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Unit4SectionB(Writing)课件人教版英语八年级上册(1)
Conclusion Closing Sentence总结句
There is something for everyone.
3b Think about some of the best places/ things in your town. Why are they the best?
Best places / things in my town
Body Supporting Details支持性细节
to meet my friends. street performers are the most creative
people. enjoy time the most quietly at one of the
small coffee shops
park. You can read or relax there.
Conclusion
There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
Hamburger Writing
Begin Topic Sentence主旨句
Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends.
most crowded most creative best fastest most quietly
Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends. I always finish my breakfast _(t_h_e_)_f_a_s_te_s_t_on Saturdays because I want to get to Greenwood Park before 10:00 a.m. to meet my friends. The park is _t_h_e__m_o_s_t_c_r_o_w_d__ed__ place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers. Some people think they are boring, but I think they are _t_h_e_m__o_s_t_c_r_ea_t_i_v_e__ people. However, the place where you can enjoy your time _(_th_e_)_m__o_s_t_q_u_i_e_tl_y__ is at one of the small coffee shops near the park. You can read or relax there. There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
There is something for everyone.
3b Think about some of the best places/ things in your town. Why are they the best?
Best places / things in my town
Body Supporting Details支持性细节
to meet my friends. street performers are the most creative
people. enjoy time the most quietly at one of the
small coffee shops
park. You can read or relax there.
Conclusion
There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
Hamburger Writing
Begin Topic Sentence主旨句
Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends.
most crowded most creative best fastest most quietly
Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends. I always finish my breakfast _(t_h_e_)_f_a_s_te_s_t_on Saturdays because I want to get to Greenwood Park before 10:00 a.m. to meet my friends. The park is _t_h_e__m_o_s_t_c_r_o_w_d__ed__ place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers. Some people think they are boring, but I think they are _t_h_e_m__o_s_t_c_r_ea_t_i_v_e__ people. However, the place where you can enjoy your time _(_th_e_)_m__o_s_t_q_u_i_e_tl_y__ is at one of the small coffee shops near the park. You can read or relax there. There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
人教八年级上册 Unit4 Writing(共23张PPT)
201X年 即 将 过 去 ,回 顾一年 来的工 作,即 有成绩 也有不 足,现对 自已一 年来的 工作总 结 。 一 年 来 ,本人在 公司领 导的正 确领导 下,在各 位同事 的热情 帮忙和 大力支 持下, 立 足 本 职 工 作,发奋 学习,勤 奋工作 ,诚恳 待人,团 结协作 ,遵守各 项规章 制度和 工作纪 律 ,不 断 提 高 服务质 量和工 作效率 ,较好的 完成了 全年的 各项工 作任务。以下是本年
Sentence patterns: (1).the+比较级，the+比较级 “越…越…” (2).比较级+and+比较级/more and more+adj. “越来越…”
7. Abilities（能力）
Put these in order:
(1)get ,others,can,better,than,always,he,grades
Lily is one of the best girls in my class.
(2).…the +序数词+最高级
Lucy is the second best girl in my class.
6. Personality（人品）
Useful expressions: friendly helpful popular kind care about others / share everything be there to do/ bring out the best in sb.
appearance(外貌) than me. She is outgoing,but I’m a little quiet.She likes
character(性格)
Sentence patterns: (1).the+比较级，the+比较级 “越…越…” (2).比较级+and+比较级/more and more+adj. “越来越…”
7. Abilities（能力）
Put these in order:
(1)get ,others,can,better,than,always,he,grades
Lily is one of the best girls in my class.
(2).…the +序数词+最高级
Lucy is the second best girl in my class.
6. Personality（人品）
Useful expressions: friendly helpful popular kind care about others / share everything be there to do/ bring out the best in sb.
appearance(外貌) than me. She is outgoing,but I’m a little quiet.She likes
character(性格)
人教版英语八年级上册 Unit 4 作文公开课精品课件
Wish Invitation
列列提提纲纲、写句子
写句子
引出话题 Begining
Hello,everyone,There is a beautiful city in ...Sichuan Province. My hometown is in ... My hometown is one of the oldest.... Do you know a city called...in the .... Let me tell....
写作要求 1. 文章必须包含所有要点，要用上最高级； 2.字数不少于100； 3.书写规范，句式尽量多言化，语言流畅。
My Hometown--Langzhong
in the northeast of Sichuan Provience
Begining… one of the oldest cities
a long history
Introduction
Langzhong Old Town
many places of intersts
Body…. the food
the people
Jialingjiang River and Jingping Mountain
main features
Ending…. I wish my hometown will ... Welcome to Langzhong
Renmin Hospital Poly Cinema
Xinhua Bookstore Walmart Supermarket
阆中是全国历史文化名城，也是5A级旅游 城市，传承文化宣传家乡是我们每个人的 职责，请你根据以下思维导图写一篇以“我 的家乡--阆中”为题发言稿，让更多的人认 识和了解阆中，走进阆中。
人教版八年级上Unit 4 SectionB writing 公开课课件
the fastest
Supporting details. Body
the most creative
the most crowded
How to introduce your favorite place
the most quietly
Ending
Conclusion sentence（结尾句）:
Home to write their opinions with reasons about activity 2 of Self Check. 2. Revise the words and target language of this unit. Finish off the exercises on work book.
当前巴中市正在创建全国文明城市，巴中新闻 综合广播正征集介绍“巴中好去处”的文章。
请为你写一篇文章，描述巴中最值得一去的好 地方。字数60-80字。
Teacher’s words:
East and west, home is the best!
Work hard and try your best to make our hometown more and more beautiful!
Guangwu Mountain
I think the best mountain is_G_u_an_g_w_u_M__ou_n_t_ai_n. Because it is /has _al_l k_i_nd_s_o_f_fl_o_w_e_rs_a_n_d_re_d_l_ea_v_e_s. And it is getting _m_o_r_e_a_nd__m_o_re___ (popular).
(the most interesting performances, a good place to …)
人教版八年级英语上册unit4作文公开课课件
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I think Xinhua book store is the best store in my town, because there are different kinds of books
Conclusion(总结)
That’s something about my town.
Homework
I think Xinhua book store is the best store in my town, because there are different kinds of books
Conclusion(总结)
That’s something about my town.
开门见山
My town
School
restaurant
Writing Clues(写作思路）
Introduction(开头)： What is the name of your town?
I live in……..
Body(主体)：Can you say some of the best places/things in your town
引导的 定语从
something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
句
3b. Think about some of the best places/ things in your town. Why are they the best?
北师大八年级英语上册Unit 4 Writing 课件(共14张PPT)
First, you should have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and
vegetables because they are rich in vitamins. Eat less potato
chips and chocolate because they have too much fat and
Ending Hope
I hope my advice can help you.
What’s your advice for him?
Write down the topic sentence
The Sentence Patterns
1.You should do 2. It's good for you to do 3. You can do 4. You ought to do 5.You'd better do 6. Why not do 7. I advise you to do 8. It's important/necessary/… for you to do
all, in general
Share the composition
作文评分标准（满分：15分）
书写工整，条理清楚， 句式
规范、正 结构及内容 多样
确
完整
（2分） （8分)
(3分)
语言通顺， 总分 流畅
(2分) 15 分
Make a summary
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人教版八年级英语写作课件Unit 4 SectionB 3a-selfcheck
话题 人称 时态
【写作指导】
介绍自己所居住的城镇上最好的地方或事物， 并说明原因。 第一人称
一般现在时
结构 总述→分述
Tips 注意正确运用形容词或副词的最高级形式来 表达
【写作模板】
One possible version:
The People’s Library is the best place to go to on weekends. I always do my homework most quickly on Saturday. Because I want to go to the People's Library to read books as soon as I can. The library is the most relaxing place on weekends because many people read books quietly. Some people think they are boring. But I think they are the most relaxing. There you can read books that you like and spend time with books. There are some books for everyone. After reading books, you can go to the park near the library to relax.
方法指导：
首先，阅读短文，整体把握短文大意。 其次，分析有空格的每个句子，看空格 处应
是形容词还是副词，根据句意确定 单词。 最后，将单词正确的最高级形式填到空格上。 副词前可以不加 the。
人教版英语八年级上册Unit4SectionBWriting课件
主动运用最高级进行描述。 is the most hard-working
右的文章。 nicer------ nicest
2. 能用最高级谈论周围的人和事物； Town Cinema is ________(cheap) than the
Con3clus.ion我(总结们) 的团场的改革发展日新月异，人民的生
Xiaoshanghai restaurant
• Though Xiaoshanghai restaurant is the second biggest restaurant in my town, I think it is the best because it has the best service and most delicious food.
活越来越好，我热爱我的家乡。
Remember:
Try to do everything the best , not the worst
tall cheap nice big happy bad good
taller cheaper nicer bigger happier worse better
Conclusion(总结)
That’s something about my town.
