【初中英语】图表类作文写作方法
人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一)大作文(31张)
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如何写出好的作文?
执教老师: 樊老师
1.分析提示信息。 2.连词组句。 3.同意异词。 4.避免简单堆积词汇。 5.多运用过渡词,连句成文,使全篇结构紧凑。 6.确保语言精练。 7.复查纠错。
人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一) :大作 文(31页 )-PPT 执教课 件【推 荐】
一.审题 写好作文必先审题,明确所给的提示或 图表的内容要求,确定写什么,怎么写, 怎样在适当的地方提出所写文章的健康 积极的中心论点;思路灵巧和视角新颖 也可使文章增色不少。
人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一) :大作 文(31页 )-PPT 执教课 件【推 荐】
人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一) :大作 文(31页 )-PPT 执教课 件【推 荐】
英语作文专题(一)
执教老师: 樊老师
写下涉及该题的 各种联想和论点
Brainstorming
选择语句
运用关联词语排列语句
人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一) :大作 文(31页 )-PPT 执教课 件【推 荐】
• 被动语态 • 强调句 • 感叹句
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人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一) :大作 文(31页 )-PPT 执教课 件【推 荐】
四.复查修改
整篇作文写完后,一定要仔细检查, 查看有无遗漏的要点和标点符号, 并检查字母的大小写、单词拼写, 特别要注意文中的动词(主谓一致、 时态、语态)使用的正确性以及字数 是否符合要求。
人教版八年级上册英语作文专题(一) :大作 文(31页 )-PPT 执教课 件【推 荐】
1. 审题不清
依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不 切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准 确,都会被判为零分。例如:一篇以 “我的 健康饮食”为标题的文章学生如果写成了 以某种菜的做法或感谢妈妈为他每天做饭 的文章,不管用词多么恰当,语言多么感人, 都不能获得高分.所以写作文之前要先审题, 最好列出提纲.做到要写什么一目了然.
初中英语图表类作文的写作方法点拨
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英语篇图表作文即要求考生根据所提供的图片或表格展开写作,常以说明和议论为主,侧重对观察、理解、分析、比较、信息转换以及语言运用等综合能力的考查。
对此,笔者就初中英语图表作文的写作步骤和常见词汇、句型进行了分析,以期对同学们有所帮助。
【写作步骤】1.审清题意。
任何书面表达都离不开审题,只有审清题意,才能避免跑题。
所以,同学们在看到题目后,不要急于下笔,首先要弄清文章要求写的是什么,是写一封信、写一篇报道,还是写一篇议论文等。
其次,要明确文章所要使用的人称和时态,否则全文皆错。
2.观察图表。
这是写图表作文至关重要的一环。
在观察图表时,同学们既要看清图表中的文字说明、备注解释等;又要注意仔细剖析图表提供的数据信息,找出信息之间的区别和变化,从而抓住问题的本质。
3.罗列提纲。
简单概述图表中的信息内容,把图表中需要表达的要点全部勾选出来,提炼出写作要点,并在此基础上罗列好写作提纲,构建写作框架。
这样写作时才不会杂乱无章,层次不清。
4.连句成文。
选择自己熟悉的词汇、短语、句型,将写作要点译成句子,然后连句成文。
在连句成文时,要注意使用转承连接用语,以增强文章的连贯性,确保行文流畅自然。
【常用词汇和句型】1.常用词汇(1)表示数据变化:on the increase (日益增长),a growing/increasing number of (越来越多的),go up (增长),decrease to (减少了)等。
(2)描述事物:important (重要的),benefi-cial (有益的),meaningful (有意义的),similar (类似的),colorful (丰富多彩的)等。
(3)表达个人观点:in my view/opinion (在我看来),As far as I am concerned (就我而言),From my point of view (依我之见)等。
2.常用句型From the diagram,we can see that …从图表中我们可以看到……According to the graph,we can find …根据图表,我们可以发现……It is clear from the figure that …从图中可以清楚地看到……As is shown in the graph …如图所示,……As can be seen from the chart/table/form,…从图表中可以看出,……【实践演练】假定你是学校英语报小记者李华,上周学校开展了“English Day ”活动,请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据,以“Our School English Day ”为题,写一篇不少于80词的报道,介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。
初中英语作文的写作技巧【精彩10篇】
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初中英语作文的写作技巧【精彩10篇】描写文的要求篇一在描写文的写作过程中要注意以下几点:1.要考虑好描写的视角和次序。
视角,就是我们通常所讲的人称,用第一和第三人称都可以,但目的、内容和效果却不同。
描写次序是指先写什么后写什么的问题。
一般来讲,英语描写短文总是按空间顺序(spatial order)来安排次序的。
例如要描写一个房间时,要从先看到的部位写起,从上到下或从下到上。
2.要选择好重点部位或内容来写。
无论描写什么都不可能面面俱到,而要选择最能体现事物特征的一两点作细描处理,其他方面用白描手法一代而过。
3.要把描写和叙述结合起来写。
在实际写作中,描写多半与其他体裁结合起来使用,尤其是常与叙述交织在一起,二者“难分难舍”。
一般来说,叙述是概括地显示行文进程,描写是具体细致地描述客观事物。
好的描写总是把记事、写人、状物、写景紧密地揉合在一起,使其浑然一体,既突出重点,又有点有面,点面结合,创造出一种和谐的美。
中考英语作文高分技巧篇二审题时重视“读”、“看”“发挥”等技巧因为不同的写作题材,人物、时间、写作重点也不相同。
赵娜老师就结合常见的四类题型,介绍了写作时的注意事项及技巧。
以图表提供情景的,要以“读”为主。
读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的转变关系,并对信息分析、推断、筛选、概括;注意内容的准确性,尤其是数据、时间不能错。
以图画提供情景的,要以“看”为主。
细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等,弄清写作意图,通过分析把握逻辑联系,找出主题并借助所给文字,把图中信息转化成文章。
“但要注意,文章不能停留在图画的浅层表面,要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。
”赵老师提醒。
动笔前审题、圈要点、列提纲、定基调一个不能少“在动笔做题前要心里有数,这样才能不至于走弯路。
”赵娜说,尤其要在审题、圈要点、列提纲、定基调这几方面,做足功课,然后才能事半功倍,易得高分。
审题目要切中题意。
审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
初中英语作文写作技巧及范文【建议收藏】
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初中英语作文写作技巧一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式。
时态:故事性一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去与现在的对比人称:注意句中人称的统一格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点。
切忌只看表格或所列1、2、3中信息点。
要仔细读题,找全信息点,适当增加合理内容。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅。
单词不会时,可找一个相近单词或词组来表达,幸运的话在卷中其他地方出现的单词可以拿来用。
切忌与汉语的一一对应,考虑句子结构、短语及单词的正确使用。
四、认真检查,看是否有单词拼写和短语运用是否正确,句子结构是否清晰。
常用连接词表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end表并列补充关系的:What’s more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, And, As well as表转折对比关系的:But, Yet, However, On the contrary, Although+clause(从句),In spite of +n./doing,表因果关系的: Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, Since, Otherwise表解释说明: For example句子, For instance句子, such as+n/doing, in this case表达自己观点:As far as I know, In my opinion表总结: In short, In a word, In conclusion, In summary, Finally, In general, In all, Generally speaking表对比关系:On the one hand…On the other hand…, Some…while others…表强调:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 表目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to会用两三个从句宾语从句举例: I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.状语从句举例: If everyone does something for the environment our hometown will become clean and beautiful.动名词做主语举例: Reading books in the sun is bad for ours eyes.It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.开篇技巧一:主旨设问更给力I think it’s important for us to do sports. Why? Because it’s good for our healthyand study.I think it’s important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it’s good forliving.I think it’s important for us to learn English. Why? Because it’s the most-widelyused language in the world.技巧二:常用观点表达句Different people have different opinions, and I prefer…正文1.表达观点要“自我”In my opinion, we should…2.两句之间要过渡I left my pen at home. What’s more, the drugstore was closed that day.3.问题阐述用形容词句型普通级:The environment is bad.比较级:The environment is getting much worse than before.最高级:I have never seen the worse environment.It was an unusual experience in my life.→It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.4.多用it句式…is a…way to…Watching TV is a wonderful way to learn English.5.增强情感转感叹How important it is for students to do sports!6.结合定从活用there be句型Many reasons made me like reading.→There are many reasons why I enjoys reading.7.列举式结构:first of all, secondly, besides, what’s more, last but not least, for one thing…for another8.make更有feelAfter doing sports, I feel relaxed.→It makes me feel relaxed to do sports.9.连接词不再用and增补not only…but also…, as well as进阶what’s more, furthermore10.喜欢不再likebe fond of, enjoy, be crazy about11.提建议不要一直用shouldsuppose, had better, have no choice but, It’s our duty to…结尾1.各种号召Don’t put it off.事不宜迟2.“越”多多益善The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be.3.名言警句Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧Rome was not built in one day.罗马不是一天建成的Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师没有积累?实在不行自己编也OKOnce there was a great man said “……”英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.It’s glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.I'm pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America议论文写作1.正反观点式议论文模板导入:第1段Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should…(导入话题)Our opinions are divided on this topic. (观点有分歧)正文:第2段Most of the students are in favour of…(正方观点)Here are the reasons.First…Second…Finally…(列出2-3个赞成的理由)正文:第3段However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)Their reasons are as follows.In the first place… What’s more…In addition…(列出2~3个反对的理由)结论:第4段Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)2.“A或者B”类议论文模板导入:第1段Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much better.Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文:第2段There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that... Another reason is that…(赞同A的原因)正文:第3段Of course, B also has advantages to some extent…(列出1-2个B的优势)结论:第4段But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that…(得出结论)3.观点论述类议论文模板导入:第1段提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)The reasons for this may be listed as follows(过渡句,承上启下)正文:第2段First of all…Secondly…Besides…(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)结论:第3段In conclusion, I believe that…(照应第1段,构成“总一分一总"结构) 4."'How to"类议论文模板导入:第1段提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题正文:第2段Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all… Another way to solve the problem is ... Finaly…(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)结论:第3段These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to…(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)写作范文短语:常用连接词:记忆句子:手机的利弊Nowadays smartphones play an important role in our lives. A number of middle school students have owned them. No matter where we are, we can see students playing with their smartphones.My Best Friend毕业时刻即将到来,你校英文校刊向初三年级学生征文,题为“My Best Friend”,以此作为对初中生活的纪念。
五步教你英语图表作文怎么写
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五步教你英语图表作文怎么写五步教你英语图表作文怎么写图表作文着重说明事实,常常是通过对图表中所反映的具体数据的说明、分析、比较,对某种事物或现象的事实或变化情况等加以说明,并提出结论或看法。
因此,图表作文常常采用议论文体的写作方法。
写好图表作文,关键在于能否读懂图表中所提供的信息,把握各信息间的联系,用准确流畅的语言把这一信息表达出来,并就这一信息发表自己的看法。
写图表作文时,要注意遵循以下步骤:1)认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系;2)确定文章的主题思想,构思出文章的基本框架,筛选出能说明图表主题思想的典型数据;3)编列文章的'提纲;4)根据文章的提纲,将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落,然后将各个段落组成文章,注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡;5)检查与修改。
图表作文的篇章结构写图表作文时,常采用三段式的谋篇方式。
文章的第一段往往分析图表中的数据变化反映什么问题或趋势,概述图表所揭示的信息。
第二段分析造成这一问题或趋势的原因。
第三段则展望未来的情况或提出解决问题的办法或建议。
这一结构可以简单地表述为:第一段:概述图表反映的主题思想第二段:分析产生的原因第三段:展望未来或提出方法或建议图表作文常用的句型(1)常用的开篇句型(即概述图表内容时常用的表达法)① According to the table/pie chart/line graph/bar graph,we can see/conclude that … 根据该表/图,我们可知……② The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/illustrates/ represents/points out)that … 该表/图表明……③ As we can see from the table …As can be seen from the line/bar graph …As is shown (illustrated/indicated)in the pie chart …如表/图所示,……(2)描述增减变化常用的句型① Compared with … is still increased by …② The number of … grew/rose from … to …③ An increase is shown in …; then came a sharp increase of …④ In … the number remains the same/drops to …⑤ There was a very slight (small/slow/gradual)rise/increase in 1990。
中考英语书面表达图表类作文写作指导
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图表类型 -图表(graph/diagram)包括柱状图(bar/column chart)、表格(table)、饼状图(pie chart)、折线图(line chart)、曲线图(curve chart)、流程图(flow chart)、组图(a set of charts)等。
如果考试的时候不会写某个具体图表的英译,可以用graph/diagram泛指所有图表。
graph n.图表;代表声音单位(或其他言语特征)的书写符号;坐标图v.用图标示;绘图diagramn.图解;简图;示意图;几何图形;火车运行时间图v.以图表示;根据火车运行时间图来安排(火车的)运行时间- 写作思路 -第一段:描述图表第二段:说明图表数据增长or下降的原因。
第三段:表达自己对此现象的看法以及面对此现象我们该怎么去做。
(具体写不写第二段和第三段要看作文要求,如果作文direction里写明了你要“interpret the chart and give your comments”,那就一定别忘了写第二段和第三段,如果只是让“interpret the chart”,那在作文结尾写一两句第二段和第三段的内容或者不写即可)嵌套饼状图的写作思路第一部分思路:从饼状图中我们可以了解到xx是怎样的,其中百分之几是A,百分之几是B,B中a占多少,b占多少,c占多少。
第二部分思路:图表数据说明了什么,我的看法是什么。
(一般图表给的数据多比较复杂,作文就描述图表数据的篇幅多一些。
如果图表给的数据很简单,比如21年12月的六级作文真题,就给了个单条折线图,那描述图表数据的篇幅可以小一些,重点放在分析图表数据变化的原因上,当然最重要的还是依照作文的direction来,即看作文题目到底让写什么,到底让怎么写,审题是最重要的)- 第一段常用表达 -1. 描述图表变化趋势的表达上升(v):increase; go up; rise; improve; grow; jump; rocket; soar; surge; shoot up(猛增); climb; ascend; leap; skyroket; proliferate上升(n):increase; rise; growth; jump; surge; upturn; leap下降(v):fall; drop; decrease; decline; go down; sink; dip;plummet; descend; diminish; dwindle; shrink; slupm; plunge; dive; nosedive下降(n):decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop, slowdown, slump, plunge, dive, nosedive波动(v):fluctuate, vary, wave波动(n):fluctuation, variation波动(词组):range / vary from xx to xx,go up and down, ups and downs稳定在一个水平上(v):remain, keep, stay, maintain, stabilize, stagnate稳定在一个水平上(adj):stable, steady, constant, unchanged稳定在一个水平上(n):stagnation; stability; steadiness; plateau稳定在一个水平上 (词组):hove at; remain the same trend; remain stable; remain constant; reach a plateau at; stabilize at多条曲线趋势一致:A and B share the same trend; the trend of A happens to coincide with B2. 描述图表变化程度的表达变化程度很大:副词:significantly;considerably;rapidly;sharply;dramatically;drastically;enormously;substantially;markedly;steeply; greatly; massively; hugely; precipitously形容词:striking/ skyrocketing/ twofold(两倍的)/ threefold(三倍的)/ considerable/ steep词组:at an alarming rate, by/in leaps and bounds, by a wide/significant margin变化程度较轻:副词:slightly;gradually;slowly;steadily;moderately; marginally; modestly 形容词:steady/moderate/slow/slight/gradual词组:in a moderate way, by a narrow margin3. 极值类和组成构成的表达(hit/register/arrive at/stand at/increase to都可以替换掉reach)(top/summit/zenith/highest point都可以替换掉peak)eg:reach the peak of xx最低点:reach the bottom(drop/hit/register/arrive at/stand at/decrease to都可以替换掉reach)(trough/lowest point都可以替换掉bottom)eg:reach the bottom of xx占比最多:occupy the largest proportion of xxoccupy=make up=take up=account forproportion=number=percentage占比最少:occupy the smallest proportion of xxoccupy=make up=take up=account forproportion=number=percentage由…组成:comprise, consist of, be made up of,be composed of组成,构成:constitute, make up,form, occupy, account for, represent4. "大约"/"超过"/"不足"和预测类的表达方式大约:about/around/approximately/roughly/nearly/almost/just + 数字over/just under/close to/in the region of + 数字数字+ or so/or thereabouts数字+or thereabouts超过:more than + 数字over + 数字不足:no more than + 数字less than + 数字within + 数字under + 数字预测(v):expect, predict, project, forecast预测(句式):xx is expected/predicted/projected/forecasted to reach …5. "表达/阐述/说明/展示/体现"的表达方式display/represent/demonstrate/show/convey/illustrate/indicate/describe/embody/ reflect/reveal/outline/delineate/depict/expound/elaborate6. 常用句型①描述上升到多少:The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.②描述从多少上升到多少:Conversely, the urban population saw a risingtrend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.③描述A的上升和B的下降:Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.(by+数据,就是上升/下降了多少,例如declined by nearly 10%就是下降了将近10%,to+数据,是指上升/下降到多少)④描述xx数据排第几:The amount of underground water ranks the second ,the percentage being 30.2%.⑤描述最大占比:We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, with a proportion as high as 59.5%.We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.⑥分别描述比例:Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).⑦描述两者之间的比较:The data show a comparison between the amountof Red wine that is consumed and the rates of US birth.In comparison with A, Bis …⑧描述倍数:A is three times as much as B …The graph shows a threefold increase in number of…The total number in 2012, which is 8,318, is about two times as much as the total number in 2008.A is twice as much as B.- 第二段常用表达 -1. 表述原因总起句There are many reasons explaining this phenomenon.Three major reasons give rise to the phenomenon mentioned above.2. 分条描述原因(主要原因)The main reason is that due to (the progress in economy / the improvement of living standards), a growing number of people ……(第二个原因)What is more, there is no doubt in saying that , with (the pace of modern society speeding up / the advance of technology) , a majority of people (try their best to catch up with the times and improve themselves)by (pursuing further education).(第三个原因)Thirdly , (under the background of modernization / with the rapid development of economy and society) , xx may have gradually become an unstoppable trend(趋势)in recent years.3. 形容大环境常用的表达方式with the progress in economywith the improvement of living standardswith the pace of modern society speeding upwith the advance of technology with the rapid development of economy and societyunder the background of modernization / urbanization / industrialization- 第三段常用表达 -积极的:Considering all these, I believe that we should take a reasonable attitude toward xx. In conclusion, from my point of view, such a phenomenon is (positive)and (acceptable).积极的:Taking into account what has been argued so far, it is not surprising to see the results in the above diagram. Thus, such phenomenon proves to be quite normal and acceptable. And I believe the trend will not change in the near future.积极的:Definitely, the boom of (the mobile industry) tends to exert a beneficial influence on people’s lives, and hence, it should be, from every aspect,encouraged and further advocated.消极的:In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that actions have to be taken to cope with the problems arising from ……趋势预测:From what has been discussed above, a trend can be predicted from the chart that ……趋势预测:XX will be a growing trend in today's (busy)society.真题巩固2024年浦东新区初三一模英语作文84. Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格)学校报社做了一次有关学生如何使用零花钱的调查。
英语四级图表作文写作技巧
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英语四级图表作文写作技巧图表作文是考研英语写作中较为常见的题型之一,也是难度较大的一种写作题型。
这类作文可综合提供题目、数据、图像、提纲,形式多样,但实际上只涉及5个方面:描述图表、指明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、给出建议,而每次考试只是从这5个方面的内容中选出3个结合在一起。
从写作类型来看,基本上属于说明文。
要求考生围绕题目将有关信息转化为文字形式,考生应该具有一定数据分析和材料归纳的能力,同时会运用一定的写作方法。
图表型作文同时也是大学英语四六级考试中常考的一个题型。
今天店铺要与大家分享的是:英语四级考试图表作文的写作技巧。
具体内容如下,欢迎参考阅读:对于图表型作文,考生可能没有太多实战经验,也不了解一些图表作文的常用词汇与句型,这些问题四六级专家老师都已经为大家考虑到了,下面老师为大家整理的图表作文写作技巧和常用句型及专业名词,讲解十分详细清晰,希望对考生的复习能有所帮助。
技巧一、直观描述图表内容由于图表作文不像提纲作文那样有写作提示和内容要求,所以写图表作文的第一步就是要考生描述图表最直观的内容。
针对不同的图表有不同的描述方式,比如:泛指一份数据图表一般用a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table、饼图用pie chart、直方图或柱形图用bar chart / histogram、趋势曲线图用line chart / curve diagram、表格图用table、流程图或过程图用flow chart / sequence diagram、程序图用processing/procedures diagram。
而常用的描述图表内容的句式类型很多,考生可以重点记忆一些常用的但是又不失新颖的句式,例如:As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,table/chart/diagram/graph figures (that) …It is apparent from the figures/statistics、According to the table/chart diagram/graph等等。
初中英语作文写作技巧
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初中英语作文写作技巧英语写作是考察学生综合能力的一个项目,在中考中的分数比例也是很高的,对于很多学生来说是难点也是重点。
那么初中英语怎么写出一篇好的英语作文呢?一、阅读优秀英文范文首先要搞好阅读。
阅读是写作的基础,在阅读方面下的功夫越深,驾驭语言的能力也就越强。
所以要写好英语先要读好英语,在语言学习方面狠下苦功,教科书要读透,因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文,文笔流畅,语言规范,精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。
再就是要进行大量课外阅读,并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。
二、加强练词造句训练其次,要加强练词造句的训练。
词句对作文相当于造房的材料,无好材料就造不出好房子。
平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累,把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。
平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录,再对照正确句子,使地道的英语句子如同条件反射,落笔就对。
了解英语写作格式还有,要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式。
可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书,对英语写作有一个初步的概念,如怎么写议论文,如何提出论据,如何展开,如何确定中心句;又如,英语信的格式,如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等,然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习。
三、用英语写日记要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯。
经常用英语记日记,等于天天在练笔,这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法。
在记日记时,不要总是用简单句,要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等,使文句更优美生动。
还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔。
写好后对照范文,找出差距,然后再练习,这对提高英语作文也很有帮助,在游泳中学会游泳,只有多练习才能练好。
众所周知,书面表达在中考中占有相当大的比重,而我们的学生在此方面失分甚多,以致影响最后总分,因此提高学生写作能力势在必行,而这又须掌握一定的写作技巧。
观察近几年的中考试题,其最常见的形式是要求考生根据所给信息和思想来写作,亦称为“情景作文”或“提示作文”,而学生对于语言要素综合应用的能力较弱,写出的东西往往是不符合英语表达习惯的“中文或英语”。
【最新】英语作文范文初中大全(50篇)
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初中英语作文题目及范文解读1.假如你是李涛,在美国夏令营活动中,你和来自不同国家的中学生交流了各自的职业梦想.现校刊向你约稿,请根据表格信息,给校刊主编回信.name what why David(U.K.)artist1.creative2.love painting Helen( U.S.A)shop assistant 1.try on new clothes2.meet different people Li Tao…1.…2.….注意:1.内容必须包括表格中的信息;2.开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;3.词数:70个左右.开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词汇.Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about our dreams..Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Tao.【分析】这是一篇图表作文.内容是介绍一下你和你的朋友David、Helen的职业梦想.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一、三人称.写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:1.David(U.K.);艺术家;原因:有创造性,喜欢绘画2.Helen( U.S.A);商店售货员;原因:试穿新衣服,遇见不同的朋友3.李涛的梦想和理由常用到的重点短语:want to be 想成为make+sth+adj 让某某怎样try on 试穿come from 来自make sb do sth 让某人做某事【高分句型】1.David①from U.K.②wants to be an artist ③because he loves painting and④it's creative to ⑤make the city more beautiful.①介词短语做后置定语修饰David.②want to be 想成为③because引导的原因状语从句.④it作为形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.⑤make+sth+adj 让某某怎样2.She ①would like to be a shop assistant ②because she will enjoy the life③if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people.①would like to be 想成为②because引导的原因状语从句.