医学英语论文摘要写作模板

Abstract
• 目的（objective / purpose / aim） • 方法（materials and methods） • 结果（results） • 结论（conclusion）
论文摘要的作用：
“The function of the abstract of a scientific paper is to provide an overview of the paper so that the readers know the main story and a few essential details of your work without reading the whole text of the paper. The abstract should make sense both when read alone and when read with the paper.” – URMSBJ
title写作举例
• Preliminary experience in using high dose of methotrexate to treat ALL.
• High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia
title写作源自文库例
In vivo study of pituitary enlargement in normal pregnancy using magnetic resonance imaging
2．A对B的作用 Effect of A on B
Protective effect of omeprazole on endothelin-induced gastric mucosal injury
摘要写作中的注意事项
冠词。主要是定冠词the易被漏用。the用于表 示整个群体、分类、时间、地名以外的独一无 二的事物、形容词最高级等较易掌握，用于特 指时常被漏用。这里有个原则，即当我们用the 时，听者或读者已经确知我们所指的是什么。
例如：
The machine is operated with (the) solar energy.
6）与复数名词连用，指整个群体： They are the teachers of this school.指全体教师) They are teachers of this school. (指部分教师)
7）表示所有，相当于物主代词，用在表身体部位的名词前： She caught me by the arm.. 她抓住了我的手臂。 8）用在某些由普通名词构成的国家名称、机关团体、阶级、 等专有名词前： the People’s Republic of China 中华人民共和国 the United States 美国
contractivity of diaphragm and its mechanism
修改后：Effect of Sheng-Mai injection on the contractivity of diaphragm in rats
原题目： × Study on the detection host cellular immunity after inoculation
摘要写作中的注意事项
1）特指双方都明白的人或物： Take the medicine. 把药吃了。 2）上文提到过的人或事： He bought a house. I’ve been to the house. 他买了幢房子。我去过那幢房子。 3）指世上独一物二的事物： the sun， the sky， the moon， the earth 4）单数名词连用表示一类事物: 如：the dollar 美元; the fox 狐狸；或与形容词或分词连用，表示一类人：the rich 富人; the living 生者。
• Pituitary gland enlargement during normal pregnancy: An in vivo study using magnetic resonance imaging
title写作举例
• A preliminary study on doses, duration and side effects of Vitamine D in prevention of colon cancer
摘要写作中的注意事项
5）用在序数词和形容词最高级，及形容词only， very， same等前面：
Where do you live? I live on the second floor. 你住在哪？ 我住在二层。
That’s the very thing I’ve been looking for. 那正是我要找 的东西。
• Vitamine D and prevention of colon cancer : Doses, duration and side effects
title写作举例
• A case report of SLE appearing pancreatitis and review of literatures
（二）标题写作中常用词组和表达方式
4．用…治疗… Use of …in the treatment of …(病）in …（生物） Use of omeprazole in the treatment of gastric ulcer
5．A是B A as B
C-reactive protein as a predictor of myocardial infarction in ICU patients.
of human cytomegalovirus DNA vaccine by flow cytometry
修改后：Host cellular immunity after inoculation of human cytomegalovirus DNA vaccine analyzed by flow cytometry in mice
不要使用无意义的词
× Studies on … × Investigation on … × Preliminary observation on … × The significance of … × A case report of …
VII. 英文题目
原题目： × Experiment study on the effect of Sheng-Mai injection on the
• Pancreatitis in systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE): A case report and review of the literature
title写作举例
• Is chronic abdominal pain a surgical symptom or a psychiatric symptom ?
• Chronic abdominal pain : A surgical or psychiatric symptom?
• Leptin: An independent risk factor of insulin resistance?
原题目：
Relationship between tissue type plasminogen activator and coronary vulnerable plaque in patients with acute coronary syndrome
• Abdominal pain in the emergency room: Retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases
title写作举例
• Use MRI to conduct an in vivo study on the enlargement of the pituitary gland during normal pregnancy
Abstract writing
By Shao jiaqing
国际医学杂志编辑委员会 ICMJE
• 生物医学杂志投稿统一要求 Uniform Requirements for Manuscripts
Submitted to Biomedical Journals (URMSBJ)
医学科研论文的格式
（二）标题写作中注意点
• 标题通常为名词短语 • 一般不包含谓语动词 • 疑问句时，可以使用谓语动词。
（二）标题写作中常用词组和表达方式
1．用…（方法／手段）对…进行研究／分析／观察／评价： Study(analysis/observation/evaluation/assessment) of (on) … (by) using 方法/ with工具）
医学科研论文必须具备以下几个部分： • （1）标题（title） • （2）摘要（abstract） • （3）引言（introduction） • （4）材料和方法（materials and methods） • （5）结果（results） • （6）讨论（discussion） • （7）致谢（acknowledgement） • （8）参考文献（references）
3．A与B的关系 Correlation (relation/relationship) between A and B Correlation of A with B and C
Positive correlation of CD44v6 expression with invasion and metastasis of gastric cancer
摘要写作中的注意事项
9）用在表示乐器的名词之前： She plays the piano. 她会弹钢琴。 10) 用在姓氏的复数名词之前，表示一家人： the Greens 格林一家人 (或格林夫妇) 11) 用在惯用语中： in the day, in the morning (afternoon，evening),
修改后：
Reduced plasma tissue type plasminogen activator in acute coronary syndrome patients with vulnerable plaque 伴有不稳定性斑块的急性冠脉综合征患者血浆组织型纤维蛋白溶酶 原激活剂下降
Reduced plasma tissue type plasminogen activator as a predictor of vulnerable plaque in patients with acute coronary syndrome 血浆组织型纤维蛋白溶酶原激活剂下降是急性冠脉综合征患者不稳 定性斑块的预测指标
title写作举例
• Retinal arteriolar change is an indicator of coronary artery disease.
• Retinal arteriolar change as an indicator of coronary artery disease.
一、标题
（一）要求 • 1．简明扼要（short and concise） • （1）尽量控制在一行，但不是一个句子 • （2）不超过25个单词或120-140个字母 • （3）除DNA、RNA、CT等不用缩写 • 2．信息丰富(informative) • 3．便于索引（indexing） • 4．较长标题可采用副标题
• A study of the relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure
• Diet potassium and blood pressure
title写作举例
• A retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases of abdominal pain in the emergency room