高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
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高考英语作文提升分类写作：请求求助信学习课件
9. Thank you very much for all the kindness. 谢谢您一切的好意。 10. Hope everything is fine with you there. 希望您在那里一切如 意。
1. I find it hardly to deal with.
1. hardly改为hard 2. The main reason I’m writing is that I have litte favour to ask. 2. little前面加a 3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters. 3. 删掉the
10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.
10. hear改为hearing
（2020全国三卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编 了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。 邮件内容包括：
你的, 李华
Dear Tom, It’s been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything
going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.
作文翻译
尊敬的先生， 我的名字是李华，你们航空公司BA793航班的一个乘客。我是在
2010年6月3日乘坐这趟班机的。 你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我
1. I find it hardly to deal with.
1. hardly改为hard 2. The main reason I’m writing is that I have litte favour to ask. 2. little前面加a 3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters. 3. 删掉the
10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.
10. hear改为hearing
（2020全国三卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编 了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。 邮件内容包括：
你的, 李华
Dear Tom, It’s been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything
going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.
作文翻译
尊敬的先生， 我的名字是李华，你们航空公司BA793航班的一个乘客。我是在
2010年6月3日乘坐这趟班机的。 你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27张PPT
was told the Learning Center provides help for students
and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me
school students in July this summer. However, ②（搜集资料困难）
_I__a_m___n_o_w___c_o_n_f_r_o_n__t_e_d__w_i_t_h__d__if_f_i_c_u_l_t_y____ when I collect useful
materials. Meanwhile, ③（语言运用困难）_I__s_t_i_ll_h__a_v_e__s_o_m_e__t_r_o_u_b_l_e_
1. 说明买书的理由； 2. 对书的要求（如数量，寄送时间等）； 3. 会转账给他。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
生词：转账 transfer money
Step 1：构思
审题
时态 人称
一般现在时 第一、第二人称
Para 1 问候Mike，请他帮忙买书
提纲
（提取信息）
It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. ① (问候)
__H__o_w__i_s__e_v_e_r_y__t_h_in__g__g_o_i_n_g__w_i_t_h__y_o__u________?
I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课件
Seek-help letter
----求助信
写作步骤： ➢Step Ⅰ：写信的目的 ➢Step Ⅱ：说明困难，请对方帮忙 ➢Step Ⅲ：表达期盼之情
Key words:
difficulty/trouble confused/ confusing upset anxious/ anxiety confidence bother
4. I would be grateful if you really give me a hand.
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
模板：
Dear …, My name is …. I’m writing to ask whether you could do
4. Facing/ faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for h件
1. I'm eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
3. I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and badly need your help.
4. I have some difficulty in doing… which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Sample：
Dear Peter, How is everything going? I have been in
----求助信
写作步骤： ➢Step Ⅰ：写信的目的 ➢Step Ⅱ：说明困难，请对方帮忙 ➢Step Ⅲ：表达期盼之情
Key words:
difficulty/trouble confused/ confusing upset anxious/ anxiety confidence bother
4. I would be grateful if you really give me a hand.
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
高中英语书面表达专题：求助信ppt课 件
模板：
Dear …, My name is …. I’m writing to ask whether you could do
4. Facing/ faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for h件
1. I'm eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
3. I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and badly need your help.
4. I have some difficulty in doing… which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Sample：
Dear Peter, How is everything going? I have been in
高中求助信英语作文
高中求助信英语作文Dear Sir/Madam,。
I am writing this letter to seek your help and guidance in a matter that has been troubling me for quite some time.I am a high school student and I am facing somedifficulties in my studies, particularly in the subject of mathematics.I have always found mathematics to be a challenging subject, but recently I have been finding it even more difficult to keep up with the lessons and understand the concepts. I have tried my best to study and practice, but I still seem to be struggling. This has been causing me a great deal of stress and anxiety, and I am worried that it may affect my overall academic performance.I am reaching out to you in the hope that you can provide me with some assistance and support. I wouldgreatly appreciate it if you could offer me some extra helpwith my mathematics studies, whether it be through additional tutoring, extra resources, or any other form of guidance that you think may be beneficial for me.I am determined to overcome this obstacle and improve my understanding of mathematics, but I feel that I may need some extra help to do so. I am willing to put in the effort and work hard, but I need some guidance to help me along the way.I hope that you will consider my request and offer me the help that I need. Your support would mean a great deal to me and would undoubtedly have a positive impact on my academic performance.Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to your response and hope that we can work together to overcome this challenge.Yours sincerely,。
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4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
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My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
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Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
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4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
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My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
高中英语 应用文写作 求助信课件
Para.3 表达感谢，希望得到帮助
补充细节：如果您能为我提供帮助，我将不胜感激。期待您的早 日回复。
连词成句：I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Looking forward to your early reply.
[C例ou] l我d y想ou知g道iv你e m是e否so能me为ti我ps推on荐…几?首/ W比o赛ul用d y的ou诗p。lease offer me some advice on…?
Could you give me some tips on the basic skills of recitation?
常用句式
1. 开头 (1) 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。 I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand./ I'm writing to ask for your help. (2) 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。 Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.
常用语块
(6) 忙于做某事 be busy doing sth/be engaged in doing sth (7) 急需/迫切需要 in urgent need of (8) 专业指导 professional guidance (9) 学以致用 put…into use (10) 让某人失望 let sb down
典 题 示 例 (2021年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试)
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教 George写封邮件求助，内容包括：
补充细节：如果您能为我提供帮助，我将不胜感激。期待您的早 日回复。
连词成句：I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Looking forward to your early reply.
[C例ou] l我d y想ou知g道iv你e m是e否so能me为ti我ps推on荐…几?首/ W比o赛ul用d y的ou诗p。lease offer me some advice on…?
Could you give me some tips on the basic skills of recitation?
常用句式
1. 开头 (1) 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。 I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand./ I'm writing to ask for your help. (2) 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。 Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.
常用语块
(6) 忙于做某事 be busy doing sth/be engaged in doing sth (7) 急需/迫切需要 in urgent need of (8) 专业指导 professional guidance (9) 学以致用 put…into use (10) 让某人失望 let sb down
典 题 示 例 (2021年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试适应性测试)
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教 George写封邮件求助，内容包括：
2023届高三英语写作专项求助信课件
我将非常感谢你的帮助。期待您在方便的时候尽早回复。
第一段：介绍寒暄， 背景目的。
我是李华，近来你过得如何？首先，请接受我诚挚的谢意，感谢 你在这学期为我们带来了这么多我们非常喜欢的精彩课程。这样， 我们从来不认为学习是一项艰巨的任务。
另外，我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙。由于学期快结束了，我们 需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算在一家国际贸易公司申请 一个职位。这是我第一次申请工作，我对简历的格式和我准备的工 作申请不太熟悉。那么，您能否帮助更正电子邮件中所附材料中的 单词和格式错误？
注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。
描述困难 寻求帮助
我是李华，近来你过得如何？首先，请接受我诚挚的谢意，感谢 你在这学期为我们带来了这么多我们非常喜欢的精彩课程。这样， 我们从来不认为学习是一项艰巨的任务。
另外，我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙。由于学期快结束了，我们 需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算在一家国际贸易公司申请 一个职位。这是我第一次申请工作，我对简历的格式和我准备的工 作申请不太熟悉。那么，您能否帮助更正电子邮件中所附材料中的 单词和格式错误？
第三段：描述困难，
我将非常感谢你的帮助。期待您在方便的时候尽早回复。 寻求帮助。
第三段：回扣主题， 交际结尾。
How is everything getting along with you recently? I am***,a student+定从/非谓
我写信是想向您寻求帮助。 I’m writing to turn to you for help.