③if引导的条件状语从句.遵循主将从现的规则.3.I like playing computer games and ①doing programs can②make me feel③how smart I am.①动名词短语做主语.②make sb do sth 让某人做某事③how smart I am作为feel的宾语从句.【解答】Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about our dreams.David from U.K.wants to be an artist because he loves painting and it's creative to make the city more beautiful.【高分句型】(David(U.K.);艺术家;有创造性,喜欢绘画)As for the American girl Helen,she has a very special dream.She would like to be a shop assistant because she will enjoy the life if she can often try on new clothes and meet different people.【高分句型】(Helen(U.S.A);商店售货员;试穿新衣服,遇见不同的朋友)I come from China and I want to work as a programmer.I like playing computer games and doing programs can make me feel how smart I am.【高分句型】(我来自中国,程序员,喜欢电脑游戏)Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Tao【点评】此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料,不能跑题偏题.写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误.只要平时积累足够,就一定能获得满意的分数.另外为了应付考试,可以有选择的背诵一些范文,这样应考时就会有法可依2.随着科技的进步,机器人的应用也越来越广泛.甚至一些机器人的外形与人类的外形已十分相像.请以未来的机器人为题,写一篇作文.内容涵盖以下两个方面(1)What will robots be like in the future?(2)What can robots do today?要求:语句通顺,语意连贯.内容可适当发挥.字数 60﹣80 词.Robots in the future【分析】【高分句型一】The robot that I want is like a beautiful and lovely rabbit because I like rabbits.我想要的机器人就像一个美丽而可爱的兔子,因为我喜欢兔子.that引导定语从句;because引导原因状语从句.【高分句型二】If I feel lonely, it will chat with me.如果我感到孤独,它会和我聊天.if引导条件状语从句.【解答】Robots in the futureThe robot that I want is like a beautiful and lovely rabbit because I like rabbits.【高分句型一】But it will walk like a human being.(未来机器人的样子)If I want to listen to music,it will turn on like a radio. If I feel lonely, it will chat with me.【高分句型二】 My robot will be like a friend. He will never be angry with me. My robot will also help me to study.(未来机器人会做什么)In a word,I want to have a robot like Doraemon.My robot will be a clever and cute rabbit.(总结全文)【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.3.根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.培养独立自主的生活能力对中学生非常重要.独立自主的生活能力包括自主安排时间、自觉完成作业、自己整理房间、做饭等.某英文网站正在开展以"培养独立自主的生活能力"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在生活中能独立自主做哪些事情,还需要在哪些方面改进.提示词语:manage time,waste,tidy up,learn提示问题:What can you do independently in your daily life?What do you need to improve?It's very important for teenagers to learn to do things independently.【分析】高分句型一:I think everyone should be responsible for themselves so that we can develop a good sense of responsibility when we grow up.be responsible for 对…负责.a good sense of responsibility一种责任意识.这句话意为:我认为每一个人都应该对他们自己负责,以便于我们长大后能发展一种责任意识.高分句型二:I can do chores to help my parents ,such as tiding up our rooms,washing clothes,do dishes and so on.such as比如,and so on等等.这句话意为:我会帮我父母做家务,比如整理房间,洗衣服,洗盘子等等.【解答】It's very important for teenagers to learn to do things independently.I think everyone should be responsible for themselves so that we can develop a good sense of responsibility whenwe grow up(高分句型一).let me tell you something about myself.(开篇点明主题)Firstly,I can do chores to help my parents ,such as tiding up our rooms,washing clothes,doing dishes and so on(高分句型二).I think it also can strengthen our relationship with our parents.Secondly,I can manage my time well in my daily life,I know the things I should to do in different time.Meanwhile,I should improve myself from some aspects.I sometimes waste some water when I do chores.of course,learning is a long process during our lifetime.I will go on to learn.(从两个方面说明自己会做的事情以及需要改善的方面)【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.4.根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信.信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所要完成的回信内.所给提供的英文提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.假如你叫李明,你的笔友David要来北京旅行.他给你发来邮件,想了解北京的情况.请你根据他的问题回复邮件.提示词语:the Summer Palace,the Great Wall,amazing,fantastic,crowedHi!David,I'm glad to hear from you.The best time to come to Beijing is during the Spring.The weather is not too hot or too cold,so it is the perfect time of the year to be outside.During the Spring in Beijing everything seems fresh and new.I advise you to visit the Summer Palace,the Great Wall,and the Temple of Heaven.The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place to visit.The Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are beautiful too.There are royal buildings,fantastic artwork,and scenic views for people to enjoy.Before you come to Beijing,you should know that Beijing is a very crowded and big city.So it is necessary for you to travel with a map and you must be patient about waiting in line or large crows.I hope you will have a nice trip.Yours,Li Ming【分析】高分句型一:I①advise you to visit the Summer Palace,the Great Wall,and the Temple of Heaven.我建议你去参观颐和园、长城和天坛.①advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事高分句型二:The Great Wall is①one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place ②to visit.长城是世界奇观之一,也是参观的好地方.①one of+名词复数,…之一②动词不定式作后置定语【解答】答案:One possible version:Hi!David,I'm glad to hear from you.The best time to come to Beijing is during the Spring.The weather is not too hot or too cold,so it is the perfect time of the year to be outside.During the Spring in Beijing everything seems fresh and new.【游览北京最好的时候】I advise you to visit the Summer Palace,the Great Wall,and the Temple of Heaven.【高分句型一】The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place to visit.【高分句型二】The Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are beautiful too.There are royal buildings,fantastic artwork,and scenic views for people to enjoy.【游览北京的景点】Before you come to Beijing,you should know that Beijing is a very crowded and big city.So it is necessary for you to travel with a map and you must be patient about waiting in line or large crows.【来北京前需要知道的事情】I hope you will have a nice trip.Yours,Li Ming【点评】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题,需了解写作要点及写作意图,仔细构思写作结构,平时注意积累词汇及语法知识.5.根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名.提示词语供选用.某英文报纸就他/她的微笑(His/Her Smile)话题征文,请你投稿.微笑,是对他人表示友善和关爱.微笑可以给人激励,可以使人奋进.请你结合自己的经历谈谈在你的生活中谁的微笑打动了你,为什么他/她的微笑会打动你,你有什么体会.提示词语:show,encourage,difficult,brave,learn to do,feel good,cheer up,try one's best.【分析】高分句型:①Three years ago,when I made a speech on my first day of class,I was so nervous that I couldn't say a word.三年前,当我第一节课发表演讲时,我紧张得说不出话来.句子中when引导一个时间状语从句;so+形容词+that表示如此怎么样以至于…②His smile was important because it gave me self﹣confidence.他的微笑很重要,因为它给了我自信.句子中because引导一个原因状语从句.【解答】Smiles are beautiful and important.A smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that person's day.