托福作文题库185英文原题及解题分析

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托福范文及赏析-185题库-41-智课网

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智课网TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作185题库-Topic 41Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1. 题目翻译:有些人认为人类对耕地,住房,和工业的需求比保存土地和濒临灭绝的物种更重要?同意与否?2. 审题关键词:Human needs; Endangered animals3. 论证分析:反:如果不保护濒危动物,那么会对环境造成巨大的破坏正:濒危动物的消失,会为动物学和生物学带来巨大的损失反:再说明人类对于农田、房屋和工业的需要也非常重要,但是保护濒危动物也是必要的范文:In the past, there have been many endangered animals. Now they are extinct. Does it matter? Has our environment been affected by their absence? Has the quality of our own life been changed? The answer to these questions is “Yes.”Yes. It does matter if we destroy an endangered species’ habitat in order to develop more farmland, housing or industrial parks. There is a delicate balance of nature: if one small part were to be removed, it would effect all the other parts. For example, if certain trees are cut down, bats will have no place to roost. If they cannot roost, they cannot breed. If there are no bats, there will be noYes. Our environment has been affected by the absence of certain animals. Certain flowers are pollinated by butterflies, which migrate from Canada to Mexico. Some of the breeding grounds of these butterflies were destroyed. Now these flowers are disappearing from certain areas. We will no longer be able to enjoy their beauty because of the imbalances we have created in nature.Yes. The quality of our life has been changed. America used to be covered with giant trees. Now we have to visit them in one small park. Rainforests around the world are being cut down to make room for humans. We will never be able to see or study this fragile ecosystem. I encourage humans to look for other alternatives for our farmlands, housing, and industries. We have alternatives; the满分要素剖析一、语言表达文章给人的第一印象就是长难句比较多,用词比较优美,使得整体行文流畅,凸显了作者强大的语言功底。

托福范文及赏析-185题库-3-智课网

托福范文及赏析-185题库-3-智课网

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作185题库‐Topic3Nowadays,food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1.题目翻译:现代食物容易准备是否改变了人们的生活?2.审题关键词:Food;Easier to prepare;Life attitude3.论证分析:正:The number one positive effect from having foods which are easier to prepare is the additional time which can be saved.正:The second way in which having easier to prepare foods has improved our lives is that we can now enjoy a greater variety of dishes more often.反:However,people sometimes put their health in danger.范文The twentieth century has brought with it many advances.With those advances,human lives have changed dramatically.In some ways life is worse,but mostly it is better.Changes in food preparationThe convenience of preparing food today is amazing.Even stoves have gotten too slow for us. Microwave cooking is much easier.We can press a few buttons and a meal is completely cooked in just a short time.People used to spend hours preparing a home‐cooked meal,and now they can use that time for other,better things.Plus,there are all kinds of portable,prepackaged foods we canFood preparation today allows for more variety.With refrigerators and freezers,we can preserve a lot of different foods in our homes.Since technology makes cooking so much faster,people are willing to make several dishes for even a small meal.Parents are more likely to let children be picky, now that they can easily heat them up some prepackaged macaroni and cheese on the side. Needless to say,adults living in the same house may have very different eating habits as well.If they don’t want to cook a lot of different dishes,it’s common now to eat out at restaurants several times a week.Healthy eating is also easier than ever now.When people cook,they use new fat substitutes and cooking sprays to cut fat and calories.This reduces the risk of heart disease and high cholesterol. Additionally,we can buy fruits and vegetable fresh,frozen or canned.They are easy to prepare,so many of us eat more of those nutritious items daily.A hundred years ago,you couldn’t imagine the process of taking some frozen fruit and ice from the freezer,adding some low‐fat yogurt from a plastic cup and some juice from a can in the refrigerator,and whipping up a low‐fat smoothie in theOur lifestyle is fast,but people still like good food.What new food preparation technology has given us is more choices.Today,we can prepare food that is more convenient,healthier,and of greater variety than ever before in history.满分因素剖析一、语言表达本文语言朴实,并没有应用很多华丽的辞藻,用到的词汇多是高中和四级词汇,但表达清楚,逻辑清晰,通俗易懂。

托福真题:托福作文范文185篇【专业】满分作文(2)

托福真题:托福作文范文185篇【专业】满分作文(2)

托福真题:托福作文范文185篇【专业】满分作文(2)智课网出品备考新托福(IBT)的同学们或许都听过独立写作185题库,独立写作185题库是ETS公布的托福考试经典官方作文题库,收录在托福考试官方指南(Official Guide)的附录中,在托福考试改革之前,是作文真题的主要来源。

现在的托福考试对官方作文题目进行了扩大,但是185题库仍然和托福作文真题紧密相连,为考生提供最权威最真实的托福范文参考和写作练习。

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托福185题库真题:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福满分作文-托福185范文赏析:Throughout my life, I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life. Parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.内容详细条目段落此段结构本段是一个分总的结构。

首先第一句话引出了本文要讨论的内容。

后面第二句话对此进行了简要分析。

最后一句话用however转折,陈述出了作者与众不同的看法,并点出本文主论点。

托福范文及赏析-185题库-26-智课网

托福范文及赏析-185题库-26-智课网

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作185题库-Topic 26It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.1. 题目翻译:你家附近将要建一个电影院。

你同意还是反对,详细阐述支持你看法的原因。

2. 审题关键词:Movie Theater; Neighborhood3. 论证分析:正:增加就业正:提供休闲的方便地方正:贡献税收,服务社区范文Some people will say that a new movie theater in our neighborhood would be a bad thing. However, I fully support the plan to build one. I feel that a movie theater would bring more opportunities forAs it stands, there is little to do in my town. There are no parks here, and there is certainly no nightlife. Additionally, the nearest movies theater is more than thirty minutes away. That is inconvenient for everyone here. Many movies end late at night. Who wants a long drive home atBuilding a new movie theater here will also reduce juvenile delinquency. Like everyone else, teens here are bored and need activities to keep them busy and out of trouble. The jobs that the theatrewill provide will help teens, too. We need more businesses that are willing and eager to employ young people. By providing entertainment and jobs for young people, we lay the foundation for aOverall, the new theater will bring many more improvements to the town, For example, it will help other businesses. That is because the movie theater will attract customers from neighboring towns. Currently those people do not have a reason to come to this town. However, if they are coming here for a movie, they will be more likely to stay here to shop, eat and do other activities. If we get more visitors, we’ll need better roads. While this may be costly, it will also make travel easier for people living here. We will be able to get around faster. Safety will also be improved by the development of new roads with more recent and modern safety, technology and quality. I believe that our town needs a new movie theater. I support it fully because of the many direct and indirect benefits provided to both local and neighboring communities. I hope that others in our community will join me to convince residents and the local government to implement such a program.满分因素剖析:一、语言表达文章语句通顺,句子比较短小精悍,简单易懂,错误较少。

参考:老托福185写作题目及思路分析(七)1

参考:老托福185写作题目及思路分析(七)1

61. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.同意:1)⽗母可以使他们避免犯⼤错。

2)⽗母还可以为他们做出更好的决定。

3)重⼤决定往往涉及到⽗母的⾦钱,所以也应该由⽗母做决定。

62. What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.我最希望我的朋友可靠1)⼀个可靠的朋友能够在最困难的时候帮助你2)⼀个可靠的朋友不会欺骗你3)⼀个可靠的朋友不会浪费你的时间。

等朋友出去玩等等63. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.同意1)学习⾟苦,却学到了知识,终⽣受⽤2)创业艰苦,却增长了才⼲,成就了事业3)举⽬⽆亲,却塑造了⾃⽴性格64. Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.选择拥有⽣意(理由同185):1)可以更有创造性地⼯作2)可以实现个⼈价值,更有成就感3)可以为社会和⾃⼰创造更多财富65. Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.⼀个城市应当保留⽼的,历史性的建筑1)⽼的历史性的建筑是城市的象征,没有这些建筑,城市就失去了意义2)⽼的历史性建筑是历史教育的来源3)⽼的历史性建筑是吸引游客的好来源66. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.同意:1)同学之间没有代沟,沟通更容易2)同学之间相处时间长过⽗母3)同学的评加267. If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.我选择低⼯资的没有经验的员⼯1)成本低2)有热情3)有创新精神4)可塑性强68. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.每天的作业是有⽤的1)做作业有助于帮助学⽣复习功课,巩固所学2)做作业可以使学⽣们课后的学习更有⽅向性3)做作业可以强制学⽣课后学习4)做作业可以让学⽣养成⾃学的好习惯69. If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.。