1.I’m wondering whether you can offer me some kind help. 我想知道您是否能给我一些帮助。 2.I would be highly grateful if you could assist me with / in doing... 如果您能帮助我做......我将不胜感激。 3.Would you please help me do sth. when it is convenient for you? 您方便的时候可以帮我做某事吗？ 4.Could you be so kind to give me some practical suggestions? 你能给我一些实用的建议吗？
第一段：介绍寒暄， 背景目的。
我是李华，近来你过得如何？首先，请接受我诚挚的谢意，感谢 你在这学期为我们带来了这么多我们非常喜欢的精彩课程。这样， 我们从来不认为学习是一项艰巨的任务。
另外，我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙。由于学期快结束了，我们 需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算在一家国际贸易公司申请 一个职位。这是我第一次申请工作，我对简历的格式和我准备的工 作申请不太熟悉。那么，您能否帮助更正电子邮件中所附材料中的 单词和格式错误？
注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行为连贯。
描述困难 寻求帮助
我是李华，近来你过得如何？首先，请接受我诚挚的谢意，感谢 你在这学期为我们带来了这么多我们非常喜欢的精彩课程。这样， 我们从来不认为学习是一项艰巨的任务。
另外，我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙。由于学期快结束了，我们 需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算在一家国际贸易公司申请 一个职位。这是我第一次申请工作，我对简历的格式和我准备的工 作申请不太熟悉。那么，您能否帮助更正电子邮件中所附材料中的 单词和格式错误？
第三段：描述困难，
我将非常感谢你的帮助。期待您在方便的时候尽早回复。 寻求帮助。
第三段：回扣主题， 交际结尾。
How is everything getting along with you recently? I am***,a student+定从/非谓
我写信是想向您寻求帮助。 I’m writing to turn to you for help.
1.I’m wondering whether you can offer me some kind help. 我想知道您是否能给我一些帮助。 2.I would be highly grateful if you could assist me with / in doing... 如果您能帮助我做......我将不胜感激。 3.Would you please help me do sth. when it is convenient for you? 您方便的时候可以帮我做某事吗？ 4.Could you be so kind to give me some practical suggestions? 你能给我一些实用的建议吗？
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27张PPT
I came here last month and I find my courses 描述困难
interesting. But I have some difficulties with notemaking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习
暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导
中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规 定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1. 本人简历 2. 求助内容 3. 约定时间 4. 你的联系方式 （Email:lihua@;Phone:12345678) 注意：1. 词数100左右。
_a_f_a_v_o_r/_g_iv_e__m_e_a_h_a_n_d_. _____________
More expressions： 3. I am sorry to bother you, but I really need
your help (with …) 4. I’m writing to ask whether you can help me.
know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: 恳求帮助
lihua@; 12345678. Thanks for your kindness in
Characteristics
1. 通常使用的时态：__一__般_现__在__时______；
2. 阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，注意语气委婉、 真诚；情态动词多使用____w_o_u_ld_/_c_ould
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
Step 3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章 （如时态，主谓一致等）
It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. ① (问候)
__H__o_w__i_s__e_v_e_r_y__t_h_in__g__g_o_i_n_g__w_i_t_h__y_o__u________?
I came here last month and I find my courses 描述困难
interesting. But I have some difficulties with notemaking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
点明目的
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in
your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
Para 1
Tom上个月来到北京学习， 询问Tom的生活和学习情况。
提纲 （提取信息） Para 2
我将去参加英语演讲比赛， 在……等方面遇到了困难。
求助，感谢
Para 3 打算赛后去看Tom
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
Step
2：提笔
Dear Tom,
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
必修一英语作文之求助信 共27页PPT
B.描述困难
我在英语学习方面遇到了一些困难。
1. _I_h_a_ve__s_om__e_d_if_f_ic_u_lt_y_/_t_r_o_u_b_le_i_n_d_o_in_g_…___ _(b_e_c_a_u_se__…_)______________________
高三英语二轮复习应用文求助信写作课件
此外，我会很感激如果你能...以便...。
What’s more / Moreover, I would appreciate it if you can ...so that..
句4.此外，因为缺乏一些设备，我我会很感激如果你能联系学校音乐俱乐部
以便他们可以给我们提供一些设备。
Moreover, lacking some equipment, I would appreciate it if you can
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guidance on advertising the concert.
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求助信写作
求助信 第二段-请求建议/征求帮助
因此, 我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导g if you could give me some practical guidance on....