(引出话题)I was once moved by a smile from my friend.Three years ago,when I made a speech on my first day of class,I was so nervous that I couldn't say a word(高分句型).Tony,one of myclassmates,sitting in the front row,smiled at me and spoke in a low voice,"Yes,you can."I was greatly encouraged by his smile.His smile was important because it gave me self﹣confidence(高分句型).(我生活中的一次经历)I will never forget my friend's smile because I've learned that something so simple can make a big difference.(我的体会)【点评】对于作文题,首先应该充分了解题目的含义及要求.若给定的条件不足,可进行适当发挥;同时,平时还应该多注意关键句型、固定短语及高分句型的理解及记忆,做题时才能得心应手.6.题目②曾子曰:"吾日三省吾身."自省(self﹣reflection)有助于解决自身的问题,也是自我完善和自我超越的必经之路.某英文网站正在开展以"自省"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了提升自身的品德修养或学业素养,你平时是如何进行自我反省的,以及这样做给你带来的好处.提示词语:think,improve,record,behavior,question,emotion提示问题:●What do you do to be self﹣reflective?●What benefits have you gained from doing so?Self﹣reflection plays an important role in our life..【分析】【高分句型一】A mood journal allows me to not only record my feelings,but also deal with them.心情日记不仅能记录我的感受,还能处理它们.not only…but also…不仅……而且……【高分句型二】I've learned that everything in life is a lesson if you look at it the right way,self﹣reflection has taught me how to learn from my past and be hopeful for the future.我明白了,生活中的每件事都是一课,如果你用正确的方式去看待它.自我反思教会了我如何从过去中吸取教训,并对未来充满希望.that引导宾语从句.if引导条件状语从句.【解答】self﹣reflection is a process of thinking carefully about our own behavior and beliefs.Indeed,when we understand ourselves at a deeper level,we will then be able to see personal growth within ourselves.(点题)To practice self﹣reflection,I usually find a quiet place and spend some time alone.I start by asking myself the questions on my mind.For example,"what are my strengths and weaknesses?"and "how can I make better use of my time?".Also,I keep a diary of what's going on when I experience strong emotions.A mood journal allows me to not only record my feelings,but also deal with them.【高分句型一】In this way,I manage to accept and then let go of negative emotions that I experience.(我是如何自省的)I've learned that everything in life is a lesson if you look at it the right way,self﹣reflection has taught me how to learn from my past and be hopeful for the future.【高分句型二】(我得到的好处)【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.7.根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作。
初中英语作文的写作技巧
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初中英语作文的写作技巧初中英语作文的写作技巧初中英语作文的写作技巧1一、作文解题思路1 审:认真审题,找关键词2 列:用简单的句子或短语全面列出文章要点3 连:恰当运用关联词连接句子,使文章层次清晰4 美:美化文章,适当运用高级词汇和句型二、作文方法点睛1. 运用高级词汇① 固定短语和固定搭配的使用→我不知道如何扩大我的词汇量。
I don't know how to enlarge my vocabulary.I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary.→她非常喜欢音乐。
She likes music very much.She is fond of music.② 恰当使用高级词语However,a large amount of water has been wasted every day.然而,每天都有大量的水被浪费。
Water is the fundamental to all living things.水对于所有生物来说都是最基本的。
He teaches us to be selfless and try our best to help others.他教育我们要无私、尽最大努力去帮助别人。
I usually help my parents clean the house, beautify the yard and cook.我通常帮助我父母打扫房子、美化院子和做饭。
③ 巧用习语The summer holiday is around the corner.(即将来临)This sentence doesn't make sense. (有意义,讲得通)I was all at sea when I began my new job. (茫然不知所措)④ 高级过渡词汇however 然而therefore 因此⑤ 表先后顺序的关联词(组)first of all / at first / firstly 首先in the end / finally / eventually / at last终于、最终、最后last but not least 最后但也是很重要的⑥ 表因果关系的关联词(组)therefore 因此as a result 结果as a result of 因为He worked hard at his study. As a result,he passed the exam easily.他努力学习。
英文写作中的图表作文的写作技巧
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英文写作中的图表作文的写作技巧英文写作中的图表作文的写作技巧英文写作中的图表作文的写作技巧1一、定义图表作文就是将图表所包含的数据信息转化为表意的说明文字,它是说明文的一种,而英文图标作文更英语写作中较为常见的作文题型之一,也是难度较大的一种写作题型。
本文旨在对英文图表作文的写作要领进行简明分析总结,方便读者扩充英文图表作文的写作思路。
图表作文可分为两大类即表作文和图作文,具体分为表格、圆形图作文、曲线图作文和条状图作文,这类作文可综合提供题目、数据、图像、提纲,形式多样,但实际上涉及5个方面:描述图表、指明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、给出建议。
二、图表作文写作要领(一)结构要求在结构方面,英文图表作文也要求结构清晰、层次分明,并且在结构上一定要注意衔接手段的使用,使独立的句子和段落变成文章。
1、引言部份这一段是作文的第一部分,简要介绍图表内容,用自己的语言交待三个要素:图表研究的时间段、研究的对象和研究所采用的数据形式。
该部分不宜过长,一般用一两句话说明,长度约为20-30字左右。
2、主体段落整理主体部分是对图表的详细描写,是全文的核心部分,要详尽描写图表所显示的内容,尤其是数据。
主体描写单方面的趋势,根据趋势的分类决定主体段落划分为几个自然段,描写要有一定的条理,按照一定的顺序组织材料,例如按照时间顺序、空间顺序或者分类顺序来安排。
图表作文的主体段落必须具备两个要素:单方面的趋势和数据的支持。
3、结论部分图表通过对具体数据的对照和对比来说明问题,因此在结尾部分要写出对照对比的趋势,以及从这个趋势中得出一个怎样的结论。
(二)写作步骤1、观察图表观察图表是为了准确理解图表所所传递的信息,认清图表的`形式,抓住其特点。
观察图表一要看清楚图表的文字说明,确定主题;二是仔细研究图表发现数据的主要特征或变化趋势;三要认真研究进一步发现图表中包含的一些意想不到的趋势和特征;四是仔细审查图表中的一切有用信息,诸如数据单位、备注、图理解释等。
各单元话题英语作文写作指导牛津译林版初中英语九年级上册
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译林版初中英语九年级上册全册各单元话题英语作文写作指导集锦九上Unit1 Know yourself写作指导【话题呈现】假如你是Andy,是九年级一班的一名学生,你们的班主任是来自美国的Mr Parker。
你们准备选新班长,你想向班主任老师推荐你的好友Jacky。
请你结合在本单元中所学到的知识,给Mr Parker 写一封推荐信。
要求80—100 词,信的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。
【谋篇布局】在构思这封推荐信时,你可以从以下三个方面考虑:首先,说明你想推荐谁并概括性阐述理由;其次,具体阐述被推荐人的优秀品质并举例说明;最后,总结并说明自己的期望。
【佳文共赏】Dear Mr Parker,I’d like to remend Jacky as our new monitor. I think he has many strong qualities for this position.Jacky is quite a hardworking boy. He often works extra hours for the class. I think he is organized, too. He is good at making good plans. And it is very important for a monitor to be organized. He is also creative and can always e up with wonderful ideas. Moreover, he is always willing to share his ideas with others. He is brave and confident. He is able to make powerful speeches in front of many people.I think Jacky’s personality and abilities can make him a good monitor. I hope that you can agree with me.Yours,Andy【好句摘抄】读完【佳文共赏】中的佳作,请你找出来你认为出色的句子并抄写在横线上。
中考总复习人教版英语6-题型六 书面表达 (2)
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【参考范文】 We plan to have a new column — Dialogue with Teachers on the school
English website. We hope to help students and teachers understand each other and
going to Wuhan to help the patients there. _____________________________
【写作提示】
1.根据题目概述,了解事情的大概发展;
2. 认真观察图中的故事发生于何时,图中的人物为何人,他们做了什么事
情,结果如何;
3. 看图时注意细节,视具体情况进行增删。
预测2023年河北中考书面表达情景的设置贴近学生的学习和生活;提供 情景的形式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等,类别倾向为做法类
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题型 文字材料作文
图表作文 看图作文 命题作文 看图作文 命题作文
续表
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话题
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观点类 谈论英语网站设置师生沟通专栏的目的 15分
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要求:1. 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
一二三四
参考词汇:wash, encourage, open
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind
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第三步:归纳总结或发表评论。
常用表达:
1. in a word,/ in short,(简而言之) / ___g_en_e_r_ally speaking(总的来说)
“Who is your idol”.
2. 50%女生以影视明星为偶像, 而48%男生以体育明星为偶像. 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, but 48%
of the boys choose sports stars. 3. “父母”在女生偶像列表中排列第二, 而在男生偶像列表中却排 列倒数第二.
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下图是我国近10年私人汽 车拥有情况,反映了人 们生活水平的变化.