范文
I live in Xiayedi. It’s one of the most
beautiful towns in Shihezi. Now let me tell you something about it. • First,I think Jiangyuan supermarket is the most popular in my town because it has all kinds of things and you can buy the cheapest things when they are on sale.I think Xinhua book store is the best book store because it is the biggest book store in my town. I think Meili clothes store is the most popular because it has the newest style(款式).
右的文章。 nicer------ nicest
2. 能用最高级谈论周围的人和事物； Town Cinema is ________(cheap) than the
Con3clus.ion我(总结们) 的团场的改革发展日新月异，人民的生
Xiaoshanghai restaurant
• Though Xiaoshanghai restaurant is the second biggest restaurant in my town, I think it is the best because it has the best service and most delicious food.
活越来越好，我热爱我的家乡。
Remember:
Try to do everything the best , not the worst
tall cheap nice big happy bad good
taller cheaper nicer bigger happier worse better
Conclusion(总结)
That’s something about my town.
范文
I live in Xiayedi. It’s one of the most
beautiful towns in Shihezi. Now let me tell you something about it. • First,I think Jiangyuan supermarket is the most popular in my town because it has all kinds of things and you can buy the cheapest things when they are on sale.I think Xinhua book store is the best book store because it is the biggest book store in my town. I think Meili clothes store is the most popular because it has the newest style(款式).
人教版八年级上册英语Unit4_写作课优质课件 (共15张PPT)
ASSESSMENT（评价标准）
Structure
Is the article divided intt
（内容）5分
Are all the details stated? If not, add the missing details.
Any mistakes (spelling or grammar)?
• 14、Thank you very much for taking me with you on that splendid outing to London. It was the first time that I had seen the Tower or any of the other famous sights. If I'd gone alone, I couldn't have seen nearly as much, because I wouldn't have known my way about.
the tickets the most quickly there. Also, the
3 service there is the best. Do you like watching movies? Xiongdi Advice
Theater is really a good choice for you!
范文欣赏
1 Topic : The best movie theater I like watching movies very much. There are several movie theaters in our city. But which
eginning
Xiongdi Theater is the most popular one of
人教版英语八年级上册Unit4写作课说课稿
（二）教学反思
在教学过程中，我预见到可能出现的问题或挑战，如学生对一般现在时态的运用不够熟练，词汇量的限制等。针对这些问题，我将采取以下应对措施：
1.对于时态运用的问题，我会设计更多的练习题，让学生在课堂上和课后进行针对性训练，提高他们的运用能力。
2.对于词汇量的问题，我会利用课外资源，推荐一些适合学生阅读的材料，扩大学生的词汇量，同时教授词汇记忆的方法。
对于学习兴趣和学习习惯，学生们对实用性强的课程内容更感兴趣，比如描述日常生活、出行方式等话题。他们喜欢通过互动和实践活动来学习，而传统的课堂讲授可能会让他们感到乏味。因此，在教学过程中，需要通过设计有趣的活动和任务，来激发他们的学习兴趣。
（二）学习障碍
在学习本节课之前，学生们应该已经掌握了基本的日常英语对话，并能运用一般现在时态描述简单的个人信息。然而，他们在学习过程中可能存在的障碍主要包括：
（2）语法：一般现在时态的构成和用法。
（3）功能表达：如何用英语询问和描述他人的出行方式及习惯。
2.教学难点：
（1）一般现在时态的运用：学生容易混淆时态，需要通过大量练习巩固。
（2）语言输出：学生在该环节需要将所学词汇和语法知识运用到实际场景中，对于部分学生来说具有一定的挑战性。
二、学情分析导
（一）学生特点
4.网络资源：利用网络资源，为学生提供更多的学习资料和实际案例，拓宽他们的国际视野。
（三）互动方式
为了促进学生的参与和合作，我计划采用以下互动方式：
1.小组讨论：将学生分成小组，让他们围绕出行方式的主题进行讨论，鼓励他们用英语表达自己的观点和经验。
2.角色扮演：设计一个关于询问和描述出行方式的角色扮演活动，让学生在实际语境中练习英语，提高他们的语言运用能力。
在教学过程中，我预见到可能出现的问题或挑战，如学生对一般现在时态的运用不够熟练，词汇量的限制等。针对这些问题，我将采取以下应对措施：
1.对于时态运用的问题，我会设计更多的练习题，让学生在课堂上和课后进行针对性训练，提高他们的运用能力。
