四级作文段落写作

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2.）扩展句要能支持主题句的观点，因此要有 具体的facts,我们可以运用理论论证、事实 论证、举例论证、数据论证或解释说明等各 种方式来写扩展句。做到“有话可说”。
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5.)分段式主题句。没有具体的controlling idea.
e.g. People have been trying to solve this problem in the following three ways:…
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提纲作文
• 英语提纲式作文 ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ 中文提纲作文：分析推敲提纲与题目的关系，明
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二、扩展句
1.扩展句是以主题句为中心，逐步展开段落，它 一般由一组意思连贯的句子组成。扩展句要内 容翔实而简明扼要，表达清楚而有较强的说服 力。 Major Supporting Sentence
扩展句 Minor Supporting Sentence
2. 扩展句的特点
1.）扩展句一般多为长句
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3.) 主题句一般是议论句，表达自己的观点。 要有point\ topic.这样我们后面的扩展句才 能够展开。
1.Private cars benefit both individuals and nation.
2.People’s view on the holiday economy varies from person to person.
3.It is well known that holiday are important for us and concerning the holiday economy, different people have different opinions.
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对比下面两个句子：
1.Twenty students attended the school’s Christmas party.
段落写作
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段落的基本结构和写法
段落一般由主题句（topic sentence）,扩展句（ supporting sentence）,结论句（concluding sentence）组成。
一.主题句 主题句是对段落中心思想的概括，是作者主要意图 的反映，是段落的核心，其余部分要围绕它展开论述 ，因此，主题句是整个段落的纲领。
• Now the criteria for good sts are changing.(详细叙述: 学习好，兴趣广 ，能力强，身体棒。。。)
• Generally speaking, criteria for good sts are changing for the better. (举例说明变化的必要和好处)
e.g. Private cars benefits both individuals and the nation. (Topic sentence) It is very convenient for people to drive to work, study and do many other things. By encouraging people to buy cars, the nation can stimulate consumption and the domestic demand, and enhance the national economy. (Supporting Sentences)
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例如：
Private cars benefit both individuals and nation. It is very convenient for people to drive to work, study and do many other things. By encouraging people to buy cars, the nation can stimulate consumption and the domestic demand, and enhance the national economy.
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2.主题句的特点
1.）主题句一般位于句首(开门见山)，这与汉 语写作中的 总结性论述常常谓语段落结尾处 不同。
2.) 主题句一般是简单句。
e.g. People’s view on the holiday varies from person to person.
e.g. It is well known that holiday are important for us and concerning the holiday economy, different people have different opinions.
2.The school’s Christmas party is as bore as usual.
4.)主题句除了要有topic以外，还要有 controlling idea,也就是说要具体，不要大 而空。
e.g. Bikes are very important.
e.g. Bikes have brought a lot of convenience to our daily life.
• ② 要写出每段的主题句
• --要能说明段落中心思想，确定全段内容 重心、范围和叙述、说明的角度
• --要有体现中心思想的关键词（包括体现 主题意义或范围的核心词或短语)
• --要简洁明了，直截了当
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• In the past, a good student refers to one who was only good at studies.(举例说明: study-centered both at home & in school)
确命题要求 • Eg. The Changing Criteria for Good
Students • ①过去，人们对好学生的看法是 • ②现在人们的看法已经发生改变 • ③总的来说，该变化是
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• Analysis:
• ① 通过提纲分析可见，既要说明人们在过 去和现在对好学生的看法是什么，有些什 么变化，而且要明确这种变化是随社会的 进步而朝好的方向发展，否则就没有使标 题升华。