模拟联合国position paper写作意见
模拟联合国MUN position paper
This issue before the General Assembly Plenary Committee is Climate Change/Environmental Degradation as a Source of Conflict. In contemporary, the threat from climate change and environment degradation has beennot only just a environment issues but has developed to a security issues. While the globe warming problem remains and getting worse, environment issues gives rise to numerous problems.A shift in global climate will reshape coastlines, alter disease prevalence, change where rain falls, and alter where people can find water, grow food and live, says Oli Brown, of the International Institute for Sustainable Development’s (IISD). This could force communities and nations into conflict as they struggle to access r e-sources or are forced into "distressed" migration.Additionally, climate change should not be seen as a stand-alone problem but rather as one that threatens to amplify existing social and environmental pressures which drive human conflict, including desertification, water scarcity, land degradation and fisheries depletion.2.1、非洲Africa and those less-developed regions are places that especially demand our attention, for these converging crises are expected to reverse development trends across Africa, the continent regarded as one of the most vul-nerable to the fallout of climatic shifts. Given the nature of African conflicts, which permeate across borders, climate change would aggravate territory and border disputes, migration, food insecurity and water stress.2.2、其他地区Besides Africa, shrinking natural resources, combined with climate change, also caused more failed states and mass migration, added Heinrich Boll Foundation co-president, Ralf Fücks, who hosted the event at the Centre for the Book in Cape Town.2.3、北极The intensifying competition over access to, and control over, energy resources in Arctic region also exactly indicated that saying. The Arctic thaw has already created "minor tensions" among some countries over fishing rights around the Spitsbergen archipelago, controlling right of the newly opening up waterways and internation-al trade routes, and the accessibility of the enormous hydrocarbon resources. The geostrategic dynamics of the region is changing.2.2.1The others noteworthy conflict zones include Darfur, northern Kenya, and along the Nile River, while distressed migration from the West Africa Sahel was already a point of concern.3、本国情况Meanwhile, those problem also disturbed our nation. The major threats can attribute to the melting 积雪on the Alps, which is disappearing at the speed of 3% per year. It does a great harm to the tourism, especially to the skiing. Moreover, it also increase the risk of the potential blood from the melted snow.4、呼吁及措施Therefore,we are faced with an urgent need to elaborate a feasible protocol to limit and reduce the emission of greenhouse gases. Proper measures have been taken in our nation. We promised on Kyoto Protocol to de-crease 13% of the greenhouse gases emission statistics and a series of Regulation measures has been set up.Austria government carries out massive investment in environmental protection industry, which makes Austrian environmental technology and environmental management reached an international advanced level.近年来不仅在国内积极推行可持续发展战略,同时加强了与邻国尤其是前东欧国家的环保合作。
模拟联合国立场文件中文范文
为了进一步说明立场文件中所应包含的具体内容,下面将举一实例,如裁军与国际安全委员会(Disarmament and International Security Committee)的英国(United Kingdom)代表在写作关于反对恐怖主义的国际合作(International Cooperation in Counter-Terrorism)这一议题的立场文件时,应该包含以下的具体内容:
第二段应简述本国所参与的与议题相关的国际行动。国际行动既包括本国所参加的国与国之间对于解决此问题所采取的共同行动方案,也包括本国赞成、同意、签署的相关国际条约的内容。
为了应对经济危机及其衍生问题,我国政府已经采取切实有效的行动,诸如经济救援一揽子计划,扩张性经济发展刺激计划等,并已经达到了预期效果。
马其顿政府承诺,我们有能力、有信心应对国内问题,确保不为国际社会增加更多不稳定因素。我国政府,也将本着负责任的态度,与国际社会通力合作,确保地区性稳定。
马其顿政府欣慰地看到,国际社会在诸如联大、G20峰会中都已表达了战胜危机的勇气与决心。但我国政府也切实地认识到了国际层面上合作和有效行动的缺乏。同时,我国为国际社会对小经济体的边缘化与忽视表达出有保留的异议。
我国真切地希望与其它国家一同努力,共赴难关。
立场文件(position paper)
一、立场文件的内容(content and form)
一份出色的立场文件应该有理有据、语言精准,并且鲜明、准确、有力地阐述本国针对某一议题的立场。广而言之,立场文件顾名思义,就是阐述本国的立场;具体来讲,一份出色的立场文件需要包含以下方面的内容:
(中文范文)
代表:
学校:
国家:
如何写模联的position paper
格式要求(format)
• All papers must be typed and formatted according to the example in the Background Guides 按照范例中的格式拟写立场文件 • Length must not exceed one single-sided pages(Word or PDF)
ADDRESS: Send the paper to the right email address
一定要发送到指定的邮箱
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• What your country believes should 本国认为联合国需采取的措施
be done to address the issue;
• What your country would like to accomplish in the committee’s resolution; 为了履行决议中的职责,本国将要采取的措施 • How the positions of other countries affect your country’s position. 其他国家立场的影响以及本国对与问题有关的焦点国家的立场的态度
spelling and grammar.