2.对于词汇量的问题，我会利用课外资源，推荐一些适合学生阅读的材料，扩大学生的词汇量，同时教授词汇记忆的方法。
对于学习兴趣和学习习惯，学生们对实用性强的课程内容更感兴趣，比如描述日常生活、出行方式等话题。他们喜欢通过互动和实践活动来学习，而传统的课堂讲授可能会让他们感到乏味。因此，在教学过程中，需要通过设计有趣的活动和任务，来激发他们的学习兴趣。
（二）学习障碍
在学习本节课之前，学生们应该已经掌握了基本的日常英语对话，并能运用一般现在时态描述简单的个人信息。然而，他们在学习过程中可能存在的障碍主要包括：
（2）语法：一般现在时态的构成和用法。
（3）功能表达：如何用英语询问和描述他人的出行方式及习惯。
2.教学难点：
（1）一般现在时态的运用：学生容易混淆时态，需要通过大量练习巩固。
（2）语言输出：学生在该环节需要将所学词汇和语法知识运用到实际场景中，对于部分学生来说具有一定的挑战性。
二、学情分析导
（一）学生特点
4.网络资源：利用网络资源，为学生提供更多的学习资料和实际案例，拓宽他们的国际视野。
（三）互动方式
为了促进学生的参与和合作，我计划采用以下互动方式：
1.小组讨论：将学生分成小组，让他们围绕出行方式的主题进行讨论，鼓励他们用英语表达自己的观点和经验。
2.角色扮演：设计一个关于询问和描述出行方式的角色扮演活动，让学生在实际语境中练习英语，提高他们的语言运用能力。
牛津译林八年级英语上册Unit 4 Do it yourself Grammar 示范公开课教学课件
1 There are many useful books about DIY.
2 DIY is not easy.
3 Instructions are important.
4 Scissors can be dangerous.
5 Sometimes it’ll take time to do a DIY job.
Think, answer and fill
How can we make an instruction more polite?
Please
please
please
Warming-up
Presentation
Warming-up
Presentation
Look and fill
Andrew is not good at DIY. What should he do to avoid making these mistakes next time?
Make a dialogue
Make a dialogue to talk about how to make a lantern.
Warming-up
Who often gives you instructions or advice?
1. Don’t do it without reading instructions.2. Don’t cut the power wire.3. Don’t paint the cat.4. Don’t hit the pipe.
Circle the base form of the verb.
pay more
attention to the pipe
2 DIY is not easy.
3 Instructions are important.
4 Scissors can be dangerous.
5 Sometimes it’ll take time to do a DIY job.
Think, answer and fill
How can we make an instruction more polite?
Please
please
please
Warming-up
Presentation
Warming-up
Presentation
Look and fill
Andrew is not good at DIY. What should he do to avoid making these mistakes next time?
Make a dialogue
Make a dialogue to talk about how to make a lantern.
Warming-up
Who often gives you instructions or advice?
1. Don’t do it without reading instructions.2. Don’t cut the power wire.3. Don’t paint the cat.4. Don’t hit the pipe.
Circle the base form of the verb.
pay more
attention to the pipe
Unit 4 Writing(课件)-八年级英语上册同步精品课堂(牛津广州深圳沈阳通用)
My invention will /can help people live a more comfortable life in the future. （Closing）
• 【一展身手】 • 假设你是吉姆，你想参加“小小发明家”的活动，你的发明是一副神奇的眼镜。
请根据以下提示介绍你的发明。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 • 提示: • 1．一副特别的眼镜，眼镜里有一个微小的摄影机； • 2．可以记录事情，可以帮助老人们记忆事情，帮助学生们学习，帮助减少犯罪。 • 写作本篇作文可能用到的词汇、短语：magic, tiny, camera, record, video,
How fast is it?
How do we fly it?
What kind of power does it use?
描写一项发明需要至少包括这三方面的内容：
Part 1: Introduction : What it is? Part 2: Body: What does it look like?
evidence, crime, put on, help...do..., make...less。
My invention is a pair of magic glasses. This pair of glasses is very special. There is a tiny camera in the glasses. The camera can record things. When old people put on these glasses, they help them remember things. When students put them on, they help students study. We can watch the videos if we want to review lessons in classes. If the police put on these glasses, they can easily find the evidence of the crimes. They help to make crimes less. It’s a great invention.
