图表类说明文(1)

(facts) 二，描述数据差异 1 The number of people having cars accounts for /makes up 60% 2.On the top of the list is…,which accounts for 60%. 占比重高的是…，占……60%。 3.At the bottom is ……， making up 20%. 占最低比重的是……，占20%。 4.A is second to B. A仅次于B。 5.A is ranked/rated first, followed by B at 30% and C at 25%. A占的比重最高，紧随其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C 6.The number of …doubled compared with that of last year 7. The number of…is four times as big as …… 8. The number of …is almost the same as ……
outline: introduction: 近年越来越多的人使用手机
描述1997-2004数据增长的对比、差异 facts ： 科技，收入，方便联系…… reasons： 你的观点 conclusion：
图表类说明文的写作步骤
第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即Introduction
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3.Reasons— • There are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, people’s income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make people’s communication easy and convenient .
• 第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及变化趋势，抓重点 抓特征抓规律，不能事无巨细，一一列出. 主体部分往往包含 facts and reasons （ Facts）一，描述变化趋势 1.The number of private cars increased /rose suddenly/rapidly/sharply/dramatically(急剧） /considerably（大量）/slowly/gradually/slightly（轻 微） (from …to…) 2.The number of private cars increased by 10% in 1999, reaching 20000. 3.The number dropped/decreased/declined/went down slightly from 38%in 2005 to 31% in 2006 4.The number remained steady/stable/constant between……and…从……到…期间，数量保持稳定！
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第三步： 归纳总结或发表评论。
1.In a word,/ In short,/In conclusion, /In summary, we can say /conclude/predict that…… 2.As far as I’m concerned,/ As for me,/ For my part,/ From my point of view,/ in my opinion, I think it necessary to….. 3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion/ it can be concluded (得出结论）that… 第三步 总结归纳 From what has been disscussed above, it can be estimated that the number of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.
What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do 目前学生择业状况 男女学生就业选择的区别 我的观点
What Jobs Do College Students Want to Do It goes without saying that college students have a clear idea about their future occupation. Boys are to some extend different from girls in their choice .As can be seen from the picture, the most striking contrast is in the occupation of teaching: 45% of girls students would like to do the job. What boys like to do most is to become managers (40%) and the second largest group is to be businessmen (30%). Girls also like to pursue these two professions, with a percentage of 15% and 25% respectively choosing these two jobs. 15% of boys want to become lawyers while 10% of girls preferring this professions.
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As can be seen from the graph, great changes in car ownership have taken place in China in the past ten years.
第一步 点明主题 According to the above chart, we know more and more people have mobile phones in recent years. 第二步 阐明图表数据 说明原因 In 1997, only ten people in a hundred had mobile phones in some city. In 1999, the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. The people owning mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997.Three years later, 80 percent of the citizens had the magic tools. There are some reasons for the rise in the number of people with mobile phones. Firstly, the technology of making mobile phones is changing rapidly, which leads to the drop in the prices. Secondly, people’s income has been increasing . As a consequence, they have more options. Thirdly, being useful in daily life, mobile phones make people’s communication easy and convenient . 第三步 总结归纳 From what has been discussed above, it can be estimated(估计） that the number of the mobile phone holders will reach a new height with the further advance of science and technology.
某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。
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According to the above chart, we know more and more people have owned mobile phones in recent years.
某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。根据所给图表， 简要描述某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长情况，并分析 其增长原因。
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In 1997, only ten people in a hundred had mobile phones in the city In 1999, the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. The people owning mobile phones in 2001 were 5 times as many as those in 1997. Three years later, the number of the citizens owning the magic tools increased rapidly, making up 80 percent .
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下图为某城市近年每百人中手机用户增长示意图。 根据所给图表，简要描述某城市近年每百人中手 机用户增长情况，并试分析其增长原因。
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审题：文字信息+图表数据
人称: 第三人称 时态: 一般过去时 现在完成时 要点: 概述增长现象 具体数据变化 原因
常用句型： 1.The graph/chart/table above shows/describes/ reflects.. 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that.../we can see that …. 3.As is shown in the graph, ... 4.According to the table/chart /graph, ....
Reasons:
1. The reason why/for…is that… 2. It is because /because of … that … 3. We may consider the change as a result of... 4.….is the key factor (因素) contributing to… 5.The reasons why …….are as follows. / There are plenty of reasons for the change. Firstly,… secondly, … Thirdly….