写作笔记

写作笔记

7.16托福写作

综合写作

听力的要点和细节

●要点：

一般情况下反驳阅读的观点由阅读观点引申其他结论

假设类提出不同观点

●细节：

1~2个细节

关键词提示

长难句/ 连词

●听力的注意事项

根据阅读推断听力可能细节第一段找感觉（不需要笔记）顺着逻辑逆推反例

阅读和听力的关系

阅读听力

事实推论?直接推翻

客观证据?反驳关系

缺点不足?解决方案

两种假说?各执一词

听力中慢读、重读的95%是细节点。

写作注意事项

1，分四段（段间空行，段首顶格，句首大写，标点空格）

2，指代称谓固定

3，陈述/ 反驳动词替换

4，阅读：改写为佳；听力：求同最好

阅读：the passage;the writer;the author

听力：the lecture; the professor;the speaker

讨论：争论：辩论：discuss;argue;debate;have a debate on

认为；阐述；声称；主张；拥护；建议：

claim ;suggest;maintain;uphold;state;propose;r ecommend;appeal;conclude;put forward

反驳：反对：

disagree;refuse;reject;refute;rebut;oppose;contr adict;view the question / issue from an opposite

perspective / angle;does not hold water(站不住脚)

举例：for exampe;for instance;citing the evidence/reason that……

模板：

语言补充------开头段

The reading passage explores the issue of (讨论

话题). The professor’s lecture deals with the same issue. However, he/she thinks that (话题总论点)，which contradicts what the reading states. And in the lecture, he /she uses three specific points to support his /her idea.

Explore,exaimines,deals with ,copies with, is concerned with ,is about,focuses, issuue, subject, topic

However,but,yet,even so,despite that, Support, confirm, back up ,strengthen

Practice:

The reading passage explores the issue of whether employees should word four days a week.The speaker’s lecture deals with the same issue. However, he hold the view that enployees should not take the option , which contradicts what the reading states.And in the lecture, he uses three specific points to support his idea.

主体段1

First，evern though the reading passage suggests that (阅读论点1), the professor argues in the lecture that (听力论点1). This is because(听力细节1)

Although, while, whereas,

主体段2

Moreover,contrary to the statement in the reading that (阅读论点2)，the professor contends that (听力论点). Then he /she supports this point with the fact that ( 听力细节2)