高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信(课堂PPT)

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假如你叫孙军，是红星高中的学生，要给市长 写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括 以下要点：
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政府应采取措施, 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小, 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/
recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.
3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗 邻，对着大街，高 峰期交通繁忙；加 之孩子小, 家长接 送。交通更拥挤； 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
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政府应采取措施, 如修天桥等。
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would liould…
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C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
______(问题). First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
regard.
4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider
my suggestions.
5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions
在…对面 be opposite to
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•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street…
推荐句型：There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. 非谓语结构
Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.
Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
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常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that …
2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4. I am writing to you for the purpose of … 5. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you. 6. You have asked me for some advice with regard to …
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
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4. 注意事项：
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出 建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、 具有合理性和说服力； 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、 经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建 议； 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
“高峰期”可意译: at peak time，
a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为:
traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞
be choke up with be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满
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加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
send…to…, fetch…. , which …
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.
非谓语结构….
Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier.
书面表达专题
---How to write a letter for advice
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要 点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法
多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成 接 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 词 条理清楚。
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Dear____,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____.
说理逻辑性
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
一般现在时
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书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
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Step 2 Make sentences
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
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适当运用模 板
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模板二：
Dear _____(对象)， I am writing to express my views concerning
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on how to
(引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is
important to . Then, it also helps to .
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加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤
What’s more, … pick up…. make….
To make things worse/ What’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.
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写作要点：
1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
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3. 基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea)
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将介词短语提前（全倒装） Next to a primary school
stands/lies/is our school
, fa润ce色d w小it建h议/ facing a main street.
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿).
and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …