上海高考英语作文及参考范文

你是XX中学的XX, 你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生

的修改意见。你需要写一封，包含以下两点：

1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方；

2. 需要改进的原因。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I ' ireally excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the Bund on the Labor Day holiday. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you ' vposted on the campus website, as I ' cblQket t o ut.

First of all, the hike needs to be planned in more detail as the informationreleased online appears to be too general. As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last. 〔Also, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. After all I, the scheme should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. Only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the students. What' smore|, I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme " Discover Shanghai " through additional activitiesUpon arrival at the Bund, Ipropose an introduction of the architecture on both sides of the Huangpu River. By appreciating different artistic styles of the buildings, we can gain a deeper insight into the authentic Shanghai culturemixed with exotic flavor. |Thus|, the experience may well be unforgettable one, because it |not only | makes us move, but also] enables us to discover the scenic beauty of Shanghai, which will well achieve the purpose of organizing the activity.

All in all |, if the hike is organized in more detail and in a more supportive way, it is sure to succeed. I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.

Yours sincerely

Wang Lei

假设你是中华中学学生平，最近参与了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣” < 通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据

图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：

1. 描述调研数据；

2. 分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

占十」以胸肉果土

Recently Ihave〔conducted a survey about "whethep arents are proud of their children " in my school. The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion. According to the surve|,we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children.

There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference. First ,conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children.This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second,the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports,which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.

Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods,a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.