基础写作：项目描述

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请将括号中的中文翻译成英文完成作文。
(一)
I am honored to introduce one kind of
laptop — Venus laptop produced by our
company which(1) _h_a_s_a__h_is_t_o_r_y_o_f_p_r_o_d_u_c_i_ng _l_a_p_to_p_s__fo_r__o_v_e_r_1_0_y_e_a_r_s_ (有生产手提电脑 十年以上的历史). Our product, Venus
典型例题
你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者, 负责编 写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。
[写作内容] 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：
背景：射击最初只是生存工具, 19世纪末
才发展成为一项体育运动
1896：第一次成为奥运项目
1904：中断 会
1928：中断 1932：重回奥运
1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛
(二) The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.(5) N__o_t_o_n_l_y(不仅仅)is it popular in China _b_u_t_it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.
[参考范文] Shooting, originated as a means of
survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
项目描述
技巧点拨
1. 项目描述包括介绍某本书、某份报纸、某部 电影、某个运动项目、某个组织、某种物品、 某项活动、某种风俗习惯等。
2. 写作时要注意词性, 比如说“这个产品是高质 量的”, 考生容易错译为 “This product is high quality”， 事实上quality是个名词，名词前加上 of，才相当于形容词的用法，因此，次句应译为 “This product is of high quality”。
(5) 中断 _b_e_s_u_s_p_e_n_d_e_d_/_b_e_p_a_u_s_e_d__
(6) 重回奥运会 _T__h_e_s_p_o_r_t_r_e_tu__rn__ed__t_o_t_h_e__ Olympics / The Olympics were restarted.
句4： (7)允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 _a_ll_o_w_/_p_e_r_m_i_t_w_o_m__e_n__to__ta_k__e_p_a_r_t_i_n_/j_o_i_n____ _in_/_c_o_m_p__et_e_i_n__/ _p_a_r_ti_c_ip_a_t_e__in__th_e__O_l_y_m__p_ic_s__ _或__w_o_m__e_n_a_r_e__a_d_m_i_t_te_d__a_s_c_o_m__p_e_ti_to_r_s__in__th__e _O_l_y_m_p__ic_s_
亮点点击：对于语言表达的难点，要学会转 换思维方式，了解中英文的差异，这样才可 以在写作中准确地道地表达要点。句型结构 方面有同位语 (a science program broadcast on CCTV)，非谓语短语，which引导的非限 制性定语从句。
I love invention, a science program broadcast on CCTV 10, begins at 6:55 pm from Monday to Friday and lasts 50 minutes. It examines new inventions to see if they really work outdoors while in the studio the hosts carry out experiments and make a full analysis of the new product to see exactly how it works. All of the new inventions are closely related to our lives and the inventors get their ideas from their daily lives. The program provides chances for ordinary people to present their new ideas and new inventions, making them likely to be manufactured and available to the public. The program, which conveys a message that new inventions and wisdom changes lives and brings wealth and prosperity to all people, appeals to a large number of people, especially teenagers.
句2～句3： (1) 1896：第一次成为奥运项目 (1) Shooting became an Olympic event
officially in 1896. (2) 1904：中断; (3)1928：中断 (2-3) Shooting was suspended in 1904 and
1928. (4) 1932：重回奥运会 (4) It returned to the Games in 1932.
(2)Shooting developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
合并：
Shooting was originated as a means of
survival and developed into a sport in the late 19th century.(并列句) Shooting, (which was) originated as a means
2.接着词汇整理，草拟提纲 (1) 射击 _s_h_o_o_ti_n_g_
(2) 生存工具 m__e_a_n_s_o_f__su_r_v_i_v_a_l/_m__e_a_n_s of making a living
(3)直到……才…… n__o_t._.._u_n_t_il_.._.
句2～句3： (4) (运动)项目 _sp__o_rt_s_e_v_e_n_t__
合并： Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896, but it was suspended in 1904 and 1928. It didn’t return to the Games until 1932. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Then, it was suspended in 1904 and 1928 but finally returned to the Games in 1932.
现状：稳步发展wenku.baidu.com1896奥运会只有三项射击项目, 现今有17项
例题导写:
1.首先， 认真审题，归纳信息:对于事物的描写 和说明，考生可以根据事物的性质、特点划分信 息。本题目里对奥运射击的项目的陈述，是按照 时间顺序排列，因此在信息点的划分这步相对容 易。射击的背景和现状分别是第一句和第五句, 射击的发展中1896-1932年的变化可以用两句话 表述，1968年妇女第一次获得参加奥运会的权利 可以放在第四句描述。
The program provides chances for ordinary people to present their new ideas and new inventions, making them likely to be manufactured and available to the public. The program, which conveys a message that new inventions and wisdom changes lives and brings wealth and prosperity to all people, appeals to a large number of people, especially teenagers.
laptop, with a charming appearance, is (2) _o_f_h_i_g_h_q_u_a_l_i_ty_ (高的品质)and has(3) _c_o_m_p_l_e_t_e_f_u_n_c_ti_o_n_s_ (完善的功能).
Not only is it easy to operate and carry but also the price of the product is reasonable. What’s more, it was once awarded the first prize in a provincial laptop appraisal. It sells well at home and abroad and has a good(4) _a_ft_e_r_-s_ale _se_r_v_i_c_e_ (售后服务).
句5： (8)稳步发展 _d_e_v_e_lo_p__s_te_a_d_i_l_y
3. 难句翻译： 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。 句1：(1)射击最初只是生存工具。
(1)Shooting was originated as a means of survival.
(2)19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。
课外作业 I love invention, a science program broadcast on CCTV 10, begins at 6:55 pm from Monday to Friday and lasts 50 minutes. It examines new inventions to see if they really work outdoors while in the studio the hosts carry out experiments and make a full analysis of the new product to see exactly how it works. All of the new inventions are closely related to our lives and the inventors get their ideas from their daily lives.
of survival, didn’t develop into a sport only until the late 19th century.(定语从句) It was not until the late 19th century that
shooting, (which was) originated as a means of survival， developed into a sport. (not…until的句型)