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请根据以上数据,写一篇
短文,包括以下内容:
1. 近10年我国私人汽车 拥有量增加了5倍多;
2. 增加的理由是:经济 增长快;节约时间。
高考英语基础写作 复习系列
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图表类说明文的类型
一是以表格形式,将
统计的数据或被 说明的事物直接 用表格形式体现 出来,即统计表 (table) 。
Item 1994 1995 1996 1997 1998 Food 65% 60% 48% 42% 35%
clothing 8% 9% 12%l 15% 17%
表示下降的动词: fall,decline,decrease,drop,go down, …;
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2017-2019江苏中考满分作文解析2019年真题在线•文段表达减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。
某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大家各抒己见。
请你根据下图提示,以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:(1) 短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;(2) 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3) 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息;(4) 参考词汇:提升素养promote literacy。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________考题解析2019年连云港中考英语作文为做法类,与2014年江苏连云港中考英语作文“How to deal with exams stress?”类别相同。
从近年英语作文命题来看,做法类的作文主要是针对某要求提出具体行动做法。
本文属于材料作文,要表达如何让课外生活更有意义,因此文体为说明文。
作文的主题是“如何让课外生活更有意义?”,话题贴近学生生活,关注学生的人文素养,容易与学生产生共鸣,难度适中,根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
画图+图表类作文 备战2023年中考英语书面表达(写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累)
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备战2023年中考英语书面表达(写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累)图画+图表作文第七章图画作文图画作文是根据一幅或多幅图画以及汉语提示展开合理想象,写出几句话或一篇短文.看图作文多以记叙文或说明文为主,一般要求考生根据所给的图示介绍一个地方或一件物品,或者叙述过去或将来发生的故事.图画类作文的书面表达具有生动、直观、具体的特点.与其他类型作文的不同之处在于,它除了考查学生将图画内容转化为文字信息的能力以外,还考查学生的观察能力、分析能力和想象能力.写法点拨1.认真读图,把握要点.一般说来,所给的几幅图通常是一个小故事或小事件,这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的主要内容.除此之外,还要考虑各图之间的关系,以及图画表达的人物、事件、地点、时间等.2.初步构思,拟定提纲.把握了文章的要点后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用哪种体裁来进行写作,并确定人称、时态等细节.3.连词成句,连句成文.根据内容要点用恰当的词汇表达各图的意思,然后扩展成句子,再将这些句子串联成文.串连时,要注意使用过渡词或过渡句,使上下文更为紧凑、自然.参考模板The cartoon/picture is sending a message about__________ (图画内容)It reveals. __________ (稍作评价)Apparently,(将个人观点和图片内容相结合,得出观点)For one thing, __________.(原因一)For another thing, .(原因二)For example, __________ Last but not least, __________.(原因三)Therefore, it is necessary for us to__________.(建议或措施)Only in this way can we__________.(展望结果)In conclusion, __________.(再次表明观点或态度)We should__________.(进一步说明个人的观点)必备词汇cartoon卡通;漫画vivid生动的remind提醒indicate表明reflect反映illustrate阐明;举例说明depict描述describe描述imply意味着serious严重的cause导致;引起avoid避免Be supposed to应该;被期望Make sb. In deep thought让人深思必备句型1描述图画内容(1) As we can see in the picture,...正如我们可以从图片中看到的那样·.....(2) As is shown in the picture,... 如图所示··...(3) We can see/find that...in the picture.我们可以从图中发现··...·(4) What we can learn from the picture is that...我们可以从图中知道·.....(5) It can be seen/found/noticed in the picture that...由图画可以看到/发现/注意到···...(6) As can be seen from the picture, it is clear that...如图片所示,很明显·...·2论述图画反映的现象以及对这一现象的看法(1) After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today's society,...看到这幅图以后,我对这种现象非常震惊.在今天的社会里,(2) What the picture reflects makes me think a lot.图片所反映的东西让我思考了很多.(3) Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.很明显,这幅漫画反映了一个主要的社会问题.(4) The picture reminds me of something in my daily life.这张图片让我想起了我生活中的一些事情.(5)All of these cause some serious problems.所有这些造成了一些严重的问题.(6) So I hope something must be done to avoid...所以我希望我们必须做一些事情,以避免···.··3 对事件、观点的总结(1) We can come to the conclusion that...我们可以得出这样一个结论···...(2) As far as I am concerned, what we have to do is... 就我看来,我们必须做的是·....·(3) Consequently, it is high time...所以,是时候··...(4) In my opinion, we should...就我看来,我们应该...(5) Only in this way can we... 只有这样我们才能··..·(6) Spare more time to...and you will...花多点时间···,你将会··.··(7)Therefore, we should realize the importance of...因此我们应该意识到······的重要性.(8) Such behavior left me in deep thought.这样的行为使我陷入了沉思.(9) In a word, if every one of us can do our part, we can make a difference to the world.总之,如果我们每个人都能从自身做起的话,我们就可以对世界产生影响.范例1题目:初中生活即将结束,6月6日下午,你班的班长方华组织了一次毕业聚会,内容是话友谊,忆过去,签名留言,拍照纪念,请根据图片的先后顺序描述此次聚会的过程.注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称.2.至少用两句话描写每幅图画的内容,可以适当发挥.3.首句已给出,不计入总词数.词数80以上.4.参考词汇:签名sign one's name,班长monitor,心形的heart-shapedAs the junior life is to end, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it._____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文As the junior life is to end, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it. The party was organized by Fang Hua who is the monitor of our class and it consisted of three parts. ①Firstly, each person shared one story happened in the past three years. Some of the stories even made us cry. Then our photos were pasted on a heart-shaped board. ②The shape of heart, of course, stood for our lifelong friendship. After that, we signed our names and left some messages on T-shirts. At the end of the party, we took a photo together.Every one of us left with a happy smile on our faces and we would remember the day forever.③译文因为初中生活即将结束,我们班决定办一场毕业聚会来庆祝.聚会由我们班的班长方华组织,本次聚会共分为三部分.首先,每个人都分享一件发生在过去三年中的事.有些故事甚至催人泪下.接着,我们把我们的照片粘贴到一块心形的木板上.当然,心形代表着我们终生不渝的友谊.然后我们在T恤衫上签下我们的名字,并写下一些留言.聚会结束之际,我们一起拍了张合照.我们每个人都面带微笑地离开了,我们将会永远记住这一天.满分点评本文结构清晰严谨,行文流畅自然.采用“总一分一总”结构,符合英语行文的习惯;过渡词的使用也为文章增色不少.其中:①使用who引导的定语从句用来说明方华的身份.②此句采用被动语态句式,使句子富于变化而非平铺直叙.③采用with复合结构作伴随状语,使人眼前一亮.范例2题目:文明社会,从我做起.请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文,向校刊English Garden 投稿,倡导做文明人.注意:(1)短文必须包括所给图片的信息,合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容.(2)必须谈谈你对此事的看法.(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息.(4)词数:80-100.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数.参考词汇:果皮skin,踩在·····上摔倒slip on(slipped, slipped),救护车ambulanceLast Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin._________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. A man who was eating a banana walked in front of us. "①What annoyed us was that he threw the banana skin on the ground instead of putting it into the dustbin.②Suddenly an old woman slipped on the banana skin and got hurt. We called 120 immediately, and then the ambulance came and took the woman to the hospital.It's terrible to drop litter around. ③ As a member of the society, we should keep a good habit and think about others no matter what we are doing, instead of bringing troubles to others.译文上个星期天下午,我和表哥一起去公园.走在我们前面的那个人在吃香蕉.令我们恼怒的是他竟然将香蕉皮扔到地上,而不是扔到垃圾桶里.突然,一个老奶奶踩到香蕉皮滑倒了,并且受了伤.我们立即拨打了120,之后救护车来了,把老奶奶送去医院.到处乱扔垃圾的行为非常糟糕.作为社会中的一员,我们应该养成良好的习惯,不管我们在做什么,都要为他人着想,而不是给他人带来麻烦.满分点评本文成功运用了一般过去时、一般现在时,并使用了过渡词,使短文过渡自然,逻辑清晰.其中:①who引导定语从句,修饰先行词a man.②此句使用了what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句,使人眼前一亮.③采用it作形式主语,不定式to drop litter around 是真正的主语.范例3题目:假如你是刘洪.周末就要到了,你已经安排好了周六一天的活动,请你结合图片内容,发挥合理想象,写一篇不少于80词的文章.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文The weekend comes. After a week's hard work, I really want to have a good relaxation.①On Saturday, I am going to run in the park after breakfast. After that, I will do my homework at home because I have got a lot of homework to do.② Then after lunch, I will go out to fly a kite. ③It will be wonderful. Then in the evening, l will go swimming. Finally at night, I am sure to have a good sleep.That is all about my Saturday.译文周末就要来了,在一周的努力学习之后,我真的想要好好放松一下.星期六,吃完早餐后我要去公园跑步.之后,我将在家里做作业,因为我有很多作业要做.午饭后,我将去外面放风筝.这是很美好的.傍晚的时候,我会去游泳.最后,晚上我一定可以睡个好觉.这就是我星期六的全部安排了.满分点评文章围绕图片内容有条理、有层次地展开,语句通顺、准确,衔接连贯.①这一句暗示了作者打算在周末好好放松,为下文的活动做铺垫.②本句是because引导的原因状语从句,使用恰当.③作者适度运用“then,after”等词语连接上下文.第八章图表作文图表作文通常要求同学们根据题目所提供的图表、数据等进行分析、研究,通过一定的文字说明,弄清信息之间的关系,提炼要点,然后组织语言进行写作,有时候还要加入作者自己的观点.这是考试中较为常见的题型之一,也是难度较大的一种写作题型.这类作文形式多样,可综合提供题目、数据、图像、提纲等,但同学们在写作时一般是从五个方面入手,即描述图表、说明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、提出建议等,考试会从这五个方面中选出两到三个方面.主要考查学生把图表信息转换成文字的能力,数据分析和材料归纳的能力以及写作能力,想象能力等.写法点拨1.认真读取信息,弄清信息间的关系.一般情况下,题目会提供多个信息或者多组数据等,我们要认真分析每一个信息和每一组数据,找准信息间的逻辑关系,把握信息的要点,点明主题.有时候,我们可以借助题目的文字说明来帮助我们理清信息.2.初步构思,拟定提纲.把握了信息间的关系和要点之后,我们要在脑海中形成一个基本的框架,确定文章的体裁,是说明文还是议论文,或者是记叙文等.3.连词成句,连句成文.根据内容要点使用恰当的单词表达文章信息,同时要突出信息之间的关系,然后拓展成句子.通过适当的过渡词或过渡句,把这些句子串联成文,使文章连贯、自然.