• 【一展身手】 • 假设你是吉姆，你想参加“小小发明家”的活动，你的发明是一副神奇的眼镜。
请根据以下提示介绍你的发明。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 • 提示: • 1．一副特别的眼镜，眼镜里有一个微小的摄影机； • 2．可以记录事情，可以帮助老人们记忆事情，帮助学生们学习，帮助减少犯罪。 • 写作本篇作文可能用到的词汇、短语：magic, tiny, camera, record, video,
How fast is it?
How do we fly it?
What kind of power does it use?
描写一项发明需要至少包括这三方面的内容：
Part 1: Introduction : What it is? Part 2: Body: What does it look like?
evidence, crime, put on, help...do..., make...less。
My invention is a pair of magic glasses. This pair of glasses is very special. There is a tiny camera in the glasses. The camera can record things. When old people put on these glasses, they help them remember things. When students put them on, they help students study. We can watch the videos if we want to review lessons in classes. If the police put on these glasses, they can easily find the evidence of the crimes. They help to make crimes less. It’s a great invention.
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Read and put the words in the correct place
closing introduction
body
I always have a lot of homework to check, so I am tired. I want to
invent something to help me check the homework.
If you shout “fly”, the car will turn into a plane in 30 seconds.
What does it use to work?
GREEN
Instead of petrol, it uses solar power.
Spidergram(蜘蛛网图）of flying car
Step 3: 谋篇布局
本文属于__说__明___ 文——介绍物品，应采 用_一__般__现__在__人可以用代词
___it____ 代替。
本文可分___三___ 部分：
第__1___段概括介绍发明物及物品特性； 第___2 ___段具体介绍构成和使用方法； 优点放在第__3___段作为文章的结尾。
It is _e_x_e_r_c_is_e__ telephone. It helps people ___ta_l_k_l_e_s_s____. I think it is __g_r_e_e_n___环__保_的___.
What is it？ flying car
What does it look like?
wing
wheel The flying car has two wings and four wheels.
What is special about it?
wing wheel
It can run on land and fly in the air.
How does it work?
FAST AND CONVENIENT
homework-checking machine
名称
请根据表格内容帮老师完成 小发明homeworkchecking machine的介绍
作业批改机
性质特点 环保、便利
结构 优点
是一个小机器人，身体是圆的 有两只手，无脚 不用电池而用太阳能；
帮助老师更快、更容易改完作业
激活词汇
环保 green
Part III Closing: My invention will help……
维度
分 值
细节
得 分
内容
1. 要点齐全，每点1分 （对照 4 蛛网图）
2. 分3段
1. 主谓句结构完整 准确性 4 2. 时态正确（一般现在时）
3. 符合英文表达习惯
1. 使用适当的连词连接上下文 流畅性 2 2. 使用从句
Oxford English 8B
Revision and brain storming
What are they? How can they help people? What do you think of it ?
Convenient, green or funny?
Revision and brain storming
My Invention
Part I MInytorinduvcetinotnio: nInivse.n.t.i.o. n’sItnaism.e...+. feature (性
质特点)
PartII Body:
WIthhaat sd.o.e..s it/lIotoiks.l.ik. e? WIthcaatnis..s.pecial about it? HItocwadnoeussitew..o.rk?
3. 书面整洁
Home work
1. 根据学案上附的评价表在四人小组内分享并评 价作品，推选出优秀作品上交
2. 朗读book A 第60页writing的课文内容 3. 完成book A第60页的蛛网图，设计出自己的小
发明并写出小发明的简介
can help teachers check students’ homework
has two hands
has no feet
round
homework checking machine
small robot
use solar power
Step 2 : 精彩句型，让文章更闪亮
1. 用 instead of 表示“是……，而不是……”
便利 convenient
机器人 robot 圆的 round
电池 battery 太阳能 solar power
脚
foot-feet 改作业
check the homework
作业批改机 homework checking machine
Step 1 : Finish the spidergram(蜘蛛网图）of homework-checking machine (in groups of 4)
试翻译：作业批改机用太阳能而不是电池。 __________________________________
2. 用 “It is +adj. +for+sb. +to do sth.” 表示 “对某人来说，做某事是……的”
试翻译：对于老师来说，批改作业更快、更容易了 ____________________________________
It is Umbrellas for _s_h_o_e_s____.
keep the rain off one’s
It helps to ________________.
shoes
I think it is f_u_n_n_y__/c_o_n_v_e_n_i_e_n_t.
It is Cleaner Cat __b_ru__s_h_e_s___. It helps people _c_le_a_n__t_h_e_f_lo_o_r_. I think it is _fu_n__n_y_/_c_o_n_v_e_n_ie_n_.t