高考英语读后续写作文素材积累讲义

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高考英语读后续写材料整理讲义

读后续写整理材料读后续写记叙文分为明线和暗线明线为事件的发生而暗线则是人物的情感变化情感的多种表达方式：情感+seize/ take hold of/ flood/ sweep●Nervousness took hold of him.●Excitement seized me.● A wave of confidence flooded into his heart.●Courage deserted(抛弃) him.●Tears welled up in David’s eyes.●David’s face brightened.结尾：关于提炼、总结立意的常用表达：从我的视角，总结感悟Only then did I realize it is...that+从句At that moment, I realized that+从句The experience will always remain in my memory, inspiring/reminding me that+从句What I learned from this contest was the secret to creative thinking.我从这次比赛中学到的是创造性思维的秘诀。

从第三人称视角，进行总结Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a big difference.With tears welling up in his eyes, David proved that...During our life, there are always moments when we feel delighted. David told us...多种类型的“说”一般的说：say, ask, reply, respond补充说、固执的说：add, insist大声、小声说：announce, declare / whisper, murmur自言自语的说：think to oneself, murmur to oneself笑着说：smile, laugh高声喊叫：cry, shout, scream, yell哭着说：cry, weep, sob在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感以及伴随动作，让你的描写更生动传神。

高考英语读后续写情感类表达素材(共五类)讲义

高考考前读后续写情感类表达浓缩版一、紧张、宽慰、紧张、激动、开心、快乐I.Gaokao is around the corner.Though looking calm, I am literally having butterflies in my stomach.Sometimes, my heart will fly into my mouth at the thought of it.Nevertheless, I can study with efficiency most of the time and I have a sound sleep at night.高考就在眼前了。

我虽然看起来很平静，但实际上我很紧张。

有时，一想到高考，我的心就会提到嗓子眼儿。

尽管如此，我大部分时间都能高效地学习，晚上我睡得很香。

1.around the corner/approaching即将来临2.literally: actually实际上3.have/ with butterflies in one’s stomach/ one’s stomach be full of butterflies 心里发慌4.sb’s heart flies into one’s mouth 心提到嗓子眼儿5.nevertheless: however然而6.with efficiency=efficiently7.have a sound sleep=sleep like a log睡得很香、睡得很沉II.While my brother was preparing for the marathon, he came down with a rare type of disease.I tended to him carefully, accompanying him to special training with great patience.Much to my relief, he soon recovered.He participated in the race as scheduled.At the sight of all the competitors, I felt my palms sweating and my heart pounding.Ultimately, my brother got the title of the best runner of the year.When I saw my brother’s eyes shone with excitement, tears of joy streamed down my cheeks.“I take pride in you, dear brother.” I exclaimed.He grinned from ear to ear with delight. 当我哥哥准备参加马拉松比赛时，他得了一种罕见的疾病。

第23讲读后续写(讲义)-2024年高考英语一轮复习(新教材新高考)

►第23讲读后续写（讲义）【复习目标】学会把握故事主题学会分析故事情节学会构思故事情节掌握推敲优化语言【考情分析】读后续写的语篇类型一般是记叙文。

所提供短文词数在350左右，语篇选材情节曲折，逻辑性强。

划线词语涉及到名词(词组)、动词(词组)、介词(词组)和形容词等，其中，以名词(词组)为主，在续写中至少要使用5个关键词语。

读后续写多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，所考察的主题为人与自然，人与动物或者人与自我。

近年高考真题读后续写考点细目表【网络构建】命题规律：考查形式：运用英语基础知识准确理解文章故事情节，并结合文本材料和两个段落首句，展开合理想象，运用叙述性语言和描写性语言相结合来进行续写。