参考模板According to the chart, we clearly learn that.__________ (图表要点)The number of those who__________ (信息一) has increased, and furthermore,. __________ (信息二)Thereare two factors responsible for the changes. In the first place, __________.(原因一)Moreover, __________.(原因二)From the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that__________ (发表个人观点或看法或总结)必备词汇1 泛指图表table表格图diagram/chart图表graph曲线图;图表Bar chart条形图Line chart曲线图Flow chart流程图Data chart数据图illustration插图2表示数据变化的词rapidly迅速地dramatically戏剧性地sharply急剧地slowly/gradually缓慢地increase增加Go down减少fluctuate波动drop下降Go up上升Remain the same不变3 其他会用到的词describe描述illustrate阐明reveal揭露apparent/clear显然的represent代表figure数字statistics数据data数据;资料必备句型1 导入图表内容(1)The chart shows that...图表显示··....(2) It can be seen from the chart that...从图表中可以看出··....(3) It is obvious from the table that...图表中很明显发现··...·(4) We can see from the data that...从数据中我们可以看到···...(5) We can learn from the diagram that...我们可以从图中知道......(6) The chart illustrates that...图表阐述了····.·2表达数据变化的句子(1) The number of... has increased sharply from...to...·...··的数量已经从······急剧增长到···..·(2) The number of... remains the same in recent years.·····的数量近年来保持不变.(3) There is a sharp rise in the number of...·...··的数量增长很快.(4) There is a sudden decrease in the number of... from... to...······的数量急速下降,从······降到······(5) In contrast, there is a dramatic increase in the number of...相反,·····的数量的增长速度很快.3 对事件、观点的总结(1) It can be concluded that...可以总结出······(2) We can reach a conclusion that...我们可以得出结论······(3) In conclusion, it can be said that...总之,我们可以说······(4) To conclude, more attention should be paid to...总之,要更关注·····.范例1题目:现在的中学生每月都有一定数量的零花钱.某校对九年级(1)班的30名学生进行了零花钱用途的调查.结果如图.任选两项调查结果,谈谈你是怎么用零花钱的,并说明理由.注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称.2.语句通顺,词数80以上.范文As the chart shows, most students spend their pocket money on snacks and just a few save their money.①However, things are quite different when. comes to me.②Usually, I spend most of my money buying books because l like reading very much. I seldom spend my money on snacks because I think they are bad for my health. In addition, I will save some of my money in case of accidents.③It is true that we should make good use of our pocket money and spend it on something useful.译文正如表格所示,大多数学生会把钱花在零食上,只有少数同学会存钱.然而,当谈到我时,事情就不一样了.通常,我会把大多数的零花钱花在买书上,因为我非常喜欢看书.我很少会把钱花在零食上,因为我觉得这对健康不好.另外,我会把我的一部分钱存起来,以防意外.我们的确要充分利用零花钱,并把它花在有用的地方上.满分点评本文的逻辑清晰,段落层次分明.作者使用适当逻辑词使文章更加连贯、紧凑.①用however表示转折,承上启下,突出“我”是怎么使用的零花钱.②把状语usually置于句首,起到了强调的作用.③使用it作形式主语,从句作真正的主语.范例2注意:1.文章必须包括表格里的所有内容,且要补充自己的看法.2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇:cheat 作弊school rules 校规please 取悦In recent years, more and more attention is paid to students' cheating in the exam._______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文In recent years, more and more attention is paid to students' cheating in the exam.The reasons why students cheat in the exam are various. ①Firstly, many students think that they have too many exams which are too hard. Moreover, some students are too lazy to work hard at their lessons. ②Furthermore, they sometimes cheat in order to please their teachers and parents.In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat, ③ which is against the school rules. As a student, we should be honest and study hard. What's more, we should improve our study methods so as to get good grades. ④译文近年来,学生在考试中作弊的问题越来越受到关注.学生考试作弊的理由是各种各样的.首先,很多学生认为考试太多,而且这些考试也很难.其次,有些学生太懒而不努力学习.还有,学生有时候是为了取悦父母和老师而作弊.在我看来,作弊是错误的,这也是违反校规的.作为学生,我们要诚实,努力学习.还有,我们要改善我们的学习方法来提高成绩.满分点评本文要点齐全,表达很顺畅,作者也融入了自己的看法,大量使用过渡词,使文章紧凑,自然.①用why引导定语从句,修饰先行词the reasons.②这个句子使用了too...to...句型,表示“太······而不能··..·”.③用it作形式主语,不定式to do作真正的主语.④使用短语so as to作目的状语,表明改善学习方法的目的.范例3题目:最近你们学校做了一个调查,有关现在中学生都爱读哪一类型的外国书籍.现要求你写一篇文章,汇报调查结果,并提出自己的建议.注意:1.要包含所有表格的信息,并提出自己的建议.2.语句通顺,词数不少于80词.参考词汇:foreign books 外国书籍范文To find out what kind of foreign books the middle school students like, our school did a survey.①As the survey's result shows, more than half of the students like to read newspapers.② 26% of the students say that they like to read foreign stories most, while 7% of the students express that they like to read books about learning methods. ③In addition, the percentage of students who like to read science books is 14%.In a word, I agree that students should learn more knowledge about the foreign countries.译文为了了解中学生都爱阅读哪一类的外国书籍,我们学校做了一项调查.调查结果显示,超过一半的学生喜欢阅读报纸.26%的学生说他们最喜欢阅读外国故事,然而只有7%的学生表示说喜欢阅读关于学习方法的书籍.另外,喜欢阅读科普书的学生比例是14%.总的来说,我同意学生应该多学习有关外国的知识.满分点评本文围绕调查的主题有条理地展开调查的结果,运用多种句式表达类似的信息.全文连接顺畅、自然.①用不定式to do作目的状语,解释了调查的目的.②使用“more than half of the students”而不是直接使用数据53%,表达灵活.③while表示前后形成对比,使上下文关系更连贯、紧凑.。
(整合)七年级英语作文及范文解读(50篇)
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初中英语作文题目及范文解读1.假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她为这次失败所困扰,无心学习.请你给她写一封电子邮件,建议她正确地看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;提醒她实现理想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功;鼓励她好好学习,也不放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天.要求:(1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)字数:60﹣80词(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名.【分析】高分句型:①I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show.听说你在这次达人秀节目被淘汰了,我很难过.这里be sorry to do sth表示对做某事感到抱歉,that后面跟的是一个宾语从句.②I'd like to share with you my thoughts on this matter.我想和你分享一下我对此事的看法.句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事,后面跟to引导的不定式短语.【解答】Dear Lisa,I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show(高分句型).I'd like to share with you my thoughts on this matter(高分句型).(引出话题)Yes,talent shows may change one's future.They offer the opportunity to show one's talents,and give people a way to make their dreams come true.Since only some people are truly talented,there is no need to take the result too seriously.It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight.So just enjoy the process.(介绍对达人秀节目的看法)In addition,there are many ways to success,and only by working hard can you achieve your goals.As a teenager,you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time,which,without doubt,will enrich your future life.(介绍实现理想的途径,只有努力才能获得成功)Hope you'll be happy every day.(希望)Yours,Li Hua【点评】对于作文题,首先应该充分了解题目的含义及要求.若给定的条件不足,可进行适当发挥;同时,平时还应该多注意关键句型、固定短语及高分句型的理解及记忆,做题时才能得心应手.2.下面是一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表,每个调查项目之后有几个选项,请将符合自己实际情况的选项打"⋅"(除前两个项目外,其他均可多选).然后,根据你的选择,用英语写一篇短文,简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况,并谈谈你的想法.课文课外阅读问卷调查表调查项目选项(1)阅读兴趣A.喜欢B.有点喜欢C.不喜欢(2)阅读时间A.每天阅读B.有时阅读C.很少阅读D.完全不读(3)阅读内容A.小说B.散文C.诗歌D.其他(4)阅读目的A.提高语文水平B.增加知识C.休闲娱乐D.其他(5)阅读书籍A.自己选择B.父母购买C.教师指定D.其他(6)影响阅读的因素A.学习压力太大B.教师没有要求C.没有书籍可读D.其他注意:①无须写标题;②内容必须包含调查表中6个项目,以及关于课外阅读的想法;③文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名;④词数为80左右.参考词汇:fiction小说;essay散文.【分析】这是一份给材料作文.首先要根据自己的情况填写一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表,然后根据自己的选择,用英语写一篇短文,简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况,并谈谈自己的想法.要用第一人称,一般现在时态.文中可加however、so等连词,可使文章更通顺.【解答】参考范文1I like reading very much.I always do some reading in my free time.My favorite books are fictions.On weekends,I often go to the bookstore to buy what I like.My parents buy some books for me as gifts.I think reading is very interesting and helpful.It not only makes merelaxed but also improves my Chinese,especially my writing.However,as students of Grade Nine,we are under great pressure of study,and now it's nearly impossible for us to do some reading after class.So I hope Chinese teachers will give us more time to read.I believe the more we read,the better we'll do in exams.短文写作参考范文2I like reading a little.Sometimes I do some reading just for fun.I enjoy cartoons better than any other kinds of books because they are very interesting.At times I go to the bookstore to buy cartoons,and I also borrow some from my friends.Our teachers are always telling us that reading is important and we can learn a lot by reading.But I'm not interested in the books that our Chinese teacher asks us to read,such as fictions,essays and some science books.I hope she can choose some more interesting books for us.Maybe that will make me like reading.As we all know,interest is the best teacher.