托福作文185题库范文及解析6

托福作文185题库范文及解析6

Topic 6If I could change one thing about my hometown, I think it would be the fact that there's no sense of community here. People don't feel connected, they don't look out for each other, and they don't get to know their neighbors.People come and go a great deal here. They change jobs frequently and move on. This means that they don't put down roots in the community. They don't join community organizations and they're not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. If someone has a petition to put in a new street light, he/she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. They don't feel it has anything to do with them. They don't get involved in improving the schools because they don't think the quality of education is important to their lives. They don't see the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.People don't try to support others around them. They don't keep a friendly eye on their neighbors’ children, or check in on older folks if they don't see them for a few days. They're not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. For example, they may not know if a neighbor loses a loved one. There's not a lot of community support for individuals.Neighbors don't get to know each other. Again, this is because people come and go every few years. So when neighbors go on vacation, no one is keeping an eye on their house. No one is making sure nothing suspicious is going on there, like lights in the middle of the night. People feel more animosity than friendship between one another. When neighbors' children are cutting across someone's lawn on their bikes, there's no friendly way of casuallymentioning the problem. People immediately act as if it's a major property disagreement.My hometown is a nice place to live in many ways, but it would be much nicer if we had that sense of community.满分因素剖析一、语言表达与其他满分作文相比,本文语言略显平淡。

托福范文及赏析-185题库-10-智课网

托福范文及赏析-185题库-10-智课网

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作185题库‐Topic10When people succeed,it is because of hard work.Luck has nothing to do with success."Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.1.题目翻译:成功是因为运气还是辛勤工作?2.审题关键词:Succeed;Hard work;Luck;Reasons;Examples;Agree or disagree3.论证分析:反:Luck means one may encounter a life opportunity or meet someone important which leads to success.反:A lucky mistake or discovery may bring unexpected success.正:When opportunity comes,the hard‐working people are better prepared to seize it.范文:When people succeed,it is because of hard work,but luck has a lot to do with it,too.Success without some luck is almost impossible.The French emperor Napoleon said of one of his generals,“I know he’s good.But is he lucky?”Napoleon knew that all the hard work and talent in the worldWhen it comes to success,luck can mean being in the right place and the right time,or having the right skills to get a job done.It might mean turning down an offer and then having a better offer come along.Nothing can replace hard work,but working hard also means keeping your eyes open, looking for possibilities and expecting the unexpected.Opportunity is often out of our control andHow many of the great inventions and discoveries came about through a lucky mistake or a lucky chance?One of the biggest lucky mistakes in history is Columbus’so‐called discovery of America.By doing so,he enriched his sponsors and changed history,but he was really looking for India.However, Columbus’chance discovery wasn’t pure luck.It was backed up by years of studying and calculating.Success that comes from pure luck and no hard work can be a real problem.For example,consider a teenage girl who becomes a movie star.Imagine she’s been picked from nowhere because of her looks.She is going to feel very insecure,because she knows she didn’t do anything to earn her stardom.On the other hand,think about an actress who’s spent years learning and working at her craft.When she finally has good luck and becomes a success,she will handle stardom better because she knows she earned it.People who work hard help make their own luck by being ready when opportunity knocks.When it满分因素剖析一、语言表达本文语句通顺,内容充实,逻辑严谨,语言流畅。

托福范文及赏析-185题库-40-智课网

托福范文及赏析-185题库-40-智课网

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作185题库-Topic 40The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1.题目翻译:“决不,决不放弃”这个表达的意思是坚持尝试并且不停止为自己的目标努力。

