2020中考英语作文热点素材范文14-减负

热点14 减负减负无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来了很大的影响。

今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：减负。

【预测题目】（一）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Jack 听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。

请你根据下列内容，用英语写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

内容要点如下：1.过去课后常常做很多作业，甚至周末会上课，睡得很晚；2.现在有很多自由时间读课外书，参观博物馆等；3.周末不上课，可做自己想做的事情；4.晚上有时间看新闻，不必再熬夜；5.补充一两点个人情况。

注意：1.书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：60-80；3.内容要连贯得体。

参考词汇：used to v.过去常常free adj.自由的museum n. 博物馆Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again!__________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Lovely yours,Li Ming 【参考范文】Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have changed a lot. I used to have to do endless homework after class and attend classes even on weekends. Now I have more free time. I can do some reading and visit museums and so on. On weekends, I can follow my own interests such as going for a movie and visiting friends. In the evenings I can watch mews on TY. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier.Lovely yoursLi Ming 【解析】本文是材料作文，关于中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，文章的要点都已经给了出来，因为是对比减负前和减负后的情况，所以要注意时态，减负前用过去时，减负后用一般现在时，描写的时候要以时间为顺序，选择合适的单词或短语、句型把要点的含义恰当的表达出来，考生还需要用恰当的连接词把各要点连接成流畅的文章，同时要变换使用各种句式，丰富文章的结构。

（二）减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。

某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。

请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time MoreMeaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

注意：(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。

(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacyHow to make our spare time more meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级and比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

（一）为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》（减负三十条）。

假如你是李华，请你站在中学生的立场从下面几个方面向你的英国笔友Mike简单介绍其中的内容，并谈谈你自己的看法。

1.作业方面：初中家庭作业不超过90分钟；2.电子产品方面：严禁学生将手机带入课堂；3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；4.你的看法……注意：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce （减少）students' pressure （压力）. Let me tell you something about them.________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Mike,In order to improve students’ heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少）students’ pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them.Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students. Firstly, homework for middle school students should take no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】题目解读：本文是一篇书信作文，作文内容是向笔友介绍《中小学生减负措施》，提示给出三个方面：作业方面、电子产品方面和习惯方面。