总结③使用礼貌性表达使文章更加真诚恳切，
达到社交效果
Part 3
求助信语言框架·第三段
求助信写作
求助信 第三段-表达感谢与期待
“求人型”结尾：如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
有你的慷慨帮助，我相信我们的音乐会将会很难忘。
知道你精通.../有经验..，我想知道你是否能帮我一把。
Knowing that you are expert in /
have a good command of /have experience in....,
I wonder if you could do me a favour / help me with...
What’s more / Moreover, I would appreciate it if you can ...so that..
句4.此外，因为缺乏一些设备，我我会很感激如果你能联系学校音乐俱乐部
以便他们可以给我们提供一些设备。
Moreover, lacking some equipment, I would appreciate it if you can
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guidance on advertising the concert.
—————————————————————————
求助信写作
求助信 第二段-请求建议/征求帮助
因此, 我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导g if you could give me some practical guidance on....
总结③使用礼貌性表达使文章更加真诚恳切，
达到社交效果
Part 3
求助信语言框架·第三段
求助信写作
求助信 第三段-表达感谢与期待
“求人型”结尾：如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
有你的慷慨帮助，我相信我们的音乐会将会很难忘。
知道你精通.../有经验..，我想知道你是否能帮我一把。
Knowing that you are expert in /
have a good command of /have experience in....,
I wonder if you could do me a favour / help me with...
高考英语求助信公开课ppt课件
He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.
2. Linking words or sentences:
并列:besides, in addition, what’s more…
转折:However, On the contrary, but…
顺序:First of all, First/Second/Finally…
3. Politeness: 最新版整理ppt
I would appreciate it if you could help me.
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polish the passage
• plex sentences(attributive clause, adverbial clause, nonfinite verb and so on)
6
Politeness:
1. Send me the book.
2. Could you please send me the book?
3. I hope you can send me the book as soon as possible.
4. I would appreciate it if you could send me the book.
How to write a letter for help?
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3.请求对方做某事时可用： Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor.
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在了卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
4. so... that...结构的倒装用法使用准 确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加 了得分点。 5.afford一词传神地表达了习作者对词 典的珍爱，是本文的又一亮点。
6. Would you please send it back to me?该句表达委婉，恰当，体现了 习作者希望得到帮助的迫切心情。
五.求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人
遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助， 因此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求 助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 时态。
2.贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用first, besides, what's more等过度性词语； 请求对方提供一系列的帮助时，可用
Thank you again and hope everything will be OK with you.
Yours, Lihua
四,名师点评 亮点展示：
1. I'm writing to you to get some help.开门见山，直接交待了写信目的， 即寻求帮助。
2. which was given as a present该 定语从句准确地说明了词典的来历及 其重要性。 3. it might have done用法恰当，贴 切表达了对过去动作的推测。
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
5.表示感谢时可用： It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过度性词语.当写 信需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以 使行文连贯。
3.熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面 的一些句型： 1）说明写作目的时可用：
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
6.表示期待对方回复时可用： I look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to your reply. 这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气 委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言 特点。
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
2.简要交待自己所遇aced with so many difficulties, I have to ...
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在了卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
4. so... that...结构的倒装用法使用准 确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加 了得分点。 5.afford一词传神地表达了习作者对词 典的珍爱，是本文的又一亮点。
6. Would you please send it back to me?该句表达委婉，恰当，体现了 习作者希望得到帮助的迫切心情。
五.求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人
遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助， 因此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求 助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 时态。
2.贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用first, besides, what's more等过度性词语； 请求对方提供一系列的帮助时，可用
Thank you again and hope everything will be OK with you.
Yours, Lihua
四,名师点评 亮点展示：
1. I'm writing to you to get some help.开门见山，直接交待了写信目的， 即寻求帮助。
2. which was given as a present该 定语从句准确地说明了词典的来历及 其重要性。 3. it might have done用法恰当，贴 切表达了对过去动作的推测。
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
5.表示感谢时可用： It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过度性词语.当写 信需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以 使行文连贯。
3.熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面 的一些句型： 1）说明写作目的时可用：
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
6.表示期待对方回复时可用： I look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to your reply. 这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气 委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言 特点。
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
2.简要交待自己所遇aced with so many difficulties, I have to ...
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT