给校报建议信作文写作指导(2020合肥二模作文题)

3. 其次，校报也是一个平台，我们可以分享一些 对发生在校内校外的事情的看法。
platform happening inside and outside school
Besides, the school newspaper is also a platform, where we students can share our opinions about something happening inside and outside school.
I am Li Hua, a regular/royal/devoted reader of the school newspaper. Learning/ Knowing/ Hearing that you are collecting reader’s suggestions, I am very delighted/ writing to voice/ express/ give my opinions.
8. 如果你能把我的建议考虑在内的话，我将感激 不尽。
take… into consideration/ account
I’d appreciate it if my advice can be taken into consideration/ account.
连句成篇：
Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a regular/royal/devoted reader of the school newspaper. Learning/ Knowing/ Hearing that you are collecting readers’ suggestions, I am very delighted/ writing to voice/ express/ give my opinions. When it comes to the school newspaper, there is no denying that it is wonderful, which offers us large-scale knowledge ranging from foreign history, politics to geography. Besides, the school newspaper is also a platform, where we students can share our opinions about something happening inside and outside school. Of course, the Stories Behind Culture section/ part is my favorite. The reasons why I like it best/most are as follows. First, it carries/ covers/ refers to
contribute a lot to our understanding of …
Last but not least, as a Chinese student, I think it would be better if you could carry/ refer to/ cover / add some articles about Chinese culture, which will make your newspaper more appealing/ which will contribute a lot to our understanding of Chinese culture.
2.当提到校报，不容否认的是，校报是极好的 ， 它给我们提供了大范围的知识，从外国文化、历史、 政治到地理。
when it comes to… there is no denying that large-scale range from…to…
When it comes to the school newspaper, there is no denying that it is wonderful, which offers us large-scale knowledge ranging from foreign history, politics to geography.
6.其次，通过这些故事，我们能对不同的文化有一 个更好的了解，这能丰富我们的知识，扩大我们的 视野。
have a good knowledge of have a good command of have a good grasp of…
enrich
broaden our horizons
Second, we can have a better knowledge of the differences among different cultures through the stories, which will enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons.
I’d appreciate it if my advice can be taken into consideration/ account.
Yours Li Hua
学生习作鉴赏：
7. 最后但最重要的是，作为一个中国学生，我觉 得如果能增加一些关于中国文化的介绍将会更好， 这将会使得你们的报纸更有吸引力/有助于对中国 文化更好的了解。
carry/cover/ add / refer to
make your newspaper more attractive/ appealing
假定你是李华，正在英国一所国际学校 交流学习，该校的校报SUNSHINE请你 给该校报编辑写封信，内容包括：
⒈简要评价
⒉最喜欢的栏目（如：Stories Behind culture）并简述理由； ⒊建议增加中国文化的介绍。
1.我是李华，校报的一个忠实的读者，从校报 （SUNSHINE）上了解到你们正在征集读者的意 见，我很高兴/我正在写信表达我的观点。
I like the Stories Behind Culture section/ part most mainly for two reasons.
5.首先，它涵盖/涉及到了一些外国的历史和文化 故事，加强/增加了我们对外国文化的了解。
carry/ cover/ refer to
strength/ build up/ add to have a good knowledge of/ have a good command of/ have a good grasp of…
连句成篇：
some history and culture from foreign countries, strengthening our understanding of foreign cultures/ making us have a good command of foreign cultures. Second, we can have a better knowledge of the differences among different cultures through the stories, which will surely enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons. Last but not least, as a Chinese student, I think it would be better if you could carry/ cover/ refer to/ add some articles about Chinese culture, which will make your newspaper more appealing/ which will contribute a lot to our understanding of Chinese culture.
First, it carries/ covers/ refers to some history and culture from foreign countries, strengthening our understanding of foreign cultureswenku.baidu.com making us have a good command of foreign cultures.
a regular/ royal/devoted reader/fan
learning/ knowing/ hearing that…
collect the suggestions of readers
I am very delighted to/ writing to voice/ express/ give my opinions
4. 当然，Stories Behind Culture栏目是我最喜欢 的，主要有两点原因：
section/ part
Of course, the Stories Behind Culture (section/ part) is my favorite. The reasons why I like it best/most are as follows.