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注意事项:
ONE:
Each delegation submit a position paper
每个代表队(两人)交一份立场文件
FORMAT:
Follow the format specifications 一定要符合格式要求
TIME:
Send the paper before dead-line 一定要在指定日期前交稿
模拟联合国 立场书【position paper】阿富汗
Position PaperCommittee ESCTopic neo-interventionismCountry AfghanistanDelegates Li xin tong & Sun yi xiuIntroduction: With the development of the whole world integration, every country's economy dealings and connection have been gradually closer, “responsible protection” has appeared from this also. Besides, economy benefit and the war that often breaks out unceasingly are also the important reasons why the so-called “responsible protection” exists.Afghanistan is such a badly off, war-ridden the people life country. Since ancient times, Afghanistan has already been the main hub for national migration, cultural integration and trading. As the connection between Eurasia and the Middle East, Afghanistan has been suffering badly fire damage for 30 years because of its strategic location. The chaos caused by war leads us to be controlled by the de veloped countries like America and its “neo-interventionism”.New Interventionism is the recent form of hegemonism under the situation of Globalization. Its purpose is to set the so called Global New Order under the leadership of the U.S. New interventionism, being the primary threat to world peace and international order, is on the basis of American political, military, economic and cultural hegemony, which is not bond, restricted and balanced by international ethics, international order and other international forces.Early during the cold war, the United States stationed a garrison in Afghanistan.After the “9·11” incident, the United States launched the war against Afghanistan and Iraq in the name of “anti-terrorism”. The U.S. government has showed a strong inclination to enter into the so-called second stage of the anti terrorist war and topped down the Afghanistan existing government.Thirty years of continuous wars and the biggest drought in the past several decades have made Afghanistan one of the countries where refugee problems are the most serious.And now Afghanistan has not regained full stability. The essential problem for Afghanistan has always been the foreigners. It is their meddling that creates these wars.。
模拟联合国写作指导(PP,WP,DR,SC)
模联会议之立场文件(Position paper)立场文件是表达某个国家或组织在某个特定议题上的立场概要的文件。
它在会议进行前就需要提交,以供代表互相了解立场,更有针对性地准备会议。
在会议中,它也可作为代表正式发言的主要的参照材料。
一、立场文件的内容一份出色的立场文件应该有理有据、语言精准,并且鲜明、准确、有力地阐述本国针对某一议题的立场。
广而言之,立场文件顾名思义,就是阐述本国的立场;具体来讲,一份出色的立场文件需要包含以下方面的内容:1.本国在该议题中的基本立场与态度;2.本国赞成及签署的与该议题相关的国际协议,本国参与的与该议题相关的国际合作和行动;3.本国与该议题的相关程度,对于解决该问题在国内曾经采取过的重要行动、通过的重要法案;4.本国对于解决该问题所提出的相关建议(包括国内措施和国际行动);5.本国领导人及政要发表的有关该议题的重要讲话;6.本国在该议题中的相关利益总结及立场底线总结。
为了进一步说明立场文件中所应包含的具体内容,下面将举一实例,如裁军与国际安全委员会)的英国(United Kingdom)代表在写作关于反对(Disarmament and International Security Committee)的英国(恐怖主义的国际合作(International Cooperation in Counter-Terrorism)这一议题的立场文件时,应该包含以下的具体内容:1.英国对于恐怖主义问题的态度,对于国际反恐合作的基本立场;2.英国赞成和签署的国际反恐合作条约,英国所参与的国际反恐合作行动;3.英国国内的恐怖主义活动情况以及英国政府所采取的相关措施、为应对反恐所通过的相关法律;4.英国认为国际社会应该如何解决恐怖主义问题,对于国际反恐合作的具体建议;5.英国领导人在正式场合所发表的关于国际反恐的发言和基本立场表态;6.国际反恐合作与英国国家利益的相关程度,英国对反恐问题的立场底线。
模拟联合国立场文件中文范文
(中文范文)代表:学校:国家:委员会:议题:金融危机中的国际合作自2008年9月以来,由美国次贷危机所引发的金融、经济危机已经波及全球。
在此期间,如华尔街五大投资公司的彻底消失,股市、期货的一路贬值,各国经济指标的自由落体式的下滑,都不约而同地一再证明,我们如今所面临的是近百年来最为严重的经济危机。
不仅如此,由经济低迷所引发的失业率一路攀升等一系列深刻的社会矛盾,已使此问题的严重性与日俱增,已成为各国政府当下所面临的最为紧迫的挑战之一。
马其顿作为东欧这一受到经济危机影响最为深远区域的国家,——正面临着空前的挑战。
外国资本的外流,国际劳动力市场需求的下降,国际出口市场的严重萎缩等外部因素,加之国内购买力下降、失业率攀升、社会福利压力等内部因素,已使我国政府所面临的困境步入了一个刻不容缓的境地。
我国认为,此次危机虽然其直接诱因为华尔街企业家们的腐化与贪婪,但其深层原因则是国际经济金融监管体制的漏洞百出,国际社会缺乏互信与有效的合作,国际经济由各传统经济大国主导而忽视了小经济体和新兴经济体的权益。
为了应对经济危机及其衍生问题,我国政府已经采取切实有效的行动,诸如经济救援一揽子计划,扩张性经济发展刺激计划等,并已经达到了预期效果。
马其顿政府承诺,我们有能力、有信心应对国内问题,确保不为国际社会增加更多不稳定因素。
我国政府,也将本着负责任的态度,与国际社会通力合作,确保地区性稳定。
马其顿政府欣慰地看到,国际社会在诸如联大、G20峰会中都已表达了战胜危机的勇气与决心。
但我国政府也切实地认识到了国际层面上合作和有效行动的缺乏。
同时,我国为国际社会对小经济体的边缘化与忽视表达出有保留的异议。
我们看到了其它国家的努力,诸如提出建立起全新的经济金融监管机制的设想等。
我国政府认为,一切切实有效的负责任的行动,我们都是给予支持的,而对于某些特殊国家推卸责任的举动,我国政府和人民表示强烈不满。
我国政府在此提出以下建议:1. 进一步由国际社会通过各种渠道向Worldbank和IMF等国际组织的风险应对基金注资,以进一步扩大G20峰会的注资成果。
Poland - Position Paper模拟联合国立场文件 模板
Position for the Disarmament and International Security Committee (Sabrina Loo – The University of Western Australia)1.Question on Combating State Sponsored TerrorismThere is no internationally agreed definition of terrorism and what it encompasses. The many nations of the world, and other multinational entities define terrorism in varying degrees and this is best described by the cliché ‘One man’s terrorist is another man’s freedom fighter’, first written by Gerald Seymour. One issue within terrorism itself is state sponsored terrorism, which is a huge impediment regarding international cooperation and effort in combating terrorism. State sponsorship of terrorism is government support of violent non-state actors that are engaged in purporting terrorism. This issue is complicated by how different nations and multinational entities label certain states as ‘state sponsors’, which is never universally accepted. One nation’s perception of state sponsorship of terrorism is often pitted against another nation’s claims against this notion. Whilst there is no universal agreement on what state sponsorship of terrorism entails, this only serves to provide complications on international cooperation and efforts in combating state sponsored terrorism.The Republic of Poland has taken an active interest in combating state sponsorship of terrorism and terrorism in general. Poland takes the view of sponsorship of terrorism in terms of financing terrorism. Thus, Poland has taken measures in combating the financing of terrorism inclusive of governments that sponsor terrorism by financing groups that purport terrorism. Poland has passed several national acts that authorises combating the financing of terrorism including the Act to implement Directive 2005/60/EC of the European Parliament on the prevention of the use of the financial system for terrorist financing. In 2008 Poland implemented two Conventions of the Council of Europe on the Financing of Terrorism in general and on the Prevention of Terrorism, at a national level. Lastly, Poland is also party to 14 of out 18 UN conventions and protocols relation to the fight against terrorism generally. Poland strongly supports cooperation on United Nations standards on counter-terrorism and combating state sponsored terrorism.The Republic of Poland is committed in reducing and eliminating state sponsorship of terrorism. Eliminating state sponsorship of terrorism should not just solely focus on punishment of states that engage in these activities, but solutions should also adhere to the rule of law and protect human rights. Again, whilst the focus should not just be on sanctions, the strong focus on deterrence and punishment should not be diminished. State sponsorship of terrorism is a huge concern of international security and combating terrorism for the fact that it allows terrorism to flourish. Poland suggests firm financial and political sanctions within these adherences. Poland calls upon member states to develop a resolution that allows the imposition of sanctions against states that sponsor terrorism, in accordance to international law that adheres to the rule of law and protects human rights. There should be a universal acceptance of how a state is designated to be a state sponsor and also the degree and type of sanctions to be imposed. Poland will continue to contribute to multinational efforts as part of the European Union and the United Nations to work towards an international consensus on combating state sponsored terrorism and the overall goal of counter- terrorism strategies to pursue the goal of world peace in the future.Position for the Disarmament and International Security Committee2.Question on the Role of International Border Security in Times of ArmedConflict.The increase of armed conflict around the world has often led to conflict spilling across borders whether it is the conflict itself or the resulting effects of such conflicts. Conflicts may also be transnational, in that conflicts may have already begun across nations rather than between combatants located in a single nation. The spread of ISIS in the Middle East as well as the spread of Boko Haram serves to illustrate the shifting borders been nations as a result of weak border control as well as difficult geographical features. International border security involves securing and strengthening borders between nations in times of armed conflict, where borders between nations may be weakened. The issue of border security is further complicated by issues such as already existing border disputes between nations, and a lack of effective existing border mechanisms. It also should be noted that issues such as cross-border weapon smuggling, the movement of people across borders during conflicts and illicit smuggling of goods across borders. Strengthening international border security in times of armed conflict is a huge concern to international security and peace.The Republic of Poland faces this issue with a strong interest in how to strengthen international borders with an aim to curtail the illicit flow of goods and the spread of armed conflict across borders. The Republic of Poland has contributed to efforts by the European Union on this issue. Efforts by the European Union includes the development and application of the Global Approach to Migration and Mobility program as well as the strengthened role of the European Union border agency, FRONTEX. Whist these programs have a focus on borders within Europe, Poland hopes to use such experiences in addressing the wider problem of border security in other regions of the world, namely the Middle East and Africa. Poland supports cooperation with the United Nations and on an international scale to further contribute to programs to aim to strengthen internal borders in times of armed conflict.The Republic of Poland fully supports any measures that aim to strengthen international border security in times of armed conflict. The strengthening of borders is of utmost importance in the first instance to discourage the activities such as illicit flow of goods across borders and to also prevent armed conflict spilling over borders. Poland acknowledges that the United Nations has various existing activities that currently work to strengthen international borders. However Poland call for a solution where the efficiency of such work can be increased, where the duplication of efforts through various programs implemented by the United Nations and by other entities can be reduced. By bringing the different work in strengthening international borders under a single department, more effective and concentrated work can be performed and our goal of strong and secure borders between states can be realised. Poland also stressed the importance of international cooperation on this issue, to further better understanding between nations on border security. Poland will continue to work with the United Nations on this issue of border security, through the various programs in place already and also working towards a more effective structure in tackling this issue, and continue to support efforts of the European Union on strengthening border security.。
模拟联合国Position Paper范例(标准格式)
Position PaperDelegate:Han JingdaSchool: High School Attached to Northeast Normal UniversityCountry : The Republic of BoliviaCommittee: Commission on Sustainable DevelopmentTopic: Impact of Population Growth on SustainabilityPopulation growth was a big problem that had restricted the development of the human all over the world today. After the industrial revolution, human's life level and economic production increased continuously, population increase rapidly. From 1999 to 2009 this short 10 years, the world population have risen one hundred million. And the world population has exceeded seven billion up till now. Population's unsustainable growth has caused a lot of contradictions in many countries, it is very urgent to solve this problem.In this issue, the United Nations joint efforts of other countries in the world to control population growth and ease the contradiction. The 21st century's agenda which was formulated in 2002 by the UN explicitly mentioned that "Strengthen research to combine population, environment and development "and so on. These policies provide navigation for the United Nations and countries all over the world. At the same time, according to The Action Plan of the Conference on International Population and Development's relevant content, the population rate of the annual average in 1994 to 2004 was 1.31; but in 2004 to 2012, the annual average has fallento 1.10.The number of population in Bolivia is 10.028 million. The government tried to solve the people's livelihood preferably. In the human rights and the feminist issue, Bolivia also respected for human rights and the feminist at the same time of respecting for economic development. Bolivia emphasized the education. The educational literacy rate has been reduced to 13.28%. Bolivia's investment of public sector and education reached to150 million dollars.Bolivia supports the United Nations' resolutions zealously. Bolivia emphasizes that the government devotes to control the population growth in a stable numerical with other countries jointly. The United Nations should continue to control the population growth. For developed countries, Bolivia Suggests to offered economic aids and send education team regularly; For the vast number of developing countries and undeveloped areas, Bolivia expects them should develop the people's livelihood vigorously; Clear relevant laws, improve women's rights and status, reduce the family violence and population's illegal trafficking happened.Bolivia hopes countries around the world should control population growth together and remove negative effects from the population growth. Finally achieve the people's development collectively.当今世界,人口增长已成为制约人类各方面发展的一大难题。
模拟联合国立场文件写作指导
立场文件写作指导什么是立场文件一、立场文件的概念立场文件是某个国家或组织在某个特定议题上的立场概要。
注意:立场文件的英文为Position Paper (PP)。
二、立场文件的作用其他国家可以通过一国的立场文件来了解该国在这一议题上的基本立场,确定该国是否与自己的国家具有共同的目标和利益等等,这样便于双方的协商和合作。
立场文件的提交立场文件需要各国代表在会前就完成并交给各委员会的主席团,一般来说主席团将参会的立场文件编订成册发给每一个代表,以方便代表们在会议期间更好的了解各国的基本立场和政策目标。
注意:立场文件是唯一一份必须在会前提交的文件,原则上也是唯一一份可以在会前完成的文件,其他文件都需要在会议进行同时完成。
立场文件的准备在撰写立场文件之前,需要了解该国关于该议题的相关背景资料以及最近的发展动态,在此过程中,需要查找大量的资料,并对其进行辨析与筛选。
在查找资料时,建议分组进行查找,每一议题由2至5人组成,其中一或两人为执笔(通常情况下为正式代表),其他成员负责查找、整理并提供资料。
注意:资料的查找极其繁琐,需要耗费大量的时间,因此,强烈建议寻找更多的辅助人员与工具,更快速更准确地完成准备工作。
在准备阶段,基于国家立场,应思考的问题:1 理解背景指导中所写的内容2 找出你所代表国家的兴趣所在3 思考诸如下列问题:问题是什么?它有什么样的影响?它的起因是什么?有什么方法可以解决?立场文件的撰写一、立场文件的格式1 立场文件的开头2 立场文件的内容组成3 立场文件的注意点:不要过多罗列数字,尽量运用官方单词和语言,举出实例避免空讲,运用脚注表明引用,注意篇幅。
二、立场文件的内容立场文件一般至少分为五部分,简要内容如下:1 简单介绍目前这一议题的国际形势以及其形成原因2 罗列国际社会为此所作出的努力,如会议、文件等3 罗列本国在这一问题上所作出的努力,如政策、法律、运动等,着力于和国际社会或别国相关的要点4 估计未来这一问题的走势,寻找目前最为合理的解决办法,说明其原因并罗列出具体解决方法5 对国际社会进行呼吁,结束全文以下是立场文件的范文,请仔细阅读:范文一Delegate: Wang ShichenSchool: Shanghai Xiangming High SchoolCountry: AlgeriaCommittee: Economy and Social CouncilTopic: International migrationNowadays, along with the rapid growth and development of economy and science, international migration has become a complex issue. Most countries worldwide, ranging from North Africa countries like Algeria to Asia countries, are concerning about the problem which touches on many other important and relevant national and international topic, including refugees, human rights, racial conflicts and the undeniable gap between developed and developing countries.In recent years, the phenomenon is turning more serious with the continually increasing population of international migrates. Not be protected by the countries they traveled to, the migrates also are not sufficiently protected by any international laws, and still no conventional agreement has been launched.Regarding the international migration affair, the international community has launched a numberof initiatives and measures to tackle this problem in recent several decades and progress has been made. Established in 1951, International Organization for Migration (IOM)is the leading inter-governmental organization in the field of migration and works closely with governmental, intergovernmental and non-governmental partners.With 122 member states, a further 18 states holding observer status and offices in over 100 countries, IOM is dedicated to promoting humane and orderly migration for the benefit of all. IOM works to help ensure the orderly and humane management of migration, to promote international cooperation on migration issues, to assist in the search for practical solutions to migration problems and to provide humanitarian assistance to migrants in need, including refugees and internally displaced people.The UN also recognizes the link between migration and economic, social and cultural development, as well as to the right of freedom of movement. Universal Declaration of Human Rights, proclaimed in 1948, is a common standard of achievement for all peoples and all nations which has made great efforts on human right protection. It calls for all the nations, keeping this Declaration constantly in mind, shall strive by teaching and education to promote respect for these rights and freedoms and by progressive measures, national and international, to secure their universal and effective recognition and observance, both among the peoples of Member States themselves and among the peoples of territories under their jurisdiction.As a member of the Union of the Arab Maghreb which was established in 1989 within other four African countries, Morocco, Tunisia, Libya, Mauritania , Algeria focus on the human trafficking problem ,and human rights issue.The Algeria government wants to emphasize the importance of skilled migrants to every country, especially developing countries like Algeria. The situation of brain drain becomes more serious these years and deprives developing countries of much-needed doctors, scientists, professors and other skilled workers. Algeria desires more skilled workers coming back to their motherland and help establish a new society of their own country.Also, Algeria suggests more countries have the signatures of the International Convention on the Protection of the Rights of All Migrant Workers and Members of Their Families to have further actions on human rights protection.Recognizing the progress made by certain States on a regional or bilateral basis towards the protection of the rights of migrant workers and members of their families, as well as the importance and usefulness of bilateral and multilateral agreements in this field, Algeria is willing to see a better and appropriate environment to the migrants and their families.In order to fight against these problems in the international migration, nations in Africa must work together to build a community to these problems. As such, Algeria is looking forward to working in close cooperation with members in African Union and sharing the experiences in improving the situation of the migration. Algeria also expects to be able to cooperate with the developed countries and commonly protect the human rights of both the legal and irregular migrants as wellas the refugees. With the joint efforts, a better environment for the migrants is predictable.References:<1> International Organization for Migrationhttp://www.iom.int/jahia/jsp/index.jsp<2> Universal Declaration of Human Rights/<3> the Union of the Arab Maghreb/ziliao/2003-07/10/content_964900.htm<4> the International Convention on the Protection of the Rights of All Migrant Workers and Members of Their Families/erc/Library/display.php?doc_id=558&category_id=32&category_type=3&gr oup=Human%20rights%20treaties%20and%20other%20instruments本文获得2008年北京大学全国中学生模拟联合国大会最佳立场文件范文二代表:曹心怡学校:华东师范大学第二附属中学国家:美国委员会:国际难民署议题:伊拉克难民问题伊拉克冲突可以说人尽皆知,而伊拉克难民的人道主义危机却被严重忽视。
模拟联合国中的position paper模板以及motion提纲
Committee: General AssemblyTopic: Child Protection In Armed ConflictCountry: China1.Background:Armed conflicts are happening constantly in several area of the world. The vulnerabilities and needs specific to children are often made more acute by situations of armed conflict. The protection of children is a topic to which the international community has devoted significant attention. Over 250,000 child soldiers are still participating in armed conflicts around the world and tens of thousands of girls are being sexually exploited by combatants.1.actions taken by the United NationsThe protection of children is a thematic issue on the agenda of the United Nations Security Council. With the recent expansion through Resolution 1882 of the triggers for the MRM on grave violations, it is an opportune time to examine the successes of the MRM, as well as the challenges it faces. For instance, who are the key actors involved, how are they coordinated, and how might their contribution to the MRM complicate their presence on the ground in certain areas? What concrete steps are being taken to respond to violations and to combat impunity? How might action plans, “naming and shaming,” and targeted sanctions be employed more effectively? This live seminar examined these and other related questions.United Nations experts called for universal ratification of the two Optional Protocols to the Convention on the Rights of the Child (CRC) - on the sale of children, child prostitution and child pornography, and on protection for children in armed conflict - at a special event to be held at UNICEF House today.Campaigns aimed at getting all countries to ratify and implement the protocols by 2012 will be announced at the meeting, which will be addressed by Secretary-General Ban Ki-moon, UNICEF Executive Director Anthony Lake, Special Representative for Children and Armed Conflict, Radhika Coomaraswamy, and Special Representative on Violence Against Children, Marta Santos Pais.3.China’s positionViolence does not discriminate. It cuts across race, religion, class, and culture. It occurs in homes and families, schools and workplaces; care homes and communities.Regardless of where it occurs, the end result can be the same: A child diminished by fear…even crippled by a lack of self-confidence. A child who does not perform well in school, is more likely to be unemployed in adulthood. A child who more easily falls preys to sexual abuse and exploitation. These children need our help now. And we can help them grow up to be teachers, health workers, community leaders, employers, and skilled employees. Preventing violenceagainst children is critical not only for their own well-being, but for the health and progress of our global community.3.actions in the futureAn increasing number of countries have abolished voluntary recruitment for persons below the age of 18 year for use in armed conflict, noted Ms. Yanghee Lee, Chair of the Committee on the Rights of the Child, the body that monitors implementation of the Convention on the Rights of the Child and its Protocols. She also noted that States are stepping up measures and international cooperation to combat child prostitution, child pornography and sexual exploitation of children in travel and tourism.In addition to calling on all countries to ratify the Optional Protocols and to effectively implement them by incorporating them into national legislation, policy and planning, and providing victim protection and rehabilitation programs; the UN is calling on governments to comply with reporting obligations to the Committee on the Rights of the Child.Speech list of topic BReason for topic AHow can we be here?How can we delegates from all over the world gathering here for this conference? Because this place is safe. This room, this city, this country is protected by armed force, by soldiers, by police, and by the infinite power of peace. Peace, yes, that is why people can work and live without threaten, that is why our children can play in the garden, our sisters can walk along the street in the evening safely and our grandmas can go out in weekends to learn Chinese. If peace is such important, why shouldn’t the people who live in the Middle East and North Africa get it?China stands firmly with the countries involved in w ars and instability, let’s set topic A in the agenda. Let’s try to maintain peace and stability in the Middle East. Let’s try it.Motion1.China motions for a moderated cacus, the topic istotal time is 15 minutes, 10 delegates are involved. Each delegate has 90 seconds.strongly condemn "the continued grave and systematic human rights violations by the Syrian authorities" and threatened punitive measures against the Middle East countrynon-interference(sovereignty, International assistance)sovereignty is vital and basic to a country. It can not be partition or transfer. It is not conferred by International law. It born when a country born. Each country has it foreign independent right, which cannot be interfered by others. State is entitled to their own will, according to national circumstances, freedom to choose their own social system, the state forms, organize their own government, a national law, the state's domestic and foreign policies, etc. China suggests the countries, especially in north America and western Europe, respect the sovereignty , independence and territorial integrity of Syria. Do not let a second Lybia born.International assistance(supervise mode)Principle of state sovereignty has been widely recognized by the international community. China strongly condemn "the continued grave and systematic human rights violations by the Syrian authorities" and threatened punitive measures against the Middle East country”. To ensure the sovereignty of Middle East and North African countries be effectually protected, China suggests to form a supervise mode. The details of the supervise mode will be discussed in the next unmoderated cacus.CompensationAccording to history, 4800,000000,00000。
position paper 模联 立场文件
SwitzerlandPosition PaperDelegates:School:Committee: UNSCTopic:Submitted by SwitzerlandSwitzerland has already realized the importance of international cooperation in the prevention and combating of terrorism has grown beyond measure since the terrorist attacks on the USA on 11 September 2001. Under international law, the framework for these tasks is provided specifically by twelve UN Conventions and additional protocols on combating terrorism. Switzerland has already ratified and implemented ten of these Conventions and noticed that there are an increasing number of countries entering the combating terrorism activities.Switzerlandis taking their efforts to preventing and combating terrorist attacksat domestic level actions.As one of the world’s most important financial centers, Switzerland has been campaigning for more effective regulations to put a stop to both the financing of terrorist activity and money laundering.Switzerland is an active member of the Financial Action Task Force (FATF).The Convention for the Suppression of Terrorist Bombings obliges States Parties to punish the originators of or those party to attacks conducted using explosives or other lethal substances, such as toxic chemicals or biological weapons. It also sets out provisions for international cooperation in the prevention and combating of terrorist attacks.Switzerlandalso made laws to ensure depriving terrorism of its financial base, putting two new criminal offences on the statute books and identifying the users of prepaid cards. Switzerland will never ignore and stand the terrorists take advantages of Swiss economic system and the secret system of Swiss bank will never protect the terrorism and be the “barrier”of international cooperation.There are actually plenty of other countries that provide discreet banking services, but the terrorists won't be able to avail themselves of such services in Switzerland.Switzerland also attached great importance to the safety and management among refugees. Switzerland will never let terrorists regard this country as a basement and shelter of their crucial activities. However, Switzerland will not abandon the aid to help people suffering from violence and terrorism.As for Switzerland international activities, the Swiss tax authorities already have the right to demand information from Swiss banks when investigating a deliberate tax fraud; and under Article 4 of the USA-Switzerland Treaty on Mutual Assistance in Criminal Matters, it must use the same powers if it seeks to obtain information at the request of the USA and for the purposes of a criminal investigation, pursuant to a Swiss law on international co-operation in such matters.But Even if criminal proceedings are contemplated however, the matter must come before the Swiss courts to sanction co-operation, and it is by no means certain that they would do so.As grave as the terrorist threat is, it is important to remember that human rights remain inalienable and that the fight against terrorism must always be fought with the legal means used to combat all forms of crime.International humanitarian law must be applied in all situations and without exception by all parties to armed conflict and by private individuals too. The economic differencesbetween countries should also try to de eliminated.As always, the challenge will be to find a balance between the two competing interests, and to adopt a proportionate approach.Switzerland is committed to upholding these principles and to ensuring that international humanitarian law is applied more rigorously.http://www.ejpd.admin.ch//newscenter公报还说,瑞士不会容忍恐怖主义分子利用瑞士的金融系统,瑞士的银行保密制度不会保护恐怖主义,不会成为国际合作和刑事侦查的“障碍”。
模拟联合国会议文件写作
模拟联合国会议文件写作1.工作文件 Working Paper (WP)代表在会议进行期间,在各自立场文件的基础上,综合草拟出针对某一或若干问题的看法和观点,以及解决办法。
由一个或多个起草国(标注1)起草,无须附议国(标注2)。
审核及编号后,向所有代表印发。
会议指导会打断会议,多有代表有1分钟阅读时间,只有由起草国(一个或多个)自动进行2分钟的工作文件介绍。
工作文件不需要特定的文件格式,可以是文段、图表,也可以列关键点。
在印发后,起草国可进一步在此基础上结合他国的观点进行修正补充,使之发展成为决议草案,并同时争取足够数量的附议国。
其他国家在阅读后对其提议、协商,并根据需要决定成为起草国、附议国,或只是静观其发展。
2.决议草案 Draft Resolution (DR)按照联合国决议文件格式起草的对该议题的解决办法,未通过表决的决议。
对于议题各个方面的解决,格式严谨,措辞妥帖。
决议的起草国和附议国总数必须达到当场与会国的20%,才可向主席团递交。
审核及编号后,向所有代表印发。
会议指导会打断会议,所有代表有2分钟阅读时间,之后由起草过(一个或多个)自动进行3分钟的决议草案介绍。
在起草国代表陈述后,要回答其他代表提出的3个语法问题,规则回复到正是辩论的形式。
发言内容则在各国的立场基础上以该文件为中心进行讨论。
决议草案需要表决。
支持的国家总数大于等于与会国家总数的2/3,通过后即成为决议。
格式严格,包括:标题 (Heading)、序言条款 (Preambulatory Clauses)、行动性条款 (Operative Clauses)。
3.修正案 Amendment修正案分为友好修正案以及非友好修正案;友好修正案(Friendly Amendment):原决议草案的全部起草国都赞成(需要在友好修正案的附议国中签字)该修改意见,该修正案就成为友好修正案。
审核及编号后,向所有代表印发或由主席团宣读。
友好修正案无需表决和讨论,按照该文件的要求,直接生成为决议草案的一部分。
模拟联合国立场文件范文
立场文件立场文件的英文是Position Paper,可定义为“表明一国在某一个问题上的基本观点和立场的文件”。
立场文件反映了一个国家对特定话题的立场和解决建议,许多代表也会用立场文件作为大会中第一次发言的发言稿,由此可见其重要性。
一篇立场文件只阐述对于一个议题的国家立场观点,如果一个委员会的议题有两个,那么就需要提交两份立场文件。
一份立场文件的篇幅应尽量控制在一到两页。
立场文件作用其他国家可以通过一国的立场文件来了解该国在这一议题上的基本立场,确定该国是否与自己的国家具有共同的目标和利益等等,这样便于各国协会协商和合作。
也可以提醒本国代表自己的底线。
立场文件同时也是会议开始阶段各国陈述观点的主要参照发言材料,但它并不是发言稿。
立场文件的格式和要点1)开头立场文件的开头应该包括以下部分:代表姓名(delegates)代表来自的学校(schools)国家(country)委员会(committee)议题(topic)2)正文正文的内容一般安排如下:背景介绍:简要陈述议题。
这一部分所占篇幅最小,只需简单概括该问题的历史,并提出讨论解决该问题的重要性即可。
过去的行动:这部分包括联合国在该问题上的决议或行动及本国在该问题上已经作出的行动和决议等。
本国的立场/政策/解决措施:这部分主要表明本国的立场,提供本国对于该问题的解决办法和措施,并提供理由等。
3)篇幅书写语言为中文,字体用宋体,5号字,单倍行距。
篇幅尽量控制在一到两页左右。
4)充实内容前面介绍的正文内容安排只是一种参考。
立场文件不是考试作文的八股文,其内容的安排顺序和文章结构都可以根据代表国的实际情况调整。
还可以从以下很多方面充实立场文件的内容:对该国在这个议题上的立场的总体概括和对该国在此问题上的历史介绍该问题是怎样影响该国的该国在此问题上的政策和实施相关政策的理由该国在此问题上签署的协议或批准的决议在此问题上别国的立场怎样影响该国的立场国家领导在相关问题上发言的引言为支持该国在此问题上的对策的相关数据5)写作中需要注意的问题如非必要不需要陈述这个国家的详细信息(GDP、人口、资源等)尽量使文体显得官方和正式,写作的时候再选词方面要特别注意举出实例,而不是空讲政策和态度用脚注或尾注来表明所引用的资料(不强求)立场文件作为会议要求的正式文件,在用词方面也有固定的要求。
模拟联合国position paper
Position paperDelegate:School:Country:The Kingdom of NetherlandsCommittee:United Nations Human Rights CouncilTopic:Protection of human rights in Turbulent TimesThe world has achieved peace on the whole. However, there are still some people from some special regions suffering misery because of the war. Thousands of them became homeless and struggle against starv ation even lost their lives. It’s hard for them to keep their human rights .Considering the great pain of people in the Netherlands in the historical invasion, The Dutch government has made great efforts to guarantee people's rights,especially in social insurance, education and medical care. So, we believe that we should stop the war and protect the people's rights.‘Geneva Convention’concluded in August, 1949, is to protect civilians and victims during war times. The No.4 convention ruled that civilians should be protected and be humane treated in conflicts. According to that, the United Nations High Commissioner for refugees was established, aimed at protecting refugees’ rights and health, ensuring them to find safe shelter and helping their voluntary return. Also the United Nations World Food Program was established to help the refugees rebuild homes and restore th eir livelihoods. Meanwhile the ‘Convention relating to the status of refugees’, signed in 1951 and revised in 1967, guaranteed the refugees’ rights in their refuge countries.For a long time, a comprehensive set of law has been introduced in the Netherlands in order to protect the rights of people, based on the attitude of tolerance and freedom. Being one of the earliest countries which signed the Geneva Convention on 22 August 1949, the Netherlands has always insisted on its principles of protecting civilians as well as war victims. The Netherlands annually accept international refugees from war countries, and provide them with free housing, economic subsidies, free education,medical insurance,legal help and so on. Meanwhile, the Netherlands stick to the main target of the United Nations World Food Program. So the Netherlands send their teachers and doctors on mission, and deliver goods and materials to the refugee camps in the battlefield as humanitarian aid, with the hope that they could be able to recover and rebuild their motherland after that disaster.The destruction of war is significant to a nation. We are firmly against the war and urge warring parties to stop, and, most importantly, carry out peace negotiations. In or der to better protect the political rights of civilians, we are calling for a referendum aft er the war. We believe it is an essential measure to maintain democracy. We invoke the establishment of international Camps for refugees in countries at war and neighboring countries as well. The international community is obliged to provide medical aid, supplies and education assistance for the Camp as well as thecountriesthat accept this aid. A long-term mechanism should be established for refugee children focusing on education and health care issues. This mechanism includes domestic refugee aid policy, which provides language training, comprehensive education and vocational education, supporting them blending into society as soon as possible. We offer a convenient and secure way, also referred to as ‘Green Channel’, for refugees who are willing to go back. Considering the urgent need of protection of after-war social stability and great social pressure in the countries accepted many refugees, the authorities should control the number of refugees received and resolutely fight against illegal immigration.To solve the problem of human rights violation in political instability and transition is a complex task that needs multi-parties’ effort. We should make efforts in together.。
模拟联合国文件写作说明
立场文件写作指导Written by Secretariat-General立场文件是会议召开前需要撰写的唯一一份文件。
因此,我在此提出一些自己的看法,希望各位同学批判研究。
首先,立场文件的抬头十分重要。
请在立场文件的左上角依次写上代表姓名、代表所在学校、国家名、所在委员会和议题。
例如,如果Excalibur是安全理事会的意大利代表,他是黄岩中学高一(17)班的学生.那么他的抬头应当这么写:代表:Excalibur所在学校:黄岩中学高一(17)班国家名:意大利委员会:安全理事会议题:中东问题,包括巴勒斯坦和以色列的问题另外,抬头是表明写作者身份和背景极其重要的内容,务必填写,千千万万不可忘记。
在决议草案中,抬头还要写明起草国和附议国,这两栏信息是整篇决议草案能否获得通过的晴雨表,对于主席团和代表而言都是十分重要的信息。
说不定阅览过起草过和附议国之后,那些还未附议的国家会一齐提出附议,如此一来,你们的决议草案的通过可是板上钉钉的事。
下面,我来阐述具体内容。
在立场文件中,最重要的内容是措施,也就是你们提出的解决议题的主张。
当然,你必须认识到,并不是所有的国家和该议题有着密切的联系,那么,如何从这些无从下手的国家中将本国实际与议题联系,并且提出合乎本国利益的措施。
比如说我们这次讨论的内容是中东问题,而你很不幸抽到了马尔代夫。
这是一个印度洋上的旅游胜地,虽然和中东相对较近,可是对中东毫无影响力。
那么对此议题,马尔代夫代表应该怎么思考呢?马尔代夫的主要产业是旅游业。
旅游业的兴旺需要全球经济的繁荣,全球人民的生活水平(更准确的说,是经济水平偏上的国家的人民的生活水平)的提高,收入的增多。
用正确的说法来表达我所探讨的收入,应该是可支配收入,也就是能够自己支配的钱。
这应该从两部分看,即收入和支出。
马尔代夫的收入是旅游业,如果旅游业规模不断扩大,马尔代夫人的支出不变的情况下,马尔代夫人的可支配收入也就越多。
如果来马尔代夫旅游的人越来越少,在支出不变时,那么马尔代夫人的可支配收入也就越来越少。
模拟联合国会议文件写作
模拟联合国会议文件写作1.工作文件 Working Paper (WP)代表在会议进行期间,在各自立场文件的基础上,综合草拟出针对某一或若干问题的看法和观点,以及解决办法。
由一个或多个起草国(标注1)起草,无须附议国(标注2)。
审核及编号后,向所有代表印发。
会议指导会打断会议,多有代表有1分钟阅读时间,只有由起草国(一个或多个)自动进行2分钟的工作文件介绍。
工作文件不需要特定的文件格式,可以是文段、图表,也可以列关键点。
在印发后,起草国可进一步在此基础上结合他国的观点进行修正补充,使之发展成为决议草案,并同时争取足够数量的附议国。
其他国家在阅读后对其提议、协商,并根据需要决定成为起草国、附议国,或只是静观其发展。
2.决议草案 Draft Resolution (DR)按照联合国决议文件格式起草的对该议题的解决办法,未通过表决的决议。
对于议题各个方面的解决,格式严谨,措辞妥帖。
决议的起草国和附议国总数必须达到当场与会国的20%,才可向主席团递交。
审核及编号后,向所有代表印发。
会议指导会打断会议,所有代表有2分钟阅读时间,之后由起草过(一个或多个)自动进行3分钟的决议草案介绍。
在起草国代表陈述后,要回答其他代表提出的3个语法问题,规则回复到正是辩论的形式。
发言内容则在各国的立场基础上以该文件为中心进行讨论。
决议草案需要表决。
支持的国家总数大于等于与会国家总数的2/3,通过后即成为决议。
格式严格,包括:标题 (Heading)、序言条款 (Preambulatory Clauses)、行动性条款 (Operative Clauses)。
3.修正案 Amendment修正案分为友好修正案以及非友好修正案;友好修正案(Friendly Amendment):原决议草案的全部起草国都赞成(需要在友好修正案的附议国中签字)该修改意见,该修正案就成为友好修正案。
审核及编号后,向所有代表印发或由主席团宣读。
友好修正案无需表决和讨论,按照该文件的要求,直接生成为决议草案的一部分。
模联立场文件写作教学
立场文件写作(Position Paper Writing )概述立场文件是“模拟联合国”活动中一个国家基本的“名片”,它表达了某个国家或组织在某个议题上的立场概要。
代表们首先就是通过立场文件来表达本国立场、了解其他国家的立场。
因此写一份好的立场文件,表达清楚自己的意思尤为重要。
立场文件元素立场文件范例分析学校:**** 国家:尼日利亚代表:****2004年1210米,13个印度洋国家的21万6000大的一场自然灾难之一,联合国公布死难者数字是至少22万3000此外,多国沿岸的酒店和村庄城镇也受到严重破坏,180经济损失近百亿美元。
多元化外交政策高度关注印尼海啸难民问题,已经就“印尼海啸难民问并且非常愿意在本国承受范围之内以“不强制遣返,为原则接受部分难民,希望在印尼海啸难民问题中能发挥积极作用。
尼日利亚对印尼海啸难民问题的解决前景感到乐观。
不久,国际社会包括,国际援助总额已经超过80金将陆续就位。
的繁荣。
在救助活动中,我们都能清楚地意识到,要尽快地解决印尼海啸难民问题,我们仍然需要处理好下面几个方面:1、海啸在世界范围内都存在着,为防止下次所海啸所带来的爆发性难民问题,由联合国牵头建立全球海啸预警系统; 2、建立更加“有前瞻性、有战略性、公开和有效”的救援资金分配机制,确实保证一部分资金用于解决印尼海啸难民问题,避免救援资金被挪用或贪污;3、加强国际合作机制,由联合国难民署牵头协调各国解决此次的难民问题,登记注册灾区难民特别是灾区儿童,以防人口贩卖,为难民提供生活住所,并且在经济、政策等方面给予必要的援助,帮助难民重返家园;难民问题在世界各地尤其是在广大的非洲国家中不断出现,尼日利亚希望通过解决这次的印尼海啸难民问题,继续扩大联合国难民署的职能,尼日利亚呼吁更多国家关注世界难民问题特别是非洲难民问题,呼吁发达国家承担起解决此类难民问题的中坚作用。
难民重返家园的同时有成千上万的非洲难民无家可归,次呼吁国际社会加强合作,促进世界人道主义事业的蓬勃发展。
模联文件写作
文件写作一、立场文件(Position Paper)当所有的调查研究告一段落,代表就应该写关于某一个议题的代表国立场文件,这样可以帮助代表将观点想法条理化,并明确在会议中希望阐述的方面的观点。
我们的大会要求所有的国家在大会开始以前提交立场文件。
许多代表也会用立场文件作为大会中第一次发言的发言稿,由此可见其重要性。
注意:一篇立场文件只阐述对于一个议题的国家立场观点。
一篇好的立场文件应该包括以下几个方面:●简要阐述议题,并说明代表国认为这个议题对于其本国家以及整个国际社会所具有的重要性。
●代表国所持有的立场、态度。
可以包括该国与此相关的国内事务和外交政策,以及在过去的国际合作中所支持过的决议等。
●对于该问题联合国所采取过的主要措施,代表国持怎样的态度。
●代表国对联合国的建议,包括代表国认为有效可行的解决措施,以及国际社会应担当的角色。
●立场文件不需要太长,一般一页A4纸的篇幅即可。
注意:在立场文件里应该要涵盖关于代表国立场和议题本身两方面的内容,两者不可偏废。
立场文件的格式立场文件格式应该包含:⒈开头Delegate: XXXSchool: XXXXXCountry: United KingdomCommittee: ECOSOCTopic: International Migration⒉大概的内容组成可以参照一下划分标准●背景介绍这一部分所占篇幅最少,只需要简单概括该问题的历史,并提出讨论和解决该问题的重要性,要注意的是不要照搬背景指导手册上对该问题的介绍●过去的行动包括联合国在该问题上已经做出的行动和决议●本国的立场/政策/解决措施表明本国的立场,提供本国对于该问题的解决办法和措施,并提供理由等等⒊立场文件写作应该注意的问题●不需过于详细的信息(人口,资源,GDP……)●官方正式,精炼简明(不多于2页)●结构明晰,条理分明●必要时候提供数据●举出实例,而不是空讲政策和态度●用脚注或尾注来标明所引用的资料●使用决议条款的格式来写作(序言性,行动性)●不要太依赖背景材料,重在调研分析立场文件的一般模式第一段:简要陈述议题,并说明代表国认为该议题对于整个国际社会所具有的重要性。
模联立场文件英文范文
模联立场文件英文范文Position Paper on Model United Nations。
Topic: The Promotion of Gender Equality and Empowerment of Women。
The issue of gender equality and the empowerment of women is a vital topic in today's world. As a member state of the United Nations, it is our responsibility to address this issue and work towards achieving gender equality and women's empowerment. This position paper outlines our stance on this issue, the actions we have taken, and the steps we propose to take in the future.Our country firmly believes in the principles of gender equality and the empowerment of women. We recognize that gender inequality is a pervasive issue that affects all aspects of society, including economic, social, andpolitical spheres. Women and girls continue to face discrimination and marginalization in many parts of theworld, and it is our duty to address this injustice and work towards a more equitable and inclusive society.As a member state, we have taken several steps to promote gender equality and empower women. We have implemented laws and policies that aim to eliminate discrimination and violence against women. We have also invested in education and training programs to provide women with the skills and knowledge they need toparticipate fully in the workforce and society. Additionally, we have supported initiatives that aim to increase women's representation in leadership positions and decision-making processes.Despite our efforts, we recognize that there is still much work to be done. Gender inequality persists in many areas, and women continue to face barriers to their full participation in society. Therefore, we propose the following actions to address this issue:1. Strengthening laws and policies to protect women's rights and eliminate discrimination and violence againstwomen.2. Investing in education and training programs to provide women with the skills and knowledge they need to succeed in the workforce.3. Promoting women's participation in leadership positions and decision-making processes.4. Providing support and resources for women entrepreneurs and business owners.5. Raising awareness about the importance of gender equality and women's empowerment through public campaigns and education programs.In conclusion, our country is committed to promoting gender equality and the empowerment of women. We recognize the importance of this issue and the impact it has on society as a whole. We have taken steps to address this issue, and we will continue to work towards achieving gender equality and women's empowerment in the future. Wecall on all member states to join us in this effort and work together to create a more equitable and inclusive world for all. Thank you.。
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栏头,school那栏用学院名。
committee写完整形式The Third Committee of General Assembly。
统一格式
所有字体采用Times New Roman格式,5号字体。
position paper 加粗,四号。
topic那一栏加粗。
1.5倍行距。
格式模板
Position Paper
Delegate:Wei Xiaoxiao, Feng Xiaojun,
School: Southwest University of Political , Science and Law
Country: Madagascar
Committee: the Social, Humanitarian and Cultural Affairs Committee
Topic: Children in poverty—Deprivation of Medical Care and Education
1 在文件写作过程中可能会用到一些长句子。
请delegate在运用长句子的时候注意好每个部分的语法结构,不要生搬硬凑。
2 写作语言和用词,尽量学习和引用官方语言,不要太口水化。
3 文中可能会有很多信息,注意把信息与信息之间整理好,不要有那么中的搬凑痕迹。
上句不搭下句。
1 第一段写作是概括性地介绍本议题在世界范围的状况,希望delegate能够宏观描述,不要仅仅局限于一个点,或者花过多的笔墨在日本问题上。
2 至于二三段的写作,由于其中涉及比较多的信息,希望delegate能够处理好信息之间的关系,不要感觉生搬硬凑
3 最后一段的写作,主要是解决措施。
希望delegate能够用一些连接词,使得本段条理清晰,让人一目了然。
在看delegate的pp写作内容中,发觉一些国家在资料上准备的不是很充分,导致写作内容比较空洞。
希望delegate能够在接下来的时间里好好准备。