文章特色:1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。

语言特色:在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性。

易错点：1.忽视文体的一致性。

如果文章是对话性较强的,我们在续写时要注意对话的使用,反之,如果文章以讲述为主,我们就要进行讲述,切忌前后文体不一。

2.忽视每段首句的导向性。

有的文章是夹叙夹议类的,作者会在最后一段对事情进行评论。

如果第二段的首句是评论性语言,我们要顺着这个方向写下去。

3.忽视与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接。

这是续写最常犯的错误。

我们有时只考虑故事情节的延续,忽视了与段落开头的衔接,这样很容易偏离主题。

4.忽视第一段结尾部分与第二段开头的衔接。

第二段的开头起到承上启下的作用,因此第一段的结尾部分一定要与第二段的开头有所衔接。

5.忽视应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。

切忌时态、人称等的混乱使用,这将会影响得分,同时丰富的词汇以及词汇使用的准确性也能彰显我们的英语水平,给我们的续写添彩。

高考英语读后续写素材积累---《追风筝的人》讲义

高考读后续写素材积累---《追风筝的人》Hassan's face brightened."Good,"he said. He lifted our kite, red with yellow borders, and, just beneath where the central and cross spars met, marked with Saifo's unmistakable signature. He licked his finger and held it up,tested the wind, then ran in its direction—on those rare occasions we flew kites in the summer, he'd kick up dust to see which way the wind blew it. The spool rolled in my hands until Hassan stopped, about fifty feet away.He held the kite high overhis head, like an Olympic athlete showing his gold medal. I jerked the string twice, our usual signal, and Hassan tossed the kite.Caught between Baba and the mullahs at school, I still hadn't made up my mind about God.But when a Koran ayat I had learned in my diniyat class rose to my lips, I muttered it. I took a deep breath, exhaled, and pulled on thestring. Within a minute, my kite was rocketing to the sky. It made a sound like a paper bird flapping its wings. Hassan clapped his hands, whistled, and ran back to me. I handed him the spool, holding on to the string, and he spun it quickly to roll the loose string back on.At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift,make the sweeps easier. Next to me, Hassan held the spool, his handsalready bloodied by the string.Soon, the cutting started and the first of the defeated kites whirled out of control. They fell from the sky like shooting stars with brilliant, rippling tails, showering the neighborhoods below with prizes for the kite runners. I could hear the runners now, hollering as they ran the streets. Someone shouted reports of a fight breaking out two streets down.I kept stealing glances at Baba sitting with RahimKhan on the roof, wonderedwhat he was thinking.Was he cheering for me? Or did a part ofhim Enjoy watching me fail? That was the thing about kite flying: Your mind drifted with the kite.They were coming down all over the place now,The kites, and I was still flying.I was still flying. My eyes kept wandering over to Baba, bundled up in his wool sweater.Was he surprised I had lasted as long as I had? You don't keep your eyes to the sky, you won't last much longer.I snapped my gaze back to the sky. A red kite was closing in on me--I'd caught it just in time. I tangled a bit with it, ended up besting him when he became impatient and tried to cut me from below. (478 words)设计问题1. In the first two paragraphs , how did they fly kites ? (设计意图：前面两段出现了大量的放风筝的动作描写，很生动很形象，设计这个题目能让学生去找去品味那些丰富的动作细节描写，感受语言的美）2.Why did the author keep glancing at Baba? （挖掘作者动作背后的含义，他的动作是他的心理活动的体现，也是他性格的体现。

高考英语写作专题备考：读后续写句子素材积累讲义

读后续写句子素材积累讲义距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

（一）01. He gasped and clutched (at) his stomach.他喘着气突然按住自己的胃部。

02. Fear clutched at her heart.她突然感到一阵恐惧袭上心头。

03. The door opened and in walked a man with two fingers missing from his left hand.门开了，进来一个人，左手少了两根手指。

04. The captain spun[spʌn] around and all the color drained[dreɪn] from his face. He looked as if he was staring at a ghost.船长转过身来，所有的颜色都从他脸上消失了。

2023届高考英语复习读后续写积累讲义素材

心理描写快乐_He felt the warmth surging through his body.他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。

1.A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face.他脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。

2.Everyone was in a good mood.每个人的心情都很好。

3.Pm in good mood at the moment, just like the white clouds in the blue sky•我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。

4.My heart is as sweet as honey.我的心情像吃了蜜一样甜。

5.A thrill of joy filled her heart.她心中充满了喜悦。

表达快乐的单词：悲伤A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。

1.The loneliness and grief comes in waves.孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。

2.Grief comes in waves.悲伤如潮水一般涌来。

3.The last word went like a bullet to my heart.最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。

4.My heart seemed to be torn.我的心都要碎了。

5.An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.人群中弥漫着悲伤和沮丧的气氛。

激动Mary felt her heart race,玛丽感到她的心跳加速。

1.Her heart was thumping with excitement.她激动得心砰砰跳。

1.1was oveijoyed and ran three steps at once.我欣喜假设狂，三步并作两步跑过去。

读后续写写作指导及范文讲义新高考英语写作复习

2025年新高考英语写作｜读后续写写作指导及范文I wouldn’t say that my sister Thika and I were particularly close. I was the naive little one, while she appeared to me to be walking on water—She was literally the symbol of perfection, and I wanted to be just like her. If she wore her hair in twin ponytails with a blue clip one day, I would do the same with mine the following day. I used to follow her and her friends around and beg to be included, but a thirteenyearold’s life doesn’t really have much space for a bother so me te nyearold sister. Over time, my admiration for her turned into indifference. Living in the same apartment as strangers, we shared meals but barely spoke to one another.I was so unconcerned when she informed me last year that she would be spending eight mon ths studying abroad in Lisbon, Portugal. I assumed I’d get to use her CD player and wear the dresses she left behind. That was the only way I thought her leaving would affect me.I sat in my room that first evening after she departed and tried to finish my assignment. I couldn’t get rid of the feeling that something was wrong, something was missing. The apartment was far too silent. Both Thika’s CD player and her voice giggling on the phone with her friends were absent. As I sat there, I became acutely awar e of how different life was without her. Even though we didn’t always talk, just having her there made me feel secure.I sobbed that evening. We wasted years trying to live our own lives and overlooking each other’s, and that made my heart ache. I sobbed t hat I did not evengive her a hug before she boarded her plane. But as the night went on, my sobs turned into tears of peace, tears of new beginnings.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

高考英语读后续写背诵讲义

高考读后续写情绪＆句型考前简洁版喜1......, her face beamed and her bright smile lit up the room ...．(并列结构）她的脸上洋溢着笑容，灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。

2.She was overwhelmed by joy and her eyes twinkled with happiness .（并列结构）她欣喜若狂，眼睛里闪烁着幸福的光芒。

3.Barely could I conceal my excitement , and I opened box softly , as if it was my precious treasure.（倒装）我几乎无法掩饰我的兴奋，我轻轻地打开盒子，就好像它是我的宝贝一样。

怒1.On his rigid face stood an expression of horror and hatred .他僵硬的脸上露出恐惧和仇恨的表情。

（完全倒装）2.He felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming(砰地关上) the door angrily behind him.他生气地冲出房间；狠狠摔门哀1. Upon hearing the bad news , she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.听到这个坏消息，她感到一阵悲伤，禁不住痛哭起来。

2.I felt I was floating in an ocean of sadness .我觉得自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。

3.With tears blocking my view , I felt a sharp dagger piercing my heart .(with的复合结构)泪水模糊了我的视线，我感到一把锋利的匕首刺穿了我的心。

高考英语读后续写冒险类讲义

读后续写系列（三）人与自我——脱险类故事(火灾、洪水、迷路等)一、脱险类续写大框架：:救人之前(恶劣环境+负面情绪):救人之中(努力+救人动作+如释重负):救人之后(感激+升华)二、好句积累：(一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）(1) Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.立刻，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。

(2)The air was filled with thick, black smoke.空气中充满了浓浓的黑烟。

(3)The world was burdened with a sea of darkness, with a sense of horror creeping up on me.世界被无边的黑暗所笼罩，一股恐怖的感觉向我袭来。

2.负面情绪：害怕(1)He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。

(2)A flood of fear welled up in him.一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。

(3)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.我感到非常害怕，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。

(4)H er face turned pale and shook all over.她脸色苍白，浑身颤抖。

(二)第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）1.Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.虽然她很虚弱，但她挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。

2.I hugged her tightly in my arms, trying to calm her down.我紧紧地把她抱在怀里，试图让她平静下来。

高考英语作文复习专项读后续写语料库讲义

英语读后续写语料库一、表示喜悦的：Nothing would please me more.没什么使我更开心了。

A wide excitement took hold of her.她的激动之情溢于言表。

smile from ear to eareyes sparklingbe over the moon二、表示愤怒的：She could feel the anger growing bubbling up inside her.她感觉到愤怒在发酵。

