1.________in a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we layin 2.________bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when 3.________they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself. 4.________We’d throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away 5.________and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch 6.________the food throwing to him from the other side of the roomand 7.________sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack 8.________were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we 9.________wo uld return at night to hear that he’d picked up from the 10.________radio in the day.Passage 2Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 1.________sisters---in any other words, I am an only child . Myparents 2.________love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 3.________that I get a good education. They did not want me to do 4.________any work at family .They want me to devote all my time to 5.________my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.________may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 7.________not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 8.________as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest .Do they 9.________really understand their own daughter ? What things are in 10.________other homes ,I wonder.Passage 3In a small town where there lived two brothers 1.________they were very lazy. One day, before the mother 2.________went out to an evening party, she told about her 3.________two sons give the house a good cleaning. But 4.________before the mother left the room, the big brother said 5.________to his younger brother, “Tom, when mother came 6.________back, you will say I have been ill and I can get 7.________out of bed.” the younger brother agreed. “OK,8.________and when mother turns back you will say9.________I have gone to call for a doctor for me.”10.________Step 8: Exercises for designing mistakesThis is a story told b y my father: “When I was a boy, 1.________the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring2.________Festival. My grandma was the best cook in the world 3.________and could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 4.________couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5.________about to take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6.________the kitchen looking at me. Shaking her head, she said, ‘ It7.________isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologized 8.________and controlled myself at my best till the dinner started.You 9.________know, that was a dinner we had waited for several months.” 10.________Step 9: Summary and HomeworkStep10 The Design of the Writing on the BlackboardExercise 1Dear Sue,Well, I am here in the Beijing! I'm staying at a1. .very comfortable hotel the same like ours in Britain and2. .enjoy Chinese food, though I miss my English break-fast.3. .It has been very kind and helpful for everyone to 4. .help me everywhere. Yesterday I visited the Summer 5. .Palace where the Emperors were used to go in the 6. .summers. Today I'm off to see the Great Wall,it is one 7. .of the wonders m the world. In a word, all are very 8. .interesting, so I do wish you could go to visit China. 9. .Hope everyone home is well.10. .DanExercise 2There is a small island in the Pacific Ocean, that1. .is near 8 miles long and 8 miles wide. It was once2. .called "The Pleasant Island" but now it's national name3. .was Nauru, "the happy little nation" in English.4. .Nauru was once owned the Germans in history.5. .Later, the Australians ruled the island people. In 6. .World War Ⅱ, the Japan took Nauru away from the7. .Australians. Now Nauru do not belong to Germany,8. .Australia and Japan. On January 31, the island Nauru9. .became new nation and had a new name.10. .The answers to passage 3, from S3.The answers to passage 3, from S2.The answers to passage 1, from S1.Proof―reading and Correcting。