你同意不同意?用具体的原因和事例支持你的观点。

2.审题关键词:Never, never give up; Working attitudes; Personalities; Life style3.论证分析:正: An attitude of never giving up could be said to be the watchword, or motto, of science.正: Never giving up is also responsible for many of today’s business successes.反:However, sometimes we should also learn to give up.范文:“If at first you don’t succeed, try, try again.” These are wise words. One should never give up. ThereOnce I ran for president of my class. Unfortunately, I lost. I lost because I did not promote myself enough. I looked at my mistakes and decided how to correct them. The following year, I ran for president again. This time I gave speeches, called voters on the phone, and handed out brochures.Once I wanted to study medicine. Unfortunately, I didn’t like science. I failed all my science courses at school. Then I realized that what I liked about medicine was helping people. I changed my goalOnce I wanted to talk with my friend. Unfortunately, his computer was down and I couldn’t e-mail him. His phone line was busy so I couldn’t call him. Mail would take too long so I couldn’t write him. Since I really wanted to talk with him, I got on the bus and went across town to visit him. There is always another option. If you give up, it is almost the same as dying. My advice is to always look for another opportunity, another goal, or another option. There is always something else. Don’t give up.满分因素剖析:一、语言表达文章语言比较平实,论证恰到好处,没有过多用来炫技的语句,很少有语法或逻辑错误,读起来清晰自然。

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托福作文题库185英文原题及解题分析41. Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.42. What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.43. Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.44. Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.45. Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.46. What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.47. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.48. People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.49. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.50. Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.41、不同意人类对于农田、房屋和工业的需要要比保护濒危动物重要(1)如果不保护濒危动物,那么会对环境造成巨大的破坏(2)濒危动物的消失,会为动物学和生物学带来巨大的损失(3)再说明人类对于农田、房屋和工业的需要也非常重要,但是保护濒危动物也是必要的。

42、计算机技能是最重要的(1)计算机是工作中必须的。

不会计算机软件的话,无法进行工作和学习(2)计算机已经成为人们互相交流的重要方面,如电子邮件等等。

(3)计算机技能能够大量的节省时间。

一个成功的人必须把精力抽出来放在最重要的事情上43、人们喜欢危险运动的原因在于:(1)现在的生活压力很大,生活枯燥,危险运动能够放松自己,给自己一些刺激(2)危险运动能够带来巨大的金钱收益(3)危险运动能够展示自己44、更喜欢和同伴旅行(1)和同伴旅行,能够互相照顾,比较安全(2)和同伴旅行,成本会比较低(3)和同伴旅行,能够更好的观赏旅游景点45、我更喜欢早上起的早些(1)早起对身体是比较好(2)早起能够提高效率,利用时间(3)早点起,进行工作是公司所愿意看到的,因为很多业务都是在早上进行。

46、好的儿子或者女儿的素质是(这些一直都没有改变)(1)自己的事业出色,不让父母担心(2)尊敬父母(3)为父母提供退休后养老的经济来源47、选择在大公司工作(1)大公司提供很多的在职培训,能够将工作和学习互相结合(2)在大公司工作的时候,机会会更多些,比如说跳槽(3)大公司工作给人比较高的社会地位48、人们工作除了金钱以外还有其他的原因:(1)社会地位。

一个没有工作的人是没有社会地位的(2)结交更多的朋友。

在工作岗位中可以认识很多人(3)个人的兴趣。

喜欢计算机的人做程序员很多是为了兴趣49、不同意面对面的交流比其他交流方式好(1)其他交流的方式降低了成本。

招聘中电话面试等等(2)其他交流方式节省时间,提高了效率。

有些问题打电话发电子邮件就可以解决了,不用跑到当地解决。

(3)有些时候面对面的交流方式不适用,必须要用其他的方式。

比如学校要通知所有学生一件事情。

50、我选择做一些新的事情和冒险(1)做新的事情和冒险对自己是一个挑战。

感受这个过程能够让人变的更成熟(2)做新的事情和冒险能够学习新的东西,丰富自己的知识(3)做新的事情和冒险可以结识更多的朋友51. Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.52. What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.53. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect ofa job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.54. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.55. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.56. A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.57. Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.58. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.59. Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.60. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.51、成功来自于仔细的计划(1)仔细的计划可以明确自己的目标(2)仔细的计划可以避免未来可能发生的错误(3)仔细的计划可以提高工作的效率52、改变环境污染,与前题重53、同意工作的最重要的部分是挣到的钱(1)一个人需要养家糊口,如果没有钱的话,不能生存(2)如果一份工作挣钱很少,在社会上的地位仍然很低(3)如果一份工作挣钱很少,无法做一些自己希望做的事情,比如说旅游等等54 同意不应当通过外表来衡量一个人(1)一个人无法决定自己的外表,以外表来衡量一个人是不公平的。

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