表达愤怒的动词：shout/scream/howl三、表示悲伤、绝望的：A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤His heart sank when he heard the bad news.听到这个坏消息，他心里一沉。

Upon hearing the bad news,she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.一听到这个消息，悲伤席卷而来，她哭地不能自己。

with tears in her eyes, 满含热泪四、恐惧A burst of horror held me totally in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.be scared to death 吓地要死hands trembling 双手在颤抖五、紧张My heart began to race and my mind went blank.我心跳加速，大脑一片空白。

I could feel the butterflies in my stomach.六、惊讶Mouth open wide,My jaw dropped to the ground.七、感动Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories.当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。

高考英语读后续写作文素材积累11对话篇讲义

2024年高考英语读后续写作文素材积累11——对话篇01表示爱的对话1. "If only I could hold you in my arms forever," he whispered, his voice trembling with longing.（如果我能永远把你拥在怀中就好了，）他低声说道，声音颤抖着充满渴望。

2. She looked at him, her eyes shining with adoration, wishing she could express her feelings more eloquently.（她看着他，眼睛闪耀着崇拜，希望自己能更有口才地表达自己的感受。

）3. "I cherish every moment we spend together," he said, his voice filled with tenderness, as if each second was a precious gift.（“我珍视我们在一起的每一刻。

”他说道，声音充满温情，仿佛每一秒都是珍贵的礼物。

）4. She longed to be by his side, to support him in all his endeavors, to be his rock in the midst of any storm.（她渴望能够在他身边，支持他的一切努力，在任何风雨中成为他的坚强后盾。

）5. "If I could rewrite our history, I would ensure that our paths crossed sooner," he mused, regret lacing his words.（“如果我能重新书写我们的历史，我会确保我们的相遇早一些。

”他若有所思地说道，悔恨在话语中流淌。

读后续写写作素材讲义2023届高三英语三轮冲刺

读后续写写作素材讲义亮点句子积累1．倒装句Here es the rough sketch of my advice.Challenging as it may be, it helps.Should you accept my application, I would…Such was Einstein, a man of achievements and deep thoughts, but with simple habits.Not only has … incredibly …,but it also…2. 连接句As a matter of fact, I believe, only through reading can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired and success achieved.Additionally, a wide range of reading can broaden our horizon and brighten our life.Above all, enthusiastic and outgoing, I myself am young man always ready to offer hands to others.3. 无灵主语句The uncertainty was starting to wear on us.Any advice is highly appreciated.主题升华句子积累Any act of love can thaw a frozen heart.爱的行动可以溶化冰冻的心。

The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more. 最好的爱是那种能叫醒灵魂并激发我们拼搏的力气。

2025届高考英语一轮复习读后续写必备内容讲义

高考续写必备内容黑暗的感觉：One foot into the darkness and the sense of detachment from reality nearly made me panic.续写思路描述内心的恐惧：续写句子：My heart raced as I felt the weight of the darknesspressing in around me, suffocating and oppressive.思路：强调内心的恐惧感，表现出对黑暗的压迫感。

中文翻译：我的心跳加速，感受到黑暗的重量压迫着我，令人窒息而压抑。

回忆过去的经历：续写句子：I remembered the stories of those who had venturedinto the unknown and never returned, fueling my anxiety.思路：通过回忆过去的故事，增加紧张感和不安。

中文翻译：我想起了那些曾经冒险进入未知而再也没有回来的人们的故事，这加剧了我的焦虑。

感受周围环境的变化：续写句子：The air grew colder, and I could hear the faint rustle ofleaves, as if the darkness itself was alive.思路：描绘周围环境的变化，增强神秘感和不安感。

中文翻译：空气变得更冷，我能听到微弱的树叶沙沙声，仿佛黑暗本身是活着的。

内心的挣扎：续写句子：I fought against the urge to turn back, remindingmyself that courage often lay just beyond fear.思路：表现出内心的挣扎，强调勇气与恐惧之间的斗争。

中文翻译：我努力抵抗回头的冲动，提醒自己勇气往往就在恐惧的另一边。

决定继续前行：续写句子：Taking a deep breath, I stepped further into thedarkness, determined to face whatever lay ahead.思路：表现出决心和勇气，决定继续前行。

