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The following is a letter to the editor of the Roseville Gazette.
Despite opposition from some residents of West Roseville, the arguments in favor of merging the townships of Roseville and West Roseville are overwhelming. First, residents in both townships are confused about which authority to contact when they need a service; for example, the police department in Roseville receives many calls from residents of West Roseville. This sort of confusion would be eliminated with the merger. Second, the savings in administrative costs would be enormous, since services would no longer be duplicated: we would have only one fire chief, one tax department, one mayor, and so on. And no jobs in city government would be lost-employees could simply be reassigned. Most importantly, the merger will undoubtedly attract business investments as it did when the townships of Hamden and North Hamden merged ten years ago.

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In conclusion, I am somewhat persuaded by this author's line of reasoning. The argument would be strengthened if the author were to consider and rule out other significant factors that might have caused the increase in visits to the local art museum.4. In response to a coincidence between calling revenues and delays in manufacturing, the report recommends replacing the manager of the purchasing department. The grounds for this action are twofold. First, the delays are traced to poor planning in purchasing metals. Second, the purchasing manager's lack of knowledge of the properties of metals is thought to be the cause of the poor planning. It is further recommended that the position of the purchasing manager be filled by a scientist from the research division and that the current purchasing manager be reassigned to the sales department. In support of this latter recommendation, the report states that the current purchasing manager's background in general business, psychology, and sociology equip him for this new assignment. The recommendations advanced in the report are questionable for two reasons.To begin with, the report fails to establish a causal connection between the falling revenues of the company and the delays in manufacturing. The mere fact that falling revenues coincide with delays in manufacturing is insufficient to conclude that the delays caused the decline in revenue. Without compelling evidence to support the causal connection between these two events, the report's recommendations are not worthy of consideration.Second, a central assumption of the report is that knowledge of the properties of metals is necessary for planning in purchasing metals. No evidence is stated in the report to support this crucial assumption. Moreover, it is not obvious that such knowledge would be required to perform this task. Since planning is essentially a logistical function, it is doubtful that in-depth knowledge of the properties of metals would be helpful in accomplishing this task.In conclusion, this is a weak argument. To strengthen the recommendation that the manager of the purchasing department be replaced, the author would have to demonstrate that the falling revenues were a result of the delays in　manufacturing. Additionally, the author would have to show that knowledge of the properties of metals is a prerequisite for planning in purchasing metals.5. A newspaper publisher is recommending that the price of its paper, The Mercury, be reduced below the price of a competing newspaper, The Bugle. This recommendation responds to a severe decline in circulation of The Mercury during the 5-year period following the introduction of The Bugle. The publisher's line of reasoning is that lowering the price of The Mercury will increase its readership, thereby increasing profits because a wider readership attracts more advertisers. This line of reasoning is problematic in two critical respects.While it is clear that increased circulation would make the paper more attractive to potential advertisers, it is not obvious that lowering the subscription price is the most effective way to gain new readers. The publisher assumes that price is the only factor that caused the decline in readership. But no evidence is given to support this claim. Moreover, given that The Mercury was the established local paper, it is unlikely that such a mass exodus of its readers would be explained by subscription price alone.There are many other factors that might account for a decline in The Mercury's popularity. For instance, readers might be displeased with the extent and accuracy of its news reporting, or the balance of local to other news coverage. Moreover, it is possible The Mercury has recently changed editors, giving the paper a locally unpopular political perspective. Or perhaps readers are unhappy with the paper's format, the timeliness of its feature articles, its comics or advice columns, the extent and accuracy of its local event calendar, or its rate of errors.In conclusion, this argument is weak because it depends on an oversimplified assumption about the causal connection between the price of the paper and its popularity. To strengthen the argument, the author must identify and explore relevant factors beyond cost before concluding that lowering subscription prices will increase circulation and, thereby, increase advertising revenues.6. In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is the industrial center of the region, providing most of the region's manufacturing jobs and enjoying a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, efforts are currently underway to expand the economic base o' the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios couldsupport all types of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, it's unlikely that Helios will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus or research and development of innovative technologies.Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will have to either attract new workers to Helios or Day the existing workers higher wages in order to lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies seeking to relocate.In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking new business opportunities to choose Helios。

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In this argument, the arguer concludes that . The arguer bases the argument on . The arguer claims despite this that, . This argument is unconvincing because the arguer ignores several possible reasons other than for these discrepancies.First of all, the survey only . It is possible that . For example, perhaps . A survey that covers only is hardly convincing that.原因Secondly, it is entirely possible that . If . Ignoring further weakens the argument. Simply does not necessarily mean that .时间Furthermore, it is possible that . Failing to address this possibility further weakens the argument.地点In summary, this argument is based on a very narrow study of only . To strengthen the argument, the arguer needs to directly before jumping to the conclusion that .must supply clear and direct evidence other than other factors that ------ was responsible for must also provide evidence thatunadvised imprudent indiscreetunconvincing unpersuasive be not convincingunsubstantiated unsound( unwarranted无根据的)ignore fail to overlookbase on rely on(upon) dependent on according toIt is possible(probable) that It is possible for sb to do sththere are some possibilities that there is some possibilities thatIt is likely that sb is likely to do sth be less inclined to dobe bound to be certain to do definitely be sure of for certain must be mean to be equivalent to+n represent the same asA does not necessarily indicate that Btake into account consider think about account for(对…做出解释)moreover what’s more besides, furthermore make sure that(确认)however，whereas（然而，反之）nonetheless(尽管如此；但是)，support strengthen reinforce bolster(支持) prove testify attest(证明)In this argument, sb concludes that 中间结论and, in turn 最后结论.（sb recommends that 中间结论sb also claims that 最后结论. ）To support these assertions, the author cites the fact that 原因和假设. However, the argument relies on a series of unproven assumptions and is therefore unconvincing as it stands.（However, the argument relies on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions, which render it unconvincing as it stands.）To begin with, the argument assumes that 第一个假设得到的结论. Yet, the fact that 假设hardly suffices to infer any 结论. The author provides no evidence that this is the case. For that matter, 结论would be undermined.Secondly, even if 上面的假设和结论成立. perhaps ;or perhaps存在其他可能. In either event, the author could not justifiably rely on the mere fact that 假设to support the claim that 结论. (因素过于单一考虑欠佳)【Even assuming that 上面的假设和结论成立. besides, 其他可能性. Without ruling out these and other reasons why 中间结论，sb cannot convince me that 文中的假设和结论, let alone 最后结论.】Furthermore, in asserting that 最后一个假设, the author overlooks the possibilities that 存在的其他可能性.Without ruling out this possible scenario, the author cannot convince me that 最后一个假设得出的结论.In conclusion, the recommendation for (that 结论) is not well supported. To convince me that 结论the author must provide clear evidence that 假设和结论的直接关系. To better evaluate the recommendation, I would need more information about 其他影响因素. (其他影响因素would be useful to know)The fact that 假设accomplishes nothing toward bolstering the recommendation.产品盈利论证——没有考虑人们喜好和市场竞争Even assuming that residents are strongly interested in the products, the recommendation rests on two additional assumptions: (1)that this interest will continue in the foreseeable future; (2) the residents will prefer sth over other merchants that sell similar products. Until the author substantiates both assumptions Iremain unconvinced that 某产品would be profitable.某一现象趋势的因果论证某件事的变化趋势is not necessarily due to 原因. It is entirely possible that 那样变化, but 调查时间内其他原因. Since the article fails to account for this alternative explanation for 变化趋势，the author cannot make any sound recommendations to 某事或人based on that 变化.错误类比论证与结尾——地区差异Nor can the author justify 一个地区状况on the basis of 另一个地区状况or perhaps 区别or perhaps 区别in short, the author cannot defend the recommended course of action on the basis of what might be a false analogy between two (类比两个地方)In sum(summary), the argument relies on what might amount to two analogies between as well as to strengthen the argument, the author should provide better evidence of and clear evidence that even with this additional evidence, in order to properly evaluate the argument I would need to know why what。

Argument非常规写作模板

Argue魔板，建议大家根据自己语言习惯修改，中间有很多重复的地方，修改后就是自己的了Beginning：In this argument the XXX reaches the conclusion that ... The basis for this recommendation is the survey among ... that indicates ... An additional reason given to support this recommendation is that ... while this argument has some merit, further strict scrutiny reveals that the conclusion lacks credibility because of the XXX, XXX, and XXX Survey：Firstly, the author provides no evidence to justify that the procedures of the survey referred to in the argument is through randomly sampling, thus weakening the evidence, I have good reason to doubt whether the respondents of the survey are representative of the overall group of people who… That is to say, it is entirely possible that those who…were more likely to respond the survey or even to be chosen to respond. In addition, no details such as how the poll was conducted and what percentage responded have been indicated. In short, without more specific information about the survey showing its statistical reliability, the author cannot rely on it to draw any convincing conclusion about…The argument also relies on the assumption that customers who did not complain were actually satisfied with… However, the evidence offered is insufficient to support that claim. It is completely possible that people express their discontent simply by not returningFirst, the statistics cited in the editorial may be misleading because the total number ofThe argument depends on the assumption that…. While it is true that…it is not necessarily true of everyone.The most obvious reasoning error in this argument is the author’s use of evidence pertaining to particular/ general group as the basis for a general/ particular group. Without evidence from control experiment, it is equally possible that… or that… If so, these facts’s argument to a large extent.Thirdly, even with the assumption stated above, the forecast that…is still open to uncertainty. The author fails to consider and rule out other criteria for determining the…, such as… Lacking better evidence that… is the only possible factor to influence… it is … was caused by the factors discussed above rather than…The author fails to establish the causal relationship between A and B. The line of reasoning is the passage is that XXX can XXX because XXX. The sequence of these events, in itself, does not suffice to prove that the former caused the later one. No additional evidence linking the two events is offered in the argument, thus leaving theThe author commits a fallacy of false analogy by simply assuming that if A do as B do, A will have the same result as B. Admittedly, there is certain similarity between A and B,however, without better evidence, the stated similarity between A and B can be insufficient to warrant the conclusion that A will suffer the same fate (achieve the same result) as B’s. It is possible that there exist crucial factors that can differentiate A and B. If true, these differences might cause totally opposite consequences even A adopt the identical’s assertion is seriously flawed.Furthermore, the author presents a false dilemma by imposing an either-or choice between A and B, which in fact are not mutually exclusive alternatives. It is entirely possible that the company could adopt/do A and B at the same time, thus making a better result. In addition, the most effective solution may contain a more complex one of other factors--such as. In any case, the author provides no justification for mutually exclusiveThe author’s conclusion that…will remain its effects in XXX relies on the unjustifiable assumption that all conditions on which their effectiveness depends remain unchanged over space and time. However, sometime is sufficient for a significant change to take place in the overall economy and market condition. Without taking these possibilities intoThe author turns on the questionable assumption that…can…without sacrifices. The argument fails to consider the project might bring not only benefits but also harm (cost) to… Meanwhile, it fails to weigh such benefits against the corresponding cost. Lacking a complete breakeven analysis, the author cannot draw any further conclusion about the …and the projection/decision/ should be reconsidered.T he author unjustifiably relies on the studies that correlate … and… because he does not provide any evidence to confirm the reliability of the studies. While the expr ession “studies suggest” might lend credibility to the statement, this expression is so vague that actually renders the claims worthless, in the absence of any concrete resources about them. conclusion：Based on the reasons I listed above, the argument is logically flawed and therefore unwarranted (not persuasive) as it stands. To bolster it, the author should provide better evidence that (1)… (2)… To better assess the argument, I would also need to know…以下为常考论题的论点Government:1 what are missing in the growth is the good corporate governance and a long-term sustainable business model from an environmental perspective. As the cases of Enron, WorldCom, Andersen and others demonstrate, strong corporate governance is vital for a company’s survival and for the well-being of its stakeholders.2 in this world of bubbles, investors see central banks armed with giant pins they are ready to use. Government assumes the responsibility for tightening monetary policy that helps to fuel the global booms. Since no investors want to see the miserable pop that the NASDAQ Composite Index lost three-quarters if its value from 2000 to 2002.Environment:1 for the long term, if we want to help economy reach newer heights and at the same time minimize the impact on our environment to ensure our survival, every corporation, government, and culture will need to focus very strongly on environment issues.#cooperation governance：One thing is for sure, few managers/entrepreneurs like to face the fact the company has a problem with ethics/corruption. But ethics and corruption matter to most customers and stockholders. In a recent Gallup poll, 44% of those surveyed thought most companies to be lacking inspection. More important, 55% customers claimed business ethics such as its credit standing and environmental concerns takes precedence over the cheap price in deciding which produces to buy.# Pressured from so many angles and under a crush of information from televisions, radios and Internet, can people calm down and pick out what they really want?# In many Internet mailboxes, including some easily accessed by children, what used to be a trickle of unsolicited porn advertisements has turned into a torrent.# Utah passed a law aimed at prosecuting companies that, without being asked, send Internet pornography into Utah homes, where children can view it.# Try to build a culture that focuses on “virtuousness”-institutionalized compassion, forgiveness, and integrity. Studies of 16 different industries show that virtuous organizations enjoy higher levels of productivity, quality, profitability, customer satisfaction, and employee engagement.#although we may not have conclusive scientific evidence of a cause-effect relationship, ample facts establish a significant correlation. Only by way of an international effort, have we made some progress.ISSUE 新题（留出空白供大家写观点）1. The primary responsibility of citizens is to obey their nation's civil and criminal laws.2. Although most people wish to live long lives, attempting to significantly extend the average human life span would be a mistake. If achieved, this would place an enormous burden on resources, lowering the quality of life for everyone.3. Lying should be avoided primarily because it harms people's ability to live togther in society.4.Each generation's culture achievements--such as those in music, art ，or literature--representimprovements on the cultural achievements of previous generations.5. Public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by.6. The increasing popularity of video games and Internet suggests that consumers now want a more interactive entertainment experience than books, movies, and television can provide.7. Only by traveling outside the country of one's birth can one understand the world and its people.8. Because it is in the best interest of a society to promote integrity and moral behavior, governments should censor television and radio programs for offensive language and behavior.9. Despite the violence and stereotypes present in many popular forms of entertainment created for children (such as books, movies, and video games), we should still allow children to experience this kind of entertainment.10. Portrayals of violence have proven commericially successful in television programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therefore, those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate violence into their product。

