思维导图指导英语写作(建议性作文)

(2)常用短语：as we all know, more and more important、 an effective way（有效方法）、for example、in fact、 interest in the long run（长远利益）, as far as I am concerned,in short（总而言之）
Everyone has different hobbies. Some likes reading, some likes drawing and so on. My favourite is playing basketball(开篇点题）. Here are my reasons（过渡句）.
, playing basketball is good for my health.It can make me strong and healthy. Secondly, It's popular around us, I often play basketball with my classmates on the school playground, and it is a good way to make more friends.What's more, when I feel tired after studying, playing basketball can make me feel relaxed and exciting.
(1)_In_s_h_o_rt_, _w_e_s_h_o_u_ld_f_o_llo_w__th_e_a_b_o_v_e_a_d_v_ic_e_. ___; (2)_A_ll_in__al_l,_.._. _. _________________________; (3)_A_b_o_v_e_a_ll_, _..._.________________________.
Firstly,原因1
Secondly,原因2
Finally,原因3
wonderful , happy,important,useful...
Step 3 Presentation
students' works (学生作品）
第一步：审题：
人称：
时态：一般现在时
体裁：原因类型说明文
重要内容：喜爱的爱好，为什么，爱好的意义。
李华， 发言稿，重要性，建议，呼吁
写作思路(思维导图）：
学习汉语的重要性———学好的建议——呼吁
思维导图
Chinese 点明主题
important、play an important role in...
（1）
Firstly,we should...
标题
（2）
how 建议
（3）
Secondly,it's good to... Thirdly,try to...
Thirdly,try to...
Finally/Last but not least,we had better...
建议性说明文： 常用词汇、短语、句型 （1）常用词汇: advice/suggestion、impotant、firstly、 secondly、 finally、because、wonderful、colorful、 hope、useful...
1、简述学好汉语的重要性； 2、你对如何学好汉语的建议（至少两点）； 3、呼吁同学们学好汉语。 参考词汇：mother tongue（母语）
作文要求：1、不得在作文出现学校的真实名称和真实姓名。 2、语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
第一步：审题：
体裁：建议性话题作文,发言稿 人称：第一人称we 时态：一般现在时 重要内容：汉语，母语，交流和表达，学好，传承文化，
第三步，词句成章（参考句型） 1、As we all know, Chinese plays an important role in our China. It is becoming more and more popular all around the world. 2、In my opinion, there are some suggestions for learning Chinese well. Firstly, ... . What's more, ... . Last but not least,... .
往大里说，则关系到民族认同和文化接续的大话题。近年，
学习汉语言文化的热潮在各地涌现。作为新时代的青少年， 我们一定要学好母语，传承民族文化。假设你是李华，你
所就读的外国语学校也在举办“关爱母语”的主题周活动，请 你以“Why Should We Learn Chinese Well?”为题写一篇英 文发言稿，在班会上发言。内容包括：
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建议性话题作文
博罗县 陈丽萍
Step 1 Revision
Writing Steps
一、认真审题。
1、人称; 2、时态; 3、体裁; 4、关键内容。 （关键词、短语和句型，且适当扩展）
二、简画思维导图。
二、构建思维导图。
1、确立标题。 2、篇章结构。 3、段落大意。
标题
Par. 1 Beginning
（1）体裁：建议性说明文 （2）人称：第一人称 （3）时态：一般现在时
（1） what
important、play an important role in...
标题 （2）
（3）
call/conclusion 号召/总结
Firstly,we should...
how
Secondly,it's good to...
For me , my favourite hobby is playing basketball. It can make my life become colourful and wonderful.
Step 4 Writing
1、《同步导学62页》: 建议性话题作文 2、类似作文 How to protect our environment? How to improve English? How to keep fit/healthy? How to make friends? How to protect the animals?
(1)_Y_o_u_' _d_b_e_tt_e_r ._.._.______________________; (2)_It_is_a__g_oo_d__id_e_a_t_o_.._. _. __________________; (3)_W_e_s_h_o_u_ld__..._.________________________; (4)_L_e_t_'s_.._._. ___________________________. 段落三：表达总结全文的常用句型：
Why Should We Learn Chinese Well? Dear teachers and classmates, __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
范文1
Why Should We Learn Chinese Well?
Dear teachers and classmates，
Chinese is our mother tongue, It's important for us to learn it well. With good Chineseknowledge, we can not only communicate with others better, but also show our ideas more freeland correctly. But how can we learn Chinese well? Here are some ways(suggestions)/Here is some advice.
注意：文章不可以出现真实名字和学校，语句连贯， 词数70个左右 第一步：审题：（1）人称：第1人称
（2）时态：一般现在时 （3）体裁：原因类型说明文 （4）重要内容： 第二步，思维导图
第二步，思维导图
标题
what
why
feeling， opinion
说明情况 Here are the reasons.
call/conclusion 号召/总结
Finally/Last but not least,we had better...
Let's try our best to learn it well.
第三步，词句成章
段落一：(开篇点题）表达重要性句型和过渡句： (1)_A_s_w__e_a_ll_k_n_o_w_, ._.._p_la_y_s_a_n_i_m_p_o_rt_a_n_t _ro_le__in_._.._.; (2)_H_e_re__a_re_m__y_s_u_gg_e_s_ti_o_n_s._/ _H_e_re__is_m_y__ad_v_i_ce_.__; 段落二：表达建议性常用句型：
(开篇点题）
Par. 2 Body
(主要内容）
Par. 3 Ending
(总结全文）
Step 2 Check the homework
(2017年绵阳市） HAPPY WEEKENDS向中学生征稿。写一篇英语小短
文，介绍一项你最喜爱的业余爱好(My favourite hobby)， 要求如下： 1、介绍自己最喜爱的业余爱好； 2、述说为什么喜欢； 3、说明业余爱好对自己的意义。
第二步，思维导图
basketball
what
be good for health
My favurite hobby
why
make more friends
relaxing and exciting
feeling
wonderful and happy
Step 3 Presentation
范文
My favourite hobby
(3)常用建议性句型： It is ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ood to/for... . We should... . It's a good idea to...
Step 5 Practice 惠州市2020年八年级上册期末统考
汉语是我们的母语，我们每天生活在母语之中。关爱 母语，往小里说，有助于人们顺畅地交流和自由地表达；
First, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Second, we'd better copy and recite some good poems. And don't forget to read more classic works. Finally, it's a good idea to enjoy some Chinese programs, such as Chinese songs, dances and movies. It can help us understand more about the culture.
Firstly,listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. Secondly, we'd better copy and recite some good poems. And don't forget to read more classic works. Finally, it's a good idea to enjoy some Chinese programs, such as Chinese songs, dances and movies. It can help us understand more about the culture. 3、All in all , we should... .