【点评】书面表达要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容.在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题.审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等.3.根据中文和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名.某英文报纸以"A Good Sentence to Me"为题征文,请你投稿.请你从下面的三句话中选出你最喜欢的一句,并结合自己的经历谈谈你喜欢它的理由.☆The more we read,the more we will know.☆Helping others is one of the gifts we have to give in life.☆If we're not making mistakes,then we're not doing anything.A Good Sentence to Me"If we're not making mistakes,then we're not doing anything."This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes,we will never experiment.One day,I wanted to cook lunch by myself.But it was really a hard job because I had never cooked before.I didn't know anything about cooking times,and as a result,I overcooked my lunch.It tasted terrible.When my mom came back home,I told her my story.She said,"It's OK.You did it anyway."I think that I had a chance to understand the valuable role that mistakes play in life and making mistakes is the key to learning.【分析】高分句型一This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes,we will never experiment.这是我最喜欢的句子,因为从中我知道如果我们害怕犯错误,我们就永远不会尝试.这是if引导的条件状语从句,主句是一般将来时,从句用的是一般现在时.高分句型二When my mom came back home,I told her my story 当我妈妈回家的时候,我告诉她我的故事.这是when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.【解答】A Good Sentence to Me"If we're not making mistakes,then we're not doing anything."This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes,we will never experiment.【高分句型一,注意状语从句的使用】【开头点明主题】One day,I wanted to cook lunch by myself.But it was really a hard job because I had never cooked before.I didn't know anything about cooking times,and as a result,I overcooked my lunch.It tasted terrible.When my mom came back home,I told her my story【高分句型二,注意时间状语从句的使用】.She said,"It's OK.You did it anyway."【正文部分详细介绍自己的经历】I think that I had a chance to understand the valuable role that mistakes play in life and making mistakes is the key to learning.【结尾紧扣主题】【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then 等.4.信任是一种力量,来自别人的信任弥足珍贵,它值得我们用心守护。
初中英语中考作文叙事六要素(附范文)
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初中英语中考作文叙事六要素(附范文)Test 1 (推荐河南)帮助他人是人类的美好品德,某英语报社专栏以“Helping others”为题,向中学生征稿。
请根据以下信息,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:别人的困难、你帮助别人所做的事和你的感受认识。
要点:1.别人的困难是什么;2.你是怎样帮助别人的;3.你的感受认识。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。
Helping others【审题指导】1. 根据要点提示可知,写作内容包括:讲述别人的困难、自己的帮助经历和感受。
2. 讲述别人的经历用第三人称,时态用过去时;讲述自己的帮助及感受用第一人称,时态用过去时。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称,词数80左右。
【高分范文】Helping othersOne of my classmates got a high fever last week. He had to be in hospital.Yesterday was Saturday. My classmates and I went to see him together. We met at the school gate at 9 :00 in the morning. Then we went to the hospital by bus. I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, he was worried about his study. So I brought him my notebooks and tried my best to answer his questions. I hope he can be better soon.If you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. So, take action to help others, because it will not only make you happy but also bring you others’ help.Test 2 (推荐江西)初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。
2019年中考英语《图表作文》写作技巧
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中考英语《图表作文》写作指导(名师剖析解题技巧,接近实战考题,值得下载练习)1. 动笔之前,认真审题《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。
怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。
在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。
审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。
为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。
根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。
书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。
如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
3. 语言通顺,表达准确(1) 避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2) 多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。
可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。
不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3).注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1) 语态、时态要准确无误。
2) 主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4) 注意冠词用法,例如:He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
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C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图 ( pie chart )
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图表类说明文的写作思路
第一步:开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即conclusion.
常使用的词汇有:
(图表/数据):table, chart, graph,figure(数据)… ; 动词: describe, tell, show, represent … 常用句型:
高考英语基础写作 复习系列
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图表类说明文的类型
一是以表格形式,将
统计的数据或被 说明的事物直接 用表格形式体现 出来,即统计表 (table) 。
Item 1994 1995 1996 1997 1998 Food 65% 60% 48% 42% 35%
clothing 8% 9% 12%l 15% 17%
that… 5. ….is the key facto(r因素)in… 6. It is because of … ____t_h_at…
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第三步:归纳总结或发表评论。
常用表达:
1. in a word,/ in short,(简而言之) / ___g_en_e_r_ally speaking(总的来说)
necessary… 5. T__h_er_e_i_s_n_o__d_o_u_b_t _th_a_t__(毫无疑问) attention must be paid to… 6. I ______(建议)the government take effective measures to … 7. __s_ug_g_e_s_t_, I think(就我来看) the “golden week” should remain,
1.The graph/chart/table above sh…ows 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen
that... 3. As (正如) is shown in the graph, ... 4. It has been shown from the table that…
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倍数的表达:
1.The number /rate has nearly ______d_oubled (是...的两倍), as against that of last year.
2.The number is five times as many as that of….(是… 的5倍)
=The number is foutrimes mthoaren in…(比...多4倍)
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第二步:分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写 (在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式 或对比式以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由)。注意层 次。 即 facts and reasons
增长/减少的表达:
表示上升的动词: rise,increase,climb,go up , …;
表示上升的名词: rise,increase, …;
1.调查时间、调查问题以 及调查对象;
2.男女生在以明星为偶像 方面的差异;
3.“父母”在男女生偶像 中的排序差异;
4.男女生在以伟人为偶像 没有偶像 1% 9% 方面的异同;
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Reasons:
1. The reason why/fo…r is that… 2. One may think of the change as a result of… 3. The change in … largely results _____ from
the fact that… 4.This brings outhe important fact
for… Personally
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2007年广东省英语高考题基础写作
上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在2600名学 生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据:
偶像 女生 伟人 18% 父母 25% 影视明星 50% 体育明星 6%
男生 18% 11% 14% 48%
[写作内容]
根据以上数据,写一篇短 文,包括以下内容:
Recreation 3% 5% 7% 8% 10%
Others 24% 26% 33% 35100% 100% 100%
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
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二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图( graph );
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
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B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图( bar chart / graph );
2. In summary, it is important… 3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion (得出结论)that… 4. Obviously/_A_p_p_a_r_en_t_ly___(很明显地), if we want to…, it is
表示下降的动词: fall,decline,decrease,drop,go down, …;
表示下降的名词: fall,decline,decrease,drop, …;
表示平稳:
remain steady/unchanged…
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常用句型:( Facts) 1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in… 2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in… 3.The rate dropped slightly from 38%in…to 31% in… 4. By comparison with…,it decreased/increased/fell from…to… 5. Statistics show a 20% rise/reduction in traffic accidents compared with last year. 6. The population owning mobile phones increased by 10% in 1999.