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Writing Topic: healthy life
Collect the money from the boxes!
Share sayings
How to keep healthy? Healthy habits
How to give suggestions Practice
Composition
Let’s try
Many students like to eat junk food, but , it is bad for our health.
We like doing kinds of sports _lik_e_/_s_uch as swimming, running and hiking.
unhealthy drink
play basketbal
l
play baseball
play play tennis
volleyball
play
soccer
take exercise
go skateboarding
go skating
来自百度文库
go hiking
swim run take a walk
listen to music
2. have healthy eating habits
(important)
ZXXK
1. take exercise
(helpful)
Healthy life
3.relax ourselves
(necessary) It is important to have healthy eating habits.
▪ _F_ir_s_t_, he stood up. Then he got out. _N_e_x_t_, he went back.
▪ F_in_a_l_ly_/_A_t_l_a_st__, he smiled.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
我喜欢听音乐放松自己。
A. I like to listen to music to relax myself. B Listening to music is a good way to relax.
Which is better?
我希望你能帮助我。
A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help.
Group work
Please discuss the following questions in groups.学科网Z.X.X.K Z.X.X.K
1.How do you have healthy eating habits？
2.What kind of sports do you usually do?
play computer games
do some sports
relax yourself
get eight hours’ sleep (get enough sleep)
talk to others
I can relax myself by listening to some music.
作文六步法
3.How do you relax yourself when you are stressed out（压力过大）?
We should… meat
vegetables
fruit
healthy food
healthy drink
We shouldn’t… eating habits
unhealthy food
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
作文六步法
一、审题 确定基本要素:5W1H
何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事
作文六步法
二、抓要点
确定主要行为
What happened?
作文六步法
三、扩展成句
形成基本语句
Who did what?
书面表达六步法
四、连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
▪ Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
中考链接：
6. 我们晚饭后散步好吗？ Shall we w__a_lk__ _a_f_t_e_r supper?
7．让我们睡个好觉。 Let’s _h_a_v_ea good _s_le_e_p_.
要尽量剔除错误
书面表达六步法
六、抄写 卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面不整洁一定会扣分！
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或
结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。
加(add beginning and ending)
▪ How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
我认为每天锻炼很重要。
A I think doing sports very day is important. B I find it really important to do sports very day .
我们应该保持愉快的心情。
A We should keep a good mood every day. B It is important for us to keep a good mood every day .
（the beginning）
▪ A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
8．你不准乱扔垃圾。 You mustn’t t_h_r_o_w litter a_b_o__u.t
9．我们最好不要去拥挤的地方。 We had better not _g_o__ to c_r_o_w_d__e_d___ places.
10. 我必须要吃药吗？ 不， 你仅仅需要充足的睡眠。 __M_u_s_t_ I take medicine? No, you _n_e_e_d_n_’_t __. You just need enough sleep.
Collect the money from the boxes!
Share sayings
How to keep healthy? Healthy habits
How to give suggestions Practice
Composition
Let’s try
Many students like to eat junk food, but , it is bad for our health.
We like doing kinds of sports _lik_e_/_s_uch as swimming, running and hiking.
unhealthy drink
play basketbal
l
play baseball
play play tennis
volleyball
play
soccer
take exercise
go skateboarding
go skating
来自百度文库
go hiking
swim run take a walk
listen to music
2. have healthy eating habits
(important)
ZXXK
1. take exercise
(helpful)
Healthy life
3.relax ourselves
(necessary) It is important to have healthy eating habits.
▪ _F_ir_s_t_, he stood up. Then he got out. _N_e_x_t_, he went back.
▪ F_in_a_l_ly_/_A_t_l_a_st__, he smiled.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Which is better?
我喜欢听音乐放松自己。
A. I like to listen to music to relax myself. B Listening to music is a good way to relax.
Which is better?
我希望你能帮助我。
A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help.
Group work
Please discuss the following questions in groups.学科网Z.X.X.K Z.X.X.K
1.How do you have healthy eating habits？
2.What kind of sports do you usually do?
play computer games
do some sports
relax yourself
get eight hours’ sleep (get enough sleep)
talk to others
I can relax myself by listening to some music.
作文六步法
3.How do you relax yourself when you are stressed out（压力过大）?
We should… meat
vegetables
fruit
healthy food
healthy drink
We shouldn’t… eating habits
unhealthy food
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
作文六步法
一、审题 确定基本要素:5W1H
何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事
作文六步法
二、抓要点
确定主要行为
What happened?
作文六步法
三、扩展成句
形成基本语句
Who did what?
书面表达六步法
四、连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
▪ Come and enjoy your vacation. People who
relax well work well. （the ending）
中考链接：
6. 我们晚饭后散步好吗？ Shall we w__a_lk__ _a_f_t_e_r supper?
7．让我们睡个好觉。 Let’s _h_a_v_ea good _s_le_e_p_.
要尽量剔除错误
书面表达六步法
六、抄写 卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面不整洁一定会扣分！
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或
结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。
加(add beginning and ending)
▪ How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
我认为每天锻炼很重要。
A I think doing sports very day is important. B I find it really important to do sports very day .
我们应该保持愉快的心情。
A We should keep a good mood every day. B It is important for us to keep a good mood every day .
（the beginning）
▪ A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
8．你不准乱扔垃圾。 You mustn’t t_h_r_o_w litter a_b_o__u.t
9．我们最好不要去拥挤的地方。 We had better not _g_o__ to c_r_o_w_d__e_d___ places.
10. 我必须要吃药吗？ 不， 你仅仅需要充足的睡眠。 __M_u_s_t_ I take medicine? No, you _n_e_e_d_n_’_t __. You just need enough sleep.