高考英语写作专项读后续写素材积累讲义

高考英语写作专项读后续写素材积累讲义距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

——一.语言支架整理——Never before in his life had he been so overwhelmed(击败，制服) in such immense （adj. 巨大的）curiosity to find out what was in the locker. （倒装句式以及高级词汇）What amazed Harry was that there was a box of diamond inside the locker.（主语从句）After what seemed like a century ,Harry eventually regained his presence.of mind.（回过神来）（夸张修辞以及高级词汇）With fancy thoughts filling his mind, Harry opened the locker with the key eagerly.（with的复合结构）After having such a narrow escape（死里逃生）,never did Harry except something new again.（倒装句）Hearing his wife was still persuading him repeatedly, Harry cast a cold glance at her and turned around to open the locker.（高级短语）His wife was ashamed to account for （对...做出解释）what had happened,which turned out to be a fruitless （不成功的）attempt.（定语从句）Never before in his life had he sunk into（陷入）an embarrassing situation.（倒装句以及高级词汇）With many people pouring into the hotel,an idea of escaping immediately flashed through his mind.（高级词汇）It was not until his wife came to the police station and explained to the policemen patiently that Harry was released and went home.Driven by a burning desire （强烈的欲望）to figure out what was in the locker,Harry turned a deaf ear （对...置若罔闻）to his wife’s words.——二.情感支架整理——Harry opened the locker which had the number164 with his heart pounding wildly and throat tightening.Overwhelmed with fears,Harry could feel his heart pounding wildly in his chest and blood racing through his veins.His wife was frozen to the spot with an unusual pale face.When seeing the two policemen,Harry was shocked,rooted to the spot while his wife numbed,speechlessly.A flood of horror exploded in Harry’s mind.——三.细节描写支架整理——Gazing at (盯着）his wife with such a burning desire,Harry begged his wife to allow him to have a look at it with just a blink of an eye.（一眨眼）With his palms sweating,Harry struggled to say something,but his head was blank immediately and failed to say anything.With such a burning desire for something new to happen,Harry turned a deaf ear to his wife’s kind reminding.Harry’s eyes were gleaming （闪烁）with guilt.Choking with words,Harry just trembled uncontrollably.四、富有哲理的总结好句We all have moments of desperation,but if we can face them straight（adv.）,we will find out just how strong we really are.我们都有绝望的时候，但是只有直面它，我们才知道我们有多坚强。

高考英语读后续写作文素材积累15修辞篇讲义

2024年高考英语读后续写作文素材积累15——修辞篇01比喻1. The mountain of work ahead loomed like an insurmountable obstacle. （前方堆积如山的工作像是一道无法逾越的障碍。

）2. Her words, like a dagger through the heart, pierced his soul. （她的话如同一把刺心之剑，刺痛了他的灵魂。

）3. The classroom was a beehive of activity, buzzing with conversations and energy. （教室里犹如蜂窝一般活跃，充满了谈话与活力。

）4. His essay was a breath of fresh air amidst the stale ideas presented by his classmates. （他的文章宛如清新的空气，与同学们陈旧的观点形成鲜明对比。

）5. The delicate vase, balanced on the edge of the table, was a ticking time bomb waiting to shatter. （摇摇欲坠的精致花瓶就像是一颗随时可能破碎的定时炸弹。

）6. She approached the task with the skill of a surgeon, carefully dissecting each and every detail. （她像个外科医生一样精细地分析每个细节，对待任务毫不马虎。

）7. The new employee appeared lost and confused, like a fish out of water, in the fast-paced office environment. （新员工在快节奏的办公环境中显得茫然不知所措，就像是一条离开水的鱼。

