四级比较和对比类英语作文精选讲解

Although Ulysses S. Grant and Robert E. Lee were fierce adversaries 对手during the Civil War, their lives, both military and nonmilitary, has a great deal in common. Grant descended from a family whose members participated in the American Revolution. He received his commission of second lieutenant 少尉from West Point and served in the

Spanish-American War. He was later summoned by President Lincoln to assume command of the Union Forces 联盟部队during the Civil War. After the Civil War, Grant suffered financial problems and was forced to declare bankruptcy. Lee also descended from a family which engaged in the American Revolution. He, too, received his commission from West Point and later fought in Mexico during the Spanish-American War. His fame as a military strategist during the Civil War, when he was the commander of the Confederate armies,同盟军is well known. Like Grant, he also had financial difficulties

after the civil War and was compelled to declare bankruptcy. (整体比较)

1比较和对比（comparison and contrast ）

比较型作文

比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式

比较两种。说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。

在四、六级考试中的比较型作文多以议论式比较的形式出现。议论式比较以比较事物优劣、阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。

一、倾向型比较论说文

1. 首段

引言句（第一句）：引出比较的对象

主题句（第二句）：提出主题，明确表明作者的个人取向与偏好。

Topic 1: 有人认为大学住宿应该独处一室2.有人认为应该与同学合住 3.我的观点

It is often difficult for _students_ to decide whether they should live alone or they should live with other students . In my opinion, to live with others is always better.

Topic 2: 幸福的秘诀是找一个最完美的人，还是找一个最适合你的人，和他或她建立一个最和谐亲密关系？

The key to happiness is to find a perfect person or to find someone who is perfect for you and build a perfect relationship with him or her? In my opinion, to find someone who is perfect for you is always better.

Topic 3: 有人喜欢乡村生活 2.有人喜欢都市生活 3.我的观点

Those who prefer city life have their own reasons,while some other people prefer

country life. As for me ,both city life and country life have merits and demerits.

Topic 4: 1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3．我认为……

People’s attitudes toward whether famous universities should be open to turists or not vary from person to person. In my opinion, it is a good idea for universities to attract tourists.

2、主体部分

对比点的笔墨分配：应有所侧重，对于作者持否定态度的事物的优势要少写，而肯定的事物的优点则要多用笔墨，对于其缺点则可轻描淡写、一笔带过。

Topic 1: ( 学生住宿)

Some students don't like B . First, they think ______ because ______. Second, _______. Third,_________.

The incomparable advantage of A is that ___________. First,___________. Second,________ .Third,________.

3、结尾段 = 呼应主题句强调被肯定事物的积极作用等

用一句话归纳并突出被肯定事物的重大优点，进一步确定自己的选择，与主题句相互照应。

二、中立型比较论说文

首段和主体部分与倾向型比较论说文相同

Topic 1. 1.有人认为类似于因特网的高科技产品会代替书籍

2.有人认为传统的信息产品书籍不会被取

代

3.我的看法。