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Inthis argument ，the author concludes/recommends that ….To support this conclusion/recommendation,the author points out/cites … .In addition/On the basis of this,the author also cites that … .This argument suffers from several critical/logical flaws,which render it unconvincing as it stands. /PE(paragraph ending)：…,the author cannotexpect us to take seriously the claim/convince me that …contribute to … /ruling out such/other possibilities/explanations/accounting for …,the author cannot justifiably conclude that …/ justify the claim/convince me that …/make any sound recommendation to …… before I can accept theauthor’s final conclusion that …(接Perhaps …)If so,this fact/Either scenario/Any of these scenarios,if ture, would significantly/seriously undermine/weaken (the arguer’s contention /conclusion that) …(1)A threshold problem with the argument invloves the statistical reliability ofthe survey because the size of the sample is too small to be sufficient.Also,the sample might be unrepresentative of … as a whole.Without a sufficiently representative sample,the author cannot draw any conclusion whatsoever on the basis of the study. (小样本、代表性)(2) …are rarely sufficient to establisha general conclusion. From the survey quotedinthis argument,we findnosignof suchprocedures for randomsamplingsand have good reasons to doubt if the sample is representative enough to reflect the general situation as a whole.Besides,…provides no information about what percentage of … responded to the surveys.The lower the percentage,the less reliable the results of the surveys/study ’s conclusion. (随机性、代表性)结尾总结用author’s conclusion depends,I would need more information about the size/randomness of the study ’s sample.The author provides no information concerning/omits to inform us about A,B,C and D.It is impossible to conclude without comparing the two groups subjects.For example, ….Without evidence of the study ’s methodological (and statistical) reliability, the author cannot rely on the study to draw any firm conclusion.(1)A is not necessarily due to B.Perhaps ….Since the argument fails to account for this alternative explanation for …,the author cannot …(2)The author unfairly attributes A to B/assumes that A were attributable tocking evidence to confirm this assumption,it is entirely possible that ….Or,perhaps ….After all,the autho r provides no evidence that ….PE.(1)A does not necessarily indicate that B.Perhaps …., ….PE.(2)The argument relies/depends on the (unsubstantiated) assumption that …/ Based on the fact that A the author infers that B.However,/Yet this is not necessarily the case.Perhaps ….If so,this fact would significantly undermine …(3)The fact that … lends no/little credible/scant support to …(4)A probleminvolves the definitionof ….The author fails todefine this critical term.If … is defined as … ,then … .In short, without a clear definition of … it is impossible to assess the strength of the argument.The arguer uses previous experience to illustrate that now …,ignoring t he factor of time which perhaps can change everything including … .Eg:The economic situation becomes worse;The worsening economic situationOne problemwhy I disagree with the argument is that it is unwarranted toinfer from the success of B that A will also succeed by following the same format. Perhaps … .In short,lacking evidence that conditions on the … are relevantly similar,the author cannot convince me on the basis of A’s experience that the action would be effective in B. Eg:economic situation,regionThe argument suffers from “either-or ” reasoning.Based on t he fact that … ,the author unfairly concludes that … .However,the author overlooks the possibility …Another problemwiththe argument is that it overlooks other factors that /the possibility that A is not the only factor affectingB.For instance,perhaps entirely possible that …does in fact serve to ….PE.……/ItisThe author appreciates sb’s strong commitment to sth to some extent. However,we know the fact that to make a commitment is one thing,to achieve it is far more difficult.There is no indication that they might fulfill their promise.结尾： In sum,the argument is unconvincing as it stands/not well supported.To bolster it,the author must provide clear evidence that …The author must also show that ….To better assess/evaluate the argument we would need figures …/more information about ….We should also need to know …。

Argumentative writing

Write
an argumentative 200 word essay on one of the following: Should English Majors be given more class time with the foreign teachers? Should Chinese universities include sports classes as part of every university education? Should Chinese university students have a curfew? Should Chinese freshmen have to complete army training?
An
argument is just a conversation between people who don‟t agree, there are always at least two sides. For example, „I think University curfews are good because….‟ or „I think university curfews are bad because...‟ Therefore, when we are writing an argument, we must always be responding to the other „side‟ so we can become part of the conversation. So, instead of starting with “I believe”, we start with “they believe” and follow with “I disagree because...”

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Sample Essay Responses and Reader Commentary for the Argument TaskNote: All responses are reproduced exactly as written, including errors, misspellings, etc., if any.Essay Response — Score 6While it may be true that the Mason City government ought to devote more money to riverside recreational facilities, this author's argument does not make a cogent case for increased resources based on river use. It is easy to understand why city residents would want a cleaner river, but this argument is rife with holes and assumptions, and thus, not strong enough to lead toincreased funding.Citing surveys of city residents, the author reports city resident's love of water sports. It is not clear, however, the scope and validity of that survey. For example, the survey could have asked residents if they prefer using the river for water sports or would like to see a hydroelectric dam built, which may have swayed residents toward river sports. The sample may not have been representative of city residents, asking only those residents who live upon the river. The survey may have been 10 pages long, with 2 questions dedicated to river sports. We just do not know. Unless the survey is fully representative, valid, and reliable, it can not be used to effectively back the author's argument.Additionally, the author implies that residents do not use the river for swimming, boating, and fishing, despite their professed interest, because the water is polluted and smelly. While a polluted, smelly river would likely cut down on river sports, a concrete connection between the resident's lack of river use and the river's current state is not effectively made. Though there have been complaints, we do not know if there have been numerous complaints from a wide range of people, or perhaps from one or two individuals who made numerous complaints. To strengthen his/her argument, the author would benefit from implementing a normed survey asking a wide range of residents why they do not currently use the river.Building upon the implication that residents do not use the river due to the quality of the river's water and the smell, the author suggests that a river clean up will result in increased river usage. If theriver's water quality and smell result from problems which can be cleaned, this may be true. For example, if the decreased water quality and aroma is caused by pollution by factories along the river, this conceivably could be remedied. But if the quality and aroma results from the natural mineral deposits in the water or surrounding rock, this may not be true. There are some bodies of water which emit a strong smell of sulphur due to the geography of the area. This is not something likely to be affected by a clean-up. Consequently, a river clean up may have no impact upon river usage. Regardless of whether the river's quality is able to be improved or not, the author does not effectively show a connection between water quality and river usage.A clean, beautiful, safe river often adds to a city's property values, leads to increased tourism and revenue from those who come to take advantage of the river, and a better overall quality of life for residents. For these reasons, city government may decide to invest in improving riverside recreational facilities. However, this author's argument is not likely significantly persuade the city government to allocate increased funding.Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 6This insightful response identifies important assumptions and thoroughly examines their implications. The proposal to spend more on riverside recreational facilities rests on three questionable assumptions, namely:∙that the survey provides a reliable basis for budget planning∙that the river’s pollution and odor are the only reasons for its limited recreational use∙that efforts to clean the water and remove the odor will be successfulBy showing that each assumption is highly suspect, this essay demonstrates the weakness of the entire argument. For example, paragraph 2 points out that the survey might not have used a representative sample, might have offered limited choices, and might have contained very few questions on water sports.Paragraph 3 examines the tenuous connection between complaints and limited use of the river for recreation. Complaints about water quality and odor may be coming from only a few people and, even if such complaints are numerous, other completely different factors may be much more significant in reducing river usage. Finally, paragraph 4 explains that certain geologic features may prevent effective river clean-up. Details such as these provide compelling support.In addition, careful organization ensures that each new point builds upon the previous ones. For example, note the clear transitions at the beginning of paragraphs 3 and 4, as well as the logical sequence of sentences within paragraphs (specifically paragraph 4).Although this essay does contain minor errors, it still conveys ideas fluently. Note the effective word choices (e.g., "rife with . . . assumptions" and "may have swayed residents"). In addition, sentences are not merely varied; they also display skillful embedding of subordinate elements. For example, note the sustained parallelism in the first sentence of the concluding paragraph.Since this response offers cogent examination of the argument and conveys meaning skillfully, it earns a score of 6.Essay Response — Score 5The author of this proposal to increase the budget for Mason City riverside recreational facilities offers an interesting argument but to move forward on the proposal would definitely require more information and thought. While the correlations stated are logical and probable, there may be hidden factors that prevent the City from diverting resources to this project.For example, consider the survey rankings among Mason City residents. The thought is that such high regard for water sports will translate into usage. But, survey responses can hardly be used as indicators of actual behavior. Many surveys conducted after the winter holidays reveal people who list exercise and weight loss as a top priority. Yet every profession does not equal a new gym membership. Even the wording of the survey results remain ambiguous and vague. While water sports may be among the residents' favorite activities, this allows for many other favorites. What remains unknown is the priorities of the general public. Do they favor these water sports above a softball field or soccer field? Are they willing to sacrifice the municipal golf course for better riverside facilities? Indeed the survey hardly provides enough information to discern future use ofimproved facilities.Closely linked to the surveys is the bold assumption that a cleaner river will result in increased usage. While it is not illogical to expect some increase, at what level will people begin to use the river? The answer to this question requires a survey to find out the reasons our residents use or do not use the river. Is river water quality the primary limiting factor to usage or the lack of docks and piers? Are people more interested in water sports than the recreational activities that they are already engaged in? These questions will help the city government forecast how much river usage will increase and to assign a proportional increase to the budget.Likewise, the author is optimistic regarding the state promise to clean the river. We need to hear the source of the voices and consider any ulterior motives. Is this a campaign year and the plans a campaign promise from the state representative? What is the timeline for the clean-up effort? Will the state fully fund this project? We can imagine the misuse of funds in renovating the riverside facilities only to watch the new buildings fall into dilapidation while the state drags theriver clean-up.Last, the author does not consider where these additional funds will be diverted from. The current budget situation must be assessed to determine if this increase can be afforded. In a sense, the City may not be willing to draw money away from other key projects from road improvements to schools and education. The author naively assumes that the money can simply appear without forethought on where it will come from.Examining all the various angles and factors involved with improving riverside recreational facilities, the argument does not justify increasing the budget. While the proposal does highlight a possibility, more information is required to warrant any action.Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 5Each paragraph in the body of this perceptive essay identifies and examines an unstated assumption that is crucial to the argument. The major assumptions discussed are:∙that a survey can accurately predict behavior∙that cleaning the river will, in itself, increase recreational usage∙that state plans to clean the river will actually be realized∙that Mason City can afford to spend more on riverside recreational facilitiesSupport within each paragraph is both thoughtful and thorough. For example, paragraph 2 points out vagueness in the wording of the survey: Even if water sports rank among the favorite recreational activities of Mason City residents, other sports may still be much more popular. Thus, if the first assumption proves unwarranted, the argument to fund riverside facilities — rather than soccer fields or golf courses — becomes much weaker. Paragraph 4 considers several reasons why river clean-up plans may not be successful (the plans may be nothing more than campaign promises or funding may not be adequate). Thus, the weakness of the third assumption undermines the argument that river recreation will increase and riverside improvements will be needed at all.Instead of dismissing each assumption in isolation, this response places them in a logical order and considers their connections. Note the appropriate transitions between and within paragraphs, clarifying the links among the assumptions (e.g., "Closely linked to the surveys …" or "The answer to this question requires...").Along with strong development, this response also displays facility with language. Minor errors in punctuation are present, but word choices are apt and sentences suitably varied in pattern and length. The response uses a number of rhetorical questions, but the implied answers are always clear enough to support the points being made.Thus, the response satisfies all requirements for a score of 5, but its development is not thorough or compelling enough for a 6.Essay Response — Score 4The problem with the arguement is the assumption that if the Mason River were cleaned up, that people would use it for water sports and recreation. This is not necessarily true, as people may rank water sports among their favorite recreational activities, but that does not mean that those same people have the financial ability, time or equipment to pursue those interests.However, even if the writer of the arguement is correct in assuming that the Mason River will be used more by the city's residents, the arguement does not say why the recreational facilities need more money. If recreational facilities already exist along the Mason River, why should the city allot more money to fund them? If the recreational facilities already in existence will be used more in the coming years, then they will be making more money for themselves, eliminating the need for the city government to devote more money to them.According to the arguement, the reason people are not using the Mason River for water sports is because of the smell and the quality of water, not because the recreational facilitiesare unacceptable.If the city government alloted more money to the recreational facilities, then the budget is being cut from some other important city project. Also, if the assumptions proved unwarranted, and morepeople did not use the river for recreation, then much money has been wasted, not only the money for the recreational facilities, but also the money that was used to clean up the river to attract more people in the first place.Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 4This competent response identifies two unstated assumptions:∙that cleaning up the Mason River will lead to increased recreational use∙that existing facilities along the river need more fundingParagraph 1 offers reasons why the first assumption is questionable (e.g., residents may not have the necessary time or money for water sports). Similarly, paragraphs 2 and 3 explain that riverside recreational facilities may already be adequate and may, in fact, produce additional income if usage increases. Thus, the response is adequately developed and satisfactorily organized to show how the argument depends on questionable assumptions.However, this essay does not rise to a score of 5 because it fails to consider several other unstated assumptions (e.g., that the survey is reliable or that the efforts to clean the river will be successful). Furthermore, the final paragraph makes some extraneous, unsupported assertions of its own. Mason City may actually have a budget surplus so that cuts to other projects will not be necessary, and cleaning the river may provide other real benefits even if it is not used more for water sports.This response is generally free of errors in grammar and usage and displays sufficient control of language to support a score of 4.Essay Response — Score 3Surveys are created to speak for the people; however, surveys do not always speak for the whole community. A survey completed by Mason City residents concluded that the residents enjoy water sports as a form of recreation. If that is so evident, why has the river not been used? The blame can not be soley be placed on the city park department. The city park department can only do as much as they observe. The real issue is not the residents use of the river, but their desire for a more pleasant smell and a more pleasant sight. If the city government cleans the river, it might take years for the smell to go away. If the budget is changed to accomodate the clean up of the Mason River, other problems will arise. The residents will then begin to complain about other issues in their city that will be ignored because of the great emphasis being placed on Mason River. If more money is taken out of the budget to clean the river an assumption can be made. This assumption is that the budget for another part of cit maintenance or building will be tapped into to. In addition, to the budget being used to clean up Mason River, it will also be allocated in increasing riverside recreational facilites. The government is trying to appease its residents, and one can warrant that the role of the government is to please the people. There are many assumptions being made; however, the government can not make the assumption that people want the river to be cleaned so that they can use it for recreational water activities. The government has to realize the long term effects that their decision will have on the monetary value of their budget.Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 3Even though much of this essay is tangential, it offers some relevant examination of the argument’s assumptions. The early sentences mention a questionable assumption (that the survey results are reliable) but do not explain how the survey might have been flawed. Then the response drifts to irrelevant matters — a defense of the city park department, a prediction of budget problems and the problem of pleasing city residents.Some statements even introduce unwarranted assumptions that are not part of the original argument (e.g., "The residents will then begin to complain about other issues" and "This assumption is that the budget for another part of city maintenance or building will be tapped into"). Near the end, the response does correctly note that city government should not assume that residents want to use the river for recreation. Hence, the proposal to increase funding for riverside recreational facilities may not be justified.In summary, the language in this response is reasonably clear, but its examination of unstated assumptions remains limited and therefore earns a score of 3.Essay Response — Score 2This statement looks like logical, but there are some wrong sentences in it which is not logical.First, this statement mentions raking water sports as their favorite recreational activities at the first sentence. However, it seems to have a ralation between the first sentence and the setence which mentions that increase the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. This is a wrong cause and result to solve the problem.Second, as a reponse to the complaints from residents, the state plan to clean up the river. As a result, the state expects that water sports will increase. When you look at two sentences, the result is not appropriate for the cause.Third, the last statement is the conclusion. However, even though residents rank water sports, the city government might devote the budget to another issue. This statement is also a wrong cause and result.In summary, the statement is not logical because there are some errors in it. The supporting setences are not strong enough to support this issue.Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 2Although this essay appears to be carefully organized, it does not follow the directions for the assigned task. In his/her vague references to causal fallacies, the writer attempts logical analysis but never refers to any unstated assumptions. Furthermore, several errors in grammar and sentence structure interfere with meaning (e.g., "This statement looks like logical, but there are some wrong sentences in it which is not logical").Because this response "does not follow the directions for the assigned task" and contains errors in sentence structure and logical development, it earns a score of 2.Essay Response — Score 1The statement assumes that everyone in Mason City enjoys some sort of recreational activity, which may not be necessarily true. They statement also assumes that if the state cleans up the river, the use of the river for water sports will definitely increase.Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 1The brevity of this two-sentence response makes it fundamentally deficient. Sentence 1 states an assumption that is actually not present in the argument, and sentence 2 correctly states an assumption but provides no discussion of its implications. Although the response may begin to address the assigned task, it offers no development. As such, it is clearly "extremely brief ... providing little evidence of an organized response" and should earn a score of 1.。

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GRE 的argument写作万能模板一. 背景介绍-----万能123的诞生它的优势在于：让你用最快的时间找出攻击点，不仅解决攻击语言还解决攻击顺序，还能节省你考试时列提纲的时间我刚开始复习时也是很苦恼，但是当我对着北美范文写了十几篇并日日思索之后，发现了一个万能找茬法。

它的精髓就在于教你写一套属于自己的万能123模板，这个模板不仅解决你语言，攻击顺序，更你提高你的效率，即给你一个找茬的火眼金睛，又给你一个呼之欲出的思路。

我考前一天把我自己的模板背了又背了一遍，考的那篇文章我虽没写过，但是我在issue和argument 中场休息的1分钟之内把我的万能123找茬写在草稿纸上，题目出来后仅仅花了1分钟在万能123找茬勾出题目中题目中的错误点，这样连提纲都省了，还非常有条理。

我考之前把这个提纲发给我一同学让她好好背。

现在拿出来和大家分享，还准备发一份给那个作文老师，以提高他的教学质量。

二. 精华部分---万能123找茬1. 从整体来说：开头结尾不是最重点，中间部分才是重中之重2. 就中间部分来说：具体的语言不是最重点，攻击思路才是重中之重结论就是，攻击思路是重中之重，所以万能123找茬才是重中之重，比万能123模板(语言文字)及开头结尾给重要。

三.精华部分的注释这里是注释：(对照序号看)① 一因为此调查或研究没有提到样本sample，所以可以攻击其样本可能不具代表性，例如1。

样本太小不具代表性2。

样本特殊不具代表性二有了样本仍然可攻击样本没有代表性，例如1。

样本太小不具代表性2。

样本的倾向性问题，即某类人群比其他多数人更愿意参加调查或研究三没有论据的声称其实是很万能的，多用于攻击一些不是调查也不是研究的论据(具体可参照我的例文)② 一这个嘛虽然被某些新东方老师分为3大类，其实本质还是一样的，就是一个群体的特征推到另一个群体身上。

argument英语写作范文

Free-ingoing of People, Not Good For ChinaDo you know what is “Immigration Wave”? Have you heard about “Ireland’s Great Famine”? It’s one of the greatest event of immigration in history that a big movement of people into America from Europe because of the poor agriculture and economic crisis happened in 1840s. 1Movement of population can not be avoided. However, free migration is not good for every country, especially China, as it has limited resources but with overpopulated problem and illegal immigrants influencing public security is another problem, too.In the first place, the contradiction between people and resources even environment will be exacerbated because of the flood of ingoing people. China, a country with large area and tremendous capacity of resources, is the most populous nation in the world at the same time. It was predicted that the population of China will rise to 1.46 billion by 2020. 2 If all foreigners entering China are allowed, it will not only weaken the carrying capacity of the environment but also cause a lack of resources relatively.In addition, illegal immigrants, as a part of the ingoing people, will threaten the public security if all foreigners are allowed to enter China. Most of the illegal immigrants come to China for living, some of whom can do nothing but the unlawful jobs, and some of whom may even not have one. As a result, they will not create any value for the society and more importantly, the society problems on welfare, economy even crime will be unavoidable because of their unlawful identity.It may be claimed that free-ingoing of people do good to China because it willbenefit from various culture brought in by the immigrants. Indeed, building a tight-knit relationship between China and other nations has become a trend, and therefore, China should be open-armed to diverse culture. However, the culture development of a country is on the basis of a steady and secure social environment. As the harm caused by free immigration listed above, cultural benefiting from it may be hard to become a realization.To sum up, allowing all foreigners to enter is not good for China not only because of the problem between limited resources and overpopulation but also the public security harm. Only becoming restrited and legal, can immigrants have a harmonious relationship with a country.(total words: 390)Foot note:1.from <Ireland’s Great Famine> written by Peter Gray2.calculated data from State Statistics Bureau。

Argument Writing范文(1)

Argument Writing范文(1)GMAT-AWA-1：Argument Writing Samples写作题目见辅导（PP2）第258页，共89篇：这些文章的价值不在于它们的语言表达（尚有不少不当之处，有待改进），而在于它们提出的观点具有启发作用。

请不要背样文，应背写作模式及每篇的理由。

1. Citing facts drawn from the color-film processing industry that indicate a downward trend in the costs of film processing over a 24-year period, the author argues that Olympic Foods will likewise be able to minimize costs and thus maximize profits in the future. In support of this conclusion the author cites the general principle that "as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient." This principle, coupled with the fact that Olympic Foods has had 25 years of experience in the food processing industry leads to the author's rosy prediction. This argument is unconvincing because it suffers from two critical flaws.First, the author's forecast of minimal costs and maximum profits rests on thegratuitous assumption that Olympic Foods' "longexperience" has taught it how to do things better. There is, however, no guarantee that this is the case. Nor does the author cite any evidence to support this assumption. Just as likely, Olympic Foods has learned nothing from its 25 years in the food-processing business. Lacking this assumption, the expectation of increased efficiency is entirely unfounded.Second, it is highly doubtful that the facts drawn from the color-film processingindustry are applicable to the food processing industry. Differences between the two industries clearly outweigh the similarities, thus making the analogy highly less than valid. For example, problems of spoilage, contamination, and timely transportation all affect the food industry but are virtually absent in the film-processing industry. Problems such as these might present insurmountable obstacles that prevent lowering food-processing costs in the future.As it stands the author's argument is not compelling. To strengthen the conclusion that Olympic Foods will enjoy minimal costs and maximum profits in the future, the author would have to provide evidence that the company has learned how to do things better as a result of its 25 years of experience.Supporting examples drawn from industries more similar to the food-processing industry would further substantiate the author's view.2. In this argument the author concludes that the Apogee Company should dosedown field offices and conduct all its operations from a single, centralized locationbecause the company had been more profitable in the past when all its operations were in one location. For a couple of reasons, this argument is not very convincing.First, the author assumes that centralization would improve profitability by cutting costs and streamlining supervision of employees. This assumption is never supported with any data or projections. Moreover, the assumption fails to take into account cost increases and inefficiency that could result from centralization. For instance, company representatives would have to travel to do business in areas formerly served by a field office, creating travel costs and loss of critical time. In short, this assumption must be supported with a thorough cost-benefit analysis of centralization versus other possible cost-cutting and/or profit-enhancing strategies.Second, the only reason offered by the author is the claimthat Apogee was more profitable when it had operated from a single, centralized location. But is centralization the only difference relevant to greater past profitability? It is entirely possible that management has become lax regarding any number of factors that can affect the bottom line such as inferior products, careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor employee expense account monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies and other wasteful spending. Unless the author can rule out other factors relevant to diminishing profits, this argument commits the fallacy of assuming that just because one event (decreasing profits) follows another (decentralization), the second event has been caused by the first.In conclusion, this is a weak argument. To strengthen the conclusion that Apogee should close field offices and centralize. This author must provide a thorough cost-benefit analysis of available alternatives and rule out factors other than decentralization that might be affecting current profits negatively.3. In this argument the author concludes that the city should allocate some of its arts funding to public television. The conclusion is based on two facts: (1) attendance at thecity's art museum has increased proportionally with the increases in visual-arts program viewing on public television, and (2) public television is being threatened by severe cuts in corporate funding. White this argument is somewhat convincing, a few concerns need to be addressed.To begin with, the argument depends on the assumption that increased exposure to the visual arts on television, mainly public television, has caused a similar increase in localart-museum attendance. However, just because increasedart-museum attendance can be statistically correlated with similar increases in television viewing of visual-arts programs, this does not necessarily mean that the increased television viewing of arts is the cause of the rise in museum attendance.Moreover, perhaps there are other factors relevant to increased interest in the local art museum; for instance, maybe a new director had procured more interesting, exciting acquisitions and exhibits during the period when museum attendance increased, in addition, the author could be overlooking a common cause of both increases. It is possible that some larger social or cultural phenomenon is responsible for greater public interest in both television arts programming and municipal art museums.To be fair, however, we must recognize that the author's assumption is a special case of a more general one that television viewing affects people's attitudes and behavior. Common sense and observation tells me that this is indeed the case. After all, advertisers spend billions of dollars on television ad time because they trust this assumption as well.【。

ARGUMENT写作模板

一、经不起推敲的类推The argument relies on what might be a incorrect analogy between (类推的几样事物). In order for ..... the (提建议的那个人) must offer effective evidences that all relevant circumstances including... are essentially the same. However, this assumption is unwarranted. For example, the argument neglects the possibility that (被作者忽略的其它可能性). Perhaps (设想一种未考虑到的可能性) .Or, perhaps....二、将因果关系与单纯的关联关系或者时间关系混淆起来The argument makes the conclusion based on a known correlation between (有关系的两类事物) that the latter/former is attributable, at least partly, to the former/latter. Y et the correlation alone amounts to scant evidence of the asserted cause-and-effect relationship. Perhaps.... can be caused by other factors as well, which are not mentioned in these particular states but present in all others. Moreover, the argument overlooks the fact that (指出被作者忽略的东西). The author has not taken into account the possibility that (提出其它可能性). If this is the case, then the conclusion that (建议) would lack any merit whatsoever.三、认为一个群体的特征适用于该群体的所有成员The argument assumes that ... Yet, the author fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption. Absent such evidence, it is just as likely that (指出未被考虑到的可能性); for the matter, perhaps....., in which event the author`s recommendation woul d amount to especially poor advice.四、认为某条件是某结果的必要/充足条件（常出现于采取某种方法以达到某种目的）The recommendation depends on the assumption that no alternative means of .... are available. Yet, no evidence is offered to substantiate this assumption. Admittedly, the.... is some evidence that no other program/measure is as likely to achieve the desired result. However, it is entirely possible that means other than this or any other .... would also achieve the desired result. Perhaps... Or, perhaps... without considering and ruling out these and other alternative means of ...... the author/speaker can out confidently conclude that......（此段攻击要想达到目的，必须采取这种方法的思路）The recommendation depends on the additional unsubstantiated assumption that adopting....... would to the desired extent. Absent evidence that this is the case, it is equally possible that adopting the program would not suffice by itself. （提出其它达到目标所需的条件）:otherwise, the program will not be effective. In short, unless the superintendent can show that the program will be effectively implemented and received, I can not accept the recommendation.五、基于可能不具有代表性的的统计数据One problem with the argument involves the cited statistics about ..... It is unreasonable to draw any conclusions about ...... based on statistics about...... Depending on the.... It is entirely possible that ....are not representative of...... For example, perhaps (提出其它可能性) If so, then the editorial`s recommendation might amount to poor advice for students at other soifeges.六、基于不准确的调查或民意测验结果The survey methodology might be problematic in two respects: First, we are not informed whether the survey required that respondents choose their ..... between alternatives: If it did, then the results might distort the preferences of the respondents, who might very well prefer ......not provided in the survey. Secondly, we are not informed whether survey responses were anonymous, or even confidential. If they were not..... In either event, the survey results would be unreliable for the purpose of drawing any conclusions about ......七、认为一切事物都是永恒不变的The author claims that .....: Absent evidence to support this inference, it is just as likely that the .....or that......: For the matter, perhaps...... Any of these scenarios, if true. would serve to undermine the author`s claim that.......。

GRE作文argument参考范文

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英语论证作文写作模板及范文

英语论证作文写作模板及范文英文回答：Argument Essay Writing Template。

Introduction。

Hook: Begin with a compelling statement or question to draw the reader's attention.Background information: Provide context to the topic and establish its importance.Thesis statement: State your main argument clearly and succinctly.Body Paragraphs。

Claim: Present one of your main supporting points.Evidence: Provide specific examples, data, or research to support your claim.Explanation: Explain how the evidence supports your claim and strengthens your argument.Counterargument: Acknowledge and refute opposing viewpoints.Conclusion: Summarize the main points of the paragraph and reiterate your claim.Conclusion。

Restate thesis statement: Summarize your main argument and reinforce your position.Call to action: Encourage readers to consider your argument and make informed decisions.Example Argument Essay。

Argumentative writing大学英语议论文写作

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development of our Point, Example, Explain could be to include ‚they say‛ before our point. i.e. ‚It has been argued that fox hunting is a good thing, as foxes kill other wildlife and their numbers need to be controlled. It might be true that fox numbers need to be controlled, however fox hunting is an inhumane and evil way to control the population. This is because foxes undergo great pain when being killed by dogs, as has been proven by a Josh Palmer’s recent study on fox hunting. The paper explains
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best way to structure an essay is ‚They say/ I say‛ This proposition means that, for most points that we make, we must include the opposing argument, even if it doesn’t exist in writing. This is an effective way of writing argumentatively, as it positions us against other people in the conversation, and can strengthen our position if done correctly.

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Argument 写作正式模板——李文一、开头段落This argument concludes that…….To justify this conclusion the article’s author（文中的主语）notes the following facts :(1)……;(2)……;(3)……。

As the following discussion shows, the argument is not well supported by the evidences.二、主体段落段落一：To begin with,the arguer assumes that….(依据1).However ,the arguer provides no evidence to support this assumption .It’s entirely possible that ……(结论或建议).Besides, it is also possible that …..(另外的情况出现).Without ruling out these possibilities, the arguer cannot draw a conclusion that….(结论).段落二：In addition，the arguer’s assumption that(依据2) is open to doubt .Even if….. ,however ,it does not follow that….. （结论).The arguer fails to consider other aspects that may ……For example ,…….Or perhaps ,……..Thus ,without eliminating this possibility the arguer cannot make sure that the policy will make its anticipated effect.段落三：Furthermore, the recommendation relies on the assumptionthat ….(依据3) .Although, the arguer provides some information about…. (方案或提议)，however ,the assumption still cannot be well bolstered. In short, without figuring these things out, the argument cannot convince us that…..(结论或建议).段落四：Given that (让步分别攻击（1）（2）（3）。

2024年英语六级作文范文(必备优秀3篇

2024年英语六级作文范文(必备优秀3篇2019年英语六级作文篇一一、2019年6月英语六级作文真题：如何交朋友？二、2019年6月英语六级作文范文：A proverb says _One man is not good enough to live alone in the world._ Indeed, there aremany things in life which we alone cannot perform. We need f riends' help. Friends are peoplewho willingly and readily help us when we a re in trouble, and show sympathy for us when weare in misery.The benefits of friendship a reboundless and sometimes invisible. For example, when we havepassed the graduation examination and are looking for a job, we need experienced andreliable friends to guide us and help us on our way. A good friend is also an adviser, becauseour own points of view towards things may not be always right. Therefore, it is necessary for usto seek advice from friends.Of course, we can make friends everywhere. However, I think the best place is school, where weare among a big number of boys and girls our own age, so it is easy to get to know one anotherin a short time. Besides, we can also make friends among the people who work with us in themunity.In order to make friends, we ourselves must be honest, noble-minded and kind-heart edwhereby to leave a favour able impression on other s since other people observe us the sameway as we do.At the same time, we should avoid bad friends, because they always do harm to us, andmoreover, they are dangerous to the people a round. What is even worse, they mar ourfriendship with good friends.Indeed, seeking acquaintance with bad friends would be a serious mistake.三、英语六级作文结构分析：Gener al ment———人人都需要朋友Argument (1 )———真心的友谊好处无穷Argument (2 )———学校是的交友场所Argument (3 )———要交好朋友，自身须具备良好的素质Argument (4 )———交坏朋友将会造成严重错误2019年英语六级作文篇二范文有以下文章PDirections: The Problem of Human Population BR 范文：BR It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth. However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times. Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million. The population explosion has caused many problems. Generally, they e down to four major First, a lot of people can't get employment, which is a universal problem in the world. Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements. Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc. Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population. BR BR1990年1月六级作文题及范文/P四六级考试的复习资料：链接：?pwd=u8gn 提取码：u8gn2019年英语六级作文篇三英语六级的书信作文英语六级的书信作文，写作的文化内涵是深远的'，英语写作的文采不需要太过于花团锦簇，只需要有条理有核心内容，能让一般人看懂所写文章的中心意思就可以，参考英语六级的书信作文范文。

高二英语writing-argument

车一溜烟地开出村子，我把半个拥抱，留在了妈妈的泪水里。
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半个月亮，终于爬上来了。我喜欢半个月亮，喜欢她月色朦胧的诗意，喜欢她日夜兼程，追求圆满的梦想。
在妈妈家住了两天，我不得不回来上班，妈妈又拎着大包小包送我上车。可我不想就这样走了，我特意回来一趟，就是想抱抱妈妈，了我多年的心愿。妈妈还欠我一个拥抱，我也还欠妈妈一个拥抱啊。我提了一口气走到妈妈身边说：“妈，我抱抱你吧。”便笨拙地学着女儿小时候扑进我怀里的样子去拥抱妈妈，我的手刚搭在妈妈的肩上，妈妈就一边说着“这孩子”，一边下意识地转过身子，留给我一个后背，我酝酿了好多年的一个拥抱，最终也只实现了半个。我感受到了妈妈的手足无措，她还是不习惯这种表达方式，其实我也是一样。我无助，她尴尬，我不知怎么打破这尴尬，也没有勇气再拥抱她一次，便借整理包裹来拖延时间。那一瞬的沉默，把时间拖得老长老长，幸好车来了，我逃也般地上了车。在车门口，我转过身，想跟妈妈说几句话，哪怕无关痛痒，哪怕只是敷衍的几句话。只要说几句，便能让妈妈心安，也能让我心安。可妈妈一直背对着我，不肯回头。直到车开动，妈妈也没转过身来。我知道，她不敢回头，她怕我看到她流泪的双眼。妈妈的肩头轻轻抖动，她在哭。 bbin直营网论坛

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Against Mandatory V olunteeringNowadays, more and more schools regard volunteering as a necessary job for teenagers to grow up with a sense of public and caring services, for which lots of schools make volunteering mandatory. However, since volunteering is a personal choice as well as a thing with happiness, mandate can not be a good idea.For one thing, students should have rights to choose what they want to do. In a sense, university is a society, which provides students with plenty of opportunities to develop themselves. As students are the ones who know what is suitable for them and what will do good to them, they have the wise sense of choosing the best thing. They can enhance different aspects of abilities and skills through practicing by themselves, such as playing instruments, doing sports, or communicating with others in groups or organizations.For another, students may become resentful and resistant if they volunteer with force. There is no denial that things can not be done better without a voluntary mind. Similar to study, students can not only have more acquisition but also can create more value when they devote themselves to the volunteer work. With a passionate and cordial heart, they can find that donating times and love is a good way to gain happiness and they hope that it will become a part of their lives.It may be claimed that mandatory volunteering is a constructive way for students to spend time. Actually, instead of just sitting around, most of students participate many extracurricular activities or join in the associations, some of which may be about volunteering. This phenomenon exists in my college indeed. Besides, they should besuggested to be more active to find out what can help them make full use of time, rather than doing something mandatory.All in all, there are some negative influences about mandatory volunteering actually---no free and satisfied choices as well as helping others with resentful minds. Therefore, volunteering should be real voluntary without any mandate.Total words：336。