高考英语读后续写必备优秀例句复习讲义

高考英语读后续写必备优秀例句复习讲义一、引入与背景设置Setting the Scene1.As the sun began to dip below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the sleepy town, Sarah knew that tonight was going to be different.2.With each step echoing through the empty hallway, Emma couldn't shake off the feeling that she was being watched.二、人物性格与情感描绘Character Traits & Emotions1.Despite the weight of his responsibilities, Jack wore a smile that seemed to brighten even the darkest corners of the room.2.Overwhelmed with a mix of excitement and trepidation, Lily took a deep breath before stepping onto the stage, her heart pounding like a drum.三、情节推进与转折Plot Development & Twists1.Just as everything seemed lost, a sudden revelation turned the tables, revealing a secret that had been hidden for decades.2.The discovery of an old map tucked away in the attic sparked a journey that would challenge not only their physical limits but also their understanding of family and loyalty.四、冲突与解决Conflict & Resolution1.The disagreement between the siblings reached its climax under the starlit sky, where honest words were finally exchanged, healing wounds that had festered for years.2.Through patient negotiation and mutual understanding, they found a promise that, though imperfect, was a testament to the power of unity.五、主题升华与结尾Theme Highlighting & Conclusion1.As the last chapter drew to a close, it became clear that the true treasure wasn't the gold they'd sought, but the lessons learned and bonds forged along the way.2.Looking back at the path they had traveled, filled with trials and triumphs, Emily realized that home wasn't a place but a feeling—a sense of belonging she carried within her heart.六、语言技巧与修辞Linguistic Devices1.Metaphor: Her laughter was the sunshine breaking through the clouds on a gloomy day.2.Simile: His mind raced like a hurricane, swirling with thoughts and ideas.3.Personification: The wind whispered secrets through the rustling leaves, as if nature itself was conspiring七、人物行动与心理活动Action & Inner Thoughts1.With cautious steps, he tiptoed around the corner, his heart pounding like a drumroll in anticipation of what lay ahead.2.A wave of nostalgia washed over her as she sifted through the old photographs, each one triggering a flood of memories and emotions she thought long forgotten.八、环境描写与氛围营造Setting Description & Atmosphere1.The moonlit forest was a labyrinth of shadows and whispers, where every rustle of leaves held the promise of mystery and adventure.2.The bustling market was a symphony of colors, sounds, and scents, weaving together stories from every corner of the world into a vibrant tapestry.九、对话与互动Dialogue & Interaction1."You know," Sarah said softly, her eyes twinkling under the streetlight, "it's the unexpected moments that make life truly worth living."2."But how can we be sure?" he countered, folding his arms across his chest, a hint of skepticism tinging his voice.十、时间与空间转换Temporal & Spatial Transition1.As the seasons turned and winter gave way to spring, the village transformed, bursting with new life and hope.2.From the bustling streets of New York to the serene landscapes of Tibet, her journey was not just geographical but a transformation of the soul.十一、总结与反思Conclusion & Reflection1.And so, as the final pages of their tale were written, they understood that it wasn't about reaching the destination but about the journey itself, and the people they met along the way.2.Reflecting on the past year, she realized that every obstacle faced was a stepping stone towards resilience, shaping her into the person she had bee.十二、修辞手法进阶Advanced Rhetorical Devices1.Anaphora: Each day brought new challenges, each day tested their resolve, and each day they rose, stronger than before.2.Alliteration: The gentle gusts guided her gently, granting glimpses of the grandeur that awaited beyond the garden gate.。

高考英语读后续写素材积累讲义

高考英语读后续写素材积累It was nearly midnight when, from the living room, she heard her husband moan, and presently he staggered in, wearing over his nightgown the old overcoat with the astrakhan collar that he much preferred to his nice blue bathrobe.已经过了午夜时分，他听到从起居室传来丈夫的呻吟声。

片刻之后，他踉跄着脚步走了进来，睡袍外面罩着那件带卷毛衣领的旧外套，比起他那套漂亮的蓝色浴袍，他十分偏爱身上这件衣服。

“I can’t sleep!” he cried.他喊道：“我睡不着。

”“Why can’t you sleep?” she asked. “You were so tired.”她问道：“为什么？你为什么睡不着？你已经够累的了。

”“I can’t sleep because I am dying,” he said, and lay down on the couch.“我睡不着，因为我正在死掉”。

说完，他躺倒在沙发上。

“Is it your stomach? Do you want me to call Dr. Solov?”“是你的胃不舒服吗？要不要我去叫索洛夫医生？”“No doctors, no doctors,” he moaned. “To the devil with doctors! We must get him out of there quick. Otherwise, we’ll be responsible.... Responsible!” He hurled himself into a sitting position, both feet on the floor, thumping his forehead with his clenched fist.他咆哮起来：“不要医生！不要医生！让医生们去死好了！咱们必须尽快把他从那儿弄出来。